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'''Instead:''' He decides to renounce to his World Noble role and title, to live among the commoners. He does it without realizing that only the Marines' influence protected him and his family, and once he brings 'self down to commoner status, the family is shunned and persecuted. His DelicateAndSickly wife passes out shortly after, he and his sons are almost tortured to death by angry mobs, and his eldest son [[spoiler: Doflamingo]] ([[RoyalBrat who's already not]] [[CreepyChild very well in the head]]) resents Homing so deeply for the [[RichesToRags family's poverty]] and [[EvenBadMenLoveTheirMamas blames him so much for the death of his mother]] that he [[SelfMadeOrphan ends up murdering him.]]\\
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'''Instead:''' He decides to renounce to his World Noble role and title, to live among the commoners. He does it without realizing that only the Marines' influence protected him and his family, and once he brings 'self himself down to commoner status, the family is shunned and persecuted. His DelicateAndSickly wife passes out shortly after, he and his sons are almost tortured to death by angry mobs, and his eldest son [[spoiler: Doflamingo]] ([[RoyalBrat who's already not]] [[CreepyChild very well in the head]]) resents Homing so deeply for the [[RichesToRags family's poverty]] and [[EvenBadMenLoveTheirMamas blames him so much for the death of his mother]] that he [[SelfMadeOrphan ends up murdering him.]]\\
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'''You'd Expect:''' For Homing to use his influence as a World Noble to do philantropic world, or at very least to cut deals with the Marines to try making things better for others. The World Nobles are really, REALLY hated due to their assholery, so Homing's good deeds would start making people change their view of them or at least consider him as the exception to the rule.\\
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'''You'd Expect:''' For Homing to use his influence as a World Noble to do philantropic world, do philanthropic work, or at very least to cut deals with the Marines to try making things better for others. The World Nobles are really, REALLY hated due to their assholery, so Homing's good deeds would start making people change their view of them or at least consider him as the exception to the rule.\\
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'''Result:''' Shanks [[BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor finally decides to take him seriously]] in order to prevent the future from coming to pass. He fires Divine Departure at Kid (and Killer) who dived in to protect him, as both get knocked out. His subordinates, finally getting the message, try to bargain with the Red Hair Pirates about the Road Poneglyphs they got from Wano, but Shanks, pissed off at Kid, orders Dorry and Brogy to attack Victoria Punk, destroying it and sending the Kid Pirates to the sea.
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'''Result:''' Shanks [[BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor finally decides to take him seriously]] in order to prevent the future from coming to pass. He fires Divine Departure at Kid (and Killer) who dived in to protect him, as both get knocked out. His subordinates, finally getting the message, try to bargain with the Red Hair Pirates about the Road Poneglyphs they got from Wano, but Shanks, pissed off at Kid, orders Dorry and Brogy to attack Victoria Punk, destroying it and sending the Kid Pirates to the bottom of the sea.
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Luffy didn't kill Arlong.
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'''The Result''': This leads to his downfall. When [[TearJerker Luffy sees Nami crying and begging him for help]] because her neighbors and friends will die in her name, [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments he gives her his hat for safekeeping]], and challenges Arlong to fight for hurting Nami's feelings. He's not happy and gives one heck of a fight. When Arlong tries to bargain with Nami to surrender, she remembers he's dishonorable and says she'd rather die fighting than trust him again. Oh, and Luffy not only destroys the map room where Nami spent her childhood but also ensures Arlong is dead and stays that way.
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'''The Result''': This leads to his downfall. When [[TearJerker Luffy sees Nami crying and begging him for help]] because her neighbors and friends will die in her name, [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments he gives her his hat for safekeeping]], and challenges Arlong to fight for hurting Nami's feelings. He's not happy and gives one heck of a fight. When Arlong tries to bargain with Nami to surrender, she remembers he's dishonorable and says she'd rather die fighting than trust him again. Oh, and Luffy not only destroys the map room where Nami spent her childhood but also ensures Arlong is dead and stays that way.defeated.
