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Bishonen is Definition-Only fan-speak term used only for Japanese/East-Asian media. No examples allowed. Per TRS. Not Asian.
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* NoYay: In-universe; thanks to TheMasquerade, Jeff looks like a {{Bishonen}} to Korbyn's friend Camille. However, as the Seer, Korbyn ''can't'' see this, so all she hears is her friend gushing over how cute the creepy murderer with the GlasgowGrin looks. When Camille thinks Korbyn has something going on with him, Korbyn is repulsed while Jeff laughs hysterically at the ridiculous notion.
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* NoYay: In-universe; thanks to TheMasquerade, Jeff looks like a {{Bishonen}} PrettyBoy to Korbyn's friend Camille. However, as the Seer, Korbyn ''can't'' see this, so all she hears is her friend gushing over how cute the creepy murderer with the GlasgowGrin looks. When Camille thinks Korbyn has something going on with him, Korbyn is repulsed while Jeff laughs hysterically at the ridiculous notion.
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* BadassBaritone: Slenderman sounds intimidatingly deep in the dubbed episodes, but only when he's speaking through Masky. With Hoodie, he sounds... weird. Ironically, Masky's normal voice is much softer and lighter.
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* {{Telepathy}}: An operator can project thoughts to a proxy and speak through them, with the proxy's actions mimicking their boss while they're controlled. This is how Slender Man communicates, and it's implied that he prefers talking through Masky instead of Hoodie because [[BadassBaritone his voice is more intimidating through the former]].
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* {{Telepathy}}: An operator can project thoughts to a proxy and speak through them, with the proxy's actions mimicking their boss while they're controlled. This is how Slender Man communicates, and it's implied that he prefers talking through Masky instead of Hoodie because [[BadassBaritone his voice is more intimidating through the former]].former.
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* NoYay: In-universe; thanks to TheMasquerade, Jeff looks like a {{Bishonen}} to Korbyn's friend Camille. However, as the Seer, Korbyn ''can't'' see this, so all she hears is her friend gushing over how cute the creepy murderer with the GlasgowGrin looks. When Camille thinks Korbyn has something going on with him, Korbyn is repulsed while Jeff laughs hysterically at the ridiculous notion.
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* NoYay: In-universe; thanks to TheMasquerade, Jeff looks like a a {{Bishonen}} to Korbyn's friend Camille. However, as the Seer, Korbyn ''can't'' see this, so all she hears is her friend gushing over how cute the creepy murderer with the GlasgowGrin looks. When Camille thinks Korbyn has something going on with him, Korbyn is repulsed while Jeff laughs hysterically at the ridiculous notion.
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* PlotTriggeringBook: Korbyn receives an old book from her grandma Fala after she dies, and opening it unlocks her destiny as the "Seer." Not long after she does so, she gains deadly allies who protect her from Zalgo's minions, who seek to kidnap her. Inside the book is a key and [[DeadManWriting Fala's letter]], written to explain Korbyn's new duty and guide her on where to go to [[LegacyOfTheChosen take Fala's place as the new Seer]].
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This comic is significant since it is half of the reason that, for better or worse, Hoodie and Masky from ''WebVideo/MarbleHornets'' are associated with creepypasta (the other half being Ticci-Toby).
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This comic is significant since it is half of the reason that, for better or worse, Hoodie and Masky from ''WebVideo/MarbleHornets'' are associated with creepypasta (the other half being Ticci-Toby).
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''[[http://theseercomic.weebly.com/ The Seer]]'' is a discontinued {{Creepypasta}} comic by Creator/MadameMacabre, begun October 9th 2012 and updating every 1-2 weeks before being abandoned in 2014. It stars Ms. Korbyn Jumping Eagle, a girl who has been seeing strange things all her life. After her grandmother dies, she receives a mysterious old book which, upon opening, fully awakens her to the world of spirits and monsters around her. This places her into a new role as "[[TheChosenOne the Seer]]", the bridge between the Under and Over Realms; now she must learn to work with her [[CreepyPasta strange new allies]] and escape the monsters sent after her by WebOriginal/{{Zalgo}} - [[WakeUpGoToSchoolSaveTheWorld all while maintaining her life as a college student.]]
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''[[http://theseercomic.weebly.com/ The Seer]]'' is a discontinued {{Creepypasta}} comic by Creator/MadameMacabre, Music/MadameMacabre, begun October 9th 2012 and updating every 1-2 weeks before being abandoned in 2014. It stars Ms. Korbyn Jumping Eagle, a girl who has been seeing strange things all her life. After her grandmother dies, she receives a mysterious old book which, upon opening, fully awakens her to the world of spirits and monsters around her. This places her into a new role as "[[TheChosenOne the Seer]]", the bridge between the Under and Over Realms; now she must learn to work with her [[CreepyPasta strange new allies]] and escape the monsters sent after her by WebOriginal/{{Zalgo}} - [[WakeUpGoToSchoolSaveTheWorld all while maintaining her life as a college student.]]
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Now a disambig. (Pity, I was going to think of adding more context later lol)
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* DarkSkinnedRedhead: Korbyn has tan skin and short red hair.
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Hidden In Plain Sight is for hiding while being plainly visible, magical guises probably don't count now that I think about it. And despite the title, Seer better fits True Sight than Seers (who can see into different points of time and far off places)
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* HiddenInPlainSight: Particularly powerful Under Realm beings can project a disguise while in the Over Realm (Earth) that makes them appear as normal humans, though it only extends to their bodies and not their accessories or clothes.
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** Played with for the creepypastas. Sufficiently powerful creatures can project a [[HiddenInPlainSight disguise that makes them appear as humans]] while in the Over Realm (however, it only extends to their bodies). Only other Under Realm creatures and the Seer can see just their true form.
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** Played with for the creepypastas. Sufficiently powerful creatures can project a [[HiddenInPlainSight disguise that makes them appear as humans]] humans while in the Over Realm (however, it only extends to their bodies). Only other Under Realm creatures and the Seer can see just their true form.
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* LegacyOfTheChosen: Korbyn's ancestors have been producing {{Seers}} for millenia, one for each generation and only one awakened at a time. Her last predecessor was her grandmother Fala, who assumed the ability in her line was dead after Korbyn's mother failed to inherit it, but left a book to help the next Seer in case she was wrong. Slender Man speculates that in the case it did die in the Jumping Eagle line, the ability would return to the Locklear line, which nobody wants since they haven't had offspring in ages and the one candidate from them is apparently an unpleasant individual who has been a Seer before.
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* LegacyOfTheChosen: Korbyn's ancestors have been producing {{Seers}} Seers for millenia, one for each generation and only one awakened at a time. Her last predecessor was her grandmother Fala, who assumed the ability in her line was dead after Korbyn's mother failed to inherit it, but left a book to help the next Seer in case she was wrong. Slender Man speculates that in the case it did die in the Jumping Eagle line, the ability would return to the Locklear line, which nobody wants since they haven't had offspring in ages and the one candidate from them is apparently an unpleasant individual who has been a Seer before.
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* TheMasquerade: Some creatures of the Under Realm can mask their true form to remain HiddenInPlainSight in the Over Realm. Taking medical care from human hospitals is forbidden as it risks exposing their true nature, which is where the Seer's importance as TheMedic comes into play.
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* TheMasquerade: Some creatures of the Under Realm can mask their true form to remain HiddenInPlainSight appear as humans in the Over Realm. Taking medical care from human hospitals is forbidden as it risks exposing their true nature, which is where the Seer's importance as TheMedic comes into play.
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* {{Seers}}: As the title implies, Korbyn can see things that humans can't, particularly beings not from the Over Realm (Earth). She's been seeing odd creatures her whole life and coped well with it, but her destiny to be the bridge between both Over Realm and Under Realm only comes to light once she opens her grandmother's book.
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* TrueSight: The titular Seer, Korbyn, can [[InvisibleToNormals see things that humans can't]], including the true form of the creepypasta monsters. The ability is hereditary and she's seen odd creatures her whole life, but [[LegacyOfTheChosen opening her grandmother's book opens her to the destiny of the Seer]], to be the bridge between both the visible Over Realm and the unseen Under Realm.
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* HiddenInPlainSight: Particularly powerful Under Realm beings can project a disguise while in the Over Realm (Earth) that makes them appear as normal humans, though it only extends to their bodies and not their accessories or clothes.
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* NoYay: In-universe; thanks to TheMasquerade, Jeff looks like a {{Bishonen}} to Korbyn's friend Camille. However, as the Seer, Korbyn ''can't'' see this, so all she hears is her friend gushing over how cute the creepy murderer with the GlasgowGrin looks. When Camille thinks Korbyn has something going on with him, Korbyn is repulsed while Jeff laughs hysterically at the ridiculous notion.
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* NoYay: In-universe; thanks to TheMasquerade, Jeff looks like a {{Bishonen}} to Korbyn's friend Camille. However, as the Seer, Korbyn ''can't'' see this, so all she hears is her friend gushing over how cute the creepy murderer with the GlasgowGrin looks. When Camille thinks Korbyn has something going on with him, Korbyn is repulsed while Jeff laughs hysterically at the ridiculous notion.
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* SplitScreenReaction: When Slender Man brings up the Locklears and says he'd be damned if "he" were to be the Seer again, Korbyn asks who this "he" is. Masky, Slender Man and Scarecrow's disturbed reactions appear in panels next to each another. [[MoodWhiplash Then Jeff walks in with a sandwich]].
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* SplitScreenReaction: When Slender Man brings up the Locklears and says he'd be damned if "he" were to be the Seer again, Korbyn asks who this "he" is. Masky, Slender Man and Scarecrow's disturbed reactions appear in panels next to each one another. [[MoodWhiplash Then Jeff walks in with a sandwich]].
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Wording review + I don't think Scarecrow is Obliviously Evil. She doesn't like to admit that killing the girl exhilarated her, and the feeling didn't last because she felt remorse.
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* AffablyEvil: Slender Man, who acts as a mostly BenevolentBoss to his murderous subordinates and is polite to Korbyn.
* AffectionateNickname: Korbyn's friend Camille endearingly calls her "Korby" when she assumes her to be in a relationship with Jeff, much to both of their disbelief.
* AffectionateNickname: Korbyn's friend Camille endearingly calls her "Korby" when she assumes her to be in a relationship with Jeff, much to both of their disbelief.
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* AffablyEvil: Slender Man, who acts as a mostly BenevolentBoss TeamDad to his murderous subordinates and is polite to Korbyn.
* AffectionateNickname: Korbyn's friend Camille endearingly calls her "Korby" when she assumes her to be in a relationship with Jeff, much toboth the disbelief of their disbelief.them both.
* AffectionateNickname: Korbyn's friend Camille endearingly calls her "Korby" when she assumes her to be in a relationship with Jeff, much to
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* BlueAndOrangeMorality: When Scarecrow first came to life, she murdered her crush's girlfriend and then genuinely didn't understand why he was upset.
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* BlueAndOrangeMorality: Played with. When Scarecrow first came to life, she murdered her crush's girlfriend and then genuinely didn't understand why he was upset.upset. In Scarecrow's perspective, she just did what she had to do to get him back. However, she says that the exhilaration she felt from the kill was soon replaced with what she later learned was remorse.
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* ContinuityNod: Jeff is ticked off when Scarecrow says the word "ugly" and throws a knife at her neck in retaliation, saying "You shut your fuckin mouth I'll show you ugly!". In his original story, he took great emphasis on considering his changed twisted self "beautiful" and killed his mother for falsely flattering him to get her husband to shoot their son.
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* ContinuityNod: Jeff is ticked off when Scarecrow says the word "ugly" and throws a knife at her neck in retaliation, saying "You shut your fuckin fuckin' mouth I'll show you ugly!". In his original story, he took great emphasis on considering his changed twisted self "beautiful" and killed his mother for falsely flattering him to get her husband to shoot their son.
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* ExhaustedEyebags: Thanks to being suddenly introduced to her Seer destiny by the main cast appearing in her room in the dead of night, Korbyn rushes to class the next morning with eyebags. Camille can see how weary she is and asks if everything's alright, and Korbyn responds that she just needs to catch up on sleep.
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* ExhaustedEyebags: Thanks to being suddenly introduced to her Seer destiny by the strangers (the main cast cast) appearing in her room in the dead of at night, Korbyn rushes to class the next morning with eyebags. Camille can see how weary she is and asks if everything's alright, and Korbyn responds that she just needs to catch up on sleep.
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* InsultBackfire: When Korbyn calls Jeff a monster, he sarcastically replies "Aw shucks, you're gonna make me blush."
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* InsultBackfire: Played with. When Korbyn calls Jeff a monster, he sarcastically replies "Aw shucks, you're gonna make me blush."blush" before telling her to cut the attitude because he just saved her from Zalgo's minion (by killing him, but still).
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* LegacyOfTheChosen: Korbyn's ancestors have been producing {{Seers}} for millenia, one for each generation and only one awakened at a time. Her last predecessor was her grandmother Fala, who assumed the ability in her line was dead after Korbyn's mother failed to inherit it, but left a book to help the next Seer in case she was wrong. Slender Man speculates that in the case it did die in the Jumping Eagle line, the ability would return to the Locklear line, which nobody wants since they haven't had offspring in ages and the one candidate is apparently an unpleasant individual who has been a Seer before.
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* LegacyOfTheChosen: Korbyn's ancestors have been producing {{Seers}} for millenia, one for each generation and only one awakened at a time. Her last predecessor was her grandmother Fala, who assumed the ability in her line was dead after Korbyn's mother failed to inherit it, but left a book to help the next Seer in case she was wrong. Slender Man speculates that in the case it did die in the Jumping Eagle line, the ability would return to the Locklear line, which nobody wants since they haven't had offspring in ages and the one candidate from them is apparently an unpleasant individual who has been a Seer before.
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* NoYay: In-universe; thanks to TheMasquerade, Jeff looks like a {{Bishonen}} to Korbyn's friend Camille. However, as the Seer, Korbyn ''can't'' see this, so all she hears is her friend gushing over how cute the creepy murderer with the GlasgowGrin looks. When Camille thinks Korbyn has something going on with him, Korbyn is repulsed while Jeff laughs hysterically at the ridiculous notion.
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* NoYay: In-universe; thanks to TheMasquerade, Jeff looks like a {{Bishonen}} to Korbyn's friend Camille. However, as the Seer, Korbyn ''can't'' see this, so all she hears is her friend gushing over how cute the creepy murderer with the GlasgowGrin looks. When Camille thinks Korbyn has something going on with him, Korbyn is repulsed while Jeff laughs hysterically at the ridiculous notion.
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* ObliviouslyEvil: When she first came to life, Scarecrow genuinely had no idea that killing her crush's girlfriend was a bad thing; from her perspective, all she was doing was getting her best friend back.
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* OutOfCharacterMoment: When Korbyn tears up over Fala's posthumous letter to her, Jeff says sorry for her grandmother's death, though he excuses himself and walks off since he's not good with condolences. [[LampshadeHanging Korbyn says that was pleasantly out of character for him]], and Masky says that Jeff tends to get awkward about familial death, which likely has to do with him [[SelfMadeOrphan murdering his own family in the past]].
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* OutOfCharacterMoment: When Korbyn tears up over [[DeadManWriting Fala's posthumous letter letter]] to her, Jeff says sorry for her grandmother's death, though he excuses himself and walks off since he's not good with condolences. [[LampshadeHanging Korbyn says that was pleasantly out of character for him]], and Masky says responds that Jeff tends to get awkward about familial death, which likely has to do with him [[SelfMadeOrphan murdering his own family in the past]].
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* TheSnackIsMoreInteresting: Played with. The mention of Locklear's name unsettles the others. Then Jeff walks in munching on a sandwich and says, "What I miss?" Scarecrow is angry that Jeff isn't taking the conversation seriously.
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* TheSnackIsMoreInteresting: Played with. The mention of Locklear's name the Locklears unsettles the others. Then Jeff walks in munching on a sandwich and says, "What I miss?" Scarecrow is angry that Jeff isn't taking the conversation seriously.
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* SplitScreenReaction: When Slender Man brings up the Locklears and says he'd be damned if "he" were to be the Seer again, Korbyn asks "...He?" Masky, Slender Man and Scarecrow's disturbed reactions appear in panels next to one another. [[MoodWhiplash Then Jeff walks in with a sandwich]].
* TeamDad: Slender Man, of all individuals, is an orderly leader to the main group and sometimes refers to them with "child".
* TeamDad: Slender Man, of all individuals, is an orderly leader to the main group and sometimes refers to them with "child".
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* SplitScreenReaction: When Slender Man brings up the Locklears and says he'd be damned if "he" were to be the Seer again, Korbyn asks "...He?" who this "he" is. Masky, Slender Man and Scarecrow's disturbed reactions appear in panels next to one each another. [[MoodWhiplash Then Jeff walks in with a sandwich]].
* TeamDad: Slender Man, of all individuals, is an orderly leader to the main group andsometimes occasionally refers to some of them with "child"."child" (if not by name).
* TeamDad: Slender Man, of all individuals, is an orderly leader to the main group and
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* {{Telepathy}}: An operator may project thoughts to a proxy and speak through them, with the proxy's actions mimicking their boss while they're controlled. This is how Slender Man communicates, and it's implied that he prefers talking through Masky instead of Hoodie because [[BadassBaritone his voice is more intimidating through the former]].
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* {{Telepathy}}: An operator may can project thoughts to a proxy and speak through them, with the proxy's actions mimicking their boss while they're controlled. This is how Slender Man communicates, and it's implied that he prefers talking through Masky instead of Hoodie because [[BadassBaritone his voice is more intimidating through the former]].
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** One of Slender Man's abilities. At one point, he appears randomly behind Korbyn, who freaks out and tells him to stop doing that.
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** One of Slender Man's abilities. At one point, he [[OffscreenTeleportation appears randomly behind Korbyn, Korbyn]], who freaks out and tells him to stop doing that.
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* ThemeTune: [[https://youtu.be/09VMKwvAlNs "Blood Right"]], made by Madame Macabre as a tribute to her own series, and used as intro music for the rebooted dubs.
* TokenEvilTeammate: Obviously "evil" is [[BlackAndGrayMorality a relative term]] here, but Jeff is probably the most AxCrazy of Korbyn's allies.
* TokenEvilTeammate: Obviously "evil" is [[BlackAndGrayMorality a relative term]] here, but Jeff is probably the most AxCrazy of Korbyn's allies.
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* ThemeTune: [[https://youtu.be/09VMKwvAlNs "Blood Right"]], made by Madame Macabre as a tribute to tribute/theme for her own series, and used as intro music for the rebooted dubs.
* TokenEvilTeammate: Obviously "evil" is [[BlackAndGrayMorality a relative term]] here, but Jeff is probably the most AxCrazy (and jerkish) of Korbyn's allies.
* TokenEvilTeammate: Obviously "evil" is [[BlackAndGrayMorality a relative term]] here, but Jeff is probably the most AxCrazy (and jerkish) of Korbyn's allies.
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Adding examples :D
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* AffablyEvil: Slender Man, who (so far) is a rather BenevolentBoss to his murderous subordinates and polite to Korbyn.
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* AerithAndBob: Korbyn Jumping Eagle, which (in the earlier version) she even [[LampshadeHanging points out how odd it may sound]] (although her name is because she's half Sioux). She later becomes company of killers with more typical names like [[TomTheDarkLord Jeff]].
* AffablyEvil: Slender Man, who(so far) is acts as a rather mostly BenevolentBoss to his murderous subordinates and is polite to Korbyn.Korbyn.
* AffectionateNickname: Korbyn's friend Camille endearingly calls her "Korby" when she assumes her to be in a relationship with Jeff, much to both of their disbelief.
--> '''Camille''': Do you two got a thing or something? Aw, Korby, that's adorable! Why didn't you tell me?
* AffablyEvil: Slender Man, who
* AffectionateNickname: Korbyn's friend Camille endearingly calls her "Korby" when she assumes her to be in a relationship with Jeff, much to both of their disbelief.
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* BadassBaritone: Slenderman sounds deep in the dubbed episodes, but only when he's speaking through Masky. With Hoodie, he sounds... weird.
* BarbarianLonghair: Jeff, who has a long-ass mane and is easily the most AxeCrazy of Korbyn's allies, not to mention the only one to actually show his canon homicidal tendencies in-story.
* BarbarianLonghair: Jeff, who has a long-ass mane and is easily the most AxeCrazy of Korbyn's allies, not to mention the only one to actually show his canon homicidal tendencies in-story.
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* BadassBaritone: Slenderman sounds intimidatingly deep in the dubbed episodes, but only when he's speaking through Masky. With Hoodie, he sounds... weird.
weird. Ironically, Masky's normal voice is much softer and lighter.
* BarbarianLonghair: Jeff, who has a long-ass mane and is easily the most AxeCrazy of Korbyn'sallies, not to mention the only one to actually show his allies. His canon homicidal tendencies in-story.in-story are the most apparent.
* BarbarianLonghair: Jeff, who has a long-ass mane and is easily the most AxeCrazy of Korbyn's
* BlackAndGrayMorality: Zalgo manipulates others into killing and wants to hurt Korbyn. Those protecting her, on the other hand, being Slenderman and his subordinates, are killers but adhere to a council and are more pleasant to her. However, Masky warns Korbyn to not let her guard down around them. In the reboot, when Jeff introduces himself and tells Korbyn that he's under orders to protect her, she asks if his boss is good, and Jeff replies that "good" may not be the best adjective to describe him.
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* BlackAndGrayMorality: On one hand, Slenderman and his subordinates are killers but adhere to a council and keep Korbyn out of harm's way, yet Masky warns Korbyn to not let her guard down around them. On the other hand, Zalgo manipulates others into killing and, as Jeff puts it, seeks to condemn Korbyn to a fate worse than death.
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* BlackAndGrayMorality: On one hand, Slenderman and his subordinates are killers but adhere to a council and keep Korbyn out of harm's way, yet Masky warns Korbyn to not let her guard down around them. On the other hand, Zalgo manipulates others into killing and, as BladeReflection: Jeff puts it, seeks reveals himself to condemn Korbyn Zalgo's minion who invades Korbyn's room to a fate worse than death.kidnap her, his SlasherSmile reflecting on his knife as he holds it up to kill him.
* CallBack: The gist of Jeff's past (his backstory from his source) is explained to Korbyn by Masky, that he was a child when he lost his family [[SelfMadeOrphan because he murdered them]]. Masky brings this up to warn Korbyn against ever letting their guard down around them, as they're still [[BlackAndGrayMorality dangerous killers even if they're protecting her from a greater threat]].
* ContinuityNod: Jeff is ticked off when Scarecrow says the word "ugly" and throws a knife at her neck in retaliation, saying "You shut your fuckin mouth I'll show you ugly!". In his original story, he took great emphasis on considering his changed twisted self "beautiful" and killed his mother for falsely flattering him to get her husband to shoot their son.
* ContinuityNod: Jeff is ticked off when Scarecrow says the word "ugly" and throws a knife at her neck in retaliation, saying "You shut your fuckin mouth I'll show you ugly!". In his original story, he took great emphasis on considering his changed twisted self "beautiful" and killed his mother for falsely flattering him to get her husband to shoot their son.
* DeadGuyOnDisplay: After killing the farmboy's girlfriend, Scarecrow hangs her corpse up on her old stake, with her guts spilling from her torso.
* DeadManWriting: Among the belongings that Fala left for her granddaughter Korbyn are a book with a letter and a key inside. The letter says that if Korbyn is reading this, Zalgo most likely had Fala murdered. In her writing, she explains how the book is meant to guide Korbyn to her role as the new Seer, and she instructs to use the key to immediately obtain the contents in a safety deposit box before Zalgo does, and to trust no one except Slender Man.
* DeadManWriting: Among the belongings that Fala left for her granddaughter Korbyn are a book with a letter and a key inside. The letter says that if Korbyn is reading this, Zalgo most likely had Fala murdered. In her writing, she explains how the book is meant to guide Korbyn to her role as the new Seer, and she instructs to use the key to immediately obtain the contents in a safety deposit box before Zalgo does, and to trust no one except Slender Man.
* DetachmentCombat: Played with. Jeff cuts off Scarecrow's arm, but the detached limb grabs him when he charges at her again, giving Scarecrow the opportunity to swing her scythe at Jeff's back.
* DualWielding: Jeff wields one extra knife as he fights against Scarecrow.
* DualWielding: Jeff wields one extra knife as he fights against Scarecrow.
* ExhaustedEyebags: Thanks to being suddenly introduced to her Seer destiny by the main cast appearing in her room in the dead of night, Korbyn rushes to class the next morning with eyebags. Camille can see how weary she is and asks if everything's alright, and Korbyn responds that she just needs to catch up on sleep.
* ExpressiveMask: Masky can smile or frown with his mask, and the black eye holes move with DisembodiedEyebrows to express concern, anger, or more.
* FacePalm: While speaking through Masky to Korbyn, there is a point where Slender Man and Masky simultaneously put a hand to their forehead in disbelief. In the original wording, he facepalms when Korbyn talks back in a manner which says that "temper runs in the family". In the reboot, he facepalms when he realises that Fala hasn't trained Korbyn for the Seer duty.
* ExpressiveMask: Masky can smile or frown with his mask, and the black eye holes move with DisembodiedEyebrows to express concern, anger, or more.
* FacePalm: While speaking through Masky to Korbyn, there is a point where Slender Man and Masky simultaneously put a hand to their forehead in disbelief. In the original wording, he facepalms when Korbyn talks back in a manner which says that "temper runs in the family". In the reboot, he facepalms when he realises that Fala hasn't trained Korbyn for the Seer duty.
* GlowingEyes: Korbyn's eyes glow light blue when she opens her deceased grandmother's book, which awakens her destiny as the Seer.
* GoryDiscretionShot: The moment when Jeff murders Zalgo's minion in Korbyn's room is concealed with a red blood splatter over a black backdrop.
* GoryDiscretionShot: The moment when Jeff murders Zalgo's minion in Korbyn's room is concealed with a red blood splatter over a black backdrop.
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** Poor Korbyn never asked for her life as she knew it to be taken so suddenly from her, but ultimately accepts the Seer duty obligated upon her since she can't live with the thought of others getting hurt because of her.
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** Poor Korbyn never asked for her life as she knew it to be taken so suddenly from her, but ultimately accepts the important Seer duty obligated upon her since she can't live with the thought of others getting hurt because of her.
* InsultBackfire: When Korbyn calls Jeff a monster, he sarcastically replies "Aw shucks, you're gonna make me blush."
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** Played with for the creepypastas. Sufficiently powerful creatures can project a [[HiddenInPlainSight disguise that makes them appear as humans]] while in the Over Realm (however, it only extends to their bodies). Only other Under Realm creatures and the Seer can see their true form.
* KillItWithFire: After Jeff realizes that knives won't work on Scarecrow, he decides to light her on fire - although Korbyn stops him.
* LooksLikeCesare: Jeff has extremely pale skin, {{creepy shadowed undereyes}} and unkempt black hair. His human look is a downplayed version as his skin is a more natural color and has InnocentBlueEyes, but maintaining his wild hair and shaded undereyes.
* {{Masquerade}}: Some creatures of the Under World can mask their true form to remain HiddenInPlainSight in the Over World. Taking medical care from human hospitals is forbidden as it risks exposing their true nature, which is where the Seer's importance as TheMedic comes into play.
* KillItWithFire: After Jeff realizes that knives won't work on Scarecrow, he decides to light her on fire - although Korbyn stops him.
* LooksLikeCesare: Jeff has extremely pale skin, {{creepy shadowed undereyes}} and unkempt black hair. His human look is a downplayed version as his skin is a more natural color and has InnocentBlueEyes, but maintaining his wild hair and shaded undereyes.
* {{Masquerade}}: Some creatures of the Under World can mask their true form to remain HiddenInPlainSight in the Over World. Taking medical care from human hospitals is forbidden as it risks exposing their true nature, which is where the Seer's importance as TheMedic comes into play.
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** Played with for the creepypastas. Sufficiently powerful creatures can project a [[HiddenInPlainSight disguise that makes them appear as humans]] while in the Over Realm (however, it only extends to their bodies). Only other Under Realm creatures and the Seer can see just their true form.
* {{Jerkass}}: Jeff is really rude, which has been pointed out by many, even Scarecrow before she joins their side. He also [[MomentKiller ruins many emotional or serious moments]] with sarcasm, insults, or being otherwise inconsiderate.
--> '''Korbyn''': (''to Jeff'') Sounds like your skill set includes being a total prick.
* KillItWithFire: After Jeff realizes that knives won't work on Scarecrow, he decides to light her on fire - although Korbyn stopshim.
him to give her a chance to explain herself.
* LegacyOfTheChosen: Korbyn's ancestors have been producing {{Seers}} for millenia, one for each generation and only one awakened at a time. Her last predecessor was her grandmother Fala, who assumed the ability in her line was dead after Korbyn's mother failed to inherit it, but left a book to help the next Seer in case she was wrong. Slender Man speculates that in the case it did die in the Jumping Eagle line, the ability would return to the Locklear line, which nobody wants since they haven't had offspring in ages and the one candidate is apparently an unpleasant individual who has been a Seer before.
* LiteralDisarming: Jeff throws a knife right through Scarecrow's left arm, cutting it clean off. [[WhoNeedsTheirWholeBody However, she can fight just as fine with only the other arm]].
* LooksLikeCesare: Jeff has extremely pale skin, {{creepy shadowed undereyes}} and unkempt black hair. His human look is a downplayed version as his skin is a morenatural naturally light color and has InnocentBlueEyes, but maintaining his wild hair and shaded undereyes.
*{{Masquerade}}: MagicalAccessory: Jeff puts a talisman ring on Korbyn's finger and tells her to not take it off. The rebooted version explains its protective magic further, it cloaks the energy signature given off of Korbyn's awakening to conceal her position from Zalgo's minions.
* TheMasquerade: Some creatures of the UnderWorld Realm can mask their true form to remain HiddenInPlainSight in the Over World.Realm. Taking medical care from human hospitals is forbidden as it risks exposing their true nature, which is where the Seer's importance as TheMedic comes into play.
* {{Jerkass}}: Jeff is really rude, which has been pointed out by many, even Scarecrow before she joins their side. He also [[MomentKiller ruins many emotional or serious moments]] with sarcasm, insults, or being otherwise inconsiderate.
--> '''Korbyn''': (''to Jeff'') Sounds like your skill set includes being a total prick.
* KillItWithFire: After Jeff realizes that knives won't work on Scarecrow, he decides to light her on fire - although Korbyn stops
* LegacyOfTheChosen: Korbyn's ancestors have been producing {{Seers}} for millenia, one for each generation and only one awakened at a time. Her last predecessor was her grandmother Fala, who assumed the ability in her line was dead after Korbyn's mother failed to inherit it, but left a book to help the next Seer in case she was wrong. Slender Man speculates that in the case it did die in the Jumping Eagle line, the ability would return to the Locklear line, which nobody wants since they haven't had offspring in ages and the one candidate is apparently an unpleasant individual who has been a Seer before.
* LiteralDisarming: Jeff throws a knife right through Scarecrow's left arm, cutting it clean off. [[WhoNeedsTheirWholeBody However, she can fight just as fine with only the other arm]].
* LooksLikeCesare: Jeff has extremely pale skin, {{creepy shadowed undereyes}} and unkempt black hair. His human look is a downplayed version as his skin is a more
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* TheMasquerade: Some creatures of the Under
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* NoYay: In-universe; thanks to TheMasquerade, Jeff looks like a {{Bishonen}} to Korbyn's friend Camille. However, as the Seer, Korbyn ''can't'' see this, so all she hears is her friend gushing over how cute the creepy murderer with the GlasgowGrin looks. When Camille thinks Korbyn has something going on with him, Korbyn is repulsed while Jeff laughs hysterically at the ridiculous notion.
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* NoYay: In-universe; thanks to TheMasquerade, Jeff looks like a {{Bishonen}} to Korbyn's friend Camille. However, as the Seer, Korbyn ''can't'' see this, so all she hears is her friend gushing over how cute the creepy murderer with the GlasgowGrin looks. When Camille thinks Korbyn has something going on with him, Korbyn is repulsed while Jeff laughs hysterically at the ridiculous notion.notion.
--> '''Korbyn''': Okay, first of all, that's disgusting on more levels than you could imagine. Second, this conversation is over.
* NonMammalMammaries: Scarecrow is a ScaryScarecrow who is illustrated with human-like breasts, which are probably made of hay like the rest of her body.
--> '''Korbyn''': Okay, first of all, that's disgusting on more levels than you could imagine. Second, this conversation is over.
* NonMammalMammaries: Scarecrow is a ScaryScarecrow who is illustrated with human-like breasts, which are probably made of hay like the rest of her body.
* OminousAdversarialAmusement: Jeff slashes Scarecrow multiple times and thinks she's out for the count, but to his surprise, she cackles and gets back on her feet, taunting that she cannot bleed to death (because she is a scarecrow).
* OutOfCharacterMoment: When Korbyn tears up over Fala's posthumous letter to her, Jeff says sorry for her grandmother's death, though he excuses himself and walks off since he's not good with condolences. [[LampshadeHanging Korbyn says that was pleasantly out of character for him]], and Masky says that Jeff tends to get awkward about familial death, which likely has to do with him [[SelfMadeOrphan murdering his own family in the past]].
* RedEyesTakeWarning: Although averted for the red-eyed heroine Korbyn, some of her lethal adversaries have red eyes too.
** Scarecrow's empty black eye holes can get red glowing pupils when she's enraged, like when the farmboy tells her that he was too busy to visit Scarecrow more often despite spending time with his girlfriend.
** Zalgo's scleras are red with tiny black pupils by default. When he's being extra ominous, the colours swap places, glowing red pupils in black eyes with TearsOfBlood.
** Scarecrow's empty black eye holes can get red glowing pupils when she's enraged, like when the farmboy tells her that he was too busy to visit Scarecrow more often despite spending time with his girlfriend.
** Zalgo's scleras are red with tiny black pupils by default. When he's being extra ominous, the colours swap places, glowing red pupils in black eyes with TearsOfBlood.
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* {{Seers}}: As the title implies, Korbyn can see things that humans can't, particularly beings not from the Over Realm (Earth). She's been seeing odd creatures her whole life and coped well with it, but [[LegacyOfTheChosen her destiny tied to her ability]] only comes to light once she opens her grandmother's book.
* ShrinkingViolet: Masky is rather timid for a proxy.
* TeamDad: Slender Man, of all individuals, is an orderly leader to the main group and sometimes refers to each of them with "child".
* ShrinkingViolet: Masky is rather timid for a proxy.
* TeamDad: Slender Man, of all individuals, is an orderly leader to the main group and sometimes refers to each of them with "child".
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* {{Seers}}: As the title implies, Korbyn can see things that humans can't, particularly beings not from the Over Realm (Earth). She's been seeing odd creatures her whole life and coped well with it, but [[LegacyOfTheChosen her destiny tied to her ability]] be the bridge between both Over Realm and Under Realm only comes to light once she opens her grandmother's book.
* ShadowedFaceGlowingEyes: A cloaked figure, who is Zalgo's minion, has white eyes that glow from the shadow of his hood, his face is otherwise obscured. He looks confused when he doesn't find anything at the location of the new Seer, then [[OhCrap he looks fearful]] when he discovers Jeff waiting for him.
* ShrinkingViolet: Masky is rather timid for aproxy.
proxy, and can come off as meek due to his light, soft voice. As Jeff puts it, he's "an overgrown powder-puff".
* SinisterScythe: Zalgo gifts Scarecrow with an enchanted scythe to absorb the soul of the farmboy's girlfriend. As Zalgo's minion, she wields a large scythe while fighting against Korbyn, Masky and Jeff.
* TheSnackIsMoreInteresting: Played with. The mention of Locklear's name unsettles the others. Then Jeff walks in munching on a sandwich and says, "What I miss?" Scarecrow is angry that Jeff isn't taking the conversation seriously.
--> '''Scarecrow''': A sandwich?! What the hell is wrong with you! This is serious! Even Lord Zalgo warned me to be cautious of this Locklear.
--> '''Jeff''': What?! I'm hungry! I haven't eaten in days! Besides, it's not like any of us have met him. Who cares?!
* SplitScreenReaction: When Slender Man brings up the Locklears and says he'd be damned if "he" were to be the Seer again, Korbyn asks "...He?" Masky, Slender Man and Scarecrow's disturbed reactions appear in panels next to one another. [[MoodWhiplash Then Jeff walks in with a sandwich]].
* TeamDad: Slender Man, of all individuals, is an orderly leader to the main group and sometimes refers toeach of them with "child".
* ShadowedFaceGlowingEyes: A cloaked figure, who is Zalgo's minion, has white eyes that glow from the shadow of his hood, his face is otherwise obscured. He looks confused when he doesn't find anything at the location of the new Seer, then [[OhCrap he looks fearful]] when he discovers Jeff waiting for him.
* ShrinkingViolet: Masky is rather timid for a
* SinisterScythe: Zalgo gifts Scarecrow with an enchanted scythe to absorb the soul of the farmboy's girlfriend. As Zalgo's minion, she wields a large scythe while fighting against Korbyn, Masky and Jeff.
* TheSnackIsMoreInteresting: Played with. The mention of Locklear's name unsettles the others. Then Jeff walks in munching on a sandwich and says, "What I miss?" Scarecrow is angry that Jeff isn't taking the conversation seriously.
--> '''Scarecrow''': A sandwich?! What the hell is wrong with you! This is serious! Even Lord Zalgo warned me to be cautious of this Locklear.
--> '''Jeff''': What?! I'm hungry! I haven't eaten in days! Besides, it's not like any of us have met him. Who cares?!
* SplitScreenReaction: When Slender Man brings up the Locklears and says he'd be damned if "he" were to be the Seer again, Korbyn asks "...He?" Masky, Slender Man and Scarecrow's disturbed reactions appear in panels next to one another. [[MoodWhiplash Then Jeff walks in with a sandwich]].
* TeamDad: Slender Man, of all individuals, is an orderly leader to the main group and sometimes refers to
* {{Telepathy}}: An operator may project thoughts to a proxy and speak through them, with the proxy's actions mimicking their boss while they're controlled. This is how Slender Man communicates, and it's implied that he prefers talking through Masky instead of Hoodie because [[BadassBaritone his voice is more intimidating through the former]].
--> '''Jeff''': Oh that's just Masky. Don't worry about him. Since the boss doesn't have a mouth, he uses proxies as his telepathic mouthpieces.
--> '''Jeff''': Oh that's just Masky. Don't worry about him. Since the boss doesn't have a mouth, he uses proxies as his telepathic mouthpieces.
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** Proxies can pick up powers of their operators in small amounts if they've worked for them long enough. Thus, Masky can "slender-walk" a short distance, but it requires a time-consuming charge.
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** Proxies can pick up powers of their operators in small amounts if they've worked for them long enough. Thus, Masky can "slender-walk" a short distance, distance to attack Scarecrow from behind, but it requires a time-consuming charge.recharge.
* ThemeTune: [[https://youtu.be/09VMKwvAlNs "Blood Right"]], made by Madame Macabre as a tribute to her own series, and used as intro music for the rebooted dubs.
* ThemeTune: [[https://youtu.be/09VMKwvAlNs "Blood Right"]], made by Madame Macabre as a tribute to her own series, and used as intro music for the rebooted dubs.
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* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: Poor Scarecrow... she was tricked into a life of villainy with the false promise of getting her beloved farmboy back, only for him to try burn her alive and be eternally trapped into doing Zalgo's bidding.
* {{Yandere}}: Scarecrow went to the extent of making DealWithTheDevil to eliminate the farmboy's girlfriend so he would go back to being with Scarecrow instead. It's possible that some of this was Zalgo's influence, however.
* {{Yandere}}: Scarecrow went to the extent of making DealWithTheDevil to eliminate the farmboy's girlfriend so he would go back to being with Scarecrow instead. It's possible that some of this was Zalgo's influence, however.
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* TrappedInVillainy: Scarecrow is an unwilling minion of Zalgo's, having been tricked into making a DealWithTheDevil and forced to continue working with him since the humans would pursue her wherever she went.
* WhiteMaskOfDoom: Played with for Masky. Korbyn is initially freaked out by him until he trips at her window and falls on his face. Camille too finds his white mask creepy. Masky may seem timid and is holding on to his humanity as much as he can, but the flashbacks during his conversation with Hoodie show that he's had "episodes" of violence before.
* WhoNeedsTheirWholeBody: Scarecrow can wield her SinisterScythe just as well with only one arm [[LiteralDisarming when the other is removed]].
--> '''Scarecrow''': You see, unlike you fragile little creatures, the temporary loss of one of my limbs is hardly enough to be considered any real handicap.
* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: Poor Scarecrow... she was tricked into a life of villainy with the false promise of getting her beloved farmboy back, onlyfor him to try burn her be almost burned alive and be eternally then trapped into doing Zalgo's bidding.
bidding for the past decade.
* {{Yandere}}: Scarecrow went to the extent of making a DealWithTheDevil to eliminate the farmboy's girlfriend so he would go back to being with Scarecrow instead. It's possible that some of this was Zalgo's influence,however.however.
* YoureInsane: Korbyn calls Jeff insane/a lunatic [[YouMonster and a monster]] when he tells her to follow him as if Jeff didn't just murder someone in her room minutes ago. When Jeff explains that there are people after Korbyn and that he's risking himself to protect her, she apologises for coming off as ungrateful but is still frightened by the whole ordeal.
* WhiteMaskOfDoom: Played with for Masky. Korbyn is initially freaked out by him until he trips at her window and falls on his face. Camille too finds his white mask creepy. Masky may seem timid and is holding on to his humanity as much as he can, but the flashbacks during his conversation with Hoodie show that he's had "episodes" of violence before.
* WhoNeedsTheirWholeBody: Scarecrow can wield her SinisterScythe just as well with only one arm [[LiteralDisarming when the other is removed]].
--> '''Scarecrow''': You see, unlike you fragile little creatures, the temporary loss of one of my limbs is hardly enough to be considered any real handicap.
* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: Poor Scarecrow... she was tricked into a life of villainy with the false promise of getting her beloved farmboy back, only
* {{Yandere}}: Scarecrow went to the extent of making a DealWithTheDevil to eliminate the farmboy's girlfriend so he would go back to being with Scarecrow instead. It's possible that some of this was Zalgo's influence,
* YoureInsane: Korbyn calls Jeff insane/a lunatic [[YouMonster and a monster]] when he tells her to follow him as if Jeff didn't just murder someone in her room minutes ago. When Jeff explains that there are people after Korbyn and that he's risking himself to protect her, she apologises for coming off as ungrateful but is still frightened by the whole ordeal.
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''[[http://theseercomic.weebly.com/ The Seer]]'' is a discontinued {{Creepypasta}} comic by [[http://xmadame-macabrex.deviantart.com/ Madame Macabre]], begun October 9th 2012 and updating every 1-2 weeks before being abandoned in 2014. It stars Ms. Korbyn Jumping Eagle, a girl who has been seeing strange things all her life. After her grandmother dies, she receives a mysterious old book which, upon opening, fully awakens her to the world of spirits and monsters around her. This places her into a new role as "[[TheChosenOne the Seer]]", the bridge between the Under and Over Realms; now she must learn to work with her [[CreepyPasta strange new allies]] and escape the monsters sent after her by WebOriginal/{{Zalgo}} - [[WakeUpGoToSchoolSaveTheWorld all while maintaining her life as a college student.]]
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''[[http://theseercomic.weebly.com/ The Seer]]'' is a discontinued {{Creepypasta}} comic by [[http://xmadame-macabrex.deviantart.com/ Madame Macabre]], Creator/MadameMacabre, begun October 9th 2012 and updating every 1-2 weeks before being abandoned in 2014. It stars Ms. Korbyn Jumping Eagle, a girl who has been seeing strange things all her life. After her grandmother dies, she receives a mysterious old book which, upon opening, fully awakens her to the world of spirits and monsters around her. This places her into a new role as "[[TheChosenOne the Seer]]", the bridge between the Under and Over Realms; now she must learn to work with her [[CreepyPasta strange new allies]] and escape the monsters sent after her by WebOriginal/{{Zalgo}} - [[WakeUpGoToSchoolSaveTheWorld all while maintaining her life as a college student.]]
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* {{Animesque}}: Drawn by an American, the artstyle has a somewhat anime-inspired look with fairly LargeAnimeEyes and a simplistic cartoon-ish style.
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* {{Animesque}}: Drawn by an American, the artstyle has a somewhat anime-inspired look with fairly LargeAnimeEyes BigAnimeEyes and a simplistic cartoon-ish style.
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Expanding example context. They Walk Among Us example better fits The Masquerade, made an example for it.
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* AffablyEvil: Slender Man.
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* AffablyEvil: Slender Man.Man, who (so far) is a rather BenevolentBoss to his murderous subordinates and polite to Korbyn.
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* {{Animesque}}
* BadassBaritone: Slenderman, in the dubbed episodes. Only when speaking through Masky, though; with Hoodie, he sounds...weird.
* BadassBaritone: Slenderman, in the dubbed episodes. Only when speaking through Masky, though; with Hoodie, he sounds...weird.
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* {{Animesque}}
{{Animesque}}: Drawn by an American, the artstyle has a somewhat anime-inspired look with fairly LargeAnimeEyes and a simplistic cartoon-ish style.
* BadassBaritone:Slenderman, Slenderman sounds deep in the dubbed episodes. Only episodes, but only when he's speaking through Masky, though; with Masky. With Hoodie, he sounds...sounds... weird.
* BadassBaritone:
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* BigBad: So far Zalgo seems to be this.
* BlackComedy: Jeff is full of this. From the first version of the dubs, for example:
* BlackComedy: Jeff is full of this. From the first version of the dubs, for example:
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* BigBad: So far far, Zalgo seems is the major antagonist, wanting to be this.
kidnap the Seer and sending his minions to get her.
* BlackComedy: Jeff is full ofthis.dark and inappropriate jokes. From the first version of the dubs, for example:
* BlackComedy: Jeff is full of
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* BlackAndGrayMorality: Comes with the territory in any story where you have Slenderman and Jeff the Killer on one side, and Zalgo on the other.
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* BlackAndGrayMorality: Comes with the territory in any story where you have On one hand, Slenderman and Jeff his subordinates are killers but adhere to a council and keep Korbyn out of harm's way, yet Masky warns Korbyn to not let her guard down around them. On the Killer on one side, and other hand, Zalgo on the other.manipulates others into killing and, as Jeff puts it, seeks to condemn Korbyn to a fate worse than death.
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* CreepyMonotone: Hoodie, who sounds like [[VideoGame/{{Portal}} Glados]].
* DarkSkinnedRedhead: Korbyn.
* DarkSkinnedRedhead: Korbyn.
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* CreepyMonotone: Hoodie, who sounds like [[VideoGame/{{Portal}} Glados]].
Glados]] in the dubs.
* DarkSkinnedRedhead:Korbyn.Korbyn has tan skin and short red hair.
* DarkSkinnedRedhead:
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* EeriePaleSkinnedBrunette: Jeff; possibly Masky - his mask makes him appear to be this, but of course we don't know much about what his actual face looks like.
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* EeriePaleSkinnedBrunette: Jeff; possibly Masky - his mask makes him appear to be this, EeriePaleSkinnedBrunette:
** Jeff [[SerialKiller the Killer]], as usual, has bleached white skin and jet-black hair.
** Implied for Masky. He is Slender Man's proxy, has brown hair and a WhiteMaskOfDoom, butof course we don't know much about what his actual face looks like.
** Jeff [[SerialKiller the Killer]], as usual, has bleached white skin and jet-black hair.
** Implied for Masky. He is Slender Man's proxy, has brown hair and a WhiteMaskOfDoom, but
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** Slender Man, as usual, has a humanoid figure with a white featureless face and CombatTentacles.
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** Slender Man, as usual, has a tall humanoid figure with a white featureless face and and CombatTentacles.
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** Poor Korbyn never asked for any of this.
** Masky, too - he greatly misses his old life, and says he's as bad as Jeff for bringing Korbyn into the Under Realms's problems.
* InvisibleToNormals: Sufficiently powerful creatures can project a disguise that makes them appear as humans while in the Over Realm (however, it only extends to their bodies).
** Masky, too - he greatly misses his old life, and says he's as bad as Jeff for bringing Korbyn into the Under Realms's problems.
* InvisibleToNormals: Sufficiently powerful creatures can project a disguise that makes them appear as humans while in the Over Realm (however, it only extends to their bodies).
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** Poor Korbyn never asked for any her life as she knew it to be taken so suddenly from her, but ultimately accepts the Seer duty obligated upon her since she can't live with the thought of this.
others getting hurt because of her.
**Masky, too - he Masky greatly misses his old normal life, and says he's as bad as Jeff for bringing Korbyn into the Under Realms's problems.
Realm's problems. Masky doesn't want to go to the Under Realm in hopes of withholding his humanity, or at least what's left of it.
*InvisibleToNormals: InvisibleToNormals:
** Korbyn has been seeing odd creatures all her life that are invisible to others, such as a green floating cat with a single sideways eye. She's learned to cope with it well, though sometimes it's unavoidable, like when a creature obscures the text in her book that she has to read aloud.
** Played with for the creepypastas. Sufficiently powerful creatures can project a [[HiddenInPlainSight disguise that makes them appear ashumans humans]] while in the Over Realm (however, it only extends to their bodies).bodies). Only other Under Realm creatures and the Seer can see their true form.
**
*
** Korbyn has been seeing odd creatures all her life that are invisible to others, such as a green floating cat with a single sideways eye. She's learned to cope with it well, though sometimes it's unavoidable, like when a creature obscures the text in her book that she has to read aloud.
** Played with for the creepypastas. Sufficiently powerful creatures can project a [[HiddenInPlainSight disguise that makes them appear as
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* LooksLikeCesare: Jeff, obviously, but he even has this in his human form.
* TheMedic: One of the duties of the Seer is to treat monsters who can't go to the Under Realm for medical care, since [[TheMasquerade they can't go to human hospitals.]]
* NoYay: In-universe; thanks to TheMasquerade, Jeff looks like a {{Bishonen}} to Korbyn's friend Camille. However, as the seer, Korbyn ''can't'' see this, so all she hears is her friend gushing over how cute the creepy murderer with the GlasgowGrin looks.
* TheMedic: One of the duties of the Seer is to treat monsters who can't go to the Under Realm for medical care, since [[TheMasquerade they can't go to human hospitals.]]
* NoYay: In-universe; thanks to TheMasquerade, Jeff looks like a {{Bishonen}} to Korbyn's friend Camille. However, as the seer, Korbyn ''can't'' see this, so all she hears is her friend gushing over how cute the creepy murderer with the GlasgowGrin looks.
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* LooksLikeCesare: Jeff, obviously, but he even Jeff has this in his extremely pale skin, {{creepy shadowed undereyes}} and unkempt black hair. His human form.
look is a downplayed version as his skin is a more natural color and has InnocentBlueEyes, but maintaining his wild hair and shaded undereyes.
* {{Masquerade}}: Some creatures of the Under World can mask their true form to remain HiddenInPlainSight in the Over World. Taking medical care from human hospitals is forbidden as it risks exposing their true nature, which is where the Seer's importance as TheMedic comes into play.
* TheMedic: One of the duties of the Seer is to treat monsters who can't go to the Under Realm for medical care, since [[TheMasquerade they can't go to humanhospitals.]]
hospitals]].
* NoYay: In-universe; thanks to TheMasquerade, Jeff looks likea a {{Bishonen}} to Korbyn's friend Camille. However, as the seer, Seer, Korbyn ''can't'' see this, so all she hears is her friend gushing over how cute the creepy murderer with the GlasgowGrin looks.looks. When Camille thinks Korbyn has something going on with him, Korbyn is repulsed while Jeff laughs hysterically at the ridiculous notion.
* {{Masquerade}}: Some creatures of the Under World can mask their true form to remain HiddenInPlainSight in the Over World. Taking medical care from human hospitals is forbidden as it risks exposing their true nature, which is where the Seer's importance as TheMedic comes into play.
* TheMedic: One of the duties of the Seer is to treat monsters who can't go to the Under Realm for medical care, since [[TheMasquerade they can't go to human
* NoYay: In-universe; thanks to TheMasquerade, Jeff looks like
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* OhCrap: How Zalgo's minion reacts when he finds Jeff was lying in wait for him.
--> '''Minion''': Oh dear...it just had to be ''this'' guy...
* OnlySaneMan: Korbyn and Slender Man.
--> '''Minion''': Oh dear...it just had to be ''this'' guy...
* OnlySaneMan: Korbyn and Slender Man.
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* OhCrap: How Zalgo's minion reacts with dread when he finds Jeff was lying in wait for him.
--> '''Minion''': Oh dear... it just had to be ''this'' guy...
*OnlySaneMan: Korbyn and OnlySaneMan:
** Korbyn, a recent member of the group, is averse to the maddening ways of the others, trying to be a voice of reason as their equal.
** SlenderMan.Man tries his best to maintain the order amongst the others as their boss, however much a headache they give him.
--> '''Minion''': Oh dear... it just had to be ''this'' guy...
*
** Korbyn, a recent member of the group, is averse to the maddening ways of the others, trying to be a voice of reason as their equal.
** Slender
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* {{Seers}}: Korbyn, but this is obvious from the title...
* ShrinkingViolet: Masky.
* TeamDad: Slender Man, of all individuals, is this to the main group.
-->'''Slender Man''': (''while Jeff and Scarecrow are arguing'') Will you two stop it! You are giving me a migraine!
* TeleportersAndTransporters: Slender Man, of course. At one point, he appears randomly behind Korbyn, who freaks out and tells him to stop doing that.
-->'''Slender Man''': My apologies...it's sort of a bad habit of mine...
* TheyWalkAmongUs: See InvisibleToNormals above.
* ShrinkingViolet: Masky.
* TeamDad: Slender Man, of all individuals, is this to the main group.
-->'''Slender Man''': (''while Jeff and Scarecrow are arguing'') Will you two stop it! You are giving me a migraine!
* TeleportersAndTransporters: Slender Man, of course. At one point, he appears randomly behind Korbyn, who freaks out and tells him to stop doing that.
-->'''Slender Man''': My apologies...it's sort of a bad habit of mine...
* TheyWalkAmongUs: See InvisibleToNormals above.
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* {{Seers}}: Korbyn, but this is obvious As the title implies, Korbyn can see things that humans can't, particularly beings not from the title...
Over Realm (Earth). She's been seeing odd creatures her whole life and coped well with it, but [[LegacyOfTheChosen her destiny tied to her ability]] only comes to light once she opens her grandmother's book.
* ShrinkingViolet:Masky.
Masky is rather timid for a proxy.
* TeamDad: Slender Man, of all individuals, isthis an orderly leader to the main group.
-->'''Slendergroup and sometimes refers to each of them with "child".
--> '''Slender Man''': (''while Jeff and Scarecrow are arguing'') Will you two stop it! You are giving me a migraine!
*TeleportersAndTransporters: {{Teleportation}}:
** One of SlenderMan, of course.Man's abilities. At one point, he appears randomly behind Korbyn, who freaks out and tells him to stop doing that.
-->'''Slender --->'''Slender Man''': My apologies...apologies... it's sort of a bad habit of mine...
* TheyWalkAmongUs: See InvisibleToNormals above.** Proxies can pick up powers of their operators in small amounts if they've worked for them long enough. Thus, Masky can "slender-walk" a short distance, but it requires a time-consuming charge.
* ShrinkingViolet:
* TeamDad: Slender Man, of all individuals, is
-->'''Slender
--> '''Slender Man''': (''while Jeff and Scarecrow are arguing'') Will you two stop it! You are giving me a migraine!
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** One of Slender
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* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: Poor Scarecrow...
* {{Yandere}}: Scarecrow in her backstory. It's possible that some of this was Zalgo's influence, however.
* YouthfulFreckles: Korbyn.
* {{Yandere}}: Scarecrow in her backstory. It's possible that some of this was Zalgo's influence, however.
* YouthfulFreckles: Korbyn.
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* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: Poor Scarecrow...
Scarecrow... she was tricked into a life of villainy with the false promise of getting her beloved farmboy back, only for him to try burn her alive and be eternally trapped into doing Zalgo's bidding.
* {{Yandere}}: Scarecrowin her backstory.went to the extent of making DealWithTheDevil to eliminate the farmboy's girlfriend so he would go back to being with Scarecrow instead. It's possible that some of this was Zalgo's influence, however.
* YouthfulFreckles:Korbyn.Downplayed. Korbyn is a college student with freckles on her cheeks.
* {{Yandere}}: Scarecrow
* YouthfulFreckles:
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* RealityEnsues: Needless to say, the farmboy turned on Scarecrow in horror and outrage when she murdered his girlfriend.
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1) Knife Nut is now a disambig, Jeff fits Psycho Knife Nut. 2) Reality Ensues is also now a disambig and per discussion it doesn't fit Surprisingly Realistic Outcome either.
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* KnifeNut: Jeff, of course.
* PsychoKnifeNut: The AxCrazy Jeff the Killer always seems to have a knife on him to fight or murder with.
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* YouthfulFreckles: Korbyn.
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* YouthfulFreckles: Korbyn.Korbyn.
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* BarbarianLonghair: Jeff, who has a [[RapunzelHair long-ass mane]] and is easily the most AxeCrazy of Korbyn's allies, not to mention the only one to actually show his canon homicidal tendencies in-story.
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* BarbarianLonghair: Jeff, who has a [[RapunzelHair long-ass mane]] mane and is easily the most AxeCrazy of Korbyn's allies, not to mention the only one to actually show his canon homicidal tendencies in-story.
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-->'''Jeff:''' People will say or [[BlackComedyRape suck]] anything if it means they'll get out of being killed!
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* EldritchAbomination: Slender Man and Zalgo. But this is obvious to anyone who knows a thing or two about {{Creepypasta}}s.
* {{Expy}}: Possibly unintentionally, but a few readers have noticed that Masky acts sort of like [[Webcomic/AxisPowersHetalia Canada]].
* {{Expy}}: Possibly unintentionally, but a few readers have noticed that Masky acts sort of like [[Webcomic/AxisPowersHetalia Canada]].
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* IJustWantToBeNormal: Poor Korbyn never asked for any of this.
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* IJustWantToBeNormal: HumanoidAbomination:
** Slender Man, as usual, has a humanoid figure with a white featureless face and CombatTentacles.
** Zalgo is illustrated with human-like body parts that appear skeletal, spiky and RedAndBlackAndEvilAllOver. He has jagged mouths on his upper body and his legs are jointed like a goat's hind legs.
* IJustWantToBeNormal:
** Poor Korbyn never asked for any of this.
** Slender Man, as usual, has a humanoid figure with a white featureless face and CombatTentacles.
** Zalgo is illustrated with human-like body parts that appear skeletal, spiky and RedAndBlackAndEvilAllOver. He has jagged mouths on his upper body and his legs are jointed like a goat's hind legs.
* IJustWantToBeNormal:
** Poor Korbyn never asked for any of this.
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* TheMedic: One of the duties of the Seer is to treat monsters who can't go the Under Realm for medical care, since [[TheMasquerade they can't go to human hospitals.]]
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* TheMedic: One of the duties of the Seer is to treat monsters who can't go to the Under Realm for medical care, since [[TheMasquerade they can't go to human hospitals.]]
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-->'''Minion''': Oh dear...it just had to be ''this'' guy...
* OnlySaneMan: Korbyn and Slender Man.
* OnlySaneMan: Korbyn and Slender Man.
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* OnlySaneMan: Korbyn and Slender Man.
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* ScaryScarecrow: Zalgo sends a living scarecrow woman (named [[ShapedLikeItself Scarecrow]]) after Korbyn. While she turns out to be a [[LoveMakesYouCrazy bit]] [[DealWithTheDevil more]] [[TrappedInVillainy sympathetic]] than most examples of this trope, she's still plenty terrifying - just ask [[MurderTheHypotenuse the woman she killed]] immediately after becoming mobile.
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* ScaryScarecrow: Zalgo sends a living scarecrow woman (named [[ShapedLikeItself Scarecrow]]) after Korbyn. While she turns out to be a [[LoveMakesYouCrazy bit]] [[DealWithTheDevil more]] [[TrappedInVillainy sympathetic]] bit more sympathetic than most examples of this trope, she's still plenty terrifying - just ask [[MurderTheHypotenuse the woman she killed]] immediately after becoming mobile.
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* BlackAndGreyMorality: Comes with the territory in any story where you have Slenderman and Jeff the Killer on one side, and Zalgo on the other.
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* BlackAndGreyMorality: BlackAndGrayMorality: Comes with the territory in any story where you have Slenderman and Jeff the Killer on one side, and Zalgo on the other.
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* TokenEvilTeammate: Obviously "evil" is [[BlackAndGreyMorality a relative term]] here, but Jeff is probably the most AxCrazy of Korbyn's allies.
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* TokenEvilTeammate: Obviously "evil" is [[BlackAndGreyMorality [[BlackAndGrayMorality a relative term]] here, but Jeff is probably the most AxCrazy of Korbyn's allies.
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''[[http://theseercomic.weebly.com/ The Seer]]'' is an ongoing {{Creepypasta}} comic by [[http://xmadame-macabrex.deviantart.com/ Madame Macabre]], begun October 9th 2012 and updating every 1-2 weeks. It stars Ms. Korbyn Jumping Eagle, a girl who has been seeing strange things all her life. After her grandmother dies, she receives a mysterious old book which, upon opening, fully awakens her to the world of spirits and monsters around her. This places her into a new role as "[[TheChosenOne the Seer]]", the bridge between the Under and Over Realms; now she must learn to work with her [[CreepyPasta strange new allies]] and escape the monsters sent after her by WebOriginal/{{Zalgo}} - [[WakeUpGoToSchoolSaveTheWorld all while maintaining her life as a college student.]]
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''[[http://theseercomic.weebly.com/ The Seer]]'' is an ongoing a discontinued {{Creepypasta}} comic by [[http://xmadame-macabrex.deviantart.com/ Madame Macabre]], begun October 9th 2012 and updating every 1-2 weeks. It stars Ms. Korbyn Jumping Eagle, a girl who has been seeing strange things all her life. After her grandmother dies, she receives a mysterious old book which, upon opening, fully awakens her to the world of spirits and monsters around her. This places her into a new role as "[[TheChosenOne the Seer]]", the bridge between the Under and Over Realms; now she must learn to work with her [[CreepyPasta strange new allies]] and escape the monsters sent after her by WebOriginal/{{Zalgo}} - [[WakeUpGoToSchoolSaveTheWorld all while maintaining her life as a college student.]]
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[[http://theseercomic.weebly.com/ The Seer]] is an ongoing {{Creepypasta}} comic by [[http://xmadame-macabrex.deviantart.com/ Madame Macabre]], begun October 9th 2012 and updating every 1-2 weeks. It stars Ms. Korbyn Jumping Eagle, a girl who has been seeing strange things all her life. After her grandmother dies, she receives a mysterious old book which, upon opening, fully awakens her to the world of spirits and monsters around her. This places her into a new role as "[[TheChosenOne the Seer]]", the bridge between the Under and Over Realms; now she must learn to work with her [[CreepyPasta strange new allies]] and escape the monsters sent after her by WebOriginal/{{Zalgo}} - [[WakeUpGoToSchoolSaveTheWorld all while maintaining her life as a college student.]]
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!!Provides Examples Of: examples of:
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* BlackComedy: Jeff is full of this.
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* BlackComedy: Jeff is full of this. From the first version of the dubs, for example:
-->'''Jeff:''' People will say or [[BlackComedyRape suck]] anything if it means they'll get out of being killed!
-->'''Jeff:''' People will say or [[BlackComedyRape suck]] anything if it means they'll get out of being killed!
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* YouthfulFreckles: Korbyn.
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* YouthfulFreckles: Korbyn.
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[[http://theseercomic.weebly.com/ The Seer]] is an ongoing {{Creepypasta}} comic by [[http://xmadame-macabrex.deviantart.com/ Madame Macabre]], begun October 9th 2012 and updating every 1-2 weeks. It stars Ms. Korbyn Jumping Eagle, a girl who has been seeing strange things all her life. After her grandmother dies, she receives a mysterious old book which, upon opening, fully awakens her to the world of spirits and monsters around her. This places her into a new role as "[[TheChosenOne the Seer]]", the bridge between the Under and Over Realms; now she must learn to work with her [[CreepyPasta strange new allies]] and escape the monsters sent after her by {{Zalgo}} - [[WakeUpGoToSchoolSaveTheWorld all while maintaining her life as a college student.]]
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[[http://theseercomic.weebly.com/ The Seer]] is an ongoing {{Creepypasta}} comic by [[http://xmadame-macabrex.deviantart.com/ Madame Macabre]], begun October 9th 2012 and updating every 1-2 weeks. It stars Ms. Korbyn Jumping Eagle, a girl who has been seeing strange things all her life. After her grandmother dies, she receives a mysterious old book which, upon opening, fully awakens her to the world of spirits and monsters around her. This places her into a new role as "[[TheChosenOne the Seer]]", the bridge between the Under and Over Realms; now she must learn to work with her [[CreepyPasta strange new allies]] and escape the monsters sent after her by {{Zalgo}} WebOriginal/{{Zalgo}} - [[WakeUpGoToSchoolSaveTheWorld all while maintaining her life as a college student.]]
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Misuse. It\'s Genre Savvy, not just \"savvy\".
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* GenreSavvy: Both Jeff and Korbyn show this when Scarecrow confesses that she is not working for Zalgo of her own free will; Jeff points out to Korbyn that they can't rule out the possibility that Scarecrow is lying while Korbyn counters that even if Scarecrow ''is'' lying, he can't jump to that conclusion and kill her without hearing her side of the story first.
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* OhCrap: How Zalgo's minion reacts when he finds Jeff was lying in wait for him.
-->'''Minion''': Oh dear...it just had to be ''this'' guy...
-->'''Minion''': Oh dear...it just had to be ''this'' guy...
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* GlamourFailure: Since the InvisibleToNormals abilities that many creatures have only extend to their bodies, Masky (ironically the most "normal" looking of the monsters) unintentionally freaks Korbyn's friend Camille out when she sees a guy in a CreepyMask standing outside staring at her.
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* GlamourFailure: Since the InvisibleToNormals abilities that many creatures have only extend to their bodies, Masky (ironically the most "normal" looking of the monsters) unintentionally freaks Korbyn's friend Camille out when she sees a guy in a CreepyMask WhiteMaskOfDoom standing outside staring at her.
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* GlamourFailure: Since the InvisibleToNormal abilities that many creatures have only extend to their bodies, Masky (ironically the most "normal" looking of the monsters) unintentionally freaks Korbyn's friend Camille out when she sees a guy in a CreepyMask standing outside staring at her.
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* GlamourFailure: Since the InvisibleToNormal InvisibleToNormals abilities that many creatures have only extend to their bodies, Masky (ironically the most "normal" looking of the monsters) unintentionally freaks Korbyn's friend Camille out when she sees a guy in a CreepyMask standing outside staring at her.
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* GlamourFailure: Since the InvisibleToNormal abilities that many creatures have only extend to their bodies, Masky (ironically the most "normal" looking of the monsters) unintentionally freaks Korbyn's friend Camille out when she sees a guy in a CreepyMask standing outside staring at her.
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* BadassBaritone: Slenderman, in the dubbed episodes.
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* BadassBaritone: Slenderman, in the dubbed episodes. Only when speaking through Masky, though; with Hoodie, he sounds...weird.
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* {{Expy}}: Possibly unintentionally, but a few readers have noticed that Masky acts sort of like [[Webcomic/AxisPowersHetalia Canada]].
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* AffablyEvil: Slender Man.
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* TeamDad: Slender Man, of all individuals, is this to the main group.
-->'''Slender Man''': (''while Jeff and Scarecrow are arguing'') Will you two stop it! You are giving me a migraine!
* TeleportersAndTransporters: Slender Man, of course. At one point, he appears randomly behind Korbyn, who freaks out and tells him to stop doing that.
-->'''Slender Man''': My apologies...it's sort of a bad habit of mine...
-->'''Slender Man''': (''while Jeff and Scarecrow are arguing'') Will you two stop it! You are giving me a migraine!
* TeleportersAndTransporters: Slender Man, of course. At one point, he appears randomly behind Korbyn, who freaks out and tells him to stop doing that.
-->'''Slender Man''': My apologies...it's sort of a bad habit of mine...