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* Just that Vada can look Danny in the face and state she likes her name after he insults it, is pretty awesome considering that she is a young girl.
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* Just that Vada can look Danny in the face and state she likes her name after he insults it, is pretty awesome considering that she is a young girl.girl.
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* The part where Shelly's Ex-husband, Danny shows up. He pretty much ruins a family picnic trying to harass Shelly while she was having dinner with Harry and the family. Harry, the good nature that he is, first tries to talk to the guy into leaving, but he doesn't budge. So he just simply grabs him by the shoulder in a friendly gesture and punches him in the stomach. Danny's brother comes to his aid and Harry gives one of the most awesome threats you can give in a family comedy. The fact that he is an undertaker just shows how awesome it is.
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* The part where Shelly's Ex-husband, Danny ex-husband, Danny, shows up. He pretty much ruins a family picnic trying to harass Shelly while she was having dinner with Harry and the family. Harry, the good nature that he is, first tries to talk to the guy into leaving, but he doesn't budge. So he just simply grabs him by the shoulder in a friendly gesture and punches him in the stomach. Danny's brother comes to his aid and Harry gives one of the most awesome threats you can give in a family comedy. The fact that he is an undertaker just shows how awesome it is.
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--> '''Raplph:''' And why's that?
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--> '''Raplph:''' '''Ralph:''' And why's that?
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** Just that Vada can look Danny in the face and state she likes her name after he insults it, is pretty awesome considering that she is a young girl.
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--> '''Ralph:''' I'm his brother.
--> '''Harry:''' Then I guess you'll visit this house more often.
--> '''Raplph:''' Why?
--> '''Harry:''' Because if your brother comes back here again, I'm gonna bury him in my back yard.
--> '''Harry:''' Then I guess you'll visit this house more often.
--> '''Raplph:''' Why?
--> '''Harry:''' Because if your brother comes back here again, I'm gonna bury him in my back yard.
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--> '''Ralph:''' I'm his brother.
brother!
--> '''Harry:''' Then I guess you'llvisit this house more be visiting us quite often.
--> '''Raplph:'''Why?
And why's that?
--> '''Harry:''' Because ifyour brother comes back here he ever tries to take Shelly's camper again, I'm gonna bury him in my back yard.
--> '''Harry:''' Then I guess you'll
--> '''Raplph:'''
--> '''Harry:''' Because if
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--> '''Harry:''' Because if your brother comes back here again, I'm gonna bury him in my back yard.
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--> '''Harry:''' Because if your brother comes back here again, I'm gonna bury him in my back yard.yard.
** Just that Vada can look Danny in the face and state she likes her name after he insults it, is pretty awesome considering that she is a young girl.
** Just that Vada can look Danny in the face and state she likes her name after he insults it, is pretty awesome considering that she is a young girl.
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* The part where Shelly's Ex-husband, Danny shows up. He pretty much ruins a family picnic trying to harass Shelly while she was having dinner with Harry and the family. Harry, the good nature that he is, first tries to talk to the guy into leaving, but he doesn't budge. So he just simply grabs him by the shoulder in a friendly gesture and knees him in the stomach. Danny's brother comes to his aid and Harry gives one of the most awesome threats you can give in a family comedy. The fact that he is an undertaker just shows how awesome it is.
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* The part where Shelly's Ex-husband, Danny shows up. He pretty much ruins a family picnic trying to harass Shelly while she was having dinner with Harry and the family. Harry, the good nature that he is, first tries to talk to the guy into leaving, but he doesn't budge. So he just simply grabs him by the shoulder in a friendly gesture and knees punches him in the stomach. Danny's brother comes to his aid and Harry gives one of the most awesome threats you can give in a family comedy. The fact that he is an undertaker just shows how awesome it is.
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--> '''Harry:''' Because if your brother comes back here again, I'm gonna bury him in my back yard.
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--> '''Harry:''' Because if your brother comes back here again, I'm gonna bury him in my back yard.
yard.
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* The part where Shelly's Ex-husband, Danny shows up. He pretty much ruins a family picnic trying to harass Shelly while she was having dinner with Harry and the family. Harry, the good nature that he is, first tries to talk to the guy into leaving, but he doesn't budge. So he lust simply grabs him by the shoulder in a friendly gesture and knees him in the stomach. Danny's brother comes to his aid and Harry gives one of the most awesome threats you can give in a family comedy. The fact that he is an undertaker just shows how awesome it is.
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* The part where Shelly's Ex-husband, Danny shows up. He pretty much ruins a family picnic trying to harass Shelly while she was having dinner with Harry and the family. Harry, the good nature that he is, first tries to talk to the guy into leaving, but he doesn't budge. So he lust just simply grabs him by the shoulder in a friendly gesture and knees him in the stomach. Danny's brother comes to his aid and Harry gives one of the most awesome threats you can give in a family comedy. The fact that he is an undertaker just shows how awesome it is.
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* The part where Shelly's Ex-husband, Danny shows up. He pretty much ruins a family picnic trying to harass Shelly while she was having dinner with Harry and the family. Harry, the good nature that he is, first tries to talk to the guy into leaving, but he doesn't budge. So he lust simply grabs him by the shoulder in a friendly gesture and knees him in the stomach. Danny's brother comes to his aid and Harry gives one of the most awesome threats you can give in a family comedy. The fact that he is an undertaker just shows how awesome it is.
--> '''Harry:''' Who are you?
--> '''Ralph:''' I'm his brother.
--> '''Harry:''' Then I guess you'll visit this house more often.
--> '''Raplph:''' Why?
--> '''Harry:''' Because if your brother comes back here again, I'm gonna bury him in my back yard.
--> '''Harry:''' Who are you?
--> '''Ralph:''' I'm his brother.
--> '''Harry:''' Then I guess you'll visit this house more often.
--> '''Raplph:''' Why?
--> '''Harry:''' Because if your brother comes back here again, I'm gonna bury him in my back yard.