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Uncanny Valley is IUEO now and the subjective version has been split; cleaning up misuse and ZCE in the process
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** RealismInducedHorror: While obviously Machina Revoltare is not real, and physics wouldn't allow it, living in a dictatorship where the leaders rule with an iron fist is something very real, and what's horrific, it's that the backstory of the comic, [[UsefulNotes/NationalReorganizationProcess happened]], without the fantastic elements.
* UncannyValley: A few of the complaints of the comic was due the art style and how off some of the proportions were, or that it wasn't manga or comic enough, the author took this criticism to heart, so he started to improve more and more with each new chapter. Only time will tell when if this is {{Averted}} or not.
** Around Track 7 things get much more smooth when it comes to proportions and designs.
* UncannyValley: A few of the complaints of the comic was due the art style and how off some of the proportions were, or that it wasn't manga or comic enough, the author took this criticism to heart, so he started to improve more and more with each new chapter. Only time will tell when if this is {{Averted}} or not.
** Around Track 7 things get much more smooth when it comes to proportions and designs.
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* UncannyValley: A few of the complaints of the comic was due the art style and how off some of the proportions were, or that it wasn't manga or comic enough, the author took this criticism to heart, so he started to improve more and more with each new chapter. Only time will tell when if this is {{Averted}} or not.
** Around Track 7 things get much more smooth when it comes to proportions and designs.
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* NightmareFuel: Cybernetics enhancements that produce energy? That doesn't seem to bad. [[spoiler: Cybernetic enhancements that are very volatile and can end up killing you with a light tap, so to say, and then turn you into a cyber zombie full of body horror?]], [[OhCrap oh no]].
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* NightmareFuel: Cybernetics enhancements that produce energy? That doesn't seem to too bad. [[spoiler: Cybernetic enhancements that are very volatile and can end up killing you with a light tap, so to say, and then turn you into a cyber zombie full of body horror?]], [[OhCrap oh no]].
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* GrowingTheBeard: General consensus is, after the prologue, the story becomes its own thing, with lore and more fleshed out characters.
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* UncannyValley: A few of the complaints of the comic was due the art style and how off some of the proportions were, or that it wasn't manga or comic enough, the author took this criticism to heart, so he started to improve more and more with each new chapter. Only time will tell when if this is {{Averted}} or not.
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* UncannyValley: A few of the complaints of the comic was due the art style and how off some of the proportions were, or that it wasn't manga or comic enough, the author took this criticism to heart, so he started to improve more and more with each new chapter. Only time will tell when if this is {{Averted}} or not.not.
** Around Track 7 things get much more smooth when it comes to proportions and designs.
** Around Track 7 things get much more smooth when it comes to proportions and designs.
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* GeniusBonus: The title of each chapter is tematically fitting to the events that're happening. Considering Fluhor is a music aficionado, it's understandable.
* NightmareFuel: Cybernetics enhancements that produce energy? That doesn't seem to bad. [[spoiler: Cybernetic enhancements that are very volatile and can end up killing you with a light tap, so to say, and then turn you into a cyber zombie full of body horror?]], [[OhCrap oh no]].
** RealismInducedHorror: While obviously Machina Revoltare is not real, and physics wouldn't allow it, living in a dictatorship where the leaders rule with an iron fist is something very real, and what's horrific, it's that the backstory of the comic, [[UsefulNotes/NationalReorganizationProcess happened]], without the fantastic elements.
* UncannyValley: A few of the complaints of the comic was due the art style and how off some of the proportions were, or that it wasn't manga or comic enough, the author took this criticism to heart, so he started to improve more and more with each new chapter. Only time will tell when if this is {{Averted}} or not.
* NightmareFuel: Cybernetics enhancements that produce energy? That doesn't seem to bad. [[spoiler: Cybernetic enhancements that are very volatile and can end up killing you with a light tap, so to say, and then turn you into a cyber zombie full of body horror?]], [[OhCrap oh no]].
** RealismInducedHorror: While obviously Machina Revoltare is not real, and physics wouldn't allow it, living in a dictatorship where the leaders rule with an iron fist is something very real, and what's horrific, it's that the backstory of the comic, [[UsefulNotes/NationalReorganizationProcess happened]], without the fantastic elements.
* UncannyValley: A few of the complaints of the comic was due the art style and how off some of the proportions were, or that it wasn't manga or comic enough, the author took this criticism to heart, so he started to improve more and more with each new chapter. Only time will tell when if this is {{Averted}} or not.
