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* The [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bmk-uVLpBFk Menu Title]]. Upbeat and cheerful, the beginning includes an instrument similar to pan-flutes, giving it a nostalgic [[{{Retraux}} feeling]] of [[RetroGaming 90s and early 2000s CD-ROM games]].games. It's a great fit to the feeling (and action that you are assumedly doing) of starting up a new game.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gt7UNpQu91o Blooming Panic's main theme]] by Faefield Productions. It includes lyrics sung by the three love interests, nightowl, Quest and [=NakedToaster=] in-character. Music with lyrics is very uncommon in Western [[VisualNovel visual novels]], so the creators taking the time to compose and sing (particularly during a two month game jam with limited time to complete assets) is impressive.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gt7UNpQu91o Blooming Panic's main theme]] by Faefield Productions. It Productions includes lyrics sung by the three love interests, nightowl, Quest and [=NakedToaster=] in-character. Music with lyrics is very uncommon in Western [[VisualNovel visual novels]], {{Visual Novel}}s, so the creators taking the time to compose and sing (particularly during a two month game jam with limited time to complete assets) is impressive.
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* Ditto [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aNoilAHcjSY Facetime [Talk To Me] ]]. It is played during a few emotional points in the game and gives a heartwarming burst during these moments of characters' emotions and [[RelationShipUpgrade relationships]] reaching a significant change.
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* Ditto [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aNoilAHcjSY Facetime [Talk To Me] ]]. It ]] is played during a few emotional points in the game and gives a heartwarming burst during these moments of characters' emotions and [[RelationShipUpgrade relationships]] reaching a significant change.
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* Ditto [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aNoilAHcjSY Facetime [Talk To Me] ]]. It is played during a few emotional points in the game and gives a heartwarming burst during these moments of characters' emotions and [[RelationShipUpgrade relationships]] reach reaching a significant change.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gt7UNpQu91o Blooming Panic's main theme]] by Faefield Productions. It includes lyrics sung by the three love interests, nightowl, Quest and [=NakedToaster=] in-character. Music with lyrics is very uncommon in Western Vidsual Novels, [[VisualNovel visual novels]], so the creators taking the time to compose and sing (particularly during a two month game jam with limited time to complete assets) is impressive.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gt7UNpQu91o Blooming Panic's main theme]] by Faefield Productions. It includes lyrics sung by the three love interests, nightowl, Quest and [=NakedToaster=] in-character. Music with lyrics is very uncommon in Western Vidsual Novels, so the creators taking the time to compose and sing (particularly during a two month game jam with limited time to complete assets) is impressive.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6P6-UYN6z8M Logging Off [ttyl]]] [ttyl] ]] has a more sombre, sad, anxiety-feeling tone, as it's used for more tense moments in the game.
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** Several songs in fact have [=BloomBot=]'s voice edited in [[FridgeBrilliance subtly as notes]].
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* Ditto [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aNoilAHcjSY Facetime [Talk To Me]]].
* The [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bmk-uVLpBFk Menu Title]].
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6P6-UYN6z8M Logging Off [ttyl]]] has a more sombre, sad, anxiety-feeling tone, as it's used for more tense moments in the game.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gt7UNpQu91o Blooming Panic's main theme]] by Faefield Productions. It includes lyrics sung by the three love interests, nightowl, Quest and [=NakedToaster=].
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WWjvg1q1lbo I'll DM You ♡]], which includes vocal effects by [=BloomBot=]'s voice actor, [=Katy133=].
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Eqkh6b62vjE General Chat [Chilltalk]]] has a very relaxed [[{{Vaporwave}} lofi beats vibe]] to it.
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WWjvg1q1lbo I'll DM You ♡]], which includes vocal effects by [=BloomBot=]'s voice actor, [=Katy133=].
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Eqkh6b62vjE General Chat [Chilltalk]]] has a very relaxed [[{{Vaporwave}} lofi beats vibe]] to it.
