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* The story's final battle between Kazuki and Neo that has the two of them become AirJousting gods.
** Kazuki absorbing the departing souls of his two friends to become Cerberus Kazuki, and we learn what each of the three stones of his head represents.
** Kazuki absorbing the departing souls of his two friends to become Cerberus Kazuki, and we learn what each of the three stones of his head represents.
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* The story's final battle between Kazuki and Neo that has the two of them become AirJousting gods.
[[EleventhHourSuperpower gods]].
** Kazuki [[SoulPower absorbing the departing souls of his twofriends friends]] to become Cerberus Kazuki, and we learn what each of the three stones of his head represents.
** Kazuki [[SoulPower absorbing the departing souls of his two
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* Chapter 10 when Kazuki uses his Numbing Burst on Blanc for the first time at the cost of getting out of his protective position and being stabbed by five icicles.
* Kazuki outsmarting Xiomara in their battle by using his [[TheParalyzer Numbing Burst]] when she thought he had used his standard Burst. He deals her the final blow with his Zipping Burst, an ability he swore to never use after the death of Yuu.
* Kazuki outsmarting Xiomara in their battle by using his [[TheParalyzer Numbing Burst]] when she thought he had used his standard Burst. He deals her the final blow with his Zipping Burst, an ability he swore to never use after the death of Yuu.
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* Chapter 10 when Kazuki uses his [[TheParalyzer Numbing Burst Burst]] on Blanc for the first time at the cost of getting out of his protective position and being stabbed by five icicles.
* Kazuki outsmarting Xiomara in their battle by using his[[TheParalyzer Numbing Burst]] Burst when she thought he had used his standard Burst. He deals her the final blow with his Zipping Burst, an ability he swore to never use after the death of Yuu.
* Kazuki outsmarting Xiomara in their battle by using his
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** The CatharsisFactor of Neo being sent to his own Forever-still Space where he will stay and be judged by the heads of Cerberus for all eternality.
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** The CatharsisFactor of Neo being sent to his own Forever-still Space where he will stay and be judged by the heads of Cerberus for all eternality.eternality.
* Kazuki's new NotQuiteBackToNormal appearance and him accepting his racial ambiguity.
* Kazuki's new NotQuiteBackToNormal appearance and him accepting his racial ambiguity.
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* Axel fighting Ember’s flaming fists with just werewolf-transformed ones in the eighth Chapter as they try to avoid all the lightning strikes.
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* Axel fighting Ember’s flaming fists with just werewolf-transformed ones in the eighth Chapter chapter as they try to avoid all the lightning strikes.
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** Axel and Sherbet encouraging Kazuki from within during his fight with Neo. When charging up his new Raging Burst to put away the demon, he uses three fingers instead of two to represent himself and his friends.
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** Axel and Sherbet encouraging Kazuki from within during his fight with Neo. When charging up his new Raging Burst to put away the demon, he uses three fingers instead of two to represent himself and his friends.friends.
** The CatharsisFactor of Neo being sent to his own Forever-still Space where he will stay and be judged by the heads of Cerberus for all eternality.
** The CatharsisFactor of Neo being sent to his own Forever-still Space where he will stay and be judged by the heads of Cerberus for all eternality.
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* The story's final battle between Kazuki and Neo that has the two of them between AirJousting gods.
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* The story's final battle between Kazuki and Neo that has the two of them between become AirJousting gods.
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** Lastly, when he is visited by Xiomara's spirit which gives him the strength to launch an ice pillar strike on Akuji, killing the demon.
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** Lastly, when he is visited by Xiomara's spirit which gives him the strength to launch an ice pillar strike on Akuji, killing the demon.demon.
* The story's final battle between Kazuki and Neo that has the two of them between AirJousting gods.
** Kazuki absorbing the departing souls of his two friends to become Cerberus Kazuki, and we learn what each of the three stones of his head represents.
** Axel and Sherbet encouraging Kazuki from within during his fight with Neo. When charging up his new Raging Burst to put away the demon, he uses three fingers instead of two to represent himself and his friends.
* The story's final battle between Kazuki and Neo that has the two of them between AirJousting gods.
** Kazuki absorbing the departing souls of his two friends to become Cerberus Kazuki, and we learn what each of the three stones of his head represents.
** Axel and Sherbet encouraging Kazuki from within during his fight with Neo. When charging up his new Raging Burst to put away the demon, he uses three fingers instead of two to represent himself and his friends.
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* Kazuki outsmarting Xiomara in their battle by using his Numbing Burst when she thought he had used his standard Burst. He deals her the final blow with his Zipping Burst, an ability he swore to never use after the death of Yuu.
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* Kazuki outsmarting Xiomara in their battle by using his [[TheParalyzer Numbing Burst Burst]] when she thought he had used his standard Burst. He deals her the final blow with his Zipping Burst, an ability he swore to never use after the death of Yuu.
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* Kazuki outsmarting Xiomara in their battle by using his Numbing Burst when she thought he had used his standard Burst. He deals her the final blow with his Zipping Burst, an ability he swore to never use after the death of Yuu.
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* Kazuki outsmarting Xiomara in their battle by using his Numbing Burst when she thought he had used his standard Burst. He deals her the final blow with his Zipping Burst, an ability he swore to never use after the death of Yuu.Yuu.
* Blanc has a lot of Awesome Moments during his fight with Akuji.
** Blanc refusing to back down after Akuji offers to spare his life.
** Blanc driving his ice arrow into his own leg to snap his body out of the poison's advancing effects.
** Lastly, when he is visited by Xiomara's spirit which gives him the strength to launch an ice pillar strike on Akuji, killing the demon.
* Blanc has a lot of Awesome Moments during his fight with Akuji.
** Blanc refusing to back down after Akuji offers to spare his life.
** Blanc driving his ice arrow into his own leg to snap his body out of the poison's advancing effects.
** Lastly, when he is visited by Xiomara's spirit which gives him the strength to launch an ice pillar strike on Akuji, killing the demon.
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** The same chapter has Kazuki banishing his trepidation and mowing down a row of black cobras after learning that his friends are in danger. Even Rouge is astonished by it all after failing to stop him from putting his life in danger.
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** The same chapter has Kazuki banishing his trepidation and mowing down [[SnakesAreSinister a row of black cobras cobras]] after learning that his friends are in danger. Even Rouge is astonished by it all after failing to stop him from putting his life in danger.
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! Chapter 4
* Kazuki when awakening his [[BlackSwordsAreBetter Eternal Onyx Blade]] for the first and realizes [[InstantExpert he's a total expert]].
! Chapter 8
* Axel fighting Ember’s flaming fists with just werewolf-transformed ones as they try to avoid all the lightning strikes.
* Kazuki banishing his trepidation and mowing down a row of black cobras after learning that his friends are in danger. Even Rouge is astonished by it all after failing to stop him from putting his life in danger.
! Chapter 9
* Kazuki when awakening his [[BlackSwordsAreBetter Eternal Onyx Blade]] for the first and realizes [[InstantExpert he's a total expert]].
! Chapter 8
* Axel fighting Ember’s flaming fists with just werewolf-transformed ones as they try to avoid all the lightning strikes.
* Kazuki banishing his trepidation and mowing down a row of black cobras after learning that his friends are in danger. Even Rouge is astonished by it all after failing to stop him from putting his life in danger.
! Chapter 9
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! Chapter 9
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* Kazuki and Conrad defeating Elliot with a CombinationAttack.
! Chapter 10
* Kazuki using his Numbing Burst on Blanc for the first time at the cost of getting out of his protective position and being stabbed by five icicles.
! Chapter 13
! Chapter 10
* Kazuki using his Numbing Burst on Blanc for the first time at the cost of getting out of his protective position and being stabbed by five icicles.
! Chapter 13
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! Chapter 13
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* Kazuki using his Numbing Burst on Blanc for the first time at the cost of getting out of his protective position and being stabbed by five icicles.
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* Kazuki using his Numbing Burst on Blanc for the first time at the cost of getting out of his protective position and being stabbed by five icicles.icicles.
! Chapter 13
* Kazuki outsmarting Xiomara in their battle by using his Numbing Burst when she thought he had used his standard Burst. He deals her the final blow with his Zipping Burst, an ability he swore to never use after the death of Yuu.
! Chapter 13
* Kazuki outsmarting Xiomara in their battle by using his Numbing Burst when she thought he had used his standard Burst. He deals her the final blow with his Zipping Burst, an ability he swore to never use after the death of Yuu.
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* Kazuki and Conrad defeating Elliot with a CombinationAttack.
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* Kazuki and Conrad defeating Elliot with a CombinationAttack.CombinationAttack.
! Chapter 10
* Kazuki using his Numbing Burst on Blanc for the first time at the cost of getting out of his protective position and being stabbed by five icicles.
! Chapter 10
* Kazuki using his Numbing Burst on Blanc for the first time at the cost of getting out of his protective position and being stabbed by five icicles.
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! Chapter 4
* Kazuki when awakening his [[BlackSwordsAreBetter Eternal Onyx Blade]] for the first and realizes [[InstantExpert he's a total expert]].
* Kazuki when awakening his [[BlackSwordsAreBetter Eternal Onyx Blade]] for the first and realizes [[InstantExpert he's a total expert]].
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---> '''Kazuki:''' ''' (laughs bitterly) [[AmbiguouslyHuman I don’t know the answer to that myself.]]'''
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---> '''Kazuki:''' ''' (laughs bitterly) [[AmbiguouslyHuman '''[[AmbiguouslyHuman I don’t know the answer to that myself.]]'''
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* Kazuki banishing his trepidation and mowing down a row of black cobras after learning that his friends are in danger.
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* Kazuki banishing his trepidation and mowing down a row of black cobras after learning that his friends are in danger. Even Rouge is astonished by it all after failing to stop him from putting his life in danger.
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* Kazuki surviving Elliot’s poison [[HorrifyingTheHorror which manages to make the cryptid lose his composure]].
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* Elliot pissing off Kazuki surviving Elliot’s poison off to the point that his demonic blood literally boils and cancels out the effects of the poison. It is satisfying to see the cryptid [[HorrifyingTheHorror which manages to make the cryptid lose his composure]].
---> '''Elliot:''' WHAT ARE YOU?!
---> '''Kazuki:''' ''' (laughs bitterly) [[AmbiguouslyHuman I don’t know the answer to that myself.]]'''
---> '''Elliot:''' WHAT ARE YOU?!
---> '''Kazuki:''' ''' (laughs bitterly) [[AmbiguouslyHuman I don’t know the answer to that myself.]]'''
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* Kazuki banishing his fear trepidation and mowing down a row of black cobras after learning that his friends are in danger.danger.
! Chapter 9
* Kazuki surviving Elliot’s poison [[HorrifyingTheHorror which manages to make the cryptid lose his composure]].
* Kazuki and Conrad defeating Elliot with a CombinationAttack.
! Chapter 9
* Kazuki surviving Elliot’s poison [[HorrifyingTheHorror which manages to make the cryptid lose his composure]].
* Kazuki and Conrad defeating Elliot with a CombinationAttack.
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* Chapter 8 has two:
** Axel fighting Ember’s flaming fists with just werewolf-transformed ones as they try to avoid all the lightning strikes.
** Kazuki banishing his fear and mowing down a row of black cobras after learning that his friends are in danger.
** Axel fighting Ember’s flaming fists with just werewolf-transformed ones as they try to avoid all the lightning strikes.
** Kazuki banishing his fear and mowing down a row of black cobras after learning that his friends are in danger.
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! Chapter
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* Axel fighting Ember’s flaming fists with just werewolf-transformed ones as they try to avoid all the lightning strikes.
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*Chapter 8 has two:
** Axel fighting Ember’s flaming fists with just werewolf-transformed ones as they try to avoid all the lightning strikes.
** Kazuki banishing his fear and mowing down a row of black cobras after learning that his friends are in danger.
** Axel fighting Ember’s flaming fists with just werewolf-transformed ones as they try to avoid all the lightning strikes.
** Kazuki banishing his fear and mowing down a row of black cobras after learning that his friends are in danger.