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* FatalFlaw: Despite being associated with [[HornyDevils Lilith]], his is actually Sloth - he doesn't like having responsibility ''at all'', and it's outright stated he chose to team up with Lilith because her path was easier.
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* FatalFlaw: Despite being associated with [[HornyDevils Lilith]], Lilith, his is actually Sloth - he doesn't like having responsibility ''at all'', and it's outright stated he chose to team up with Lilith because her path was easier.
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!!The Incubus Hero
A former hero of The Order of the Chief God, who was tasked with slaying the 12th Demon Lord, which he did....and then married Demon Lord #13.
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!!The Incubus Hero
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* {{Deuteragonist}}
* HeroOfAnotherStory: While Erica occasionally joins Gray on his adventures, she also does the story quests of ''Starbound'', making her this.
* TheReveal: [[spoiler:She actually is the daughter of Ethan Wendell Einstein, one of the pioneering shipwrights ever produced by the Protectorate.]]
!!Baqi Sindile
Erica's bodyguard and the retainer of the Einstein family for years.
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* SpaceMarine: In-story, he is heavily implied to come from the world of ''TabletopGame/Warhammer40000''.
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!!The Incubus Hero
A former hero of The Order of the Chief God, who was tasked with slaying the 12th Demon Lord, which he did....and then married Demon Lord #13.
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* HeroOfAnotherStory: While Erica occasionally joins Gray on his adventures, she also does the story quests of ''Starbound'', making her this.
* TheReveal: [[spoiler:She actually is the daughter of Ethan Wendell Einstein, one of the pioneering shipwrights ever produced by the Protectorate.]]
!!Baqi Sindile
Erica's bodyguard and the retainer of the Einstein family for years.
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* SpaceMarine: In-story, he is heavily implied to come from the world of ''TabletopGame/Warhammer40000''.
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!!The Incubus Hero
A former hero of The Order of the Chief God, who was tasked with slaying the 12th Demon Lord, which he did....and then married Demon Lord #13.
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* NoSympathy: This is one of Gray's negative traits - he's generally unwilling to show respect for people who have committed horrible crimes regardless of their reasons for doing so. While this would be understandable in some cases, he bluntly makes it clear in a post made regarding ''VideoGame/{{Arknights}}'' that he considers anyone old enough to kill old enough to be accountable for their actions...even if they are a child (e.g. Skullshatterer).
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* EveryoneHasStandards: WordOfGod is that Grey would understand the motives of [[VideoGame/{{Arknights}} the Reunion Movement]], but would not support them since they are a case of HeWhoFightsMonsters.
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* HateSink: There are absolutely no sympathetic traits associated with the Incubus Hero - he's a lazy, overpowered {{JErkass}} who let's his ID do the thinking.
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* FatalFlaw: Despite being associated with [[HornyDevils Lilith]], his is actually Sloth - he doesn't like having responsibility ''at all'', and it's outright stated he chose to team up with Lilith because her path was easier.
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* NeverMyFault: [[spoiler:His own conscience outright indicates that he has trouble accepting responsibility for his actions. Case in point, he refuses to admit he made the wrong choice by siding with Lilith and enacting her plan to achieve peace between human and Mamono (which ''willl'' result in the inevitable extinction of both species). He also blame's the death of one of Druella's Grey Dolls (sex dolls made in the likeness of the SI) because he never bothered to discipline his daughter, who literally rapes the dolls into sentience]].
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* NeverMyFault: [[spoiler:His own conscience outright indicates that he has trouble accepting responsibility for his actions. Case in point, he refuses to admit he made the wrong choice by siding with Lilith and enacting her plan to achieve peace between human and Mamono (which ''willl'' ''will'' result in the inevitable extinction of both species). He also blame's the death of one of Druella's Grey Dolls (sex dolls made in the likeness of the SI) because on said doll for losing control of its powers, forgetting that he never bothered to discipline his daughter, who literally rapes the dolls into sentience]].
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* ClassicVillain: He ticks many aspects.
** As the husband of the Demon Lord, he represents {{Lust}}, but there are also elements of sloth with his disdain for responsiblity.
** [[MagicVersusScience The Incubus Hero draws his powers from magic, while Grey relies on Technology]].
** As a Hero, he possesses an aura that innately makes people like him.
** He's already helped his wife turn all monsters into Mamono.
** The Incubus Hero is physically superior to Grey and possesses magical powers, [[AntiMagic something Grey's very nature prevents him from ever possessing]]. The trade off is that he lacks emotional stability and cannot accept his actions.
** As the husband of the Demon Lord, he represents {{Lust}}, but there are also elements of sloth with his disdain for responsiblity.
** [[MagicVersusScience The Incubus Hero draws his powers from magic, while Grey relies on Technology]].
** As a Hero, he possesses an aura that innately makes people like him.
** He's already helped his wife turn all monsters into Mamono.
** The Incubus Hero is physically superior to Grey and possesses magical powers, [[AntiMagic something Grey's very nature prevents him from ever possessing]]. The trade off is that he lacks emotional stability and cannot accept his actions.
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* NeverMyFault: [[spoiler:His own conscience outright indicates that he has trouble accepting responsibility for his actions. Case in point, he refuses to admit he made the wrong choice by siding with Lilith and enacting her plan to achieve peace between human and Mamono (which ''willl'' result in the inevitable extinction of both species). He also blame's the death of one of Druella's Grey Dolls (sex dolls made in the likeness of the SI) because he never bothered to discipline his daughter, who literally rapes the dolls into sentience]].
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!!The Incubus Hero
A former hero of The Order of the Chief God, who was tasked with slaying the 12th Demon Lord, which he did....and then married Demon Lord #13.
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* FallenHero: [[AntiHero While he wasn't the most heroic when a member of the order, he still helped save a great many people]]. [[LoveMakesYouEvil But after marrying the Demon Lord]], he becomes complicit in the genocide of humanity, the dwarves, the elves, and the fairies.
* ItsAllAboutMe: Big time - he always seems to put his own needs before those of others, and then deludes himself into believing he is doing the right thing.
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: He thought marrying the Demon Lord (named Lilith per WordOfGod) would help achieve peace between humans and monsters. He instead put them on the path of extinction. [[LackOfEmpathy He really doesn't care]].
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!!The Incubus Hero
A former hero of The Order of the Chief God, who was tasked with slaying the 12th Demon Lord, which he did....and then married Demon Lord #13.
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* FallenHero: [[AntiHero While he wasn't the most heroic when a member of the order, he still helped save a great many people]]. [[LoveMakesYouEvil But after marrying the Demon Lord]], he becomes complicit in the genocide of humanity, the dwarves, the elves, and the fairies.
* ItsAllAboutMe: Big time - he always seems to put his own needs before those of others, and then deludes himself into believing he is doing the right thing.
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: He thought marrying the Demon Lord (named Lilith per WordOfGod) would help achieve peace between humans and monsters. He instead put them on the path of extinction. [[LackOfEmpathy He really doesn't care]].
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* AntiMagic: Grey literally nullifies any magic around him by virtue of existing. [[AllThereInTheManual Supplementary materials indicate he is a null, who are completely immune to any magical effects around them.
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* UnscrupulousHero: Grey may be TheHero of the story, but he’s willing to perform some questionable acts, per WordOfGod. Amongst others, Extra confirmed on Discord that he would not really do anything to save (Franchise/StarWars the Galactic Republic), partially because there isn’t really anything Grey could do to stop the Rise of the Empire, but mostly because [[LaserGuidedKarma Extra thinks the Republic deserved to turn into the Empire because it of its massive corruption]].
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* UnscrupulousHero: Grey may be TheHero of the story, but he’s willing to perform some questionable acts, per WordOfGod. Amongst others, Extra confirmed on Discord that he would not really do anything to save (Franchise/StarWars [[Franchise/{{StarWars}} the Galactic Republic), Republic]], partially because there isn’t really anything Grey could do to stop the Rise of the Empire, but mostly because [[LaserGuidedKarma Extra thinks the Republic deserved to turn into the Empire because it of its massive corruption]].
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* KnowWhenToFoldEm: When the reports of how utterly outnumbered they were before the invasion of Lescatie, how the entire city-state was infiltrated by so many collaborators and how Druella had done enough to send corrupt food in the city without detection, Grey did not hold any illusions that the place was defensible. Instead, he planned an evacuation that will save as many uncorrupted humans as possible.
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Helios got his position because everyone higher in the chain of command was killed by the Ruin. Kicked Upstairs is when someone is given a nominally better promotion to prevent them from screwing things up.
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* YouAreInCommandNow: After the fall of Earth and Sol, he got promoted to Commander by default. He's trying to look for people to help him handle the influx of responsibilities that he had to deal with. He's also running the Protector Academy and the Research and Development division as well since he's the only one left qualified to do the job.
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The Interim Commander of the Protector Corps and Headmaster of the Protector Academy. After the loss of Earth and Sol System, Helios was KickedUpstairs by default and had to make do with what little is left of the Protector Corps.
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* KickedUpstairs: After theloss fall of Earth and Sol System, Helios was KickedUpstairs Sol, he got promoted to Commander by default and default. He's trying to look for people to help him handle the influx of responsibilities that he had to make do with what little is left of deal with. He's also running the Protector Corps.Academy and the Research and Development division as well since he's the only one left qualified to do the job.
* TheSpymaster: In his profile, Helios once worked as the head of the Protectorate Intelligence Corps and had a decent track record during his tenure. He then retired from it to pursue his passion in teaching and science.
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* TheSpymaster: In his profile, Helios once worked as the head of the Protectorate Intelligence Corps and had a decent track record during his tenure. He then retired from it to pursue his passion in teaching and science.
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* AntiHero: Certainly has shades of this - WordOfGod on the story's Discord forum has noted that Grey is cynical enough that, were he to end up in the ''Star Wars'' universe, he'd be fine with allowing a non-evil person to reform TheRepublic in TheEmpire because he views the Republic as BeyondRedemption.
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* AntiHero: Certainly has shades of this - WordOfGod on the story's Discord forum has noted that Grey is cynical enough that, were he to end up in the ''Star Wars'' universe, he'd be fine with allowing a non-evil person to reform TheRepublic in TheEmpire because he views the Republic as BeyondRedemption.BeyondRedemption and that there are too many factors that Grey had to look out for in order to pull it off.
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!!Helios Olympus
The Interim Commander of the Protector Corps and Headmaster of the Protector Academy. After the loss of Earth and Sol System, Helios was KickedUpstairs by default and had to make do with what little is left of the Protector Corps.
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* KnightInSourArmor: {{Downplayed}} in a rather cynical way - Grey may be somewhat jaded from his experiences, but he still believes in protecting the innocent. However, the author has indicated that, should he be presented the choice of LibertyOverProsperity, he'd probably pick prosperity - especially if it involved [[Franchise/StarWars the Galactic Republic]].
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* KnightInSourArmor: {{Downplayed}} in a rather cynical way - UnscrupulousHero: Grey may be somewhat jaded from his experiences, TheHero of the story, but he’s willing to perform some questionable acts, per WordOfGod. Amongst others, Extra confirmed on Discord that he still believes in protecting the innocent. However, the author has indicated that, should he be presented the choice of LibertyOverProsperity, he'd probably pick prosperity - especially if it involved [[Franchise/StarWars would not really do anything to save (Franchise/StarWars the Galactic Republic]].Republic), partially because there isn’t really anything Grey could do to stop the Rise of the Empire, but mostly because [[LaserGuidedKarma Extra thinks the Republic deserved to turn into the Empire because it of its massive corruption]].
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!!Grey Caldwell
TheHero of the story, a SelfInsert who was placed within the boy of the Protector in training Grey Caldwell
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* AntiHero: Certainly has shades of this - WordOfGod on the story's Discord forum has noted that Grey is cynical enough that, were he to end up in the ''Star Wars'' universe, he'd be fine with allowing a non-evil person to reform TheRepublic in TheEmpire because he views the Republic as BeyondRedemption.
* AntiMagic: Grey literally nullifies any magic around him by virtue of existing. [[AllThereInTheManual Supplementary materials indicate he is a null, who are completely immune to any magical effects around them.
* AuthorAvatar: As a Self Insert, this is a given.
* BadassNormal: The ''only'' abnormal thing about Grey is his immunity to magic. Otherwise, he's just a baseline human being relying on highly advanced technology to beat all kinds of monsters. So far, he hasn't really had any major losses.
* BlessedWithSuck: His Null status is this - while it makes him immune to magical attacks, it also prevents him from being healed by magic, and permanently locks him out of being able to access aura.
* DeconstructedCharacterArchetype: Is one for self inserts - the sheer amount of crap Grey has to deal with has eroded his own idealism, and it's implied he's willing to make some immoral decisions for the sake of saving others. Additionally, he's also perfectly willing to abandon people he could save simply because the effort needed to save them is unreasonable (granted, [[JerkassHasAPoint the one instance where this happened in story was completely justified, but still]]).
* KnightInSourArmor: {{Downplayed}} in a rather cynical way - Grey may be somewhat jaded from his experiences, but he still believes in protecting the innocent. However, the author has indicated that, should he be presented the choice of LibertyOverProsperity, he'd probably pick prosperity - especially if it involved [[Franchise/StarWars the Galactic Republic]].
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!!Grey Caldwell
TheHero of the story, a SelfInsert who was placed within the boy of the Protector in training Grey Caldwell
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* AntiHero: Certainly has shades of this - WordOfGod on the story's Discord forum has noted that Grey is cynical enough that, were he to end up in the ''Star Wars'' universe, he'd be fine with allowing a non-evil person to reform TheRepublic in TheEmpire because he views the Republic as BeyondRedemption.
* AntiMagic: Grey literally nullifies any magic around him by virtue of existing. [[AllThereInTheManual Supplementary materials indicate he is a null, who are completely immune to any magical effects around them.
* AuthorAvatar: As a Self Insert, this is a given.
* BadassNormal: The ''only'' abnormal thing about Grey is his immunity to magic. Otherwise, he's just a baseline human being relying on highly advanced technology to beat all kinds of monsters. So far, he hasn't really had any major losses.
* BlessedWithSuck: His Null status is this - while it makes him immune to magical attacks, it also prevents him from being healed by magic, and permanently locks him out of being able to access aura.
* DeconstructedCharacterArchetype: Is one for self inserts - the sheer amount of crap Grey has to deal with has eroded his own idealism, and it's implied he's willing to make some immoral decisions for the sake of saving others. Additionally, he's also perfectly willing to abandon people he could save simply because the effort needed to save them is unreasonable (granted, [[JerkassHasAPoint the one instance where this happened in story was completely justified, but still]]).
* KnightInSourArmor: {{Downplayed}} in a rather cynical way - Grey may be somewhat jaded from his experiences, but he still believes in protecting the innocent. However, the author has indicated that, should he be presented the choice of LibertyOverProsperity, he'd probably pick prosperity - especially if it involved [[Franchise/StarWars the Galactic Republic]].
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