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* From a real unknown AMERICAN one: ''DigitalALoveStory'', composer 4mat composed the AWESOME rockin' chiptune [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m-EAZK9X-Rk Paper Dolls]] that has about 20-30 seconds of nice buildup before literally rocking out.
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* From a real unknown AMERICAN one: ''DigitalALoveStory'', ''VisualNovel/DigitalALoveStory'', composer 4mat composed the AWESOME rockin' chiptune [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m-EAZK9X-Rk Paper Dolls]] that has about 20-30 seconds of nice buildup before literally rocking out.
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* [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9t8akS3hEQo Gentle Jena]], the title screen from the very short VN ''{{Planetarian}}''. ''Planetarian'' was made by KEY, most notable for making Air, Kanon, and Clannad so listening to this (peaceful) song can help you guess what kind of plot stuff will happen since it IS a KEY work.
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* [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9t8akS3hEQo Gentle Jena]], the title screen from the very short VN ''{{Planetarian}}''.''VisualNovel/{{Planetarian}}''. ''Planetarian'' was made by KEY, most notable for making Air, Kanon, and Clannad so listening to this (peaceful) song can help you guess what kind of plot stuff will happen since it IS a KEY work.
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* [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WixjopTY18Q Noisy Sweet Home]] from ''{{Deardrops}}'' is the perfectly energetic way to end the main route.
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* [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WixjopTY18Q Noisy Sweet Home]] from ''{{Deardrops}}'' ''VisualNovel/{{Deardrops}}'' is the perfectly energetic way to end the main route.
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** Also comparable to "Karma": [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wrZDyqpXb6M "Once More"]], from {{Never 7}}.
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** Also comparable to "Karma": [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wrZDyqpXb6M "Once More"]], from {{Never 7}}.''VisualNovel/{{Never7}}''.
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* ''{{Ever17}}''[='=]s [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e-XT9FS9TJo Opening Song]] sets the dark and mysterious mood of the VN while still being pretty catchy.
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* ''{{Ever17}}''[='=]s ''VisualNovel/{{Ever17}}''[='=]s [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e-XT9FS9TJo Opening Song]] sets the dark and mysterious mood of the VN while still being pretty catchy.
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** Among the tracks of ''{{Remember11}}'' there are [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y7AmwE9Rw_E "Paranoia"]] and [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HSFwiTokRFA "All or None"]] (which is comparable in tone and occasion to "Karma").
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** Among the tracks of ''{{Remember11}}'' ''VisualNovel/{{Remember11}}'' there are [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y7AmwE9Rw_E "Paranoia"]] and [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HSFwiTokRFA "All or None"]] (which is comparable in tone and occasion to "Karma").
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* Most of ''{{Tsukihime}}'''s soundtrack is rather understated, due to it being a doujin work. But there is one crowning piece of music in its soundtrack, the melancholy [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eFd_Hoo_xaw Homesickness]].
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* Most of ''{{Tsukihime}}'''s ''VisualNovel/{{Tsukihime}}'''s soundtrack is rather understated, due to it being a doujin work. But there is one crowning piece of music in its soundtrack, the melancholy [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eFd_Hoo_xaw Homesickness]].
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* ''DaCapo''[='=]s [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tEcQmOTSYQ4 Small Cherry Promised Bell]] is used at the tension points to great effect.
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* ''DaCapo''[='=]s ''VisualNovel/DaCapo''[='=]s [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tEcQmOTSYQ4 Small Cherry Promised Bell]] is used at the tension points to great effect.
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* ''SoulLink''[='=]s opening [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WSHy8egnoeU Not Accepted]] sets the tone for the novel well.
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* ''SoulLink''[='=]s ''VisualNovel/SoulLink''[='=]s opening [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WSHy8egnoeU Not Accepted]] sets the tone for the novel well.
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* ''MeltyBlood'' opening, [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bzuYs7YFtH4 Tribreath]], [=MintJam=]'s version is an awesome rock song, even if you never play the game.
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* ''MeltyBlood'' ''VideoGame/MeltyBlood'' opening, [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bzuYs7YFtH4 Tribreath]], [=MintJam=]'s version is an awesome rock song, even if you never play the game.
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* From the VN Card Game ''Soukoku no Arterial'':
** Here's the [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AQmV270QHh4 Final Boss Theme]] for each route.
** The [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X3fZz1caKcY OP]] and [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MruvZppfoPM ED]] are also quite good.
** Here's the [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AQmV270QHh4 Final Boss Theme]] for each route.
** The [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X3fZz1caKcY OP]] and [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MruvZppfoPM ED]] are also quite good.
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* From the VN Card Game ''Soukoku no Arterial'':
** Here's the [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AQmV270QHh4 Final Boss Theme]] for each route.
** The [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X3fZz1caKcY OP]] and [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MruvZppfoPM ED]] are also quite good.
** Here's the [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AQmV270QHh4 Final Boss Theme]] for each route.
** The [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X3fZz1caKcY OP]] and [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MruvZppfoPM ED]] are also quite good.
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KefkaSr, you REALLY need to run your edits through the \"Get Help with English\" thread in the forums. Your entries are consistently filled with grammatical errors.
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* To celebrate finished translation of ''VisualNovel/MajiDeWatashiNiKoiShinasai'' here's the most awesome of character Leitmotif, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zce0tkumWkI Sword Dance]]
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* To celebrate the finished translation of ''VisualNovel/MajiDeWatashiNiKoiShinasai'' ''VisualNovel/MajiDeWatashiNiKoiShinasai'', here's the most awesome of the character Leitmotif, [[https://www.{{Leitmotif}}s, [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zce0tkumWkI Sword Dance]] Dance.]]
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* To celebrate finished translation of ''VisualNovel/MajiDeWatashiNiKoiShinasai'' here's the most awesome of character Leitmotif, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zce0tkumWkI Sword Dance]]
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* MasaakiEndoh did some music for ''VisualNovel/DengekiStryker''. The opening [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wgg-uon5Ls0 Burst Dream]] is a pretty good rock song, but insert song [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K_ARkwVYw5g BREAKING!]] (a collaboration with AiRi) is incredibly catchy.
** He did it again in UpdatedReleased [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=toz0U121B4s OP]] and of course it's awesome too
** He did it again in UpdatedReleased [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=toz0U121B4s OP]] and of course it's awesome too
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* MasaakiEndoh did some music for ''VisualNovel/DengekiStryker''. The opening [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wgg-uon5Ls0 Burst Dream]] is a pretty good rock song, but insert song [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K_ARkwVYw5g BREAKING!]] (a collaboration with AiRi) is incredibly catchy.
**catchy. He did it again in UpdatedReleased [[https://www.the UpdatedRerelease [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=toz0U121B4s OP]] and of course it's awesome tootoo.
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* From the VN Card Game ''Soukoku no Arterial'':
** Here's the [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AQmV270QHh4 Final Boss Theme]] for each route.
** The [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X3fZz1caKcY OP]] and [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MruvZppfoPM ED]] are also quite good.
** Here's the [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AQmV270QHh4 Final Boss Theme]] for each route.
** The [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X3fZz1caKcY OP]] and [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MruvZppfoPM ED]] are also quite good.
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** The [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X3fZz1caKcY
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* MasaakiEndoh did some music for ''VisualNovel/DengekiStryker''. The opening 'Burst Dream' is a pretty good rock song, but insert song [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K_ARkwVYw5g BREAKING!]] (a collaboration with AiRi) is incredibly catchy.
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* MasaakiEndoh did some music for ''VisualNovel/DengekiStryker''. The opening 'Burst Dream' [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wgg-uon5Ls0 Burst Dream]] is a pretty good rock song, but insert song [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K_ARkwVYw5g BREAKING!]] (a collaboration with AiRi) is incredibly catchy.
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* ''The Silver Case'': [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TRuy1E6tUsM ''Kouichi'']] is just an epic track for the game.
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* ''The Silver Case'': [[https://www.[[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TRuy1E6tUsM ''Kouichi'']] "Kouichi"]] is just an epic track for the game.
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* ''The Silver Case'': [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TRuy1E6tUsM ''Kouichi'']] is just an epic track for the game.
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** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NFouGLSwlOY Final Movement of the Space Rhapsody]] and [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W_1c24VPhL8 The Last Song of the World]], the themes for the final battle which decides the fate of the universe. It's very appropriate considering the sheer, absolute power both sides are wielding by that point.
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** [[https://www.[[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NFouGLSwlOY Final Movement of the Space Rhapsody]] and [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W_1c24VPhL8 The Last Song of the World]], the themes for the final battle which decides the fate of the universe. It's very appropriate considering the sheer, absolute power both sides are wielding by that point.
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** [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W_1c24VPhL8 The Last Song of the World]], the theme for the final battle which decides the fate of the universe. It's very appropriate considering the sheer, absolute power both sides are wielding by that point.
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** [[http://www.[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NFouGLSwlOY Final Movement of the Space Rhapsody]] and [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W_1c24VPhL8 The Last Song of the World]], the theme themes for the final battle which decides the fate of the universe. It's very appropriate considering the sheer, absolute power both sides are wielding by that point.
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** [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Fx2DgzonNdU Song of Saya I]] and [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yV-i4OY_5Wk II]] is pretty cool as well.
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** [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Fx2DgzonNdU Song of Saya I]] and [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yV-i4OY_5Wk II]] is are pretty cool as well.
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** [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T22g1mwdfLs Song of Saya I]] is pretty cool as well.
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** [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T22g1mwdfLs com/watch?v=Fx2DgzonNdU Song of Saya I]] and [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yV-i4OY_5Wk II]] is pretty cool as well.well.
** [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pn8PHhJXERU Silent Sorrow]] is absolutely ''heartbreaking''.
** [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pn8PHhJXERU Silent Sorrow]] is absolutely ''heartbreaking''.
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** And on the villains' side, we have Master Therion's theme, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=So7eaYnIn5s I Am Laughing At the Beasts]], and Anticross's "evil stuff is happening" theme, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DYts6iJtIqs Seven Points on Ten]].
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W_1c24VPhL8 The Last Song of the World]], the theme for the final battle which decides the fate of the universe. It's very appropriate considering the sheer, absolute power both sides are wielding by that point.
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W_1c24VPhL8 The Last Song of the World]], the theme for the final battle which decides the fate of the universe. It's very appropriate considering the sheer, absolute power both sides are wielding by that point.
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** And on the villains' side, we have Master Therion's theme, [[https://www.[[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=So7eaYnIn5s I Am Laughing At the Beasts]], and Anticross's "evil stuff is happening" theme, [[https://www.[[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DYts6iJtIqs Seven Points on Ten]].
**[[https://www.[[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W_1c24VPhL8 The Last Song of the World]], the theme for the final battle which decides the fate of the universe. It's very appropriate considering the sheer, absolute power both sides are wielding by that point.
**
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** And on the villains' side, we have Master Therion's theme, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=So7eaYnIn5s I Am Laughing At the Beasts]], and Anticross's "evil stuff is happening" theme, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DYts6iJtIqs Seven Points on Ten]].
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W_1c24VPhL8 The Last Song of the World]], the theme for the final battle which decides the fate of the universe. It's very appropriate considering the sheer, absolute power both sides are wielding by that point.
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W_1c24VPhL8 The Last Song of the World]], the theme for the final battle which decides the fate of the universe. It's very appropriate considering the sheer, absolute power both sides are wielding by that point.
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* ''VisualNovel/LamentoBeyondTheVoid'' [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W9KmOg-W-cc soundtrack]] is [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ekyh9bn7m_w beautiful]], [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-y4OrE_ZHq4 lyrical]] and [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VsSvL-sU5Og emotional]].
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* ''VisualNovel/LamentoBeyondTheVoid'' ''VisualNovel/LamentoBeyondTheVoid''[='=]s [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W9KmOg-W-cc soundtrack]] is [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ekyh9bn7m_w beautiful]], [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-y4OrE_ZHq4 lyrical]] and [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VsSvL-sU5Og emotional]].
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* ''VisualNovel/{{Lamento-BEYOND THE VOID}}'' [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W9KmOg-W-cc soundtrack]] is [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ekyh9bn7m_w beautiful]], [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-y4OrE_ZHq4 lyrical]] and [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VsSvL-sU5Og emotional]].
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* ''VisualNovel/{{Lamento-BEYOND THE VOID}}'' ''VisualNovel/LamentoBeyondTheVoid'' [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W9KmOg-W-cc soundtrack]] is [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ekyh9bn7m_w beautiful]], [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-y4OrE_ZHq4 lyrical]] and [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VsSvL-sU5Og emotional]].
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* From VN Card Game Soukoku no Arterial, here's the [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AQmV270QHh4 Final Boss Theme]] for each route.
** [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X3fZz1caKcY OP]] and [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MruvZppfoPM ED]] from Soukoku no Arterial is also quite good.
** [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X3fZz1caKcY OP]] and [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MruvZppfoPM ED]] from Soukoku no Arterial is also quite good.
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* From the VN Card Game Soukoku ''Soukoku no Arterial, here's Arterial'':
** Here's the [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AQmV270QHh4 Final Boss Theme]] for each route.
** The [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X3fZz1caKcY OP]] and [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MruvZppfoPM ED]]from Soukoku no Arterial is are also quite good.
** Here's the [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AQmV270QHh4 Final Boss Theme]] for each route.
** The [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X3fZz1caKcY OP]] and [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MruvZppfoPM ED]]
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** [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X3fZz1caKcY OP]] and [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MruvZppfoPM ED]] from Soukoku no Arterial is also quite good.
** [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X3fZz1caKcY OP]] and [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MruvZppfoPM ED]] from Soukoku no Arterial is also quite good.
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There is some debate to if Visual Novels are actually 'video games' or not. Nevertheless Visual Novels do tend to have some great music which is sad since many people tend to overlook visual novels for other media.
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There is some debate as to if whether Visual Novels are actually 'video games' or not. Nevertheless Nevertheless, Visual Novels do tend to have some great music which is sad since many people tend to overlook visual novels for other media.