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* In Episode 19 ("Snowmageddon"), Luan slams the door on some angry comic book nerds who have literal TorchesAndPitchforks for her unpopular opinion on ComicBook/{{Batman}}.
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* In Episode 19 ("Snowmageddon"), Luan slams the door on some angry comic book nerds who have literal TorchesAndPitchforks for on her unpopular opinion on ComicBook/{{Batman}}.just because she likes ''Film/BatmanAndRobin''.
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* Episode 24 ("Lincoln Betrays Lucy") is a rewrite of the infamous WesternAnimation/HeyArnold episode "Arnold Betrays Iggy," and while reading it, Lucy [[SomeAnvilsNeedToBeDropped drops an anvil]] that shows exactly why that episode is so hated:
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* Episode 24 ("Lincoln Betrays Lucy") is a rewrite of the infamous WesternAnimation/HeyArnold episode "Arnold Betrays Iggy," and while reading it, Lucy [[SomeAnvilsNeedToBeDropped drops an anvil]] teaches AnAesop that shows exactly why that episode is so hated:
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** Even though it arguably isn't much compared to everything else fucked up happening before said reveal, Fic!Lincoln does get some form of retribution for abusing his younger sisters - the twins in particular. Though it leads to him [[TheToothHurts force-feeding them each others' teeth]] you have to admit that [[RevengeIsADishBestServed revenge is a dish best served grody.]]
-->'''Fic!Lincoln''': "One time, though, they did try to get back at me. Lola baked some cookies in one of her little girl ovens and tricked me into eating them. It was only after I'd eaten them that she told me that Lana's shit had been mixed into the batter. That's right – they tricked me into eating Lana's shit."
-->'''Fic!Lincoln''': "One time, though, they did try to get back at me. Lola baked some cookies in one of her little girl ovens and tricked me into eating them. It was only after I'd eaten them that she told me that Lana's shit had been mixed into the batter. That's right – they tricked me into eating Lana's shit."
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** Even though it arguably isn't much compared to everything else fucked up happening before said reveal, Fic!Lincoln Lincoln does get some form of retribution for abusing his younger sisters - the twins in particular. Though it leads to him [[TheToothHurts force-feeding them each others' teeth]] you have to admit that [[RevengeIsADishBestServed revenge is a dish best served grody.]]
-->'''Fic!Lincoln''': -->'''Lincoln''': "One time, though, they did try to get back at me. Lola baked some cookies in one of her little girl ovens and tricked me into eating them. It was only after I'd eaten them that she told me that Lana's shit had been mixed into the batter. That's right – they tricked me into eating Lana's shit."
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-->'''Lucy''': What a miserable story. I feel dirty after reading that.
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* In Episode 19 ("Snowmageddon"), Luan slams the door on some angry comic book nerds who have literal TorchesAndPitchforks for her unpopular opinion on ComicBook/{{Batman}}.
-->'''Luan''': "It's called an opinion! Deal with it!"
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** Even though it arguably isn't much compared to everything else fucked up happening before said reveal, Fic!Lincoln does get some form of retribution for abusing his younger sisters - the twins in particular. Though it leads to him [[TheToothHurts force-feeding them each others' teeth]] you have to admit that [[RevengeIsADishBestServed revenge is a dish best served grody.]]
-->'''Fic!Lincoln''': "One time, though, they did try to get back at me. Lola baked some cookies in one of her little girl ovens and tricked me into eating them. It was only after I'd eaten them that she told me that Lana's shit had been mixed into the batter. That's right – they tricked me into eating Lana's shit."
-->'''Fic!Lincoln''': "One time, though, they did try to get back at me. Lola baked some cookies in one of her little girl ovens and tricked me into eating them. It was only after I'd eaten them that she told me that Lana's shit had been mixed into the batter. That's right – they tricked me into eating Lana's shit."
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-->'''Luna''': "Sexual assault isn't 'cute!'"
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-->'''Luna''': "Sexual ''Sexual assault isn't 'cute!'"'cute!' ''
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-->'''Luna''': "How am I okay with this?! How is ''anyone'' in the house okay with Lisa turning Leni into a horny cat?! ''Why am I teasing Luan about this when I should be grabbing Lisa and slamming her into the wall repeatedly?!''"
-->'''Luna''': "Sexual assault isn't 'cute'!"
-->'''Luna''': "'''Why am I talking about this like it's Benny asking her to the prom?! It's her sister! It's... It's WRONG! It's WRONG, WRONG, WRONG, WRONG, WRONG, WRONG, WRONG, WRONG!"
-->'''Luna''': "So it just wore off overnight? How does that even... you know what? I don't care. If it means the nightmare is over, I'll accept it."
* The SerialEscalation of the sin counter in Episode 17 ("Luck"). For context, one of the men introduces a "sin counter" to count the amount of things the fanfic did wrong. This story is so badly written that the sin counter ended up being powered by machine guns.
-->'''Luna''': "Sexual assault isn't 'cute'!"
-->'''Luna''': "'''Why am I talking about this like it's Benny asking her to the prom?! It's her sister! It's... It's WRONG! It's WRONG, WRONG, WRONG, WRONG, WRONG, WRONG, WRONG, WRONG!"
-->'''Luna''': "So it just wore off overnight? How does that even... you know what? I don't care. If it means the nightmare is over, I'll accept it."
* The SerialEscalation of the sin counter in Episode 17 ("Luck"). For context, one of the men introduces a "sin counter" to count the amount of things the fanfic did wrong. This story is so badly written that the sin counter ended up being powered by machine guns.
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-->'''Luna''': "How How am I okay with this?! How is ''anyone'' in the house okay with Lisa turning Leni into a horny cat?! ''Why am I teasing Luan about this when I should be grabbing Lisa and slamming her into the wall repeatedly?!''"
repeatedly?!''
-->'''Luna''': "Sexual assault isn't'cute'!"
'cute!'"
-->'''Luna''':"'''Why ''Why am I talking about this like it's Benny asking her to the prom?! prom?!'' It's her sister! It's... It's WRONG! It's ''WRONG, WRONG, WRONG, WRONG, WRONG, WRONG, WRONG, WRONG, WRONG!"
WRONG!''
-->'''Luna''':"So So it just wore off overnight? How does that even... you know what? I don't care. If it means the nightmare is over, I'll accept it."
it.
* The SerialEscalation of the sin counter in Episode 17 ("Luck"). For context, one of themen authors introduces a "sin counter" to count the amount of things the fanfic did wrong. This story is so badly written that the sin counter ended up being powered by machine guns.
-->'''Luna''': "Sexual assault isn't
-->'''Luna''':
-->'''Luna''':
* The SerialEscalation of the sin counter in Episode 17 ("Luck"). For context, one of the
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* The SerialEscalation of the sin counter in Episode 17 ("Luck").
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-->'''Luna''': "How am I okay with this?! How is ''anyone'' in the house okay with Lisa turning Leni into a horny cat?! ''Why am I teasing Luan about this when I should be grabbing Lisa and slamming her into the wall repeatedly?!''"
-->'''Luna''': "Sexual assault isn't 'cute'!"
-->'''Luna''': "'''Why am I talking about this like it's Benny asking her to the prom?! It's her sister! It's... It's WRONG! It's WRONG, WRONG, WRONG, WRONG, WRONG, WRONG, WRONG, WRONG!"
-->'''Luna''': "So it just wore off overnight? How does that even... you know what? I don't care. If it means the nightmare is over, I'll accept it."
* The SerialEscalation of the sin counter in Episode 17 ("Luck"). For context, one of the men introduces a "sin counter" to count the amount of things the fanfic did wrong. This story is so badly written that the sin counter ended up being powered by machine guns.
-->'''Luna''': "Sexual assault isn't 'cute'!"
-->'''Luna''': "'''Why am I talking about this like it's Benny asking her to the prom?! It's her sister! It's... It's WRONG! It's WRONG, WRONG, WRONG, WRONG, WRONG, WRONG, WRONG, WRONG!"
-->'''Luna''': "So it just wore off overnight? How does that even... you know what? I don't care. If it means the nightmare is over, I'll accept it."
* The SerialEscalation of the sin counter in Episode 17 ("Luck"). For context, one of the men introduces a "sin counter" to count the amount of things the fanfic did wrong. This story is so badly written that the sin counter ended up being powered by machine guns.
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* TheReveal at the end of After Dark episode 4.
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* TheReveal at the end of After Dark episode 4.4 that the story was just TheAristocrats joke.
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* TheReveal at the end of After Dark episode 4.
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* TheReveal at the end of After Dark episode 4.4.
* Episode 24 ("Lincoln Betrays Lucy") is a rewrite of the infamous WesternAnimation/HeyArnold episode "Arnold Betrays Iggy," and while reading it, Lucy [[SomeAnvilsNeedToBeDropped drops an anvil]] that shows exactly why that episode is so hated:
-->'''Lucy''': Forgiveness is something you earn by correcting your mistakes and learning from them, not by punishing yourself. If someone expects you to jump through hoops and go through agony to earn their forgiveness, then their forgiveness isn't worth earning.
** Lucy not even bothering to hide her disgust with the story and [[DownerEnding its ending]].
-->'''Lucy''': What a miserable story. I feel dirty after reading that.
* Episode 24 ("Lincoln Betrays Lucy") is a rewrite of the infamous WesternAnimation/HeyArnold episode "Arnold Betrays Iggy," and while reading it, Lucy [[SomeAnvilsNeedToBeDropped drops an anvil]] that shows exactly why that episode is so hated:
-->'''Lucy''': Forgiveness is something you earn by correcting your mistakes and learning from them, not by punishing yourself. If someone expects you to jump through hoops and go through agony to earn their forgiveness, then their forgiveness isn't worth earning.
** Lucy not even bothering to hide her disgust with the story and [[DownerEnding its ending]].
-->'''Lucy''': What a miserable story. I feel dirty after reading that.
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* Luna does a whole TheReasonYouSuckSpeech to people who think that RockIsAuthenticPopIsShallow.
-->'''Luna''': "This writer seems to think that pop and rock are two separate spheres that can't ever touch each other. But they're not. They overlap, they intertwine, and the line between them has always been pretty blurry. I mean, once upon a time, "pop" was just short for "popular". It was a catch-all term for whatever was toppin' the charts - and for a lot of the 50's and 60's, that was rock 'n roll.
The Beatles are one of the greatest rock groups of all time. They're also one of the greatest pop groups. And no Beatlemaniac would take offense to either of those labels. Plus, if you really want to blow this writer's mind, you could tell him that Eddie Van Halen played the guitar solo on "Beat It". You know, that song by Michael Jackson? The King of Pop?
The idea that rock is above pop, or that you have to be smart to appreciate it, is totally bogus, and it's not what rockers like me want people to think. Fact is, rock can be just as simple and rudimentary as pop. You know how many chords you need to know to play "Blitzkrieg Bop" by The Ramones? Three. A major, D major and E major. That's it. Even Bono said that all he needs to rock out are three chords and the truth.
Rock stars and pop starlets aren't enemies; we're brothers from another mother. At the end of the day, we're all just writin' simple songs with catchy hooks and melodies designed to make people want to get up and move."
-->'''Luna''': "This writer seems to think that pop and rock are two separate spheres that can't ever touch each other. But they're not. They overlap, they intertwine, and the line between them has always been pretty blurry. I mean, once upon a time, "pop" was just short for "popular". It was a catch-all term for whatever was toppin' the charts - and for a lot of the 50's and 60's, that was rock 'n roll.
The Beatles are one of the greatest rock groups of all time. They're also one of the greatest pop groups. And no Beatlemaniac would take offense to either of those labels. Plus, if you really want to blow this writer's mind, you could tell him that Eddie Van Halen played the guitar solo on "Beat It". You know, that song by Michael Jackson? The King of Pop?
The idea that rock is above pop, or that you have to be smart to appreciate it, is totally bogus, and it's not what rockers like me want people to think. Fact is, rock can be just as simple and rudimentary as pop. You know how many chords you need to know to play "Blitzkrieg Bop" by The Ramones? Three. A major, D major and E major. That's it. Even Bono said that all he needs to rock out are three chords and the truth.
Rock stars and pop starlets aren't enemies; we're brothers from another mother. At the end of the day, we're all just writin' simple songs with catchy hooks and melodies designed to make people want to get up and move."
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* Luna does a whole TheReasonYouSuckSpeech to people who think that RockIsAuthenticPopIsShallow.
RockIsAuthenticPopIsShallow in episode 15 ("Cringeworthy").
-->'''Luna''':"This This writer seems to think that pop and rock are two separate spheres that can't ever touch each other. But they're not. They overlap, they intertwine, and the line between them has always been pretty blurry. I mean, once upon a time, "pop" was just short for "popular". It was a catch-all term for whatever was toppin' the charts - and for a lot of the 50's and 60's, that was rock 'n roll.
roll.\\
The Beatles are one of the greatest rock groups of all time. They're also one of the greatest pop groups. And no Beatlemaniac would take offense to either of those labels. Plus, if you really want to blow this writer's mind, you could tell him that Eddie Van Halen played the guitar solo on "Beat It". You know, that song by Michael Jackson? The King ofPop?
Pop?\\
The idea that rock is above pop, or that you have to be smart to appreciate it, is totally bogus, and it's not what rockers like me want people to think. Fact is, rock can be just as simple and rudimentary as pop. You know how many chords you need to know to play "Blitzkrieg Bop" by The Ramones? Three. A major, D major and E major. That's it. Even Bono said that all he needs to rock out are three chords and thetruth.
truth.\\
Rock stars and pop starlets aren't enemies; we're brothers from another mother. At the end of the day, we're all just writin' simple songs with catchy hooks and melodies designed to make people want to get up andmove."move.
* Luna's utter fury at her fic self's behavior in After Dark episode 1 ("Property of Luan Loud").
* The SerialEscalation of the sin counter in Episode 17 ("Luck").
* Lincoln calling out the ending of "One Angry Person."
-->'''Lincoln''': So I spend half the story treating my family like garbage, and I get rewarded with toys, video games and merchandise. What's the moral of this story, exactly?
* TheReveal at the end of After Dark episode 4.
-->'''Luna''':
The Beatles are one of the greatest rock groups of all time. They're also one of the greatest pop groups. And no Beatlemaniac would take offense to either of those labels. Plus, if you really want to blow this writer's mind, you could tell him that Eddie Van Halen played the guitar solo on "Beat It". You know, that song by Michael Jackson? The King of
The idea that rock is above pop, or that you have to be smart to appreciate it, is totally bogus, and it's not what rockers like me want people to think. Fact is, rock can be just as simple and rudimentary as pop. You know how many chords you need to know to play "Blitzkrieg Bop" by The Ramones? Three. A major, D major and E major. That's it. Even Bono said that all he needs to rock out are three chords and the
Rock stars and pop starlets aren't enemies; we're brothers from another mother. At the end of the day, we're all just writin' simple songs with catchy hooks and melodies designed to make people want to get up and
* Luna's utter fury at her fic self's behavior in After Dark episode 1 ("Property of Luan Loud").
* The SerialEscalation of the sin counter in Episode 17 ("Luck").
* Lincoln calling out the ending of "One Angry Person."
-->'''Lincoln''': So I spend half the story treating my family like garbage, and I get rewarded with toys, video games and merchandise. What's the moral of this story, exactly?
* TheReveal at the end of After Dark episode 4.
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* Lincoln analyses the Sister Fight Protocol and points out that it makes no sense, to the point where the author claims he cannot make any further attempt at making sense of it due to doctor's orders.
* Leni displays surprising knowledge about fish, Lynn about snakes, and Lisa and Luna about religion.
* Luna does a whole TheReasonYouSuckSpeech to people who think that RockIsAuthenticPopIsShallow.
-->'''Luna''': "This writer seems to think that pop and rock are two separate spheres that can't ever touch each other. But they're not. They overlap, they intertwine, and the line between them has always been pretty blurry. I mean, once upon a time, "pop" was just short for "popular". It was a catch-all term for whatever was toppin' the charts - and for a lot of the 50's and 60's, that was rock 'n roll.
The Beatles are one of the greatest rock groups of all time. They're also one of the greatest pop groups. And no Beatlemaniac would take offense to either of those labels. Plus, if you really want to blow this writer's mind, you could tell him that Eddie Van Halen played the guitar solo on "Beat It". You know, that song by Michael Jackson? The King of Pop?
The idea that rock is above pop, or that you have to be smart to appreciate it, is totally bogus, and it's not what rockers like me want people to think. Fact is, rock can be just as simple and rudimentary as pop. You know how many chords you need to know to play "Blitzkrieg Bop" by The Ramones? Three. A major, D major and E major. That's it. Even Bono said that all he needs to rock out are three chords and the truth.
Rock stars and pop starlets aren't enemies; we're brothers from another mother. At the end of the day, we're all just writin' simple songs with catchy hooks and melodies designed to make people want to get up and move."
* Leni displays surprising knowledge about fish, Lynn about snakes, and Lisa and Luna about religion.
* Luna does a whole TheReasonYouSuckSpeech to people who think that RockIsAuthenticPopIsShallow.
-->'''Luna''': "This writer seems to think that pop and rock are two separate spheres that can't ever touch each other. But they're not. They overlap, they intertwine, and the line between them has always been pretty blurry. I mean, once upon a time, "pop" was just short for "popular". It was a catch-all term for whatever was toppin' the charts - and for a lot of the 50's and 60's, that was rock 'n roll.
The Beatles are one of the greatest rock groups of all time. They're also one of the greatest pop groups. And no Beatlemaniac would take offense to either of those labels. Plus, if you really want to blow this writer's mind, you could tell him that Eddie Van Halen played the guitar solo on "Beat It". You know, that song by Michael Jackson? The King of Pop?
The idea that rock is above pop, or that you have to be smart to appreciate it, is totally bogus, and it's not what rockers like me want people to think. Fact is, rock can be just as simple and rudimentary as pop. You know how many chords you need to know to play "Blitzkrieg Bop" by The Ramones? Three. A major, D major and E major. That's it. Even Bono said that all he needs to rock out are three chords and the truth.
Rock stars and pop starlets aren't enemies; we're brothers from another mother. At the end of the day, we're all just writin' simple songs with catchy hooks and melodies designed to make people want to get up and move."
