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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: He was the leader of the SAS team that Joy and Zero are assigned to, and although he did have his moments of abrasiveness, he did genuinely care about his teammates.
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: He was the leader of the SAS team that Joy and Zero are were assigned to, and although he did have his moments of abrasiveness, he did genuinely care about his teammates.
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: He was the leader of the SAS team that Joy and Zero are assigned to, and although he did have his moments of abrasiveness, he does genuinely care about his teammates.
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: He was the leader of the SAS team that Joy and Zero are assigned to, and although he did have his moments of abrasiveness, he does did genuinely care about his teammates.
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* DeathByGluttony: {{Defied}}. [[spoiler: His bad eating habits finally catch up to him and he suffers a heart attack in the middle of his assasination, and begs Joy to let him die this way as he feels like it's a less embarassing death [[UndignifiedDeath than being killed by a teenage girl]]. However, Joy turns down his plea, and shoots him to death]].
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* DeathByGluttony: {{Defied}}. [[spoiler: His bad eating habits finally catch up to him and he suffers a heart attack in the middle of his assasination, assassination, and begs Joy to let him die this way as he feels like it's a less embarassing embarrassing death [[UndignifiedDeath than being killed by a teenage girl]]. However, Joy turns down his plea, and shoots him to death]].
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* CorruptCorporateExecutive: He is a CEO of a construction and loggin company, and often abuses his power as an admiral to aid the growth of his company.
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* CorruptCorporateExecutive: He is a CEO of a construction and loggin logging company, and often abuses his power as an admiral to aid the growth of his company.
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A friend of Joy and Zero in the SAS, who is also the commander of their troop. [[spoiler: He is also meant to be the friend mentioned by Zero in the Truth Tapes, whose SAS pin was kept by Joy years after his death]].
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A friend of Joy and Zero in the SAS, who is also the commander of their troop. [[spoiler: He is also meant to be the friend mentioned by Zero in the Truth Tapes, whose SAS pin was kept by Joy years after his death]].death]].
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: He was the leader of the SAS team that Joy and Zero are assigned to, and although he did have his moments of abrasiveness, he does genuinely care about his teammates.
* MeaningfulName: His name is a reference to [[spoiler: the phrase "sacrificial lamb", given that he was meant to be Joy and Zero's fallen friend]].
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: He was the leader of the SAS team that Joy and Zero are assigned to, and although he did have his moments of abrasiveness, he does genuinely care about his teammates.
* MeaningfulName: His name is a reference to [[spoiler: the phrase "sacrificial lamb", given that he was meant to be Joy and Zero's fallen friend]].
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* CurlyHairIsUgly: Grace is bullied because the girls at St. Mary’s think this, though Joy [[DefiedTrope insists otherwise]].
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* CurlyHairIsUgly: Grace is bullied because the girls at St. Mary’s think this, though Joy [[DefiedTrope [[SubvertedTrope insists otherwise]].
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* CurlyHairIsUgly: Grace is bullied because the girls at St. Mary’s think this, though Joy [[DefiedTrope insists otherwise]].
* CurlyHairIsUgly: Grace is bullied because the girls at St. Mary’s think this, though Joy [[DefiedTrope insists otherwise]].
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A Royal Navy Admiral whom Joy develops an amimosity towards.
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A Royal Navy Admiral whom Joy develops an amimosity animosity towards.
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Joy's other best friend
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Joy's other best friend
friend.
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A friend of Joy and David in the SAS, who is also the commander of their troop. [[spoiler: He is also meant to be the friend mentioned by Zero in the Truth Tapes, whose SAS pin was kept by Joy years after his death]].
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A friend of Joy and David Zero in the SAS, who is also the commander of their troop. [[spoiler: He is also meant to be the friend mentioned by Zero in the Truth Tapes, whose SAS pin was kept by Joy years after his death]].
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* DeathByGluttony: {{Defied}}. [[spoiler: His bad eating habits finally catch up to him and he suffers a heart attack in the middle of his assasination, and begs Joy to let him die this way as he feels like it's a less embarassing death [[UndignifiedDeath than being killed by a teenage girl]]. However, turns down his plea, and shoots him to death]].
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* DeathByGluttony: {{Defied}}. [[spoiler: His bad eating habits finally catch up to him and he suffers a heart attack in the middle of his assasination, and begs Joy to let him die this way as he feels like it's a less embarassing death [[UndignifiedDeath than being killed by a teenage girl]]. However, Joy turns down his plea, and shoots him to death]].
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* BespectacledCutie: She wears large, round classes.
* BollywoodNerd: She's quite nerdy as a child, and eventually becomes a NASA scientist as an adult.
* ShrinkingViolet: Starts out very shy, although Joy helps her grow out of her shell.
* BespectacledCutie: She wears large, round classes.
* BollywoodNerd: She's quite nerdy as a child, and eventually becomes a NASA scientist as an adult.
* ShrinkingViolet: Starts out very shy, although Joy helps her grow out of her shell.
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!Admiral Reginald Softbottom
A Royal Navy Admiral whom Joy develops an amimosity towards.
A Royal Navy Admiral whom Joy develops an amimosity towards.
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* CorruptCorperateExecutive: He is a CEO of a construction and loggin company, and often abuses his power as an admiral to aid the growth of his company.
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* CorruptCorperateExecutive: BrooklynRage: He was born and raised in Brooklyn, and is a violent mob boss.
* DeathByGluttony: {{Defied}}. [[spoiler: His bad eating habits finally catch up to him and he suffers a heart attack in the middle of his assasination, and begs Joy to let him die this way as he feels like it's a less embarassing death [[UndignifiedDeath than being killed by a teenage girl]]. However, turns down his plea, and shoots him to death]].
* VillainousGlutton: As mentioned by Fear, he often gorges on pizza and submarine sandwiches, which resulted in his morbid obesity.
!Admiral Reginald Softbottom
A Royal Navy Admiral whom Joy develops an amimosity towards.
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* CorruptCorporateExecutive: He is a CEO of a construction and loggin company, and often abuses his power as an admiral to aid the growth of his company.
* DeathByGluttony: {{Defied}}. [[spoiler: His bad eating habits finally catch up to him and he suffers a heart attack in the middle of his assasination, and begs Joy to let him die this way as he feels like it's a less embarassing death [[UndignifiedDeath than being killed by a teenage girl]]. However, turns down his plea, and shoots him to death]].
* VillainousGlutton: As mentioned by Fear, he often gorges on pizza and submarine sandwiches, which resulted in his morbid obesity.
!Admiral Reginald Softbottom
A Royal Navy Admiral whom Joy develops an amimosity towards.
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* CorruptCorporateExecutive: He is a CEO of a construction and loggin company, and often abuses his power as an admiral to aid the growth of his company.
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!!Bernando "The Salter" Rizzo
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!!Admiral Reginald Softbottom
A Royal Navy Admiral and C.E.O of a construction and logging company, whom Joy develops an amimosity towards.
!!Lieutenant Jacob Lamb
A Royal Navy Admiral and C.E.O of a construction and logging company, whom Joy develops an amimosity towards.
!!Lieutenant Jacob Lamb
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A Royal Navy Admiral
* CorruptCorperateExecutive: He is a CEO of a construction and loggin company, and often abuses his power as an admiral to aid the growth of his company.
!Lieutenant Jacob Lamb
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!!Jasmine Sharma
One of Joy's best friends.
!!Grace MacDonnell
Joy's other best friend
!!Bernando "The Salter" Rizzo
A New York mob boss that Joy is sent to kill on her second mission.
!!Admiral Reginald Softbottom
A Royal Navy Admiral and C.E.O of a construction and logging company, whom Joy develops an amimosity towards.
!!Lieutenant Jacob Lamb
A friend of Joy and David in the SAS, who is also the commander of their troop. [[spoiler: He is also meant to be the friend mentioned by Zero in the Truth Tapes, whose SAS pin was kept by Joy years after his death]].
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Characters introduced in the ''VideoGame/MetalGear'' fanfiction ''Fanfic/ATruePatriot''. For characters introduced in ''Fanfic/MetalGearZero'', [[Characters/MetalGearZero see here]].
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