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* Firo's attempt at parkour in chapter two. He's actually pretty good at it, until he falls a story down and gets knocked unconcious for a while. ItMakesSenseInContext that he didn't die from such a fall, since he's immortal.
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* Firo's attempt at parkour in chapter two. He's actually pretty good at it, until he falls a story down and gets knocked unconcious unconscious for a while. ItMakesSenseInContext that he didn't die from such a fall, since he's immortal.
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* Firo's attempt at parkour in chapter two. He's actually pretty good at it, until he falls a story down and gets knocked unconcious for a while. ItMakesSenseInContext that he didn't die from such a fall, since [[spoiler:he's immortal]].
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* Firo's attempt at parkour in chapter two. He's actually pretty good at it, until he falls a story down and gets knocked unconcious for a while. ItMakesSenseInContext that he didn't die from such a fall, since [[spoiler:he's immortal]].
he's immortal.
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* Firo's attempt at parkour in chapter two. He's actually pretty good at it, until he falls a story down and gets knocked unconcious for a while. {{It Makes Sense in Context}} ItMakesSenseInContext that he didn't die from such a fall, since [[spoiler: he's immortal]].
[[spoiler:he's immortal]].
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* Huey Laforet tells Shinpachi and Tae that [[{{YuGiOh The Abridged Series}} their mother plays card games in Hell]]. And [[{{Gratuitous Foreign Language}} he told them that entirely in]] [[{{Gratuitous French}} French]].
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* Huey Laforet tells Shinpachi and Tae that [[{{YuGiOh The Abridged Series}} [[WebVideo/YuGiOhTheAbridgedSeries their mother plays card games in Hell]]. And [[{{Gratuitous Foreign Language}} [[GratuitousForeignLanguage he told them that entirely in]] [[{{Gratuitous French}} French]].[[GratuitousFrench French]].
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* Huey Laforet tells Shinpachi and Tae that [[{{YuGiOh The Abridged Series}} their mother plays card games in Hell]]. And [[{{Gratuitous Foreign Language}} he]] [[{{Refuge in Audacity}} told]] [[{{Up to Eleven}} them]] [[{{Crowning Moment of Funny}} that]] [[{{Beyond the Impossible}} he told them that entirely in]] [[{{Gratuitous French}} French]].
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Chapter Two
* Firo's attempt at parkour in chapter two. He's actually pretty good at it, until he falls a story down and gets knocked unconcious for a while. {{It Makes Sense in Context}} that he didn't die from such a fall, since [[spoiler: he'simmortal]].immortal]].
Chapter Three
* Huey Laforet tells Shinpachi and Tae that [[{{YuGiOh The Abridged Series}} their mother plays card games in Hell]]. And [[{{Gratuitous Foreign Language}} he]] [[{{Refuge in Audacity}} told]] [[{{Up to Eleven}} them]] [[{{Crowning Moment of Funny}} that]] [[{{Beyond the Impossible}} entirely in]] [[{{Gratuitous French}} French]].
* Firo's attempt at parkour in chapter two. He's actually pretty good at it, until he falls a story down and gets knocked unconcious for a while. {{It Makes Sense in Context}} that he didn't die from such a fall, since [[spoiler: he's
Chapter Three
* Huey Laforet tells Shinpachi and Tae that [[{{YuGiOh The Abridged Series}} their mother plays card games in Hell]]. And [[{{Gratuitous Foreign Language}} he]] [[{{Refuge in Audacity}} told]] [[{{Up to Eleven}} them]] [[{{Crowning Moment of Funny}} that]] [[{{Beyond the Impossible}} entirely in]] [[{{Gratuitous French}} French]].
