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--> "Kaz killed a lot of people. Rotty saw him go after the Black Tips who had you up on the crates. I believe his exact words were, 'There was enough blood to paint a barn red'."
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--> "Kaz '''Nina''': Kaz killed a lot of people. Rotty saw him go after the Black Tips who had you up on the crates. I believe his exact words were, 'There "There was enough blood to paint a barn red'.red."
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* Kaz dislocates an inmate's arm after the man lunged at him, trying to attack him because he noticed that Kaz is a cripple (and thus thought that Kaz would be an easy target).
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* Kaz dislocates an inmate's arm after the man lunged at him, trying to attack him because he noticed that Kaz is has a cripple limp (and thus thought that Kaz would be an easy target).
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* Kaz faces the Council of Tides and lies to their faces, even under threat, and then threatens them back, saying he'll stage a fake plague outbreak in their towers and have them demanded if they try do anything to him
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* Kaz faces the Council of Tides and lies to their faces, even under threat, and then threatens them back, saying he'll stage a fake plague outbreak in their towers and have them demanded demasked if they try do anything to him
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* When Van Eck orders his men to catch her in the theatre she'd crawled through the vents into, she dodges all of them and starts to climb a rope, despite having been starving herself for around a week.
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* When Van Eck orders his men to catch her Inej in the theatre she'd crawled through the vents into, she dodges all of them and starts to climb a rope, despite having been starving herself for around a week.
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** When he bumps into Smeet on purpose, he pretends to be a green youth, respectful of his elders, and plays the role well. Not to mention, Sneet didn't realise that the boy he'd bumped into was his card dealer from a couple hours ago.
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** When he bumps into Smeet on purpose, he pretends to be a green youth, respectful of his elders, and plays the role well. Not to mention, Sneet Smeet didn't realise that the boy he'd bumped into was his card dealer from a couple hours ago.
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* Zoya is such a powerful squaller that she slams every single person in the tavern into wall or ceiling, and holds them there, stopping the fight.
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* Zoya is such a powerful squaller that she slams every single person in the tavern into wall or ceiling, and holds them there, stopping the fight.fight.
* Kaz is the most wanted man in Ketterdam (and he's proud of it)
* Kaz and Wylan break into Van Eck's house
* Wylan burns through his father's safe with acid
* Matthias leads Kuwei and Jesper, and uses their grisha powers to lead them to escape
* Inej's fight with Dunyasha
* Kaz burns through the floor with acid
* Nina raises the dead
* Kaz manages to rewrap Inej's wounds without his gloves, despite his touch aversion
* Kaz beats up around a dozen gang members. On his own
* Genya tailors Wylan to undos Nina's work whilst she was on parem, and gives Wylan his real appearance back
* Colm plays his role as a jurda farmer in a con convincingly (good job for a complete novice to crime who had no idea his son was even a gang member until a few days ago)
* Kaz coined Sturmhond's real identity in like five minutes.
* Wylan spits in his father's face
* Wylan let himself get tortured as part of the plan
* Kaz convinces everyone that Van Eck tampered with the auction and the market
* Nina starts a fake plague outbreak
* Inej kills her "shadow"
* Jesper kills a Khurguud with a weevil
* Jesper shoots around a corner
* Kaz convinces Pekka that he has buried his son alive and makes him go to his knees and beg to tell him where
* Zoya restarts Kuwei's heart
* Wylan pretends to read something by remembering when Jesper read the same document before. That is insane memory.
* Kaz and Wylan convince everyone that Van Eck is not sane
* Kaz faces the Council of Tides and lies to their faces, even under threat, and then threatens them back, saying he'll stage a fake plague outbreak in their towers and have them demanded if they try do anything to him
* Kaz buys Inej a ship, finds her parents, and holds her hand without his gloves
* Inej threatens to carve Pekka's heart out if he ever returns to Ketterdam
* Inej leaves a stuffed crow (Kaz's symbol) in the arms of Pekka's son as a threat
* Kaz is the most wanted man in Ketterdam (and he's proud of it)
* Kaz and Wylan break into Van Eck's house
* Wylan burns through his father's safe with acid
* Matthias leads Kuwei and Jesper, and uses their grisha powers to lead them to escape
* Inej's fight with Dunyasha
* Kaz burns through the floor with acid
* Nina raises the dead
* Kaz manages to rewrap Inej's wounds without his gloves, despite his touch aversion
* Kaz beats up around a dozen gang members. On his own
* Genya tailors Wylan to undos Nina's work whilst she was on parem, and gives Wylan his real appearance back
* Colm plays his role as a jurda farmer in a con convincingly (good job for a complete novice to crime who had no idea his son was even a gang member until a few days ago)
* Kaz coined Sturmhond's real identity in like five minutes.
* Wylan spits in his father's face
* Wylan let himself get tortured as part of the plan
* Kaz convinces everyone that Van Eck tampered with the auction and the market
* Nina starts a fake plague outbreak
* Inej kills her "shadow"
* Jesper kills a Khurguud with a weevil
* Jesper shoots around a corner
* Kaz convinces Pekka that he has buried his son alive and makes him go to his knees and beg to tell him where
* Zoya restarts Kuwei's heart
* Wylan pretends to read something by remembering when Jesper read the same document before. That is insane memory.
* Kaz and Wylan convince everyone that Van Eck is not sane
* Kaz faces the Council of Tides and lies to their faces, even under threat, and then threatens them back, saying he'll stage a fake plague outbreak in their towers and have them demanded if they try do anything to him
* Kaz buys Inej a ship, finds her parents, and holds her hand without his gloves
* Inej threatens to carve Pekka's heart out if he ever returns to Ketterdam
* Inej leaves a stuffed crow (Kaz's symbol) in the arms of Pekka's son as a threat
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--> "He shoved Inej’s shoulder and she spun
around, offering her wrists so he could slash through her bonds. He tossed the knife in the air, trusting her to catch it as he knelt to deal with her shackles, his picks already sliding between his fingers. Kaz heard the clomp of boots approaching, felt Inej bend backward over his kneeling form, and heard a soft whoosh, then the sound of a body falling. The lock gave beneath Kaz’s fingers and the shackles fell free. He rose, whirled, saw one stadwatch officer down, the shaft of the oyster knife protruding from between his eyes, and more purple uniforms rushing toward them from all directions."
around, offering her wrists so he could slash through her bonds. He tossed the knife in the air, trusting her to catch it as he knelt to deal with her shackles, his picks already sliding between his fingers. Kaz heard the clomp of boots approaching, felt Inej bend backward over his kneeling form, and heard a soft whoosh, then the sound of a body falling. The lock gave beneath Kaz’s fingers and the shackles fell free. He rose, whirled, saw one stadwatch officer down, the shaft of the oyster knife protruding from between his eyes, and more purple uniforms rushing toward them from all directions."
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--> "He shoved Inej’s shoulder and she spun
spun around, offering her wrists so he could slash through her bonds. He tossed the knife in the air, trusting her to catch it as he knelt to deal with her shackles, his picks already sliding between his fingers. Kaz heard the clomp of boots approaching, felt Inej bend backward over his kneeling form, and heard a soft whoosh, then the sound of a body falling. The lock gave beneath Kaz’s fingers and the shackles fell free. He rose, whirled, saw one stadwatch officer down, the shaft of the oyster knife protruding from between his eyes, and more purple uniforms rushing toward them from all directions."
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* Nina kills someone with dust.
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--> Wylan’s lips flattened to a thin, stubborn line. The boy really didn’t know what was good for him. Matthias wondered if he’d have to try to intercede on Wylan’s behalf, but Kaz had released him.
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--> Wylan’s lips flattened to a thin, stubborn line. The boy really didn’t know what was good for him. Matthias wondered if he’d have to try to intercede on Wylan’s behalf, but Kaz had released him.him.
* The coordinated way that Kaz and Inej get Inej's bonds off (whilst fighting people off)
--> "He shoved Inej’s shoulder and she spun
around, offering her wrists so he could slash through her bonds. He tossed the knife in the air, trusting her to catch it as he knelt to deal with her shackles, his picks already sliding between his fingers. Kaz heard the clomp of boots approaching, felt Inej bend backward over his kneeling form, and heard a soft whoosh, then the sound of a body falling. The lock gave beneath Kaz’s fingers and the shackles fell free. He rose, whirled, saw one stadwatch officer down, the shaft of the oyster knife protruding from between his eyes, and more purple uniforms rushing toward them from all directions."
* Kaz and Inej's escape from the bridge.
* The distraction Wylan rigged that consisted of fireworks.
* The other distraction that consisted of over a hundred people dressed as Mister Crimson making it impossible for the police to watch Kaz and Inej.
* Wylan downs (and possibly kills) a Shu Kherguud with purple flames inspired by lumiya. Just hotter.
* Nina blows the head off a Kherguud soldier with one of Jesper's revolvers, by shooting her through the eye.
* The plan to ruin Van Eck's life (and get 30 million kruge) through the manipulation of the stock market.
* Wylan's weevils are so powerful that one singular weevil is capable of destroying a whole silo of sugar. The silos are huge.
* Inej forces Kaz to help Nina get the grisha out of Ketterdam.
* Wylan briefly emulates Kaz's scheming face.
* Kaz steals Per Haskell's bullets from his gun in a matter of seconds, without him noticing.
* Nina and Matthias fight a group of people in a tavern in Little Ravka
** Matthias uses a duskbomb to prevent Heartrender visibility.
** Nina controls bone shards and use them to attack
* Zoya is such a powerful squaller that she slams every single person in the tavern into wall or ceiling, and holds them there, stopping the fight.
* The coordinated way that Kaz and Inej get Inej's bonds off (whilst fighting people off)
--> "He shoved Inej’s shoulder and she spun
around, offering her wrists so he could slash through her bonds. He tossed the knife in the air, trusting her to catch it as he knelt to deal with her shackles, his picks already sliding between his fingers. Kaz heard the clomp of boots approaching, felt Inej bend backward over his kneeling form, and heard a soft whoosh, then the sound of a body falling. The lock gave beneath Kaz’s fingers and the shackles fell free. He rose, whirled, saw one stadwatch officer down, the shaft of the oyster knife protruding from between his eyes, and more purple uniforms rushing toward them from all directions."
* Kaz and Inej's escape from the bridge.
* The distraction Wylan rigged that consisted of fireworks.
* The other distraction that consisted of over a hundred people dressed as Mister Crimson making it impossible for the police to watch Kaz and Inej.
* Wylan downs (and possibly kills) a Shu Kherguud with purple flames inspired by lumiya. Just hotter.
* Nina blows the head off a Kherguud soldier with one of Jesper's revolvers, by shooting her through the eye.
* The plan to ruin Van Eck's life (and get 30 million kruge) through the manipulation of the stock market.
* Wylan's weevils are so powerful that one singular weevil is capable of destroying a whole silo of sugar. The silos are huge.
* Inej forces Kaz to help Nina get the grisha out of Ketterdam.
* Wylan briefly emulates Kaz's scheming face.
* Kaz steals Per Haskell's bullets from his gun in a matter of seconds, without him noticing.
* Nina and Matthias fight a group of people in a tavern in Little Ravka
** Matthias uses a duskbomb to prevent Heartrender visibility.
** Nina controls bone shards and use them to attack
* Zoya is such a powerful squaller that she slams every single person in the tavern into wall or ceiling, and holds them there, stopping the fight.
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* Wylan mouths off to an angry Kaz and still wants to argue back even as Kaz threatens him
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* Wylan mouths off to an angry Kaz and still wants to argue back even as Kaz threatens himhim
--> “We’re in the middle of a job,” Kaz said. “There’s a lot that has to happen before the exchange tomorrow. Someone find a way to shut her up, or I will.”
--> “She’s a frightened girl—” Wylan protested.
--> “I didn’t ask for a description.”
--> But Wylan kept on. “Kaz, promise me you won’t—”
--> “Before you finish that sentence, I want you to think about what a promise from me costs and what you’re willing to pay for it.”
--> “It’s not her fault her parents shoved her into a marriage with my father.”
--> “Alys isn’t here because she did something wrong. She’s here because she’s leverage.”
--> “She’s just a pregnant girl—”
--> “Getting pregnant isn’t actually a special talent. Ask any luckless girl in the Barrel.”
--> “Inej wouldn’t want—”
--> In the space of a breath, Kaz had shoved Wylan against the tomb wall with his forearm, the crow head of his cane wedged beneath Wylan’s jaw.
--> “Tell me my business again.” Wylan swallowed, parted his lips. “Do it,” said Kaz. “And I’ll cut the tongue from your head and feed it to the first stray cat I find.”
--> “Kaz—” Jesper said cautiously. Kaz ignored him.
--> Wylan’s lips flattened to a thin, stubborn line. The boy really didn’t know what was good for him. Matthias wondered if he’d have to try to intercede on Wylan’s behalf, but Kaz had released him.
--> “We’re in the middle of a job,” Kaz said. “There’s a lot that has to happen before the exchange tomorrow. Someone find a way to shut her up, or I will.”
--> “She’s a frightened girl—” Wylan protested.
--> “I didn’t ask for a description.”
--> But Wylan kept on. “Kaz, promise me you won’t—”
--> “Before you finish that sentence, I want you to think about what a promise from me costs and what you’re willing to pay for it.”
--> “It’s not her fault her parents shoved her into a marriage with my father.”
--> “Alys isn’t here because she did something wrong. She’s here because she’s leverage.”
--> “She’s just a pregnant girl—”
--> “Getting pregnant isn’t actually a special talent. Ask any luckless girl in the Barrel.”
--> “Inej wouldn’t want—”
--> In the space of a breath, Kaz had shoved Wylan against the tomb wall with his forearm, the crow head of his cane wedged beneath Wylan’s jaw.
--> “Tell me my business again.” Wylan swallowed, parted his lips. “Do it,” said Kaz. “And I’ll cut the tongue from your head and feed it to the first stray cat I find.”
--> “Kaz—” Jesper said cautiously. Kaz ignored him.
--> Wylan’s lips flattened to a thin, stubborn line. The boy really didn’t know what was good for him. Matthias wondered if he’d have to try to intercede on Wylan’s behalf, but Kaz had released him.
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* Kaz tricks Van Eck and kidnaps his wife to use as leverage in order to get Inej back.
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--> "You think he won't? Vile, ruthless, amoral. Isn't that why you hired Kaz in the first place? Because he does the things that no one else dares? Go on, Van Eck. Break my legs and see what happens. Dare him."
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--> "You think he won't? Vile, ruthless, amoral. Isn't that why you hired Kaz in the first place? Because he does the things that no one else dares? Go on, Van Eck. Break my legs and see what happens. Dare him.""
* Wylan mouths off to an angry Kaz and still wants to argue back even as Kaz threatens him
* Wylan mouths off to an angry Kaz and still wants to argue back even as Kaz threatens him
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* The bomb that Wylan set off in the university.
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* The bomb that Wylan set off in the university.university.
* Inej headbutts Van Eck in the nose, breaking it.
* Inej draws on Kaz's fearsome reputation to scare Van Eck
--> "You lay a finger on me and Kaz Brekker will cut the baby from your pretty wife's stomach and hang it's body from a balcony at the Exchange."
--> "You think he won't? Vile, ruthless, amoral. Isn't that why you hired Kaz in the first place? Because he does the things that no one else dares? Go on, Van Eck. Break my legs and see what happens. Dare him."
* Inej headbutts Van Eck in the nose, breaking it.
* Inej draws on Kaz's fearsome reputation to scare Van Eck
--> "You lay a finger on me and Kaz Brekker will cut the baby from your pretty wife's stomach and hang it's body from a balcony at the Exchange."
--> "You think he won't? Vile, ruthless, amoral. Isn't that why you hired Kaz in the first place? Because he does the things that no one else dares? Go on, Van Eck. Break my legs and see what happens. Dare him."
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--> "'You are forsaken. As you have turned your back on me, so will they turn their backs on you.' It was the worst of Suli denunciations, one that forbade you the welcome of your ancestors in the next world, and doomed your spirit to wander without a home."
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--> "'You are forsaken. As you have turned your back on me, so will they turn their backs on you.' It was the worst of Suli denunciations, one that forbade you the welcome of your ancestors in the next world, and doomed your spirit to wander without a home.""
* The bomb that Wylan set off in the university.
* The bomb that Wylan set off in the university.
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* Kaz pretends to be the boogie man and terrifies a little girl into staying quiet.
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* Kaz pretends to be the boogie man bogeyman and terrifies a little girl into staying quiet.
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--> "I'm going to cut you open. I'm going to excavate that pathetic excuse of a heart from your chest."
--> "I'll do penance for the rest of my days if it means I get to kill him."
--> "I'll do penance for the rest of my days if it means I get to kill him."
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--> "I'm ''"I'm going to cut you open. I'm going to excavate that pathetic excuse of a heart from your chest."
"''
-->"I'll ''"I'll do penance for the rest of my days if it means I get to kill him."
"''
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• Inej stabbing Oomen in the groin after he stabbed her in the side.
• Inej managing to climb two cargo containers with a fatal stab wound.
• Kaz interrogates Oomen on the ambush at the docks. When Oomen lies, Kaz cuts and rips his eye out to get him to be honest and to punish him for stabbing Inej.
• Inej managing to climb two cargo containers with a fatal stab wound.
• Kaz interrogates Oomen on the ambush at the docks. When Oomen lies, Kaz cuts and rips his eye out to get him to be honest and to punish him for stabbing Inej.
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* Wylan throws a flash bomb to help Jesper pick off the Black Tips.
* Inej kills six gang members that had ambushed the crows on the docks without any of them realising she was even there before she ended their lives.
* Inej stabbing Oomen in the groin after he stabbed her in the side.
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* Wylan made a chemical weevil.
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* Wylan made a chemical weevil.weevil.
* Inej refuses to betray the Dregs, Crows, and Kaz, despite the threat of torture.
* Inej starves herself to fit through a vent in order to escape captivity.
* Inej falls over whilst captive on purpose to break a bowl and get its sharp pieces to cut through her bonds.
--> "If Van Eck had really done his research, he would have warned Bajan that the Wraith did not fall. Certainly not in a clumsy hap where she could easily tuck a sharp piece of crockery between her bonds."
* Inej fights back the homesickness Bajan was trying to exploit and hisses at him, then tells him to tell Van Eck that she will not make any deals with him.
--> "Tell your master to honor his old deals before he starts making new ones. Now leave me alone."
* When Van Eck orders his men to catch her in the theatre she'd crawled through the vents into, she dodges all of them and starts to climb a rope, despite having been starving herself for around a week.
* Inej manages to stay mostly calm and deny knowing anything that Van Eck wants, even in the face of torture.
* Inej's reputation as described by Van Eck
--> "You are the Wraith, Miss Ghafa, legend of the Barrel. You've gathered the secrets of judges, councilmen, thieves, and killers alike. I doubt there is anything in this city you do not know."
* Inej manages to make her voice steel when one of Van Eck's guards prepares to torture her.
--> "'Go on,' she urged, and her voice was steel."
* Inej's vow (voiced internally, in her thoughts) to kill Van Eck
--> "I'm going to cut you open. I'm going to excavate that pathetic excuse of a heart from your chest."
--> "I'll do penance for the rest of my days if it means I get to kill him."
* Inej forsaking Bajan
--> "''Kadema mehim.''"
--> "'You are forsaken. As you have turned your back on me, so will they turn their backs on you.' It was the worst of Suli denunciations, one that forbade you the welcome of your ancestors in the next world, and doomed your spirit to wander without a home."
* Inej refuses to betray the Dregs, Crows, and Kaz, despite the threat of torture.
* Inej starves herself to fit through a vent in order to escape captivity.
* Inej falls over whilst captive on purpose to break a bowl and get its sharp pieces to cut through her bonds.
--> "If Van Eck had really done his research, he would have warned Bajan that the Wraith did not fall. Certainly not in a clumsy hap where she could easily tuck a sharp piece of crockery between her bonds."
* Inej fights back the homesickness Bajan was trying to exploit and hisses at him, then tells him to tell Van Eck that she will not make any deals with him.
--> "Tell your master to honor his old deals before he starts making new ones. Now leave me alone."
* When Van Eck orders his men to catch her in the theatre she'd crawled through the vents into, she dodges all of them and starts to climb a rope, despite having been starving herself for around a week.
* Inej manages to stay mostly calm and deny knowing anything that Van Eck wants, even in the face of torture.
* Inej's reputation as described by Van Eck
--> "You are the Wraith, Miss Ghafa, legend of the Barrel. You've gathered the secrets of judges, councilmen, thieves, and killers alike. I doubt there is anything in this city you do not know."
* Inej manages to make her voice steel when one of Van Eck's guards prepares to torture her.
--> "'Go on,' she urged, and her voice was steel."
* Inej's vow (voiced internally, in her thoughts) to kill Van Eck
--> "I'm going to cut you open. I'm going to excavate that pathetic excuse of a heart from your chest."
--> "I'll do penance for the rest of my days if it means I get to kill him."
* Inej forsaking Bajan
--> "''Kadema mehim.''"
--> "'You are forsaken. As you have turned your back on me, so will they turn their backs on you.' It was the worst of Suli denunciations, one that forbade you the welcome of your ancestors in the next world, and doomed your spirit to wander without a home."
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* This thought from Matthias about Kaz
--> "He often wondered how people survived this city, but it was possible Ketterdam would not survive Kaz Brekker."
--> "He often wondered how people survived this city, but it was possible Ketterdam would not survive Kaz Brekker."
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--> '''Pekka''': Because otherwise I'll have to.
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--> '''Pekka''': Because otherwise I'll have to.to.
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* Kaz is able to control any game of cards.
* Nina steals Smeet's dog whistle without anyone noticing.
* Kaz breaks the locks on Smeet's front door in a second.
* Kaz hung a clerk by the ankles from the top of the lighthouse, for an extended period of time. That takes crazy strength.
* Kaz dropped the clerk that he'd been threatening because the clerk was blackmailing a prostitute (into having sex with him for free) which disgusted Kaz and made him drop the man to his death.
* Kaz pretends to be the boogie man and terrifies a little girl into staying quiet.
* Kaz's acting
** When he bumps into Smeet on purpose, he pretends to be a green youth, respectful of his elders, and plays the role well. Not to mention, Sneet didn't realise that the boy he'd bumped into was his card dealer from a couple hours ago.
* Wylan made a chemical weevil.
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* Kaz is able to control any game of cards.
* Nina steals Smeet's dog whistle without anyone noticing.
* Kaz breaks the locks on Smeet's front door in a second.
* Kaz hung a clerk by the ankles from the top of the lighthouse, for an extended period of time. That takes crazy strength.
* Kaz dropped the clerk that he'd been threatening because the clerk was blackmailing a prostitute (into having sex with him for free) which disgusted Kaz and made him drop the man to his death.
* Kaz pretends to be the boogie man and terrifies a little girl into staying quiet.
* Kaz's acting
** When he bumps into Smeet on purpose, he pretends to be a green youth, respectful of his elders, and plays the role well. Not to mention, Sneet didn't realise that the boy he'd bumped into was his card dealer from a couple hours ago.
* Wylan made a chemical weevil.
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--> '''Kaz''': No. When I come for Van Eck, i won't just take what's mine. I'll carve his ife hollow. I'll burn his name from the ledger. There will be nothing left.
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--> '''Kaz''': No. When I come for Van Eck, i won't just take what's mine. I'll carve his ife life hollow. I'll burn his name from the ledger. There will be nothing left.
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--> "Dirtyhands had come to see the rough work done."
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--> "Dirtyhands had come to see the rough work done.""
* What Kaz says when Pekka underestimates the damage he wants to do to Van Eck
--> '''Pekka''': I respect your drive, kid. And I understand. You want your money; you want the Wraith back; you want a bit of Van Eck's hide-
--> '''Kaz''': No. When I come for Van Eck, i won't just take what's mine. I'll carve his ife hollow. I'll burn his name from the ledger. There will be nothing left.
* Kaz makes a chill sliver up Pekka Rollins' (King of the Barrel and most feared gang leader) spine.
* What Pekka says about the look in Kaz's eyes
--> "Pekka Rollins couldn't could the threats he'd heard, the men he'd killed, or the men he'd seen die, but the look in Brekker's eye still sent a chill slithering up his spine. Some wrathful thing was begging to get loose, and Rollins didn't want to be around when it slipped its leash."
* What Kaz says after shaking Pekka's hand (with a knuckle crushing grip)
--> '''Kaz''': You don't remember me at all, do you?
--> '''Pekka''': Should I?
--> '''Kaz''': Not just yet ''(with a "black thing flickering behind his eyes")''
* Kaz picks Pekka's pocket
--> '''Doughty''': ''(incredulously)'' He picked your pocket?
--> No one got one over Pekka Rollins. No one dared. But Brekker had, and Rollins wondered if that was just the beginning.
* Pekka thinks that it's best to pray for Van Eck
--> '''Pekka''': Doughty, I think we'd best say a prayer for Jan Van Eck.
--> '''Doughty''': You think Brekker can best him?
--> '''Pekka''': It's a long shot, but if he's not careful, I think that merch might walk himself right onto the gallows and let Brekker tighten the noose.
* Kaz is seen as a threat by the biggest gang boss is the barrel
--> '''Pekka''': We better hope Van Eck kills that boy.
--> '''Doughty''': Why?
--> '''Pekka''': Because otherwise I'll have to.
* What Kaz says when Pekka underestimates the damage he wants to do to Van Eck
--> '''Pekka''': I respect your drive, kid. And I understand. You want your money; you want the Wraith back; you want a bit of Van Eck's hide-
--> '''Kaz''': No. When I come for Van Eck, i won't just take what's mine. I'll carve his ife hollow. I'll burn his name from the ledger. There will be nothing left.
* Kaz makes a chill sliver up Pekka Rollins' (King of the Barrel and most feared gang leader) spine.
* What Pekka says about the look in Kaz's eyes
--> "Pekka Rollins couldn't could the threats he'd heard, the men he'd killed, or the men he'd seen die, but the look in Brekker's eye still sent a chill slithering up his spine. Some wrathful thing was begging to get loose, and Rollins didn't want to be around when it slipped its leash."
* What Kaz says after shaking Pekka's hand (with a knuckle crushing grip)
--> '''Kaz''': You don't remember me at all, do you?
--> '''Pekka''': Should I?
--> '''Kaz''': Not just yet ''(with a "black thing flickering behind his eyes")''
* Kaz picks Pekka's pocket
--> '''Doughty''': ''(incredulously)'' He picked your pocket?
--> No one got one over Pekka Rollins. No one dared. But Brekker had, and Rollins wondered if that was just the beginning.
* Pekka thinks that it's best to pray for Van Eck
--> '''Pekka''': Doughty, I think we'd best say a prayer for Jan Van Eck.
--> '''Doughty''': You think Brekker can best him?
--> '''Pekka''': It's a long shot, but if he's not careful, I think that merch might walk himself right onto the gallows and let Brekker tighten the noose.
* Kaz is seen as a threat by the biggest gang boss is the barrel
--> '''Pekka''': We better hope Van Eck kills that boy.
--> '''Doughty''': Why?
--> '''Pekka''': Because otherwise I'll have to.
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* Nina, Matthias, and Kuwei explode the lab where the drüskelle were trying to get Kuwei to recreate the juda parem formula.
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* Nina, Matthias, and Kuwei explode the lab where the drüskelle were trying to get Kuwei to recreate the juda jurda parem formula.
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* Jesper fights off, and possibly kills, two Tidemakers with his grisha powers despite being untrained.
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* Inej breaks a Fjerdan guard's nose.
* Jesper stabs a Fjerdan guard from behind with some shears, killing him.
* Inej kicks the Fjerdan guard whose nose she broke in the head. He doesn't move again.
* Jesper stabs a Fjerdan guard from behind with some shears, killing him.
* Inej kicks the Fjerdan guard whose nose she broke in the head. He doesn't move again.
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* Kaz starts to scheme on a way to get back at Van Eck (a way that Van Eck and everybody else will ''never'' forget).
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* Kaz starts to scheme on a way to get back at Van Eck (a way that Van Eck and everybody else will ''never'' forget).forget).
* When Kaz determines to himself that he will get Inej her freedom
--> "Inej had wanted Kaz to become someone else, a better person, a gentler thief. But that boy ended up starving in an alley. He ended up dead. That boy couldn't get her back. ''I'm going to get my money,'' Kaz vowed, ''and I'm going to get my girl.'' Inej could never be his, not really, but he would find a way to give her the frredom he'd promised her so long ago.
--> "Dirtyhands had come to see the rough work done."
* When Kaz determines to himself that he will get Inej her freedom
--> "Inej had wanted Kaz to become someone else, a better person, a gentler thief. But that boy ended up starving in an alley. He ended up dead. That boy couldn't get her back. ''I'm going to get my money,'' Kaz vowed, ''and I'm going to get my girl.'' Inej could never be his, not really, but he would find a way to give her the frredom he'd promised her so long ago.
--> "Dirtyhands had come to see the rough work done."
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* It turns out that Kaz beat (tortured?) Pekka Rollins for information whilst in the Ice Court before breaking him out of his cell.
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* It turns out that Kaz beat (tortured?) Pekka Rollins for information whilst in the Ice Court before breaking him out of his cell.cell.
* Wylan let himself get tailored to look like Kuwei despite it being possible that he will never be able to get his face back.
* Wylan doesn't let himself get shaken by his father's insults, and walks back to Kaz and the rest of the group despite his father calling him a "traitor" for it.
* The fight against the drugged grisha before Inej gets knocked out and taken
** Inej kills two Tidemakers in quick succession after they (foolishly) try to take her in close combat.
** Jesper kills a squaller that was about to attack Inej.
** Inej kills the squaller midair that was attempting to take her.
* Kaz starts to scheme on a way to get back at Van Eck (a way that Van Eck and everybody else will ''never'' forget).
* Wylan let himself get tailored to look like Kuwei despite it being possible that he will never be able to get his face back.
* Wylan doesn't let himself get shaken by his father's insults, and walks back to Kaz and the rest of the group despite his father calling him a "traitor" for it.
* The fight against the drugged grisha before Inej gets knocked out and taken
** Inej kills two Tidemakers in quick succession after they (foolishly) try to take her in close combat.
** Jesper kills a squaller that was about to attack Inej.
** Inej kills the squaller midair that was attempting to take her.
* Kaz starts to scheme on a way to get back at Van Eck (a way that Van Eck and everybody else will ''never'' forget).
