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* ICallItVera: People tend to name their weapons, as they're extensions of the soul. Zephyrine calls her two swords Gust and Gale, for example.
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* RoseHairedSweetie: Zephy has bright pink hair and is a cheery, sweet girl.
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* RoseHairedSweetie: Zephy Zephyrine has bright pink hair and is a cheery, sweet girl.
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* SummonToHand: Everyone seems to have their own weapon that they can summon from [[HammerSpace thin air]], called Arms.
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Author's Twitter was deleted, replaced with Carrd.
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''[[https://driftbreak.the-comic.org/ Driftbreak]]'' is an action webcomic created by ''[[https://twitter.com/pealingname Appealing Name Goes Here]]'' that follows TheProtagonist Kaycee Courage, an OrdinaryHighSchoolStudent with SuperSpeed who wants to be the strongest duelist out there in a world where people have magic and can summon weapons. And also there are robots that keep flying into the planet from outer space which cause problems. Updates every Sunday.
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''[[https://driftbreak.the-comic.org/ Driftbreak]]'' is an action webcomic created by ''[[https://twitter.com/pealingname ''[[https://appealingnamegoeshere.carrd.co/ Appealing Name Goes Here]]'' that follows TheProtagonist Kaycee Courage, an OrdinaryHighSchoolStudent with SuperSpeed who wants to be the strongest duelist out there in a world where people have magic and can summon weapons. And also there are robots that keep flying into the planet from outer space which cause problems. Updates every Sunday.
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* KlatchianCoffee: Prisca on page 46.
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* KlatchianCoffee: Prisca on page 46.starts glowing gold when she wakes up from her caffeine nap, to the surprise of Muscles and Alyvia.
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* KillerRobot: The planet keeps getting attacked by them.
* KlatchianCoffee: Prisca on page 46.
* KlatchianCoffee: Prisca on page 46.
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-->'''Trooper:''' Two words. Money laundering Scheme. Okay that was three words.
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-->'''Trooper:''' Two words. Money laundering Scheme. scheme. Okay that was three words.
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* TwoWordsICantCount: -->'''Trooper:''' Two words. Money laundering Scheme. Okay that was three words.
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* TwoWordsICantCount: TwoWordsICantCount:
-->'''Trooper:''' Two words. Money laundering Scheme. Okay that was three words.
-->'''Trooper:''' Two words. Money laundering Scheme. Okay that was three words.
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* TrademarkFavoriteFood: Kaycee loves caramel. Leo loves Beyond Bars.
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* TrademarkFavoriteFood: Kaycee loves caramel. Leo Trooper loves Beyond Bars.
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* TrademarkFavoriteFood: Kaycee loves caramel.
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* TrademarkFavoriteFood: Kaycee loves caramel. Leo loves Beyond Bars.
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* TrademarkFavoriteFood: Kaycee loves caramel.
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* WittyBanter: The first Kaycee and Zephy spar has some back-and-forth taunting.
-->'''Zephy:''' You're like a bright flame! But those burn out rather quickly, don't you think?
-->'''Kaycee:''' Think you should worry about getting burned.
-->'''Zephy:''' You're like a bright flame! But those burn out rather quickly, don't you think?
-->'''Kaycee:''' Think you should worry about getting burned.
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* AddedAlliterativeAppeal: Beyond Bars.
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* {{Magitek}}: Magic and technology are greatly linked as people use enhancing abilities on tech to reach sci-fi levels of technological advancement.
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* RoseHairedSweetie: Zephy has bright pink hair and is a cheery, sweet girl.
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* InSeriesNickname: Steadfast Eudemonia is known as Muscles, for her muscles.
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* SchoolUniformsAreTheNewBlack: Alyvia goes around in her school uniform when she's introduced in the training camp, earning some snark from Kaycee.
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Verity is a surname, Muscles is a nickname, but their real first names still apply to the context. Landyn is male.
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* AerithAndBob: On one hand, you have names like Verity and Kaycee, which are acceptable in RealLife, albeit uncommon. On the other hand, you have Landyn, Zephyrine and Muscles.
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* AerithAndBob: On one hand, you have names like Verity Alyvia and Kaycee, which are acceptable in RealLife, albeit uncommon. On the other hand, you have Landyn, Zephyrine and Muscles.Steadfast.
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* BigWhat: Landyn gives Kaycee one of these when she realises she's still in Wantz Square, with a SpeechBubblesInterruption to match.
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* BigWhat: Landyn gives Kaycee one of these when she he realises she's still in Wantz Square, with a SpeechBubblesInterruption to match.
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''[[https://driftbreak.the-comic.org/ Driftbreak]]'' is an action webcomic created by ''[[https://twitter.com/pealingname Appealing Name Goes Here]]''that follows TheProtagonist Kaycee Courage, an OrdinaryHighSchoolStudent with SuperSpeed who wants to be the strongest duelist out there in a world where people have magic and can summon weapons. And also there are robots that keep flying into the planet from outer space which cause problems. Updates every Sunday.
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''[[https://driftbreak.the-comic.org/ Driftbreak]]'' is an action webcomic created by ''[[https://twitter.com/pealingname Appealing Name Goes Here]]''that Here]]'' that follows TheProtagonist Kaycee Courage, an OrdinaryHighSchoolStudent with SuperSpeed who wants to be the strongest duelist out there in a world where people have magic and can summon weapons. And also there are robots that keep flying into the planet from outer space which cause problems. Updates every Sunday.
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''[[https://driftbreak.the-comic.org/ Driftbreak]]'' is an action webcomic created by ''[[https://twitter.com/pealingname Appealing Name Goes Here]]''that follows TheProtagonist Kaycee Courage, a senior student with SuperSpeed who wants to be the strongest duelist out there in a world where people have magic and can summon weapons. And also there are robots that keep flying into the planet from outer space which cause problems. Updates every Sunday.
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''[[https://driftbreak.the-comic.org/ Driftbreak]]'' is an action webcomic created by ''[[https://twitter.com/pealingname Appealing Name Goes Here]]''that follows TheProtagonist Kaycee Courage, a senior student an OrdinaryHighSchoolStudent with SuperSpeed who wants to be the strongest duelist out there in a world where people have magic and can summon weapons. And also there are robots that keep flying into the planet from outer space which cause problems. Updates every Sunday.
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* WorldOfActionGirls: ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin.
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* SuperSpeed: Kaycee's powers. She is able to travel 5 miles in about 5 minutes in the beginning of the comic.
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* EveryoneMeetsEveryone: The main characters all introduce themselves when they first meet at a training camp.
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* ToBeAMaster: Played straight with Kaycee. The SeriesGoal, and is even [[LampshadeHanging lampshaded]] by the author in the series description.
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* ToBeAMaster: Played straight with Kaycee. The SeriesGoal, and is even [[LampshadeHanging lampshaded]] by the author in the series description.description.
* TwentyMinutesIntoTheFuture
* WrittenSoundEffect: BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP *click*. Also the occasional UnsoundEffect when the robot goes LOOOOOOOOMMM.
* TwentyMinutesIntoTheFuture
* WrittenSoundEffect: BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP *click*. Also the occasional UnsoundEffect when the robot goes LOOOOOOOOMMM.
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* ToBeAMaster: Played straight with Kaycee. The SeriesGoal and is even [[LampshadeHanging lampshaded]] by the author in the series description.
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* ToBeAMaster: Played straight with Kaycee. The SeriesGoal SeriesGoal, and is even [[LampshadeHanging lampshaded]] by the author in the series description.
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* SuperDeformed: Chibi-fied versions of the characters are abundant throughout the comic, notably in the character covers and whenever they're just standing there.
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* SuperDeformed: Chibi-fied versions of the characters are abundant throughout the comic, notably in the character first few chapter covers and whenever they're just standing there.
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* StockShonenHero: Subverted in that it's a genderflipped version in a WorldOfActionGirls, but Kaycee checks all the boxes to be one.
* SuperDeformed: Chibi-fied versions of the characters are abundant throughout the comic, notably in the character covers and whenever they're just standing there.
* SuperDeformed: Chibi-fied versions of the characters are abundant throughout the comic, notably in the character covers and whenever they're just standing there.
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* PluckyGirl: [[MeaningfulName Kaycee Courage.]]
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* PluckyGirl: [[MeaningfulName Kaycee Courage.]]]]
* ToBeAMaster: Played straight with Kaycee. The SeriesGoal and is even [[LampshadeHanging lampshaded]] by the author in the series description.
* ToBeAMaster: Played straight with Kaycee. The SeriesGoal and is even [[LampshadeHanging lampshaded]] by the author in the series description.
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* PluckyGirl: [[MeaningdfulName Kaycee Courage.]]
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* PluckyGirl: [[MeaningdfulName [[MeaningfulName Kaycee Courage.]]
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* AerithAndBob: On one hand, you have names like Verity and Kaycee, which are acceptable in RealLife, albeit uncommon. On the other hand, you have... Landyn, Zephyrine and Muscles.
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* AerithAndBob: On one hand, you have names like Verity and Kaycee, which are acceptable in RealLife, albeit uncommon. On the other hand, you have... have Landyn, Zephyrine and Muscles.Muscles.
* ActionPrologue: The story starts with a robot attack on Wantz Square and Kaycee delivering an OffscreenMomentOfAwesome. Then she has to run to camp.
* ActionPrologue: The story starts with a robot attack on Wantz Square and Kaycee delivering an OffscreenMomentOfAwesome. Then she has to run to camp.
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* BigWhat: Landyn gives Kaycee one of these when she realises she's still in Wantz Square, with a SpeechBubblesInterruption to match.
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* BigWhat: Landyn gives Kaycee one of these when she realises she's still in Wantz Square, with a SpeechBubblesInterruption to match.match.
* PluckyGirl: [[MeaningdfulName Kaycee Courage.]]
* PluckyGirl: [[MeaningdfulName Kaycee Courage.]]
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''[[https://driftbreak.the-comic.org/ Driftbreak]]'' is an action webcomic created by ''[[https://twitter.com/pealingname Appealing Name Goes Here]]''that follows TheProtagonist Kaycee Courage, a senior student with SuperSpeed who wants to be the strongest duelist out there in a world where people have magic and can summon weapons. And also there are robots that keep flying into the planet from outer space. Updates every Sunday.
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''[[https://driftbreak.the-comic.org/ Driftbreak]]'' is an action webcomic created by ''[[https://twitter.com/pealingname Appealing Name Goes Here]]''that follows TheProtagonist Kaycee Courage, a senior student with SuperSpeed who wants to be the strongest duelist out there in a world where people have magic and can summon weapons. And also there are robots that keep flying into the planet from outer space.space which cause problems. Updates every Sunday.
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* AerithAndBob: On one hand, you have names like Verity and Kaycee, which are acceptable in RealLife, albeit uncommon. On the other hand, you have... Landyn, Zephyrine and Muscles.
* {{Animesque}}: The series has multiple anime influences, and the art style stands out with its BigAnimeEyes.
* BadassBoast: Kaycee brags about being 'top dog' in Nova Timewise's Duelling Club. Subverted afterwards when Landyn brings up that she's actually second place.
* BigWhat: Landyn gives Kaycee one of these when she realises she's still in Wantz Square, with a SpeechBubblesInterruption to match.
* AerithAndBob: On one hand, you have names like Verity and Kaycee, which are acceptable in RealLife, albeit uncommon. On the other hand, you have... Landyn, Zephyrine and Muscles.
* {{Animesque}}: The series has multiple anime influences, and the art style stands out with its BigAnimeEyes.
* BadassBoast: Kaycee brags about being 'top dog' in Nova Timewise's Duelling Club. Subverted afterwards when Landyn brings up that she's actually second place.
* BigWhat: Landyn gives Kaycee one of these when she realises she's still in Wantz Square, with a SpeechBubblesInterruption to match.
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[[caption-width-right:350:Just so you remember, her name is [[MeaningfulName Kaycee Courage]].]]
''[[https://driftbreak.the-comic.org/ Driftbreak]]'' is an action webcomic created by ''[[https://twitter.com/pealingname Appealing Name Goes Here]]''that follows TheProtagonist Kaycee Courage, a senior student with SuperSpeed who wants to be the strongest duelist out there in a world where people have magic and can summon weapons. And also there are robots that keep flying into the planet from outer space. Updates every Sunday.
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[[caption-width-right:350:Just so you remember, her name is [[MeaningfulName Kaycee Courage]].]]
''[[https://driftbreak.the-comic.org/ Driftbreak]]'' is an action webcomic created by ''[[https://twitter.com/pealingname Appealing Name Goes Here]]''that follows TheProtagonist Kaycee Courage, a senior student with SuperSpeed who wants to be the strongest duelist out there in a world where people have magic and can summon weapons. And also there are robots that keep flying into the planet from outer space. Updates every Sunday.
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