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* In [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/43254745/ Drowned]], when Percy [[spoiler:loses Riptide]] and [[spoiler:Revus]] ignores his demands to know what happened to her, he decides to make her talk.
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* In [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/43254745/ Drowned]], when Percy [[spoiler:loses Riptide]] loses Riptide and [[spoiler:Revus]] Revus ignores his demands to know what happened to her, he decides to make her talk.
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* How do you know a story is going to have a massive JustForFun/HolyShitQuotient? When it opens with Percy stabbing the Titan of Time threw the chest and then carving his eye out with Annabeth's dagger.
* Remember way back, when Percy nearly died fighting the Minotaur when he was twelve? Here he fights an entire ''pack'' of Minotaurs and nearly kills all of them singlehandedly.
* Remember way back, when Percy nearly died fighting the Minotaur when he was twelve? Here he fights an entire ''pack'' of Minotaurs and nearly kills all of them singlehandedly.
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* How do you know a story is going to have a massive JustForFun/HolyShitQuotient? When it opens with Percy stabbing the Titan of Time threw through the chest and then carving his eye out with Annabeth's dagger.
* Remember way back, when Percy nearly died fighting the Minotaur when he was twelve? Here he fights an entire ''pack'' of Minotaurs and nearly kills all of them singlehandedly.dagger.
* Remember way back, when Percy nearly died fighting the Minotaur when he was twelve? Here, he fights an entire ''pack'' of Minotaurs and nearly kills all of them single-handedly.
* Remember way back, when Percy nearly died fighting the Minotaur when he was twelve? Here he fights an entire ''pack'' of Minotaurs and nearly kills all of them singlehandedly.
* Remember way back, when Percy nearly died fighting the Minotaur when he was twelve? Here, he fights an entire ''pack'' of Minotaurs and nearly kills all of them single-handedly.
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--> '''Percy:''' “Make no mistakes—I’m letting you walk away from this on your actual legs only because Hestia said she wanted a show. If you flee the city before then, you might save yourselves some embarrassment, but I’m honestly too busy to bother with you right now.”
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--> '''Percy:''' “Make Make no mistakes—I’m mistakes—I'm letting you walk away from this on your actual legs only because Hestia said she wanted a show. If you flee the city before then, you might save yourselves some embarrassment, but I’m I'm honestly too busy to bother with you right now.”
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--> “Fine,” I said, sounding too calm even for my own ears. My hands trembled, knuckled clenched too tight, blood running too hot in my veins. “Then we can continue this conversation when you get tired of drowning.”
--> And then half of the island fell down into the water.
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And then half of the island fell down into the water.
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* How do you know a story is going to have a massive {{HSQ}}? When it opens with Percy stabbing the Titan of Time threw the chest and then carving his eye out with Annabeth's dagger.
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* How do you know a story is going to have a massive {{HSQ}}? JustForFun/HolyShitQuotient? When it opens with Percy stabbing the Titan of Time threw the chest and then carving his eye out with Annabeth's dagger.
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* How do you know a story is going to be awesome? When it opens with Percy stabbing the Titan of Time threw the chest and then carving his eye out with Annabeth's dagger.
* In the interest of saving time, we could very well put "whenever Percy gets pissed", but that would defeat the purpose of this page. So instead I give you the moment when Percy tanks not one, but ''two'' Magic Swords, the Orario equivalent of a{{Fantastic Nuke}}.
* In the interest of saving time, we could very well put "whenever Percy gets pissed", but that would defeat the purpose of this page. So instead I give you the moment when Percy tanks not one, but ''two'' Magic Swords, the Orario equivalent of a{{Fantastic Nuke}}.
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* How do you know a story is going to be awesome? have a massive {{HSQ}}? When it opens with Percy stabbing the Titan of Time threw the chest and then carving his eye out with Annabeth's dagger.dagger.
* Remember way back, when Percy nearly died fighting the Minotaur when he was twelve? Here he fights an entire ''pack'' of Minotaurs and nearly kills all of them singlehandedly.
* In the interest of saving time, we could very well put "whenever Percy gets pissed", but that would defeat the purpose of this page. So instead I give you the moment when Percy tanks not one, but ''two'' Magic Swords, the Orario equivalent ofa{{Fantastic a {{Fantastic Nuke}}.
* Remember way back, when Percy nearly died fighting the Minotaur when he was twelve? Here he fights an entire ''pack'' of Minotaurs and nearly kills all of them singlehandedly.
* In the interest of saving time, we could very well put "whenever Percy gets pissed", but that would defeat the purpose of this page. So instead I give you the moment when Percy tanks not one, but ''two'' Magic Swords, the Orario equivalent of
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* In [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/43254745/ Drowned]], when Percy loses Riptide and Revus ignores his demands to know what happened to her, he decides to make her talk.
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* In [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/43254745/ Drowned]], when Percy loses Riptide [[spoiler:loses Riptide]] and Revus [[spoiler:Revus]] ignores his demands to know what happened to her, he decides to make her talk.
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--> Without another word, I slammed my fist into the ground. Something broke, and not just metaphorically—my fingers, my wrist, and my arm shattered, coming apart as power flooded up and down it. But as it did, fissures opened all around me, as far as I could see, and geysers of water spilt forth from the cracks, pushing upon and widening the cracks as they went. Everything around me snapped and cracked and shifted unsteadily, moving even as I stood still, and behind me, as wave rose, coming up from the lake below to tower over the cliffs.
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* How do you know a story is going to be awesome? When it opens with Percy stabbing the Titan of Time threw the chest and then carving his eye out with Annabeth's dagger.
* In the interest of saving time, we could very well put "whenever Percy gets pissed", but that would defeat the purpose of this page. So instead I give you the moment when Percy tanks not one, but ''two'' Magic Swords, the Orario equivalent of a{{Fantastic Nuke}}.
* In the interest of saving time, we could very well put "whenever Percy gets pissed", but that would defeat the purpose of this page. So instead I give you the moment when Percy tanks not one, but ''two'' Magic Swords, the Orario equivalent of a{{Fantastic Nuke}}.
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--> '''Percy:''' “Make no mistakes—I’m letting you walk away from this on your actual legs only because Hestia said she wanted a show. If you flee the city before then, you might save yourselves some embarrassment, but I’m honestly too busy to bother with you right now.”
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--> '''Percy:''' “Make no mistakes—I’m letting you walk away from this on your actual legs only because Hestia said she wanted a show. If you flee the city before then, you might save yourselves some embarrassment, but I’m honestly too busy to bother with you right now.””
* In [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/43254745/ Drowned]], when Percy loses Riptide and Revus ignores his demands to know what happened to her, he decides to make her talk.
--> “Fine,” I said, sounding too calm even for my own ears. My hands trembled, knuckled clenched too tight, blood running too hot in my veins. “Then we can continue this conversation when you get tired of drowning.”
--> Without another word, I slammed my fist into the ground. Something broke, and not just metaphorically—my fingers, my wrist, and my arm shattered, coming apart as power flooded up and down it. But as it did, fissures opened all around me, as far as I could see, and geysers of water spilt forth from the cracks, pushing upon and widening the cracks as they went. Everything around me snapped and cracked and shifted unsteadily, moving even as I stood still, and behind me, as wave rose, coming up from the lake below to tower over the cliffs.
--> And then half of the island fell down into the water.
* In [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/43254745/ Drowned]], when Percy loses Riptide and Revus ignores his demands to know what happened to her, he decides to make her talk.
--> “Fine,” I said, sounding too calm even for my own ears. My hands trembled, knuckled clenched too tight, blood running too hot in my veins. “Then we can continue this conversation when you get tired of drowning.”
--> Without another word, I slammed my fist into the ground. Something broke, and not just metaphorically—my fingers, my wrist, and my arm shattered, coming apart as power flooded up and down it. But as it did, fissures opened all around me, as far as I could see, and geysers of water spilt forth from the cracks, pushing upon and widening the cracks as they went. Everything around me snapped and cracked and shifted unsteadily, moving even as I stood still, and behind me, as wave rose, coming up from the lake below to tower over the cliffs.
--> And then half of the island fell down into the water.
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* In [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/22935989/ Burnt Part 2]], Percy's method of ThrowingDownTheGauntlet is to throw a carriage into Apollo's mansion and then rip the pipes out of the wall at the end to be petty.
--> '''Percy:''' “Make no mistakes—I’m letting you walk away from this on your actual legs only because Hestia said she wanted a show. If you flee the city before then, you might save yourselves some embarrassment, but I’m honestly too busy to bother with you right now.”
--> '''Percy:''' “Make no mistakes—I’m letting you walk away from this on your actual legs only because Hestia said she wanted a show. If you flee the city before then, you might save yourselves some embarrassment, but I’m honestly too busy to bother with you right now.”
