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** Robin finally gets to see Alabasta's poneglyph and learns that [[AdaptationalEarlyAppearance Pluton is in Wano.]] Luffy then drops a BadassBoast that they should never speak of it again even after they beat Kaido.
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** Robin finally gets to see Alabasta's poneglyph and learns that [[AdaptationalEarlyAppearance Pluton is in Wano.]] Luffy then drops a BadassBoast that they should never speak of it again even after they beat Kaido. He then does the impossible and prevents anyone from finding out the location of Pluton and ''defaces'' the Poneglyph, melting off Wano's name off of it in lieu of being unable to destroy it.
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* Chapter 13: Vivi awakens Conqueror's Haki.
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* Chapter 13: Vivi awakens Conqueror's Haki.Haki, which she uses to stop both armies from fighting and ''forces'' them to listen to her. When Baroque Works agents try to incite the violence again by shooting, she immediately takes them out with some punishing strikes and exposes the entire Baroque Works conspiracy then and there by revealing the tattoos. The armies make quick work of taking out any and all plants in their ranks.
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** Nami defeats Mr. 2 despite being exhausted from her fight against Crocodile.
** Vivi successfully uses Ranyaku to destroy Crocodile's bomb.
** Luffy kills Crocodile.
* Chapter 15: The Straw Hats fight and kill two Vice Admirals, though it takes everything they have to do so.
** Vivi successfully uses Ranyaku to destroy Crocodile's bomb.
** Luffy kills Crocodile.
* Chapter 15: The Straw Hats fight and kill two Vice Admirals, though it takes everything they have to do so.
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** Nami defeats Mr. 2 despite being exhausted from her fight against Crocodile.
Crocodile. This is after a hard fight where her opponent proves skilled enough to copy her Soru and tough enough to tank multiple hits.
** Vivi successfully uses Ranyaku for the first time to destroy Crocodile'sbomb.
bomb, though not without sacrificing her leg. The next chapter reveals it to be a mess of shredded muscles and burst blood vessels. It takes even Chopper's medicine a good five days to get her back on her feet, which is an awesome moment for Chopper all on its own.
** Luffy killsCrocodile.
Crocodile. It's an even fight with both sides injuring the other. Luffy turns Crocodile's sand into glass and burns his real body. Crocodile uses his Haki to both dodge attacks and hit Luffy through his Logia defense. Crocodile even manages to hit Luffy with his poison hook, only for Luffy to reveal his devil fruit gives him immunity to such and keep on fighting with a hole in his gut. In the end, Luffy's final attack basically disintegrates Crocodile AND his final attack.
** Crocodile death and Luffy's gigantic beam of plasma messes with Alabasta's weather so much that the ''entire country'' has heavy rain fall on it for days. By the time they make it back to the Going Merry, the nearly-dry tributary they left her in is basically full.
* Chapter15: 15:
** Robin finally gets to see Alabasta's poneglyph and learns that [[AdaptationalEarlyAppearance Pluton is in Wano.]] Luffy then drops a BadassBoast that they should never speak of it again even after they beat Kaido.
** The Straw Hats fight and kill two Vice Admirals, though it takes everything they have to do so.
** Vivi successfully uses Ranyaku for the first time to destroy Crocodile's
** Luffy kills
** Crocodile death and Luffy's gigantic beam of plasma messes with Alabasta's weather so much that the ''entire country'' has heavy rain fall on it for days. By the time they make it back to the Going Merry, the nearly-dry tributary they left her in is basically full.
* Chapter
** Robin finally gets to see Alabasta's poneglyph and learns that [[AdaptationalEarlyAppearance Pluton is in Wano.]] Luffy then drops a BadassBoast that they should never speak of it again even after they beat Kaido.
** The Straw Hats fight and kill two Vice Admirals, though it takes everything they have to do so.
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** Luffy kills Crocodile.
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** Luffy kills Crocodile.Crocodile.
* Chapter 15: The Straw Hats fight and kill two Vice Admirals, though it takes everything they have to do so.
* Chapter 15: The Straw Hats fight and kill two Vice Admirals, though it takes everything they have to do so.
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* Chapter 13: Vivi awakens Conqueror's Haki.
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* Chapter 13: Vivi awakens Conqueror's Haki.Haki.
* Chapter 14:
** Nami defeats Mr. 2 despite being exhausted from her fight against Crocodile.
** Vivi successfully uses Ranyaku to destroy Crocodile's bomb.
** Luffy kills Crocodile.
* Chapter 14:
** Nami defeats Mr. 2 despite being exhausted from her fight against Crocodile.
** Vivi successfully uses Ranyaku to destroy Crocodile's bomb.
** Luffy kills Crocodile.
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** Zoro manages to once again tap into his Armament Haki, allowing him to defeat Smoker. For his part, Smoker invents a new technique on the fly after Zoro continuously overpowers his normal Devil Fruit techniques.
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** Zoro manages to once again tap into his Armament Haki, allowing him to defeat Smoker. For his part, Smoker invents a new technique on the fly after Zoro continuously overpowers his normal Devil Fruit techniques.techniques.
* Chapter 13: Vivi awakens Conqueror's Haki.
* Chapter 13: Vivi awakens Conqueror's Haki.
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* In chapter 5, Luffy makes good on his promise to make Arlong eat his nose.
** From the same chapter, the Straw Hats ''demolish'' Nezumi's marine base, including Zoro utilizing RazorWind to destroy ships from a distance.
** From the same chapter, the Straw Hats ''demolish'' Nezumi's marine base, including Zoro utilizing RazorWind to destroy ships from a distance.
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* In chapter 5, Chapter 5:
** Luffy makes good on his promise to make Arlong eat his nose.
**From the same chapter, the The Straw Hats ''demolish'' Nezumi's marine base, including Zoro utilizing RazorWind to destroy ships from a distance.
** Luffy makes good on his promise to make Arlong eat his nose.
**
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* From chapter 7, Zoro, Nami, and Luffy get into a BodyCountCompetition against Baroque works. While Luffy wins easily due to taking out all the {{mooks}}, Nami handily takes down Mr. 9 and Mr. 8.
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* From chapter 7, Chapter 7:
** Zoro, Nami, and Luffy get into a BodyCountCompetition against Baroque works. While Luffy wins easily due to taking out all the {{mooks}}, Nami handily takes down Mr. 9 and Mr. 8.
** Zoro, Nami, and Luffy get into a BodyCountCompetition against Baroque works. While Luffy wins easily due to taking out all the {{mooks}}, Nami handily takes down Mr. 9 and Mr. 8.
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* When they start training in chapter 8, Vivi manages to dodge Usopp's shots, including the ones she can't see, hinting at possible latent talent of observation haki.
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* When they start training in chapter 8, Chapter 8:
** Vivi manages to dodge Usopp's shots, including the ones she can't see, hinting at possible latent talent of observation haki.
** Vivi manages to dodge Usopp's shots, including the ones she can't see, hinting at possible latent talent of observation haki.
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* When facing the Baroque Works blockade, the Straw Hats utterly demolish each ship.
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* When facing the Baroque Works blockade, the Straw Hats utterly demolish each ship. ship:
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* In Chapter twelve, there are several
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* In Chapter twelve, there are severalseveral:
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** Nami and Vivi show absolutely ''spectacular'' teamwork against Sir Crocodile and actually manage to injure him to the point that he has a VillainousBreakdown out of sheer, practically incoherent rage. This cannot be understated. It was not Luffy. Not Zoro. Not even Robin or Sanji. It was Nami and Vivi, who give the man an injury so bad that he states he's more furious at them than ''Whitebeard,'' and has him break out both Observation Haki and Armament Haki just out of sheer rage.
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** Nami and Vivi show absolutely ''spectacular'' teamwork against Sir Crocodile and actually manage to injure him to the point that he has a VillainousBreakdown out of sheer, practically incoherent rage. This cannot be understated. It was not Luffy. Not Zoro. Not even Robin or Sanji. It was Nami and Vivi, who give gave the man an injury so bad that he states he's more furious at them than ''Whitebeard,'' and has him break out both Observation Haki and Armament Haki just out of sheer rage.
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** Nami and Vivi show absolutely ''spectacular'' teamwork against Sir Crocodile and actually manage to injure him to the point that he has a VillainousBreakdown out of sheer, practically incoherent rage. This cannot be understated. It was not Luffy. Not Zoro. Not even Robin or Sanji. It was Nami and Vivi, who give the man an injury so bad that he states he's more furious at them than ''Whitebeard,'' and has him break out both Observation Haki and Busoshoku Haki just out of sheer rage.
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** Nami and Vivi show absolutely ''spectacular'' teamwork against Sir Crocodile and actually manage to injure him to the point that he has a VillainousBreakdown out of sheer, practically incoherent rage. This cannot be understated. It was not Luffy. Not Zoro. Not even Robin or Sanji. It was Nami and Vivi, who give the man an injury so bad that he states he's more furious at them than ''Whitebeard,'' and has him break out both Observation Haki and Busoshoku Armament Haki just out of sheer rage.rage.
** Zoro manages to once again tap into his Armament Haki, allowing him to defeat Smoker. For his part, Smoker invents a new technique on the fly after Zoro continuously overpowers his normal Devil Fruit techniques.
** Zoro manages to once again tap into his Armament Haki, allowing him to defeat Smoker. For his part, Smoker invents a new technique on the fly after Zoro continuously overpowers his normal Devil Fruit techniques.
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* When Smoker attempts to arrest Luffy and Ace in Nanohana, both treat him as a mere annoyance at best.
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* When Smoker attempts to arrest Luffy and Ace in Nanohana, both treat him as a mere annoyance at best.best.
* In Chapter twelve, there are several
** Luffy, Robin, and Zoro manage to free themselves from Crocodile's drowning death trap. They do this via Robin getting all the civilians above in the Casino out of danger using her Hana Hana no Mi, and then Luffy ''kicks several-meters-thick ceiling through the top of the casino.''
** Robin, who ''never'' struggles in purely physical contests due to her rather unfair powers, has her usual tactic [[NoSell no-sold]] by Hina.
** Nami and Vivi show absolutely ''spectacular'' teamwork against Sir Crocodile and actually manage to injure him to the point that he has a VillainousBreakdown out of sheer, practically incoherent rage. This cannot be understated. It was not Luffy. Not Zoro. Not even Robin or Sanji. It was Nami and Vivi, who give the man an injury so bad that he states he's more furious at them than ''Whitebeard,'' and has him break out both Observation Haki and Busoshoku Haki just out of sheer rage.
* In Chapter twelve, there are several
** Luffy, Robin, and Zoro manage to free themselves from Crocodile's drowning death trap. They do this via Robin getting all the civilians above in the Casino out of danger using her Hana Hana no Mi, and then Luffy ''kicks several-meters-thick ceiling through the top of the casino.''
** Robin, who ''never'' struggles in purely physical contests due to her rather unfair powers, has her usual tactic [[NoSell no-sold]] by Hina.
** Nami and Vivi show absolutely ''spectacular'' teamwork against Sir Crocodile and actually manage to injure him to the point that he has a VillainousBreakdown out of sheer, practically incoherent rage. This cannot be understated. It was not Luffy. Not Zoro. Not even Robin or Sanji. It was Nami and Vivi, who give the man an injury so bad that he states he's more furious at them than ''Whitebeard,'' and has him break out both Observation Haki and Busoshoku Haki just out of sheer rage.
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* When Smoker attempts to arrest Luffy and Ace in Nanohana, both treat him as a mere annoyance at best.
!! Meta
* As of August 29th, 2021, the story has hit 6,000 favorites and over 6,400 follows, making it the sixth most favorited One Piece story and also the sixth most followed, along with being first in both categories for non-PeggySue and SelfInsert stories.
!! Meta
* As of August 29th, 2021, the story has hit 6,000 favorites and over 6,400 follows, making it the sixth most favorited One Piece story and also the sixth most followed, along with being first in both categories for non-PeggySue and SelfInsert stories.
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* When Smoker attempts to arrest Luffy and Ace in Nanohana, both treat him as a mere annoyance at best.
!! Meta
* As of August 29th, 2021, the story has hit 6,000 favorites and over 6,400 follows, making it the sixth most favorited One Piece story and also the sixth most followed, along with being first in both categories for non-PeggySue and SelfInsert stories.best.
!! Meta
* As of August 29th, 2021, the story has hit 6,000 favorites and over 6,400 follows, making it the sixth most favorited One Piece story and also the sixth most followed, along with being first in both categories for non-PeggySue and SelfInsert stories.
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** Finally, Luffy launches himself into one ship, functionally cuts it in half with his plasma, lifts up it's middle and upper decks, and then throws them onto a second ship's mast, before blowing up a third ship.
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** Finally, Luffy launches himself into one ship, functionally cuts it in half with his plasma, lifts up it's middle and upper decks, and then throws them onto so hard he impales a second ship's mast, before blowing ship with its masts. Then he blows up a third ship.
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** Finally, Luffy launches himself into one ship, lifts up it's middle and upper decks, and then throws them onto a second ship's mast, before blowing up a third ship.
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** Finally, Luffy launches himself into one ship, functionally cuts it in half with his plasma, lifts up it's middle and upper decks, and then throws them onto a second ship's mast, before blowing up a third ship.
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* When Krieg tries to pick a fight, Luffy shatters his armor with a single casual punch.
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* When Krieg tries to pick a fight, threatens Nami, Luffy shatters his armor with a single casual punch.
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* When Krieg tries to pick a fight, Luffy shatters his armor with a single casual punch.
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* When facing the Baroque Works blockade, the Straw Hats utterly demolish each ship.
** Robin uses her powers to break the bones of every crew member on one ship, then drops the anchor and spins the wheel while unhooking every heavy object, causing the entire ship violently clubhaul and sink.
** Nami destroys a ship via Cyclone Tempo and Tornado Tempo to hurl their own cannonballs back at them.
** Zoro uses RazorWind to cut a ship in half.
** Valerie simply crashes into a ship from on high at her maximum weight.
** Finally, Luffy launches himself into one ship, lifts up it's middle and upper decks, and then throws them onto a second ship's mast, before blowing up a third ship.
** Robin uses her powers to break the bones of every crew member on one ship, then drops the anchor and spins the wheel while unhooking every heavy object, causing the entire ship violently clubhaul and sink.
** Nami destroys a ship via Cyclone Tempo and Tornado Tempo to hurl their own cannonballs back at them.
** Zoro uses RazorWind to cut a ship in half.
** Valerie simply crashes into a ship from on high at her maximum weight.
** Finally, Luffy launches himself into one ship, lifts up it's middle and upper decks, and then throws them onto a second ship's mast, before blowing up a third ship.
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* When Smoker attempts to arrest Luffy and Ace in Nanohana, both treat him as a mere annoyance at best.
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* As of August 18th, 2020, the story has hit 5,000 favorites and over 5,000 follows, making it the eighth most favorited One Piece story and seventh most followed, along with being first in both categories for non-PeggySue and SelfInsert stories.
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* As of August 18th, 2020, 29th, 2021, the story has hit 5,000 6,000 favorites and over 5,000 6,400 follows, making it the eighth sixth most favorited One Piece story and seventh also the sixth most followed, along with being first in both categories for non-PeggySue and SelfInsert stories.
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* Chapter 4: Nami defeats Krieg on her own.
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* Chapter 4: Nami defeats both Gin and Krieg on her own.
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* Zoro shows hints of Armaments Haki in chapter 9 when he deflects an avalanche without touching it.
* Nami both beats the herd of lapahns and Musshuru by herself.
* Nami both beats the herd of lapahns and Musshuru by herself.
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* Zoro shows hints of Armaments Haki in chapter 9 when he deflects an avalanche without touching it.
it. Before that, Miss Goldenweek's Tranquil Green gives him insight to Observation Haki, allowing him to dodge Mr. 3's arrows before they even finish firing.
* Namiboth beats both the herd of lapahns and Musshuru by herself.
* Nami
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* When they start training in chapter 8, Vivi manages to dodge even Usopp's shots she can't see, hinting at possible latent talent of observation haki.
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* In chapter 3, due to training under Luffy, Nami manages a rudimentary [[FlashStep Soru]] against the Black Cat Pirates.
* Chapter 4: Nami defeats Krieg on her own.
* In chapter 5, Luffy makes good on his promise to make Arlong eat his nose.
** From the same chapter, the Straw Hats ''demolish'' Nezumi's marine base, including Zoro utilizing RazorWind to destroy ships from a distance.
* In chapter 6, Luffy keeps up with Smoker even without using his Devil Fruit and obliterates him once he does.
* From chapter 7, Zoro, Nami, and Luffy get into a BodyCountCompetition against Baroque works. While Luffy wins easily due to taking out all the {{mooks}}, Nami handily takes down Mr. 9 and Mr. 8.
** When Robin playfully tries to take Luffy's hat, he appears right next to her with his hand on her head.
* When they start training in chapter 8, Vivi manages to dodge even Usopp's shots she can't see, hinting at possible latent talent of observation haki.
** Robin gives Luffy a better fight than anyone else on the crew can, including Zoro.
!! Meta
* As of August 18th, 2020, the story has hit 5,000 favorites and over 5,000 follows, making it the eighth most favorited One Piece story and seventh most followed, along with being first in both categories for non-PeggySue and SelfInsert stories.
* In chapter 3, due to training under Luffy, Nami manages a rudimentary [[FlashStep Soru]] against the Black Cat Pirates.
* Chapter 4: Nami defeats Krieg on her own.
* In chapter 5, Luffy makes good on his promise to make Arlong eat his nose.
** From the same chapter, the Straw Hats ''demolish'' Nezumi's marine base, including Zoro utilizing RazorWind to destroy ships from a distance.
* In chapter 6, Luffy keeps up with Smoker even without using his Devil Fruit and obliterates him once he does.
* From chapter 7, Zoro, Nami, and Luffy get into a BodyCountCompetition against Baroque works. While Luffy wins easily due to taking out all the {{mooks}}, Nami handily takes down Mr. 9 and Mr. 8.
** When Robin playfully tries to take Luffy's hat, he appears right next to her with his hand on her head.
* When they start training in chapter 8, Vivi manages to dodge even Usopp's shots she can't see, hinting at possible latent talent of observation haki.
** Robin gives Luffy a better fight than anyone else on the crew can, including Zoro.
!! Meta
* As of August 18th, 2020, the story has hit 5,000 favorites and over 5,000 follows, making it the eighth most favorited One Piece story and seventh most followed, along with being first in both categories for non-PeggySue and SelfInsert stories.
