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''Indigo Park'' is a first-person exploration MascotHorror game created by Creator/UniqueGeese, who previously created the fanmade remake of ''VideoGame/GartenOfBanban'''s first chapter, ''Reincarnated''.
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''Indigo Park'' is a first-person exploration MascotHorror game created by Creator/UniqueGeese, who previously created the fanmade remake of ''VideoGame/GartenOfBanban'''s ''VideoGame/GartenOfBanban''[='s=] first chapter, ''Reincarnated''.
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* OnSecondThought: [[spoiler: Upon reuniting with Ed at the end of the Mollie chase, Rambley notices them heading towards a staff-only section and warns them about it, only to realize they're running from Mollie, and hurriedly welcomes them as "new staff".]]
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* OnSecondThought: [[spoiler: Upon [[spoiler:Upon reuniting with Ed at the end of the Mollie chase, Rambley notices them heading towards a staff-only section and warns them about it, only to realize they're running from Mollie, and hurriedly welcomes them as "new staff".]]
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*** One of the buttons on said soda machines is a purple and lavender button for "uhsoda". The name and color scheme is a reference to the [=YouTuber=] [[https://youtube.com/@uhyeah?si=U92xdB71SvFSTeOx uhyeah]], whose usage of "Bird Up" became a meme for the original version of the [[VideoGame/GartenOfBanban game]] that UniqueGeese made a remake of.
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*** One of the buttons on said soda machines is a purple and lavender button for "uhsoda". The name and color scheme is a reference to the [=YouTuber=] [[https://youtube.com/@uhyeah?si=U92xdB71SvFSTeOx uhyeah]], whose usage of "Bird Up" became a meme for the original version of the [[VideoGame/GartenOfBanban game]] that UniqueGeese [=UniqueGeese=] made a remake of.
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*** One of the buttons on said soda machines is a purple and lavender button for "uhsoda". The name and color scheme is a reference to the [=YouTuber=] [[https://youtube.com/@uhyeah?si=U92xdB71SvFSTeOx uhyeah]].
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*** One of the buttons on said soda machines is a purple and lavender button for "uhsoda". The name and color scheme is a reference to the [=YouTuber=] [[https://youtube.com/@uhyeah?si=U92xdB71SvFSTeOx uhyeah]].uhyeah]], whose usage of "Bird Up" became a meme for the original version of the [[VideoGame/GartenOfBanban game]] that UniqueGeese made a remake of.
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Yeah, the music video states the year (2023), it just hadn't come out at the initial editing time.
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* YearX: The cameras display the year as 20XX, and the last two digits are obscured in the intro cutscene.
** This is slightly subverted, as the newspaper reporting the park's closing is dated with the year 2015, before the camera angle covers the last two digits. Rambley's precise number of days since the park's had a guest indicate it's been eight years since then.
** This is slightly subverted, as the newspaper reporting the park's closing is dated with the year 2015, before the camera angle covers the last two digits. Rambley's precise number of days since the park's had a guest indicate it's been eight years since then.
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** This is slightly subverted, as the newspaper reporting the park's closing is dated with the year 2015, before the camera angle covers the last two digits. Rambley's precise number of days since the park's had a guest indicate it's been eight years since then.
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** Why, he asks you, is "''Rambley's'' Railway" ''Rambley's'' favorite attraction? ...Because [[RailEnthusiast he likes trains]].
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** Why, he asks you, is "''Rambley's'' Railway" ''Rambley's'' favorite attraction? ...Because because [[RailEnthusiast he likes trains]].
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* OffscreenTeleportation: Mollie utilizes this throughout her chase to maintain a close distance to the player and to keep up the tension. Most notable with the very start, where you flee from her down a hallway with no other open exits and down a sliding tube, only for her to appear ''in front'' of you emerging from a different tube.
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* YouNoTakeCandle: Rambley offers Ed a discount due to the park being so out of service. The MadLibsDialogue he uses is meant for numbers only, and when Rambley ends up upgrading Ed's discount to be "free percent off".
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* YouNoTakeCandle: Rambley offers Ed a discount due to the park being so out of service. The MadLibsDialogue he uses is meant for numbers only, and when Rambley ends up upgrading Ed's discount to be "free percent off".
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** One of the first things seen upon entering the park property is a lifesize standee of Molly Macaw with the head having broken off. [[spoiler:At the end of the chapter, the real Molly is killed via Rambley cutting off her head with the doors.]]
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** One of the first things seen upon entering the park property is a lifesize standee of Molly Mollie Macaw with the head having broken off. [[spoiler:At the end of the chapter, the real Molly Mollie is killed via Rambley cutting off her head with the doors.]]
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* YouNoTakeCandle: Rambley offers Ed a discount due to the park being so out of service. The MadLibsDialogue he uses is meant for numbers only, and when Rambley ends up upgrading Ed's discount to be "free percent off".
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* AIIsACrapshoot: Played with. Rambley does a lot of things out of scope for what a park guide [=AI=] should be able to do but all is in service of his primary goal of making sure guests have the best time possible. He also developed a grudge against Llyod so strong that he disparages his merchadise to the point he claims it makes kids cry, not something a Theme Park employee, let alone a purpose built [=AI=] should be doing.
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* AIIsACrapshoot: Played with. Rambley does a lot of things out of scope for what a park guide [=AI=] should be able to do but all is in service of his primary goal of making sure guests have the best time possible. He also developed a grudge against Llyod Lloyd so strong that he disparages his merchadise merchandise to the point he claims it makes kids cry, not something a Theme Park employee, let alone a purpose built [=AI=] should be doing.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: One of the first collectibles Ed can find is the Finley plush. On the info kiosk, they muse Finley always made them feel uneasy due to his size. Come the end of chapter one, we get a glimpse of the mascot Finley in the depths of Oceanic Odyssey, and sure enough, he is ''massive''.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: {{Foreshadowing}}:
** One of the first collectibles Ed can find is the Finley plush. On the info kiosk, they muse Finley always made them feel uneasy due to his size. Come the end of chapter one, we get a glimpse of the mascot Finley in the depths of Oceanic Odyssey, and sure enough, he is''massive''.''massive''.
** One of the first things seen upon entering the park property is a lifesize standee of Molly Macaw with the head having broken off. [[spoiler:At the end of the chapter, the real Molly is killed via Rambley cutting off her head with the doors.]]
** One of the first collectibles Ed can find is the Finley plush. On the info kiosk, they muse Finley always made them feel uneasy due to his size. Come the end of chapter one, we get a glimpse of the mascot Finley in the depths of Oceanic Odyssey, and sure enough, he is
** One of the first things seen upon entering the park property is a lifesize standee of Molly Macaw with the head having broken off. [[spoiler:At the end of the chapter, the real Molly is killed via Rambley cutting off her head with the doors.]]
