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* The [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v31Ka2Hr4NQ Main Menu Theme]] is a glorious orchestral score, which helps to depict both the mentalities of WarIsGlorious and WarIsHell, which fits the overall theme of the game's setting and gameplay.
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* The [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v31Ka2Hr4NQ Main Menu Theme]] is a glorious orchestral score, score which helps to depict both the mentalities of WarIsGlorious and WarIsHell, which fits the overall theme of the game's setting and gameplay.
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* The [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v31Ka2Hr4NQ Main Menu Theme]] is a glorious orchestral score, which helps to depict both the mentalities of WarIsGlorious and WarIsHell, which fits the overall theme of the game's setting and gameplay.
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If "Soviets" is plural, the possessive apostrophe goes after the S.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dED-EO7tFlA Invincible and Legendary]], the Soviet victory theme. Like "Over There", it's loud, boisterous, and epic, reflecting the Soviet's triumph over the Germans.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dED-EO7tFlA Invincible and Legendary]], the Soviet victory theme. Like "Over There", it's loud, boisterous, and epic, reflecting the Soviet's Soviets' triumph over the Germans.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=--Vf0gqoO54 Erika]], the German victory theme. Not as loud as "Over There", but it makes up for this by having a simpler charm to it.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=--Vf0gqoO54 Erika]], the German victory theme. Not as loud as "Over There", but it makes up for this by having a simpler charm to it.it.
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dED-EO7tFlA Invincible and Legendary]], the Soviet victory theme. Like "Over There", it's loud, boisterous, and epic, reflecting the Soviet's triumph over the Germans.
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dED-EO7tFlA Invincible and Legendary]], the Soviet victory theme. Like "Over There", it's loud, boisterous, and epic, reflecting the Soviet's triumph over the Germans.
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* The main menu features several period-accurate marches, with [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mvZnZbJ7BKA On the Square]] being the most memorable.
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* The main menu features several period-accurate marches, with [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mvZnZbJ7BKA On the Square]] being the most memorable. Also notable is this version of the [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UjXxG1_dgSU US Field Artillery March]].
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* The main menu features several period-accurate marching music, with [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mvZnZbJ7BKA On the Square]] being the most memorable.
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* The main menu features several period-accurate marching music, marches, with [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mvZnZbJ7BKA On the Square]] being the most memorable.
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* The main menu features several period-accurate marching music, with [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mvZnZbJ7BKA On the Square]] being the most memorable.
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=921z4LAHvak Over There]] is the US victory theme. Loud, boisterous, and energetic, it gives US faction players a sense of triumph each time.
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=--Vf0gqoO54 Erika]], the German victory theme. Not as loud as "Over There", but it makes up for this by having a simpler charm to it.
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=921z4LAHvak Over There]] is the US victory theme. Loud, boisterous, and energetic, it gives US faction players a sense of triumph each time.
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=--Vf0gqoO54 Erika]], the German victory theme. Not as loud as "Over There", but it makes up for this by having a simpler charm to it.
