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!!Chapter 19
* Time will tell if it has any effect, but Lilith does make it clear to Odalia, a woman with enough influence to ruin her, that the way she has treated her children is completely unacceptable and that she needs to be better. She has no patience for Odalia's pathetic excuses either.
!!Chapter 20
* Upon learning that Gus, Willow, and Viney are all in on the SideBet about when Luz will confess her feelings for Amity, Luz is pissed and swears righteous vengeance. She does this so seriously that Gus considers if he's made a mistake.
* Time will tell if it has any effect, but Lilith does make it clear to Odalia, a woman with enough influence to ruin her, that the way she has treated her children is completely unacceptable and that she needs to be better. She has no patience for Odalia's pathetic excuses either.
!!Chapter 20
* Upon learning that Gus, Willow, and Viney are all in on the SideBet about when Luz will confess her feelings for Amity, Luz is pissed and swears righteous vengeance. She does this so seriously that Gus considers if he's made a mistake.
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!!Chapter 34
* While Luz is still chewed out by Vee over her basically running away from home and having a "good life" with Camila, Luz doesn't just lie down and take it; she fires back and tells Vee that she suffered from having no friends growing up so to her, the Boiling Isles is as much of a paradise to her as the Human Realm is to Vee. While it came out more severely than Luz intended, Vee immediately becomes ashamed of what she said and apologizes.
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!!Chapter 18
* Lilith's training, with Eda's tutelage, consists of focusing all her power in a small point before blasting it outwards. The result is a ''massive'' pillar of fire that both impresses and terrifies Luz.
* In the show, the owl family had to juryrig a creative method to deal with the guardian of King's castle. In the fic, Lilith still has her full power so she simply picks it up with telekinesis and smashes it under a pile of rocks. It doesn't keep it down for long due to its HealingFactor, but when the gang needs to get past it again she simply freezes it in place with the same telekinesis. As powerful as Jean-Luc may be, it is nothing compared to Lilith.
* Lilith's training, with Eda's tutelage, consists of focusing all her power in a small point before blasting it outwards. The result is a ''massive'' pillar of fire that both impresses and terrifies Luz.
* In the show, the owl family had to juryrig a creative method to deal with the guardian of King's castle. In the fic, Lilith still has her full power so she simply picks it up with telekinesis and smashes it under a pile of rocks. It doesn't keep it down for long due to its HealingFactor, but when the gang needs to get past it again she simply freezes it in place with the same telekinesis. As powerful as Jean-Luc may be, it is nothing compared to Lilith.
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-->'''Lilith:''' Clearly, I have no chance of regaining his favor and he would see me killed, so to hell with him.
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* While the presence of the head witches derailed it, the rest of the escape plan still goes off without a hitch; With Gus hiding them, Amity and Willow create pandemonium in the castle hallway with their magic, giving Steve plausible deniability for dropping a pile of sleep potions that knocks out the guards, who are then tied up by the kids, giving Luz and co free passage when they escape. Particular credits go to Steve, who's loyalty to Lilith was great enough that he committed outright ''treason'' for her sake, especially after hearing that she's doing it for Luz.
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* While the presence of the head witches derailed it, the rest of the escape plan still goes off without a hitch; With Gus hiding them, Amity and Willow create pandemonium in the castle hallway with their magic, knocking out a few guards and giving Steve plausible deniability for dropping a pile of sleep potions that knocks out the guards, who are then tied up by the kids, giving Luz and co free passage when they escape. Particular credits go to Steve, who's loyalty to Lilith was great enough that he committed outright ''treason'' for her sake, especially after hearing that she's doing it for Luz.
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* Belos claims that he's disappointed in Lilith, since he was about to forgive her and return her to the coven. Having already broken through her indoctrination, Lilith tells him to cut the crap, and when he demands that Luz hand over the portal, she outright attacks him. It does nothing to him, but shows how far Lilith has come and how much of a MamaBear she is towards Luz.
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-->'''Luz:''' Hey Belos! I don't like people making my choices for me.
* While the presence of the head witches derailed it, the rest of the escape plan still goes off without a hitch; With Gus hiding them, Amity and Willow create pandemonium in the castle hallway with their magic, giving Steve plausible deniability for dropping a pile of sleep potions that knocks out the guards, who are then tied up by the kids, giving Luz and co free passage when they escape. Particular credits go to Steve, who's loyalty to Lilith was great enough that he committed outright ''treason'' for her sake, especially after hearing that she's doing it for Luz.
* While the presence of the head witches derailed it, the rest of the escape plan still goes off without a hitch; With Gus hiding them, Amity and Willow create pandemonium in the castle hallway with their magic, giving Steve plausible deniability for dropping a pile of sleep potions that knocks out the guards, who are then tied up by the kids, giving Luz and co free passage when they escape. Particular credits go to Steve, who's loyalty to Lilith was great enough that he committed outright ''treason'' for her sake, especially after hearing that she's doing it for Luz.
