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* AdaptationalVillainy: In the original series, many of Mayor Andre's worst abuses of his power are spurred on by Chloe goading her doting father into it. Here, this is no longer the case; Chloe even tries to ''prevent'' him from ruining Clara's video shoot, and it's eventually revealed that [[spoiler:he rigged the last election]].



** "Style Queen" reveals [[spoiler:the existence of Amber, Chloe's twin sister, and ends with Gabriel deciding to quit being Hawkmoth]].
** "Queen Wasp" follows that up with [[spoiler:Natalie stepping up to become Monarcha, while Marinette accepts an internship with Gabriel]].

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** The "Queen's Battle" trilogy is effectively a wham ''arc'', with each episode bringing its own status-quo-shaking moments:
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"Style Queen" officially reveals [[spoiler:the existence of Amber, Chloe's twin sister, and ends with Gabriel deciding to quit being Hawkmoth]].
** *** "Queen Wasp" follows that up with [[spoiler:Natalie stepping up to become Monarcha, while Marinette accepts an internship with Gabriel]].Gabriel]].
*** And "Prime Queen" has the revelation that [[spoiler:Mayor Andre has been rigging the elections, with Prime Queen -- and ''Chloe'' -- revealing this to all of Paris]].

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* AllForNothing: Amber fears that everything she sacrificed and endured under her mother was for naught after witnessing [[spoiler:her casually offering to take Marinette on as an apprentice]].

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** Natalie is not simply [[MyMasterRightOrWrong loyal to Gabriel]], and ''does not'' [[SubordinateExcuse have a crush]] [[UnrequitedLove on him]].
* AllForNothing: AllForNothing:
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Amber fears that everything she sacrificed and endured under her mother was for naught after witnessing [[spoiler:her casually offering to take Marinette on as an apprentice]].apprentice]].
** At the end of "Queen Wasp", [[spoiler:Natalie]] personally berates and upbraids [[spoiler:Gabriel]] for risking this with their decision to [[spoiler:give up being Hawkmoth... and in doing so, abandon his efforts to save Emilie]].



** Queen Wasp turns anyone she stings into her devoted followers.



* CreateYourOwnVillain: An interesting case appears during the Queen's Battle arc. [[spoiler:Gabriel convinced Natalie to join him by exploiting her devotion to her sister. This leads to her taking up the Butterfly once he attempts to retire in order to continue their quest, whether he likes it or not.]]



** Hawkmoth's decision to [[spoiler:bring Natalie into the fold]] ultimately backfires upon him once [[spoiler:he attempts to retire, only for Natalie to take up the Butterfly instead and rip into him for leaving the job unfinished]].



* ItsAllAboutMe:
** Audrey shows this attitude in spades when she throws a fit over the reserved seating at Gabriel's fashion show, demanding that ''she'' be allowed to sit there instead, young talent be damned!
** She also attempts to poach Marinette away from Gabriel despite [[spoiler:his declaration that he'd be taking her on as an intern]].

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* ItsAllAboutMe:
** Audrey shows
IveComeTooFar: In "Queen Wasp", this attitude in spades when she throws is more a fit over the reserved seating at Gabriel's fashion show, demanding that ''she'' be allowed matter of [[spoiler:"''We've'' come too far," as Natalie refuses to sit there instead, young talent be damned!
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* ItsAllAboutMe:
** Audrey shows this attitude in spades when she throws a fit over the reserved seating at Gabriel's fashion show, demanding that ''she'' be allowed to sit there instead, young talent be damned!
** She also attempts to poach Marinette away from Gabriel despite [[spoiler:his declaration that he'd be taking her on as an intern]].


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** Hawkmoth gets hit with this during the Queen's Battle arc, as his decisions come back to haunt him. [[spoiler:Having convinced Natalie to join him on his quest to revive Emilie by appealing to her love for her sister, he learns that he can't simply ''take that back'' once the risk has grown too much for his liking. Giving up the Brooch causes Natalie to take it up instead, berating him for giving up. Natalie is '''not''' simply bound to his orders; she is her own person, with her own motives driving her, and he has no real leverage to ''force'' her to stop -- not without likely taking himself down in the process]].


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* RuleOfThree: Adrien has three [[NearDeathExperience brushes with death]] before [[spoiler:Gabriel is shaken enough to abandon his quest]].

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* TheGloriousWarOfSisterlyRivalry: Chloe has been spoiled rotten by her father and is struggling to recover from her AlphaBitch ways; Amber was raised by their mother to better suit ''her'' tastes. While the twins do love each other, the distance and stark differences in how they were raised have taken their toll.



* HardWorkHardlyWorks: PlayedWith; While Marinette's tireless efforts as a fashion designer are rewarded in "Queen Wasp" when [[spoiler:Gabriel announces his intention to take her on as an intern]], this sparks Amber to question [[AllForNothing the point of all HER efforts]] after [[spoiler:her mother tries to poach Marinette away]].
* IJustWantToBeLoved: This is what drives the akumatization of [[spoiler:Amber into Queen Wasp, who brainwashes anyone she stings into admiring her]].



** In "Queen Wasp", Chloe learns more about what her sister's life with their mother has been like, and that [[spoiler:Amber knows that she was Queen Bee]].



* MutualEnvy: Chloe envies her twin for living a jet-setting lifestyle with their mother and being held in higher regard. Turns out that Amber also envies ''her'' for having a more stable life, and [[spoiler:not having to deal with their mother's constant criticism and casual cruelty]].



* ThePowerOfLove: Implied to be how [[spoiler:Queen Bee resists Wasp's stingers]] in "Queen Wasp".



** While Chloe is honestly committed to becoming a better person after the Stoneheart incident, that doesn't mean she knows ''how'' to improve herself, and her progress is far from a straight line. She struggles, backsliding into old habits when stressing out or frustrated... and not everybody is able to easily ''accept'' her efforts.

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** While Chloe is honestly committed to becoming a better person after the Stoneheart incident, that doesn't mean she knows ''how'' to improve herself, and her progress is far from a straight line. She struggles, backsliding into old habits when stressing out or frustrated... and not everybody is able to easily ''accept'' her efforts. Least of all [[spoiler:those who haven't been around to ''witness'' her improvement]].
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* AbusiveParents: [[spoiler:It's clear that Audrey wasn't a better mother to Amber than she was to Chloe; in fact, it's shown that Amber resents Chloe for apparently getting the better deal.]]

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* NoSell: [[spoiler:Queen Bee]] takes a load of Queen Wasp's [[BrainwashedAndCrazy mind control stingers]] to the ''face'' and keeps fighting.



* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech:
** In the denouncement of "Queen Wasp", [[spoiler:Natalie]] delivers a ''scathing'' one, berating [[spoiler:Gabriel for trying to quit -- and, in doing so, abandoning Emilie]].



* SecretTestOfCharacter: PlayedWith during the "Syren" two-parter: [[spoiler:after stripping the Ring from Adrien, Master Fu and Wayzz observe his behavior afterwards and determine that his heroic actions and humble words afterwards prove that he learned from his mistake... enough to be given another chance. While Adrien guesses that the whole thing was a test, and Wayzz doesn't deny it, the circumstances themselves imply that Fu originally had no intention of giving it back, and was simply moved by his deeds to reconsider]].

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* SecretTestOfCharacter: PlayedWith during the "Syren" two-parter: [[spoiler:after [[spoiler:After stripping the Ring from Adrien, Master Fu and Wayzz observe his behavior afterwards and determine that his heroic actions and humble words afterwards prove that he learned from his mistake... enough to be given another chance. While Adrien guesses that the whole thing was a test, and Wayzz doesn't deny it, the circumstances themselves imply that Fu originally had no intention of giving it back, and was simply moved by his deeds to reconsider]].

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* RealityEnsues: Like in many other ''Miraculous'' fics that were popular at the time, "Syren" [[spoiler:sees Adrien get stripped of his Miraculous after he prioritizes himself over his duties as a hero. ''Unlike'' most of these fics, however, his flaws aren't heavily exaggerated; as a result, instead of stewing in NeverMyFault-fueled bitterness, he realizes exactly ''how'' badly he screwed up and chooses to make up for it by helping with akuma attacks no matter the risk to make up for it. This actually impresses Fu enough to give him back the ring, and his CharacterDevelopment ultimately sticks.]]

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* RealityEnsues: RealityEnsues:
** While Chloe is honestly committed to becoming a better person after the Stoneheart incident, that doesn't mean she knows ''how'' to improve herself, and her progress is far from a straight line. She struggles, backsliding into old habits when stressing out or frustrated... and not everybody is able to easily ''accept'' her efforts.
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Like in many other ''Miraculous'' fics that were popular at the time, "Syren" [[spoiler:sees Adrien get stripped of his Miraculous after he prioritizes himself over his duties as a hero. ''Unlike'' most of these fics, however, his flaws aren't heavily exaggerated; as a result, instead of stewing in NeverMyFault-fueled bitterness, he realizes exactly ''how'' badly he screwed up and chooses to make up for it by helping with akuma attacks no matter the risk to make up for it. This actually impresses Fu enough to give him back the ring, and his CharacterDevelopment ultimately sticks.]]



* SecretTestOfCharacter: PlayedWith during the "Syren" two-parter: [[spoiler:after stripping the Ring from Adrien, Master Fu and Wayzz observe his behavior afterwards and determine that his heroic actions and humble words afterwards prove that he learned from his mistake... enough to be given another chance. While Adrien guesses that the whole thing was a test, and Wayzz doesn't deny it, the circumstances themselves imply that Fu originally had no intention of giving it back, and was simply moved by his deeds]].

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* SecretTestOfCharacter: PlayedWith during the "Syren" two-parter: [[spoiler:after stripping the Ring from Adrien, Master Fu and Wayzz observe his behavior afterwards and determine that his heroic actions and humble words afterwards prove that he learned from his mistake... enough to be given another chance. While Adrien guesses that the whole thing was a test, and Wayzz doesn't deny it, the circumstances themselves imply that Fu originally had no intention of giving it back, and was simply moved by his deeds]].deeds to reconsider]].


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* WhamEpisode:
** "Syren Part 1" ends with [[spoiler:Master Fu reclaiming the Ring from Adrien, deeming him unworthy after his threat to quit]].
** "Syren Part 2", meanwhile, sees [[spoiler:Adrien nearly die while trying to help Ladybug and Calamity, and earn his reinstatement and SignificantWardrobeShift]].
** "Style Queen" reveals [[spoiler:the existence of Amber, Chloe's twin sister, and ends with Gabriel deciding to quit being Hawkmoth]].
** "Queen Wasp" follows that up with [[spoiler:Natalie stepping up to become Monarcha, while Marinette accepts an internship with Gabriel]].
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* AllForNothing: Amber fears that everything she sacrificed and endured under her mother was for naught after witnessing [[spoiler:her casually offering to take Marinette on as an apprentice]].


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* ItsAllAboutMe:
** Audrey shows this attitude in spades when she throws a fit over the reserved seating at Gabriel's fashion show, demanding that ''she'' be allowed to sit there instead, young talent be damned!
** She also attempts to poach Marinette away from Gabriel despite [[spoiler:his declaration that he'd be taking her on as an intern]].


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* MaliciousMisnaming: If Audrey doesn't care about you, she won't bother remembering your name. She does this to her own daughter. [[spoiler:Both of them.]]
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** In the Queen's Battle Arc, [[spoiler:Chloe still becomes Queen Bee -- not by accident, but because she was chosen as a temporary bearer to help fight Style Queen]].


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* WeNeedADistraction: In "Style Queen", Chloe assumes that Ladybug wants her to distract her akumatized mother and psyches herself up for a HeroicSacrifice. [[spoiler:That's not what she has in mind.]]
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* BirthdayHater: Chloe is melancholic and snappish around her birthday, due to her strained relationship with her mother [[spoiler:and missing her twin sister, Amber]].


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** In the wake of "Style Queen", Gabriel has a VillainousBreakdown where he cites the fact that Adrien's nearly been killed in three different incidents now as unforgivable on his part.


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* TheUnfavorite: Chloe, in her mother's eyes.


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* WhamLine: The final line of "Style Queen" is [[spoiler:Gabriel informing Nooroo that he quits]].
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* NamedInTheAdaptation: Adrien's bodyguard 'the Gorilla' is given the name Vladamir.

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* NamedInTheAdaptation: NamedByTheAdaptation: Adrien's bodyguard 'the Gorilla' is given the name Vladamir.

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* DramaticIrony:
** While pleading with Gigantitan to be gentle while handling Adrien, Hawkmoth tells him that 'he's soft like a kitty'. Gigantitan's chirp of "Kitty!" leaves Adrien and Plagg shaken, wondering if Hawkmoth is aware of his SecretIdentity.



** "Gigantitan" still involves the GirlPosse trying to set up Adrien, though their other target has changed from Marinette to Kagami.



* NamedInTheAdaptation: Adrien's bodyguard 'the Gorilla' is given the name Vladamir.



* YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe: Ladybug secretly makes a face as she hears Lugh reminding her of the time she took Marinette hostage.

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* YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe: YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe:
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** Hawkmoth has this reaction after accidentally akumatizing Auguste while trying to hit Vladamir, questioning whether or not he's desperate enough to using a ''baby''.
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* RealityEnsues: Like in many other ''Miraculous'' fics that were popular at the time, "Syren" [[spoiler:sees Adrien get stripped of his Miraculous after he prioritizes himself over his duties as a hero. ''Unlike'' most of these fics, however, his flaws aren't heavily exaggerated; as a result, instead of stewing in NeverMyFault-fueled bitterness, he realizes exactly ''how'' badly he screwed up and chooses to make up for it by helping with akuma attacks no matter the risk to make up for it. This actually impresses Fu enough to give him back the ring, and his CharacterDevelopment ultimately sticks.]]

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* BrainwashedAndCrazy: Anyone who is touched by Anansi has their memories changed to become part of his story.

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Anyone who is touched by Anansi has their memories changed to become part of his story.story.
** Syren also does this to Kim, turning him into a merman who's completely devoted to her.



* ContinuityNod:
** When the Lucky Charm becomes a pair of handcuffs in "Frightningale", Chat wonders if this means there's a limited amount of things it can transform into, as they've seen this before.

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* ContinuityNod:
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ContinuityNod: When the Lucky Charm becomes a pair of handcuffs in "Frightningale", Chat wonders if this means there's a limited amount of things it can transform into, as they've seen this before.



** Marinette's plan in "Gigantitan" is to get ''Kagami'' a date with Adrien, though Kagami points out [[RealityEnsues illegal it is to put up a fake no parking sign]], so she comes up with the plans. When Kagami takes charge, the codenames become based off weapons. Kagami is "Sabre", Adrien is "Payload", Marinette is "Battle Axe", Alya is Halberd, Juleka is "Morning Star", Mylene is "Shield", and [[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers Rose is "Pillow"]].

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** In "Syren", [[spoiler:Fu is actually around to hear Adrien threatening to remove his ring, which leads to Adrien temporarily losing his Miraculous.]]
*** Additionally, Kim actually takes Syren up on her offer of gills, turning him into a BrainwashedAndCrazy merman that the heroes have to deal with on top of Syren.
** Marinette's plan in "Gigantitan" is to get ''Kagami'' a date with Adrien, though Kagami points out [[RealityEnsues how illegal it is to put up a fake no parking sign]], so she comes up with the plans. When Kagami takes charge, the codenames become based off weapons. Kagami is "Sabre", Adrien is "Payload", Marinette is "Battle Axe", Alya is Halberd, Juleka is "Morning Star", Mylene is "Shield", and [[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers Rose is "Pillow"]].
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** Marinette's plan in "Gigantitan" is to get ''Kagami'' a date with Adrien, though she points out [[RealityEnsues illegal it is to put up a fake no parking sign]], so she comes up with the plans. When Kagami takes charge, the codenames become based off weapons. Kagami is "Sabre", Adrien is "Payload", Marinette is "Battle Axe", Alya is Halberd, Juleka is "Morning Star", Mylene is "Shield", and [[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers Rose is "Pillow"]].

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** Marinette's plan in "Gigantitan" is to get ''Kagami'' a date with Adrien, though she Kagami points out [[RealityEnsues illegal it is to put up a fake no parking sign]], so she comes up with the plans. When Kagami takes charge, the codenames become based off weapons. Kagami is "Sabre", Adrien is "Payload", Marinette is "Battle Axe", Alya is Halberd, Juleka is "Morning Star", Mylene is "Shield", and [[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers Rose is "Pillow"]].
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** Marinette's plan in "Gigantitan" is to get ''Kagami'' a date with Adrien, though she points out [[RealityEnsues illegal it is to put up a fake no parking sign]], so she comes up with the plans. When Kagami takes charge, the codenames become based off weapons. Kagami is "Sabre", Marinette is "Battle Axe", Alya is Halberd, Juleka is "Morning Star", Mylene is "Shield", and [[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers Rose is "Pillow"]].

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** Marinette's plan in "Gigantitan" is to get ''Kagami'' a date with Adrien, though she points out [[RealityEnsues illegal it is to put up a fake no parking sign]], so she comes up with the plans. When Kagami takes charge, the codenames become based off weapons. Kagami is "Sabre", Adrien is "Payload", Marinette is "Battle Axe", Alya is Halberd, Juleka is "Morning Star", Mylene is "Shield", and [[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers Rose is "Pillow"]].
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** "Gigantitan" is to get ''Kagami'' a date with Adrien, though she points out [[RealityEnsues illegal it is to put up a fake no parking sign]], so she comes up with the plans. Since Kagami is in charge, the codenames become based off weapons. Kagami is "Sabre", Marinette is "Battle Axe", Alya is Halberd, Juleka is "Morning Star", Mylene is "Shield", and [[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers Rose is "Pillow"]].

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** Marinette's plan in "Gigantitan" is to get ''Kagami'' a date with Adrien, though she points out [[RealityEnsues illegal it is to put up a fake no parking sign]], so she comes up with the plans. Since When Kagami is in takes charge, the codenames become based off weapons. Kagami is "Sabre", Marinette is "Battle Axe", Alya is Halberd, Juleka is "Morning Star", Mylene is "Shield", and [[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers Rose is "Pillow"]].
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** "Gigantitan" is to get ''Kagami'' a date with Adrien, though she points out [[RealityEnsues illegal it is to put up a fake no parking sign]], so she comes up with the plans. Since Kagami is in charge, the codenames become based off weapons. Kagami is "Sabre", Marinette is "Battle Axe", Alya is Halberd, Juleka is "Morning Star", Mylene is "Shield", and [[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers Rose is "Pillow"]].

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* BadassBystander: PlayedWith in the latter half of the Syren arc, as Alya and Nino spearhead the efforts to organize and navigate the flooded city, and [[spoiler:Adrien jumps into the fight to help Ladybug and Calamity despite no longer having a Miraculous... or its protection, which nearly gets him killed]].



** Adrien also grapples with this during the Syren arc, as he realizes that [[spoiler:Fu probably wouldn't have taken the Ring if he hadn't threatened to quit]].



* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: During "Riposte", Hawkmoth is ''horrified'' when she appears to have Adrien cornered in the sarcophagus and goes for the kill shot. Afterwards, he promises himself that he's never going to akumatize her again.

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** After she's healed, Ondine struggles with the knowledge that she nearly killed [[spoiler:Adrien]], on top of everything else she did as Syren.
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* CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot:
** In "Chef Master", rather than admit that she's having trouble making the bao dumplings, Chloe nastily dismisses the merits of Chinese cooking and culture. When she confesses the real source of her outburst to Marinette, she points out that she could have just asked for help.

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* BrokenPedestal: Adrien's respect for his father takes a considerable hit in "The Collector" after he realizes that ''Marinette'' was the one who made the scarf, not Gabriel. {{Downplayed}} in that this doesn't convince him that [[spoiler:his father might have some connection to Hawkmoth]]; it 'merely' weakens his faith in him further.

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* BrokenPedestal: BrainwashedAndCrazy: Anyone who is touched by Anansi has their memories changed to become part of his story.
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** Chloe is ''deeply upset'' by her father's actions in "Frightningale", as he not only causes the akuma in the first place, but [[spoiler:ditches her while running away]].
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** When the Lucky Charm becomes a pair of handcuffs in "Frightningale", Chat wonders if this means there's a limited amount of things it can transform into, as they've seen this before.


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** Andre abuses his position to interfere with Clara's music video, ironically going against Chloe's wishes in the process.


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* ScrewTheRulesIMakeThem: In "Frightningale", the Mayor refuses to give Clara Nightingale permission to record her video unless she casts his daughter in the lead role. Unlike canon, he does this entirely on his own initiative, and very much ''against'' his daughter's wishes.
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* DarkIsNotEvil: PlayedWith in "Anansi and Lugh", wherein the former has a RedAndBlackAndEvilAllOver outfit, but has [[RealityWarper cast himself]] as the hero of an AlternateUniverse alongside the latter. Said AU casts the heavily black-clad Chat Noir as the ''true'' villain, while Ladybug is a more tragic figure ForcedIntoEvil by her abusive partner. Adrien's wardrobe while detransformed is also impacted by this.


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* EvilCostumeSwitch: Hilariously applies to Adrien's civilian wardrobe in "Anansi and Lugh", as he gets a black coat, MessyHair and CreepyShadowedUndereyes.


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** The Syren arc leads to [[spoiler:both Adrien and Alya meeting Master Fu and realizing that he's the Guardian]].
* ItsAllMyFault:
** A critical example in the Syren arc: [[spoiler:Rather than [[NeverMyFault blaming Fu]] or anyone else, Adrien recognizes that it was his own actions that cost him the Ring]].


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* YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe: Ladybug secretly makes a face as she hears Lugh reminding her of the time she took Marinette hostage.

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* AdaptationPersonalityChange:
** Adrien is more rebellious, openly defiant and resentful towards his father for smothering and controlling him.
** Gabriel isn't as overtly evil, showing more genuine care and concern for his son and cutting back ''significantly'' on the dramatic monologues.
** Chloe is inspired to make serious efforts to [[TookALevelInKindness change for the better]] after Ladybug saves her, though this isn't an easy road for her by any means.
** Miss Bustier is less of a MisplacedKindergartenTeacher and doesn't encourage her 'model students' to be {{Extreme Doormat}}s.



* GoodIsNotSoft: Part of why Chloe struggles so much in her efforts to become a better person is because she fears others will think she's weaker. Finding a balance proves difficult for her.



* SecretTestOfCharacter: PlayedWith during the "Syren" two-parter: [[spoiler:after stripping the Ring from Adrien, Master Fu and Wayzz observe his behavior afterwards and determine that his heroic actions and humble words afterwards prove that he learned from his mistake... enough to be given another chance]].

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** Another benefit of being aware of the holder's identity is that [[spoiler:they can sub in when necessary, as Lady Temp or Temp Noir]].
* SecretTestOfCharacter: PlayedWith during the "Syren" two-parter: [[spoiler:after stripping the Ring from Adrien, Master Fu and Wayzz observe his behavior afterwards and determine that his heroic actions and humble words afterwards prove that he learned from his mistake... enough to be given another chance]].chance. While Adrien guesses that the whole thing was a test, and Wayzz doesn't deny it, the circumstances themselves imply that Fu originally had no intention of giving it back, and was simply moved by his deeds]].

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* EvilGloating: Largely {{Averted}}; unlike {{Canon}}, Hawkmoth is more of a NoNonsenseNemesis and doesn't engage in private theatrics.

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** Played straight in "Anansi and Lugh", where Adrien (brainwashed into playing the role of the villain) monologues about how he's going to return the world to its natural state. Plagg gets some good snark out of this.



** Thanks to the changed circumstances behind his akumatization, Marc doesn't become Reverser; rather, he becomes Anansi, his SelfInsert with the ability to have the world play out like one of his fanfics.



* RealityWarper: Marc has this power as Anansi, warping the world around him to match his fanfics; Nathaniel becomes his superhero partner once he gives him a "Miraculous", Chat Noir becomes a destruction-happy villain (with Ladybug playing along as his poor, abused partner), and the Ladyblog becoming the Spideyblog.



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* WhatTheHellHero: In "Syren Part 1", Master Fu is understandably not pleased by Adrien's threat to quit, and dresses him down while [[spoiler:confinscating the Ring]].

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* DisappointedInYou:
** When confronting Adrien for his failed enrollment attempt in "Origins", Gabriel points out that he only could have gotten as far as he did if he forged his signature. Adrien refuses to confirm it, but Gabriel still makes clear how much he disapproves.
** Master Fu says as much when [[spoiler:confronting Adrien over his threat to quit during the Syren incident]].



** The Syren arc still sees [[spoiler:Adrien threatening to quit, and learning Master Fu's identity]]. However, the events surrounding this are dramatically different.



* NotHelpingYourCase: Chloe tries to assist the heroes in saving her father by confronting Lady Justice and calling her out, claiming that the situation isn't ''nearly'' as bad as she's making it out to be.

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** During the Syren arc, [[spoiler:Adrien's attempts to blackmail Plagg into revealing his secrets don't convince him that he's ready. His threat to quit only makes matters worse -- especially as Master Fu witnesses it]].


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* ThreatBackfire: Played very seriously when [[spoiler:Master Fu responds to Adrien's threat to quit by taking the Ring. When Adrien protests that he didn't ''mean'' it, Fu points that he still disarmed and claimed that he was willing to quit in the middle of a dire situation]].
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* BrokenPedestal: Adrien's respect for his father takes a considerable hit in "The Collector" after he realizes that ''Marinette'' was the one who made the scarf, not Gabriel. {{Downplayed}} in that this doesn't convince him that [[spoiler:his father might have some connection to Hawkmoth]]; it 'merely' weakens his faith in him further.
* EvilGloating: Largely {{Averted}}; unlike {{Canon}}, Hawkmoth is more of a NoNonsenseNemesis and doesn't engage in private theatrics.


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** "Dawnbreaker" eventually reveals that [[spoiler:Chloe [[LoveConfession confessed]] to Adrien and got rebuffed]].


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* NotAGame: Chat Noir's tendency to joke and pun around contributes to the growing tensions between him and Ladybug, until [[spoiler:Master Fu confiscates the Ring. Adrien subsequently earns it back when he proves that he recognizes when things are a MatterOfLifeAndDeath]].


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* WeCanRuleTogether: Part of Syren's proposal to Kim is that they'll transform Paris into their underwater kingdom, ruling side-by-side.

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** Since Alya is made aware of Ladybug's SecretIdentity right away, she focuses instead upon investigating who ''Hawkmoth'' might be.

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** Since Alya is made aware of Ladybug's SecretIdentity right away, after the events of "Lady Wifi", she focuses instead upon investigating who ''Hawkmoth'' might be.



* {{Foreshadowing}}:
** After "Timebreaker" is dealt with, Plagg complains about the headache from regaining their conflicting memories and comments on how this is why he can't stand Hopps.
** "Despair Bear" sees Chloe melancholic for the whole episode, and ends with her messaging somebody [[spoiler:who has the same bear as her with the colors reversed]].



** Chloe still calls for Alya to be suspended after she breaks into her locker, not wanting anyone to think that her efforts to become less of an AlphaBitch make her vulnerable.



* InternalReveal: Two cap off "The Collector": Adrien realizes who ''really'' made his scarf, and [[spoiler:Gabriel reveals Emilie's cyro pod to Natalie, bringing her into his fold]].

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* InternalReveal: InternalReveal:
** "Lady Wifi" ends with Ladybug revealing her SecretIdentity to Alya.
** Nino gets let in on Adrien's secret during "Timebreaker".
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Two cap off "The Collector": Adrien realizes who ''really'' made his scarf, and [[spoiler:Gabriel reveals Emilie's cyro pod to Natalie, bringing her into his fold]].fold]].
* LovesMyAlterEgo: Marinette, Alya and Tikki figure out early on that Adrien has a crush on Ladybug.




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* WhereDoesHeGetAllThoseWonderfulToys: {{Discussed}} briefly; instead of thinking Chloe could be Ladybug herself, Alya instead suspects that she could be her ''supplier''.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: During "Riposte", Hawkmoth is ''horrified'' when she appears to have Adrien cornered in the sarcophagus and goes for the kill shot. Afterwards, he promises himself that he's never going to akumatize her again.
* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: Marinette's attempt to cheer up Chat Noir by introducing him to Andre sparks off his transformation into Glaciator, as he interprets the gesture as romantic and begins shipping the pair over their protests.
* NotHelpingYourCase: Chloe tries to assist the heroes in saving her father by confronting Lady Justice and calling her out, claiming that the situation isn't ''nearly'' as bad as she's making it out to be.
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* ADayInTheLimelight: "Dawnbreaker" follows Chloe's POV rather than Marinette, as [[spoiler:she's the titular akuma]].


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* TimeyWimeyBall: Dawnbreaker's power allows them to screw with time, in a way that forces everybody [[spoiler:''but'' Dawnbreaker to have experienced the full period before the 'reset']]. By the time Ladybug and Chat Noir are able to deal with the akuma, [[spoiler:this has been going on for ''two weeks'']].
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As its name suggests, ''[[https://miraculous-rewrite.tumblr.com/ Miraculous! Rewrite]]'' is a blog run by Mods Vega and Aimee which aims to completely reimagine and revamp the ''WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug'' series more to their liking. Including a tighter focus on CharacterDevelopment, some alternate akuma, and a stronger support network for the heroes due to their ability to designate a SecretKeeper for themselves.

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!!This series contains examples of:

* ForWantOfANail:
** Rather than immediately recanting her promise to improve after Ladybug saves her from Stoneheart, a star-struck Chloe declares that she'll be like her, and takes said vow quite seriously, though she struggles with the execution.
** Since Alya is made aware of Ladybug's SecretIdentity right away, she focuses instead upon investigating who ''Hawkmoth'' might be.
** In "Lady Justice", ''Sabrina'' becomes the titular akuma rather than her father after he ''quits'' rather than follow Andre's illegal orders.
* InSpiteOfANail:
** Marinette still initially believes that somebody else should become the new Ladybug after her first outing, and tries to slip the Earrings to Alya without being noticed.
** Chloe almost shrugs off misplacing her mother's bracelet, saying [[ScrewTheRulesIHaveMoney it can be replaced]], only for her father to reveal it was one of Audrey's prototype designs, sending her into a panicked BSOD.
** Despite Ladybug informing him quite clearly that she has a boyfriend in her civilian identity, and that she has plans to spend the afternoon with him, Chat Noir still misinterprets her saying "See you later" as implying she might come and see him if her boyfriend cancels.
* InternalReveal: Two cap off "The Collector": Adrien realizes who ''really'' made his scarf, and [[spoiler:Gabriel reveals Emilie's cyro pod to Natalie, bringing her into his fold]].
* RelatedInTheAdaptation: "The Collector" reveals that [[spoiler:Natalie is Emilie's sister]].
* RememberedICouldFly: When Nino sees that Plagg has Chloe's bracelet stuck on his head, he comments on how he thought he could phase through objects. Adrien then realizes that he was faking being stuck to try and weedle more cheese from him, and is [[EyeTwitch less than pleased]].
* SecretKeeper: Each holder of a Miraculous is able to choose one other person to let in on their secret, in order to provide them with extra stability and support. Marinette chooses Alya, while Adrien picks Nino.
* SecretTestOfCharacter: PlayedWith during the "Syren" two-parter: [[spoiler:after stripping the Ring from Adrien, Master Fu and Wayzz observe his behavior afterwards and determine that his heroic actions and humble words afterwards prove that he learned from his mistake... enough to be given another chance]].
* ShipperOnDeck: Andre the Ice Cream Vendor becomes fixated on the prospect of Chat Noir and ''Marinette'' getting together. Despite both vigorously protesting the idea.
* SignificantWardrobeShift:
** Ladybug gets one during "Origins Part 2", as her resolve to become Ladybug is reflected in her appearance.
** Another happens during "The Collector", with her attire looking more like an armored bodysuit and hair growing out longer with [[PowerDyesYourHair red spots]].
** Chat Noir has one of his own in Season 2 after [[spoiler:being reinstated]], with the silver changing to gold and gaining more armored padding.
* WellIntentionedExtremist: How Gabriel sees not just his actions as Hawkmoth, but his stifling and overprotective behavior as Adrien's father.
* WhatTheHellHero: In "Syren Part 1", Master Fu is understandably not pleased by Adrien's threat to quit, and dresses him down while [[spoiler:confinscating the Ring]].

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