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** George also gets one for intimidating Adam into admitting he was the one who started the rumor about Carmen.
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** George and Angie also gets get one for intimidating Adam into admitting he was the one who started the rumor about Carmen.
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* When Carmen finds out that her boyfriend Jason has been cheating on her for a month, she calls him over to take his old belongings back. When he arrives, Carmen walks in carrying a box of his belongings while wearing a VERY revealing outfit. Jason is heavily distracted by her sexy outfit, simply repeating he's "never seen that outfit before".
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* When Carmen finds out that her boyfriend Jason has been cheating on her for a month, she calls him over to take his old belongings back. When he arrives, Carmen walks in carrying a box of his belongings while wearing a VERY revealing outfit. Jason is heavily distracted by her sexy outfit, simply repeating he's "never seen that outfit before". Carmen shuts him down with this line-
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* When Carmen finds out that her boyfriend Jason has been cheating on her for a month, she calls him over to take his old belongings back. When he arrives, Carmen walks in carrying a box of his belongings while wearing a VERY revealing outfit. Jason is heavily distracted by her sexy outfit, simply repeating he's "never seen that outfit before". She begins to sweetly tell him that if things don't work out with his new girlfriend and he wants to call her again... not to bother with it. She throws the box outside on the ground and declares that now he knows what he just lost, he can go to hell. Jason can only silently leave as she slams the door behind him -- then declaring how good that felt for her. Angie applauds her actions, saying she finally stood up for herself with Jason.
--> '''Carmen:''' I just want to let you know, if it doesn't work out with Cindy, and you want to call me ....don't. Now that you know what you're losing, go to hell!
--> '''Carmen:''' I just want to let you know, if it doesn't work out with Cindy, and you want to call me ....don't. Now that you know what you're losing, go to hell!
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* When Carmen finds out that her boyfriend Jason has been cheating on her for a month, she calls him over to take his old belongings back. When he arrives, Carmen walks in carrying a box of his belongings while wearing a VERY revealing outfit. Jason is heavily distracted by her sexy outfit, simply repeating he's "never seen that outfit before". She begins
--> '''Carmen:''' I just want tosweetly tell him that let you know, if things don't it doesn't work out with his new girlfriend Cindy, and he wants you want to call her again... not to bother with it. She throws me… (''throws out the box outside on the ground and declares box'') don't. Now that now he knows you know what he just lost, he can you're losing, go to hell. hell!
** Jason can only silently leave as she slams the door behind him -- then declaring how good that felt for her. Angie applauds her actions, saying she finally stood up for herself with Jason. \n--> '''Carmen:''' I just want to let you know, if it doesn't work out with Cindy, and you want to call me ....don't. Now that you know what you're losing, go to hell!
--> '''Carmen:''' I just want to
** Jason can only silently leave as she slams the door behind him -- then declaring how good that felt for her. Angie applauds her actions, saying she finally stood up for herself with Jason.
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** Also George calling out Max's troop-leader Mr Dugan for his bigoted and ignorant right-wing views and kicking him out of the troop.
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* George punching out his dad for badmouthing Benny.
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* George's dad heavily badmouths Benny in front of him, thinking George will agree -- and honestly, that's a [[HilariouslyAbusiveChildhood fairly reasonable expectation]]. But George takes exception because Benny, for all her faults and all the awful things she did to him growing up, still did her best to take care of him as a single parent, something Manny [[DisappearedDad never even attempted to do]]. The ensuing argument ends with George punching out his dad for badmouthing Benny.in the mouth, telling him off as he cowers on the floor, and storming out.
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* An awesome moment for George. He and Angie go off to his sister-in-law's funeral where he has to endure his ObnoxiousInLaws who still see him as a cholo, and goes off to eat hors-d'oeuvres. Then we see Claudia's video will, where we see who will be chosen as Veroncia's trustee.
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* An awesome moment for George. He and Angie go off to his sister-in-law's funeral where he has to endure his ObnoxiousInLaws who still see him as a cholo, and goes off to eat hors-d'oeuvres. Then we see Claudia's video will, where we see who will be chosen as Veroncia's Veronica's trustee.
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* In “Landlord Almighty” Carmen demands to be treated as an adult by her parents, having "proven" she can take care of herself without their help. George decides that if she ''really'' wants to be treated like an adult then okay -- he's going to be her landlord and she's going to do real-world things on her own, like pay rent and bills. At first, it works according to plan since Carmen begins struggling to work and also pay her bills, but then her “friend” Taylor comes by and asks to be her roommate so she has a place to crash. For a while, it goes well for Carmen as Taylor pays her bills with her modeling gigs. But then Taylor's ToxicFriendInfluence kicks in and things begin to head south for her when Taylor spends her money and steals her clothes. When realizing she doesn't have any other options, Carmen threatens to run away again if her parents don't cave in to her demands.
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* In “Landlord Almighty” Carmen demands to be treated as an adult by her parents, having "proven" she can take care of herself without their help. George decides that if she ''really'' wants to be treated like an adult then okay -- he's going to be her landlord and she's going to do real-world things on her own, like pay rent and bills. At first, it works according to plan since Carmen begins struggling to work and also pay her bills, but then her “friend” Taylor comes by and asks to be her roommate so she has a place to crash. For a while, it actually goes well for Carmen as Taylor pays her bills with her modeling gigs. But then Taylor's ToxicFriendInfluence kicks in and things begin to head south for her when Taylor spends her money and steals her clothes. When realizing she doesn't have any other options, Carmen threatens to run away again if her parents don't cave in to her demands.
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-->'''Angie:''' Okay, this bully has a history with you, ''but he has never messed with me before''! Come on!\\
'''George:''' You're not going back to the website, are you?\\
'''Angie:''' To ''HELL'' with the appointment! '''[[MamaBear When my baby's hurt, I go medieval!]]'''
'''George:''' You're not going back to the website, are you?\\
'''Angie:''' To ''HELL'' with the appointment! '''[[MamaBear When my baby's hurt, I go medieval!]]'''
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-->'''Angie:''' Okay, I agree, this bully has Rango's got a history with you and maybe he even thinks that he can still bully you, ''but he has never messed with me before''! Come on!\\
He is gonna fix this and fix it now!\\
'''George:'''You're not Wait, don't tell me you're going back to the website, are you?\\
website.\\
'''Angie:''' To ''HELL'' with theappointment! e-ppointment! '''[[MamaBear When my baby's hurt, I go medieval!]]'''
'''George:'''
'''Angie:''' To ''HELL'' with the
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--->'''George''': Yes! You heard her, Vic! KISS IT!
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--->'''George''': Yes! In your face! You heard her, Vic! KISS IT!
