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* "BON VOYAGE" may be happier sounding than their usual but it's still a climactic anime-esque song encapsulating pretty much every aspect of what makes this group who they are musically and visually.
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* "BON VOYAGE" may be happier sounding than their usual fare, but it's still a climactic anime-esque song encapsulating pretty much every aspect of what makes this group who they are musically and visually.
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* "VISION" brings back some classic Dreamcatcher rock vibes while continuing the commentary begun with "Maison."
* "BON VOYAGE" may be happier sounding than their usual but it's still a climactic anime-esque song encapsulating pretty much every aspect of what makes this group who they are musically and visually.
* "BON VOYAGE" may be happier sounding than their usual but it's still a climactic anime-esque song encapsulating pretty much every aspect of what makes this group who they are musically and visually.
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* "Maison" is an epic and powerful mix of EDM and operatic metal delivering the important message of recognizing the effects of climate change and enviornmentalism.
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* ''Road to Utopia'' has the B-side "Wind Blows", a hard-hitting EDM track that shows Dreamcatcher's penchant for combining powerful vocals with softer moments, and was practically made for crowd chanting thanks to the repeated shouts of "Wind blows!" peppered throughout the song.
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* ''Road to Utopia'' has the B-side "Wind Blows", a hard-hitting EDM track that shows Dreamcatcher's penchant for combining powerful vocals with softer moments, and was practically made for crowd chanting thanks to the repeated shouts of "Wind blows!" peppered throughout the song.song.
* ''Apocalypse: Save Us'' features seven solo tracks written and composed by each of the members, with each one perfectly encapsulating their unique styles, voices, and personalities, from [=JiU=]'s poppy upbeat song, [=SuA=]'s hard hitting dance track, Siyeon's soothing vocals mixed with traditional sounds, and Yoohyeon's jazzy and retro all English tune!
* ''Apocalypse: Save Us'' features seven solo tracks written and composed by each of the members, with each one perfectly encapsulating their unique styles, voices, and personalities, from [=JiU=]'s poppy upbeat song, [=SuA=]'s hard hitting dance track, Siyeon's soothing vocals mixed with traditional sounds, and Yoohyeon's jazzy and retro all English tune!
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* From the ''Lose Myself'' EP, Dreamcatcher gives us "Break the Wall", which sees Dreamcatcher performing a full-on alternative rock song, combined with empowering lyrics about pushing through hardships, and finding the strength to keep going
* ''Road to Utopia'' has the B-side "Wind Blows", a hard-hitting EDM track that shows Dreamcatcher's penchant for combining powerful vocals with softer moments, and was practically made for crowd chanting thanks to the repeated shouts of "Wind blows!" peppered throughout the song
* ''Road to Utopia'' has the B-side "Wind Blows", a hard-hitting EDM track that shows Dreamcatcher's penchant for combining powerful vocals with softer moments, and was practically made for crowd chanting thanks to the repeated shouts of "Wind blows!" peppered throughout the song
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* From the ''Lose Myself'' EP, Dreamcatcher gives us "Break the Wall", which sees Dreamcatcher them performing a full-on alternative rock song, combined with empowering lyrics about pushing through hardships, hardships and finding the strength to keep going
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* ''Road to Utopia'' has the B-side "Wind Blows", a hard-hitting EDM track that shows Dreamcatcher's penchant for combining powerful vocals with softer moments, and was practically made for crowd chanting thanks to the repeated shouts of "Wind blows!" peppered throughout thesongsong.
* ''Road to Utopia'' has the B-side "Wind Blows", a hard-hitting EDM track that shows Dreamcatcher's penchant for combining powerful vocals with softer moments, and was practically made for crowd chanting thanks to the repeated shouts of "Wind blows!" peppered throughout the
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* From the Lose Myself EP, Dreamcatcher gives us "Break the Wall", which sees Dreamcatcher performing a full-on alternative rock song, combined with empowering lyrics about pushing through hardships, and finding the strength to keep going
* Road to Utopia has the B-side "Wind Blows", a hard-hitting EDM track that shows Dreamcatcher's penchant for combining powerful vocals with softer moments, and was practically made for crowd chanting thanks to the repeated shouts of "Wind blows!" peppered throughout the song
* Road to Utopia has the B-side "Wind Blows", a hard-hitting EDM track that shows Dreamcatcher's penchant for combining powerful vocals with softer moments, and was practically made for crowd chanting thanks to the repeated shouts of "Wind blows!" peppered throughout the song
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* From the Lose Myself ''Lose Myself'' EP, Dreamcatcher gives us "Break the Wall", which sees Dreamcatcher performing a full-on alternative rock song, combined with empowering lyrics about pushing through hardships, and finding the strength to keep going
*Road ''Road to Utopia Utopia'' has the B-side "Wind Blows", a hard-hitting EDM track that shows Dreamcatcher's penchant for combining powerful vocals with softer moments, and was practically made for crowd chanting thanks to the repeated shouts of "Wind blows!" peppered throughout the song
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* "Wonderland" and "And there was no one left" are two popular B-side tracks among the fandom, showcasing the group's versatility in genres with a slower and more sensual R&B side.
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* "Wonderland" and "And there was no one left" are two popular B-side tracks among the fandom, showcasing the group's versatility in genres with a slower and more sensual R&B side.side.
* From the Lose Myself EP, Dreamcatcher gives us "Break the Wall", which sees Dreamcatcher performing a full-on alternative rock song, combined with empowering lyrics about pushing through hardships, and finding the strength to keep going
* Road to Utopia has the B-side "Wind Blows", a hard-hitting EDM track that shows Dreamcatcher's penchant for combining powerful vocals with softer moments, and was practically made for crowd chanting thanks to the repeated shouts of "Wind blows!" peppered throughout the song
* From the Lose Myself EP, Dreamcatcher gives us "Break the Wall", which sees Dreamcatcher performing a full-on alternative rock song, combined with empowering lyrics about pushing through hardships, and finding the strength to keep going
* Road to Utopia has the B-side "Wind Blows", a hard-hitting EDM track that shows Dreamcatcher's penchant for combining powerful vocals with softer moments, and was practically made for crowd chanting thanks to the repeated shouts of "Wind blows!" peppered throughout the song
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* "BEcause" is also LighterAndSofter, being the title track of their EP "Summer Holiday", with lyrics describing a a romance that turned obsessive.
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* "BEcause" "Because" is also LighterAndSofter, being the title track of their EP "Summer Holiday", with lyrics describing a a romance that turned obsessive.
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* "BEcause" is also LighterAndSofter, being the title track of their EP "Summer Holiday", with lyrics describing a a romance that turned obsessive.
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* "Deja Vu" is a hauntingly beautiful rock ballad, with the chorus having operatic choir chants and intense guitar coupled with the girls' beautiful vocals.
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* "Deja Vu" is a hauntingly beautiful rock ballad, with the chorus having operatic choir chants choral chanting and intense guitar coupled with the girls' beautiful vocals.
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* "Scream" has EDM mixed with rock, operatic vocals like with "Deja Vu", and lyrics that criticize cyberbullying and online hate culture.
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* "Scream" has EDM mixed with rock, operatic choral vocals like with "Deja Vu", and lyrics that criticize cyberbullying and online hate culture.
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* "Odd Eye" closes up the Dystopia trilogy bringing a hard-hitting song, with the conclusion that the Utopia they were looking for isn't real, and it even has references to both "Scream" and "BOCA" in the coreography!
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* "Odd Eye" closes up the Dystopia trilogy bringing a hard-hitting song, with the conclusion that the Utopia they were looking for isn't real, and it even has references to both "Scream" and "BOCA" in the coreography!
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* "Odd Eye" closes up the Dystopia trilogy bringing a hard-hitting song, with the conclusion that the Utopia they were looking for isn't real, and it even has references to both "Scream" and "BOCA" in the coreography!
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* "BOCA" follows up on the same message against online hate and spreading hurtful comments from "Scream" while mixing the group's signature sound with moombahton style.
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* "Red Sun" is dripping in gothic atmosphere, creating an eerie yet mesmerizing sound that's reflected in live performances through the members putting the audience, as well as themselves, under a hypnotic spell.
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* "Red Sun" is dripping in gothic atmosphere, creating an eerie yet mesmerizing sound that's reflected in live performances through the members putting the audience, as well as themselves, under a hypnotic spell.spell.
* "Wonderland" and "And there was no one left" are two popular B-side tracks among the fandom, showcasing the group's versatility in genres with a slower and more sensual R&B side.
* "Wonderland" and "And there was no one left" are two popular B-side tracks among the fandom, showcasing the group's versatility in genres with a slower and more sensual R&B side.
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* "Silent Night" has heavy EDM mixed with the rock sound that leave a powerful impact when listening.
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* "Silent Night" has heavy EDM mixed with the rock sound that leave a powerful impact when listening. "In The Frozen" also does this.
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* "Red Sun" is dripping in gothic atmosphere, creating an eerie yet mesmerizing atmosphere that's reflected in live performances through the members putting the audience, as well as themselves, under a hypnotic spell.
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* "Red Sun" is dripping in gothic atmosphere, creating an eerie yet mesmerizing atmosphere sound that's reflected in live performances through the members putting the audience, as well as themselves, under a hypnotic spell.
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* "Scream" has EDM mixed with rock, operatic vocals like with "Deja Vu", and lyrics that criticize cyberbullying and online hate culture.
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* "Scream" has EDM mixed with rock, operatic vocals like with "Deja Vu", and lyrics that criticize cyberbullying and online hate culture.culture.
!! B-sides / Special singles
* "Emotion" and "Lullaby" are both slower and emotional ballads that balance out the harder rock sound of the title tracks for "Chase Me" and "Good Night" respectively.
* "Full Moon" and "Over the Sky" were both released as special singles, serving as anniversary songs dedicated to fans of the group, and both have upbeat rock melodies and uplifting lyrics.
* "Silent Night" has heavy EDM mixed with the rock sound that leave a powerful impact when listening.
* Siyeon's solo single "Paradise" is a hauntingly beautiful song, the track highlighting the range of her vocals.
* "Red Sun" is dripping in gothic atmosphere, creating an eerie yet mesmerizing atmosphere that's reflected in live performances through the members putting the audience, as well as themselves, under a hypnotic spell.
!! B-sides / Special singles
* "Emotion" and "Lullaby" are both slower and emotional ballads that balance out the harder rock sound of the title tracks for "Chase Me" and "Good Night" respectively.
* "Full Moon" and "Over the Sky" were both released as special singles, serving as anniversary songs dedicated to fans of the group, and both have upbeat rock melodies and uplifting lyrics.
* "Silent Night" has heavy EDM mixed with the rock sound that leave a powerful impact when listening.
* Siyeon's solo single "Paradise" is a hauntingly beautiful song, the track highlighting the range of her vocals.
* "Red Sun" is dripping in gothic atmosphere, creating an eerie yet mesmerizing atmosphere that's reflected in live performances through the members putting the audience, as well as themselves, under a hypnotic spell.
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* While "Fly High" was LighterAndSofter than the previous two title tracks, it gets progressively more intense as it goes on and still contains the group's signature rock sound.
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* While "Fly High" was is LighterAndSofter than the previous two title tracks, it gets progressively more intense as it goes on and still contains the group's signature rock sound.
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* "Scream" has EDM mixed with rock, operatic vocals like with "Deja Vu", and the lyrics that criticize cyberbullying and online hate culture.
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* "Scream" has EDM mixed with rock, operatic vocals like with "Deja Vu", and the lyrics that criticize cyberbullying and online hate culture.
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* "Deja Vu" is a hauntingly beautiful rock ballad, with the chorus having operatic choir chants and intense guitar coupled with the girls' beautiful vocals.
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* "Deja Vu" is a hauntingly beautiful rock ballad, with the chorus having operatic choir chants and intense guitar coupled with the girls' beautiful vocals.vocals.
* "Scream" has EDM mixed with rock, operatic vocals like with "Deja Vu", and the lyrics that criticize cyberbullying and online hate culture.
* "Scream" has EDM mixed with rock, operatic vocals like with "Deja Vu", and the lyrics that criticize cyberbullying and online hate culture.
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!! Title Tracks
* Both "Chase Me" and "Good Night" served as a strong start for the introduction of Dreamcatcher's unique, hard rock sound, their music videos also serving as a two-part intro to the "Nightmare" storyline.
* While "Fly High" was LighterAndSofter than the previous two title tracks, it gets progressively more intense as it goes on and still contains the group's signature rock sound.
* "Piri" has a powerful rock sound containing intense chants and a sharp rap line from Gahyeon and Dami.
* "Deja Vu" is a hauntingly beautiful rock ballad, with the chorus having operatic choir chants and intense guitar coupled with the girls' beautiful vocals.
* Both "Chase Me" and "Good Night" served as a strong start for the introduction of Dreamcatcher's unique, hard rock sound, their music videos also serving as a two-part intro to the "Nightmare" storyline.
* While "Fly High" was LighterAndSofter than the previous two title tracks, it gets progressively more intense as it goes on and still contains the group's signature rock sound.
* "Piri" has a powerful rock sound containing intense chants and a sharp rap line from Gahyeon and Dami.
* "Deja Vu" is a hauntingly beautiful rock ballad, with the chorus having operatic choir chants and intense guitar coupled with the girls' beautiful vocals.