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* When the townsfolk realize that the invading undead are actually their departed friends and family, it becomes a mix of this and [[Heartwarming/CorpseBride Heartwarming]].
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** Emily actually gets two:
*** 1) when she [[IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy tells Victor to go to Victoria]]. Such selflessness!
*** And 2) when she stops Barkis from killing Victor by taking the sword to her dead body. The rip in Emily's dress may indicate this is how Barkis KILLED her. She then ''pulls the sword out of her chest'' and points it threateningly at Barkis.
---->'''Barkis:''' ...{{Touche}}, my dear.\\
'''Emily:''' ''([[DeathGlare glaring daggers at him]])'' [[PunctuatedForEmphasis Get. Out.]]
*** 1) when she [[IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy tells Victor to go to Victoria]]. Such selflessness!
*** And 2) when she stops Barkis from killing Victor by taking the sword to her dead body. The rip in Emily's dress may indicate this is how Barkis KILLED her. She then ''pulls the sword out of her chest'' and points it threateningly at Barkis.
---->'''Barkis:''' ...{{Touche}}, my dear.\\
'''Emily:''' ''([[DeathGlare glaring daggers at him]])'' [[PunctuatedForEmphasis Get. Out.]]
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** Scraps distracts Barkis from attacking Victor immediately by chomping on the murderer's leg
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** Scraps distracts Barkis from attacking Victor immediately by chomping on the murderer's legleg.
** Emily actually gets two:
*** 1) when she [[IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy tells Victor to go to Victoria]]. Such selflessness!
*** And 2) when she stops Barkis from killing Victor by taking the sword to her dead body. The rip in Emily's dress may indicate this is how Barkis KILLED her. She then ''pulls the sword out of her chest'' and points it threateningly at Barkis.
---->'''Barkis:''' ...{{Touche}}, my dear.\\
'''Emily:''' ''([[DeathGlare glaring daggers at him]])'' [[PunctuatedForEmphasis Get. Out.]]
** Emily actually gets two:
*** 1) when she [[IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy tells Victor to go to Victoria]]. Such selflessness!
*** And 2) when she stops Barkis from killing Victor by taking the sword to her dead body. The rip in Emily's dress may indicate this is how Barkis KILLED her. She then ''pulls the sword out of her chest'' and points it threateningly at Barkis.
---->'''Barkis:''' ...{{Touche}}, my dear.\\
'''Emily:''' ''([[DeathGlare glaring daggers at him]])'' [[PunctuatedForEmphasis Get. Out.]]
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* One for the entirety of the undead crew, when Lord Barkis accidentally kills himself, allowing them to have at him for killing Emily.
-->[[NightmareFuel "New arrival..."]]
-->[[NightmareFuel "New arrival..."]]
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* One for the entirety Every instance of the undead crew, when Lord Barkis accidentally kills himself, allowing them to have at him for killing Emily.
-->[[NightmareFuel "New arrival..."]]Emil being a [[TheJeeves perfect butler]] with lightning reflexes. The Everglots probably don't deserve his expertise.
-->[[NightmareFuel "New arrival..."]]
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* Every instance of Emil being a [[TheJeeves perfect butler]] with lightning reflexes. The Everglots probably don't deserve his expertise.
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* Every instance One for the entirety of Emil being a [[TheJeeves perfect butler]] with lightning reflexes. The Everglots probably don't deserve his expertise.the undead crew when Lord Barkis accidentally kills himself, allowing them to have at him for killing Emily.
-->[[NightmareFuel "New arrival..."]]
-->[[NightmareFuel "New arrival..."]]
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-->'''[[Creator/ChristopherLee Priest:]]''' Begone, ye demons from Hell! Back to the void from whence you came! [[YouShallNotPass You shall not enter here]]! Back... back... back!\\
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-->'''[[Creator/ChristopherLee Priest:]]''' Begone, ye demons from Hell! Back to the void from whence you came! [[YouShallNotPass You shall not enter here]]! Back... back... back!\\BACK!\\
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** Emily actually gets two: 1) when she [[IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy tells Victor to go to Victoria]]. Such selflessness! And 2) when she stops Barkis from killing Victor by taking the sword to her dead body. The rip in Emily's dress may indicate this is how Barkis KILLED her. She then ''pulls the sword out of her chest'' and points it threateningly at Barkis.
--->'''Barkis:''' ...{{Touche}}, my dear.\\
--->'''Barkis:''' ...{{Touche}}, my dear.\\
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** Emily actually gets two: two:
*** 1) when she [[IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy tells Victor to go to Victoria]]. Suchselflessness! selflessness!
*** And 2) when she stops Barkis from killing Victor by taking the sword to her dead body. The rip in Emily's dress may indicate this is how Barkis KILLED her. She then ''pulls the sword out of her chest'' and points it threateningly at Barkis.
--->'''Barkis:''' ...---->'''Barkis:''' ...{{Touche}}, my dear.\\
*** 1) when she [[IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy tells Victor to go to Victoria]]. Such
*** And 2) when she stops Barkis from killing Victor by taking the sword to her dead body. The rip in Emily's dress may indicate this is how Barkis KILLED her. She then ''pulls the sword out of her chest'' and points it threateningly at Barkis.
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[[caption-width-right:350:“{{Touche}}”, ''indeed''.]]
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** Scraps distracts Barkis from attacking Victor immediately by chomping on the murderers leg
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** Scraps distracts Barkis from attacking Victor immediately by chomping on the murderers murderer's leg
