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Please use the Magnificent Bastard cleanup thread to propose characters before writing their entries. Magnificent Bastard entries not approved by the thread will be deleted.
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* MagnificentBastard: Isaac Freemantle, in the sequel.
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Removed the "Sue" tropes, since these are now Flame Bait examples that should not be allowed; see "Flame Bait" page for more details.
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* HypeAversion: If it would be a 1300 page print book and has 350 reviews on FanFiction.net, it will suffer from this to some extent. See the fanfiction recommendations page for ''Literature/BattleRoyale'' for a few examples.
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* HypeAversion: If it would be a 1300 page print book and has 350 reviews on FanFiction.[=FanFiction=].net, it will suffer from this to some extent. See the fanfiction recommendations page for ''Literature/BattleRoyale'' for a few examples.
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* NightmareFuel: Damien, ''Good Lord.'' When he first starts out, it's made pretty obvious that he has serious mental health issues, with one character commenting he's like one of Columbine Gunmen. He starts the whole thing off playing the role of Kazuo, but by the end, he's progressed to some strange, unholy combination of [[HeathLedger Heath Ledger's]] [[Film/TheDarkKnight Joker]], {{Carrie}}, and ''[[LordOfTheRings Gollum.]]''
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* NightmareFuel: Damien, ''Good Lord.'' When he first starts out, it's made pretty obvious that he has serious mental health issues, with one character commenting he's like one of Columbine Gunmen. He starts the whole thing off playing the role of Kazuo, but by the end, he's progressed to some strange, unholy combination of [[HeathLedger Heath Ledger's]] Creator/HeathLedger's [[Film/TheDarkKnight Joker]], {{Carrie}}, Literature/{{Carrie}}, and ''[[LordOfTheRings Gollum.]]''''[[Literature/TheLordOfTheRings Gollum]].''
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* PuritySue: Katherine, with Dora coming dangerously close.
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* VillainSue: Katie, who has supernatural levels of physical capability. Amusingly, this is unintentionally lampshaded by Joel, who questions how the hell she can be so fast and so strong.
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* HarsherInHindsight: Bo mentions his desire to kill MichaelJackson.
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* HarsherInHindsight: Bo mentions his desire to kill MichaelJackson.Music/MichaelJackson.
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Unfortunate Implications require citations from secondary sources.
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* UnfortunateImplications: Naomi’s hatred of the guy she wants, Rudy, being with Lindsay is essentially “Lindsay is white, therefore she’s not good enough for him."
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character derailment is listed in Flame Bait
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* CharacterDerailment: A number of reviewers criticised the epilogue for doing this to [[spoiler:Ashley]], saying [[spoiler: her]] actions were too brutal for [[spoiler: her]].
** Anthony Marston himself has regretted writing that epilogue, so it seems those critics are right.
** Anthony Marston himself has regretted writing that epilogue, so it seems those critics are right.
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Cut CM entry for having no context; if anyone wants to re-add, discuss it here first.
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* CompleteMonster: Joel and Brynn.
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* HypeAversion: Let's face it, if If it would be a 1300 page print book and has 350 reviews on FanFiction.net, it will suffer from this to some extent. See the fanfiction recommendations page for ''Literature/BattleRoyale'' for a few examples.
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* VillainDecay: Joel gradually shifts from a competent - if [[CompleteMonster monstrous]] - villain to a dumb brute.
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* VillainDecay: Joel gradually shifts from a competent - if [[CompleteMonster monstrous]] monstrous - villain to a dumb brute.
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Not YMMV anymore. Moving.
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* WoobieDestroyerofWorlds: [[ColdSniper Marie]] and Damien could qualify. In the former, she has been slowly stripped of any emotion, personality, and innocence in her childhood to the point where she enters the Battle Royale with just a determination of survival so she can become the best ballerina. For the latter, he was a survivor of the first Battle Royale game and because of his injuries, was either jeered or shunned by the majority of his class.
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This isn\'t YMMV. Moving.
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* InvincibleVillain: Damien, at least in the middle third of the story. He’s more interesting before and after.
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* HypeAversion: Let's face it, if it would be a 1300 page print book and has 350 reviews on FanFiction.net, it will suffer from this to some extent. See the fanfiction recommendations page for BattleRoyale for a few examples.
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* HypeAversion: Let's face it, if it would be a 1300 page print book and has 350 reviews on FanFiction.net, it will suffer from this to some extent. See the fanfiction recommendations page for BattleRoyale ''Literature/BattleRoyale'' for a few examples.
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* WoobieDestroyerofWorlds: [[ColdSniper Marie]] and Damien could qualify. In the former, she has been slowly stripped of any emotion, personality, and innocence in her childhood to the point where she enters the Battle Royale with just a determination of survival so she can become the best ballerina. For the latter, he was a survivor of the first Battle Royale game and because of his injuries, was either jeered or shunned by the majority of his class.
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* NightmareFuel: Damien, ''Good Lord.'' When he first starts out, it's made pretty obvious that he has serious mental health issues, with one character commenting he's like one of Columbine Gunmen. He starts the whole thing off playing the role of Kazuo, but by the end, he's progressed to some strange, unholy combination of [[HeathLedger Heath Ledger's]] [[TheDarkKnightTrilogy Joker]], {{Carrie}}, and ''[[LordOfTheRings Gollum.]]''
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* NightmareFuel: Damien, ''Good Lord.'' When he first starts out, it's made pretty obvious that he has serious mental health issues, with one character commenting he's like one of Columbine Gunmen. He starts the whole thing off playing the role of Kazuo, but by the end, he's progressed to some strange, unholy combination of [[HeathLedger Heath Ledger's]] [[TheDarkKnightTrilogy [[Film/TheDarkKnight Joker]], {{Carrie}}, and ''[[LordOfTheRings Gollum.]]''
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* BoringInvincibleVillain: Damien, at least in the middle third of the story. He’s more interesting before and after.
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* BoringInvincibleVillain: InvincibleVillain: Damien, at least in the middle third of the story. He’s more interesting before and after.
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* NauseaFuel: Due to the level of violence, particularly towards the end, several of the deaths qualify. The epilogue [[BeyondTheImpossible somehow manages to combine this trope with]] ''[[BeyondTheImpossible Gory Discretion Shot]]'', which says a lot for the {{Gorn}} in that scene.
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* NauseaFuel: Due to the level of violence, particularly towards the end, several of the deaths qualify. The epilogue [[BeyondTheImpossible somehow manages to combine this trope with]] ''[[BeyondTheImpossible Gory with ''Gory Discretion Shot]]'', Shot'', which says a lot for the {{Gorn}} in that scene.
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* AccidentalNightmareFuel: Benny, just Benny. If you had nightmares about Donnie Darko’s Frank, then do not read the sections involving this depraved rabbit. You have been warned. This is eventually [[LampshadeHanging discussed]] by Ashley and Carter, so clearly Marston knew what he was doing.
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* HighOctaneNightmareFuel: Damien, ''Good Lord.'' When he first starts out, it's made pretty obvious that he has serious mental health issues, with one character commenting he's like one of Columbine Gunmen. He starts the whole thing off playing the role of Kazuo, but by the end, he's progressed to some strange, unholy combination of [[HeathLedger Heath Ledger's]] [[TheDarkKnightTrilogy Joker]], {{Carrie}}, and ''[[LordOfTheRings Gollum.]]''
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* NightmareFuel: Damien, ''Good Lord.'' When he first starts out, it's made pretty obvious that he has serious mental health issues, with one character commenting he's like one of Columbine Gunmen. He starts the whole thing off playing the role of Kazuo, but by the end, he's progressed to some strange, unholy combination of [[HeathLedger Heath Ledger's]] [[TheDarkKnightTrilogy Joker]], {{Carrie}}, and ''[[LordOfTheRings Gollum.]]''
** Benny, just Benny. If you had nightmares about Donnie Darko’s Frank, then do not read the sections involving this depraved rabbit. You have been warned. This is eventually [[LampshadeHanging discussed]] by Ashley and Carter.
** Benny, just Benny. If you had nightmares about Donnie Darko’s Frank, then do not read the sections involving this depraved rabbit. You have been warned. This is eventually [[LampshadeHanging discussed]] by Ashley and Carter.