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* For being a "no-good, dirty, rotten, pig-stealer", Elya Yelnats [[CharacterDevelopment demonstrates some serious self-dignity]] when he decides for himself [[TheDitz Myra Menke's]] hand in marriage isn't worth winning if she can't even choose Elya over [[TheGonk Igor]] [[FatBastard Barkov]] of her own accord.
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-->'''Trout:''' No one says "no" to Charles Walker!
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-->'''Trout:''' No one says "no" to Charles Trout Walker!
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* The implication that ''God Himself'' caused the drought in divine retribution for Sam's murder. [[ExactWords "God will punish them," indeed.]]
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* The implication that ''God Himself'' caused the drought in divine retribution for Sam's murder. [[ExactWords "God will punish them," indeed.]]]]
** Made better by Sachar's ArmorPiercingQuestion to the reader: "Who did God ''really'' punish?"
** Made better by Sachar's ArmorPiercingQuestion to the reader: "Who did God ''really'' punish?"
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** Doubles as a CrowningMomentOfFunny.
* Stanley stealing Mr. Sir's truck and driving it into a hole (accidentally) and then running away. Also a CrowningMomentOfFunny. Zigzag even says it was awesome in a later scene in the film, while Twitch does in the book.
* Stanley stealing Mr. Sir's truck and driving it into a hole (accidentally) and then running away. Also a CrowningMomentOfFunny. Zigzag even says it was awesome in a later scene in the film, while Twitch does in the book.
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** Doubles as a CrowningMomentOfFunny.
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* Stanley stealing Mr. Sir's truck and driving it into a hole (accidentally) and then running away. Also aCrowningMomentOfFunny.SugarWiki/{{Funny Moment|s}}. Zigzag even says it was awesome in a later scene in the film, while Twitch does in the book.
* Stanley stealing Mr. Sir's truck and driving it into a hole (accidentally) and then running away. Also a
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--> '''Mr. Pendanski''': ''(Hands Zero a shovel)'' Take it, Zero, it's all you'll ever be good for. You might as well teach this shovel how to read. D-I-G, what's that spell?
--> '''Zero''': ''(pauses, then hits Pendanski in the head with the shovel)'' Dig!
--> '''Zero''': ''(pauses, then hits Pendanski in the head with the shovel)'' Dig!
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--> '''Mr. Pendanski''': Pendanski:''' ''(Hands Zero a shovel)'' Take it, Zero, it's all you'll ever be good for. You might as well teach this shovel how to read. D-I-G, what's that spell?
-->'''Zero''': '''Zero:''' ''(pauses, then [[TheDogBitesBack hits Pendanski in the head with the shovel)'' Dig!shovel]])'' [[ShutUpHannibal Dig!]]
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* Stanley stealing Mr. Sir's truck and driving it into a hole (accidentally) and then running away. Also a CrowningMomentOfFunny. Zigzag even says it was awesome in a later scene in the film.
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* Stanley stealing Mr. Sir's truck and driving it into a hole (accidentally) and then running away. Also a CrowningMomentOfFunny. Zigzag even says it was awesome in a later scene in the film.film, while Twitch does in the book.
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* "Good morning, sheriff. [[PreMortemOneLiner Do you still want that kiss]]?"
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* Stanley carrying Zero up a mountain, unknowingly [[spoiler:breaking the curse on his family, as Zero is descended from the sorceress who cast it.]]
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* Stanley carrying Zero up a the mountain, unknowingly [[spoiler:breaking the curse on his family, as Zero is descended from the sorceress who cast it.]]
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** And just before that, Zero reading the name on the suitcase, revealing it belongs to Stanley's family. Those councilors certainly regreted calling him illiterate. (It actually occurs in the book as well, and the Warden is [[StunnedSilence stunned almost speechless]].)
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** And just before that, Zero reading the name on the suitcase, revealing it belongs to Stanley's family. Those councilors certainly regreted regretted calling him illiterate. (It actually occurs in the book as well, and the Warden is [[StunnedSilence stunned almost speechless]].)
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kNW-XETVjio "Start diggin', Trout."]]
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kNW-XETVjio "Start diggin', Trout."]]"]]
* The implication that ''God Himself'' caused the drought in divine retribution for Sam's murder. [[ExactWords "God will punish them," indeed.]]
* The implication that ''God Himself'' caused the drought in divine retribution for Sam's murder. [[ExactWords "God will punish them," indeed.]]
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* Stanley stealing Mr. Sir's truck and driving it into a hole (accidentally) and then running away. Also a CrowningMomentOfFunny.
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* Stanley stealing Mr. Sir's truck and driving it into a hole (accidentally) and then running away. Also a CrowningMomentOfFunny. Zigzag even says it was awesome in a later scene in the film.
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-->'''Trout:''' "No one says "no" to Charles Walker!"
-->'''Miss Katherine:''' "I believe I just did."
-->'''Miss Katherine:''' "I believe I just did."
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-->'''Trout:''' "No No one says "no" to Charles Walker!"
Walker!
-->'''Miss Katherine:'''"I I believe I just did."
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-->'''Trout:''' "No one says "no" to Trout Walker!"
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-->'''Trout:''' "No one says "no" to Trout Charles Walker!"
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kNW-XETVjio "Start diggin', Trout".]]
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kNW-XETVjio "Start diggin', Trout".]]Trout."]]
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** And just before that, Zero reading the name on the suitcase, revealing it belongs to Stanley's family. Those councilors certainly regreted calling him illiterate. (It actually occurs in the book as well, and the Warden is [[ShockedSilence stunned almost speechless]].)
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** And just before that, Zero reading the name on the suitcase, revealing it belongs to Stanley's family. Those councilors certainly regreted calling him illiterate. (It actually occurs in the book as well, and the Warden is [[ShockedSilence [[StunnedSilence stunned almost speechless]].)
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** And just before that, Zero reading the name on the suitcase, revealing it belongs to Stanley's family. Those councilors certainly regreted calling him illiterate.
* In a deleted scene, Stanley imagines his camp mates threatening the school bully not to mess with Stanley anymore. This was only acknowledged in the book.
* In a deleted scene, Stanley imagines his camp mates threatening the school bully not to mess with Stanley anymore. This was only acknowledged in the book.
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** And just before that, Zero reading the name on the suitcase, revealing it belongs to Stanley's family. Those councilors certainly regreted calling him illiterate.
illiterate. (It actually occurs in the book as well, and the Warden is [[ShockedSilence stunned almost speechless]].)
* In a deleted scene, Stanley imagines his camp mates threatening the school bully not to mess with Stanley anymore. This wasonly acknowledged actually a part of what "happened" in the book.
* In a deleted scene, Stanley imagines his camp mates threatening the school bully not to mess with Stanley anymore. This was
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** And just before that, Zero reading the name on the suitcase, revealing it belongs to Stanley's family.
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** And just before that, Zero reading the name on the suitcase, revealing it belongs to Stanley's family. Those councilors certainly regreted calling him illiterate.
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-->'''Miss Katherine:''' "I believe I just did."
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-->'''Miss Katherine:''' "I believe I just did.""
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kNW-XETVjio "Start diggin', Trout".]]
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kNW-XETVjio "Start diggin', Trout".]]
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* Stanley carrying Zero up a mountain, unknowingly [[spoiler:breaking the curse on his family, as Zero is descended from the sorceress who made it.]]
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* Stanley carrying Zero up a mountain, unknowingly [[spoiler:breaking the curse on his family, as Zero is descended from the sorceress who made cast it.]]
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** And just before that, Zero reading the name on the suitcase, revealing it belongs to Stanley's family.
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-->'''Trout:''' No one says "no" to Trout Walker.
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-->'''Miss Katherine:''' I believe I just did.
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-->'''Trout:''' No "No one says "no" to Trout Walker.
Walker!"
-->'''Miss Katherine:'''I "I believe I just did."
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* In a deleted scene, Stanley imagines his camp mates threatening the school bully not to mess with Stanley anymore. This was only acknowledged in the book.
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* In a deleted scene, Stanley imagines his camp mates threatening the school bully not to mess with Stanley anymore. This was only acknowledged in the book.book.
* When Trout asks Miss Katherine (pre-Kissin' Kate Barlow days) out on a date and she repeatedly turns him down:
-->'''Trout:''' No one says "no" to Trout Walker.
-->'''Miss Katherine:''' I believe I just did.
* When Trout asks Miss Katherine (pre-Kissin' Kate Barlow days) out on a date and she repeatedly turns him down:
-->'''Trout:''' No one says "no" to Trout Walker.
-->'''Miss Katherine:''' I believe I just did.
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* At the end, as Stanley and Zero are about to leave Camp Green Lake, the Warden desperately begs Stanley if she can see what was in the suitcase. Stanley's response is to throw her CatchPhrase right back at her: [[IronicEcho "Excuse me?"]]
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--> '''Mr. Pendanski''': ''(Hands Zero a shovel)'' Take it, Zero, it's all you'll ever be good for: D-I-G, what's that spell?
--> '''Zero''': ''(Pauses, then hits Pendanski in the head with the shovel)'' Dig!
--> '''Zero''': ''(Pauses, then hits Pendanski in the head with the shovel)'' Dig!
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--> '''Mr. Pendanski''': ''(Hands Zero a shovel)'' Take it, Zero, it's all you'll ever be good for: for. You might as well teach this shovel how to read. D-I-G, what's that spell?
--> '''Zero''':''(Pauses, ''(pauses, then hits Pendanski in the head with the shovel)'' Dig!
--> '''Zero''':
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** Doubles as a [[CrowningMomentOfFunny Crown Moment Of Funny]].
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** Doubles as a [[CrowningMomentOfFunny Crown Moment Of Funny]].CrowningMomentOfFunny.
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--> Mr. Pendanski: ''(Hands Zero a shovel)'' Take it, Zero, it's all you'll ever be good for: D-I-G, what's that spell?
--> Zero: ''(Pauses, then hits Pendanski in the head with the shovel)'' Dig!
--> Zero: ''(Pauses, then hits Pendanski in the head with the shovel)'' Dig!
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--> Mr. Pendanski: '''Mr. Pendanski''': ''(Hands Zero a shovel)'' Take it, Zero, it's all you'll ever be good for: D-I-G, what's that spell?
-->Zero: '''Zero''': ''(Pauses, then hits Pendanski in the head with the shovel)'' Dig!
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--> Mr. Pendansky: ''(Hands Zero a shovel)'' Take it Zero, it's all you'll ever be good for: D-I-G, what's that spell?
--> Zero: ''(Pauses, then hits Pendansky in the head with the shovel)'' Dig!
--> Zero: ''(Pauses, then hits Pendansky in the head with the shovel)'' Dig!
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--> Mr. Pendansky: Pendanski: ''(Hands Zero a shovel)'' Take it it, Zero, it's all you'll ever be good for: D-I-G, what's that spell?
--> Zero: ''(Pauses, then hitsPendansky Pendanski in the head with the shovel)'' Dig!
--> Zero: ''(Pauses, then hits
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* Stanley imagines his new friends threatening the school bully not to mess with Stanley again.
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* In a deleted scene, Stanley imagines his new friends camp mates threatening the school bully not to mess with Stanley again.anymore. This was only acknowledged in the book.
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* Stanley carrying Zero up a mountain, unknowingly [[spoiler:breaking the curse on his family, as Zero is descended from the sorceress who made it.]]
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* Stanley carrying Zero up a mountain, unknowingly [[spoiler:breaking the curse on his family, as Zero is descended from the sorceress who made it.]]]]
* Stanley imagines his new friends threatening the school bully not to mess with Stanley again.
* Stanley imagines his new friends threatening the school bully not to mess with Stanley again.
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* Stanley stealing Mr. Sir's truck and driving it into a hole (accidentally) and then running away. Also a CrowningMomentOfFunny.
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** Doubles as a [[CrowningMomentOfFunny Crown Moment Of Funny]].
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** Doubles as a [[CrowningMomentOfFunny Crown Moment Of Funny]].Funny]].
* Stanley carrying Zero up a mountain, unknowingly [[spoiler:breaking the curse on his family, as Zero is descended from the sorceress who made it.]]
* Stanley carrying Zero up a mountain, unknowingly [[spoiler:breaking the curse on his family, as Zero is descended from the sorceress who made it.]]
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** Doubles as a {Crown Moment Of Funny}.
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** Doubles as a {Crown [[CrowningMomentOfFunny Crown Moment Of Funny}.Funny]].
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** Doubles as a Crown Moment Of Awesome.
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** Doubles as a Crown {Crown Moment Of Awesome.Funny}.
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--> Zero: ''(Pauses, then hits Pendansky in the head with the shovel)'' Dig!
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--> Zero: ''(Pauses, then hits Pendansky in the head with the shovel)'' Dig!Dig!
** Doubles as a Crown Moment Of Awesome.
** Doubles as a Crown Moment Of Awesome.
