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* Poor Ned, Cat, and Robb are essentially bowled over by how the youngest members of their family have changed. Each has regrets and shame for how their failures and mistakes turned Jon, Sansa, Bran, and Arya into ruthless survivors.

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* Poor Ned, Cat, and Robb are essentially bowled over by how the youngest members of their family have changed. Each has their own regrets and shame for how their failures and mistakes turned Jon, Sansa, Bran, and Arya into ruthless survivors.



* Edmure breaks down to his uncle about his own mistakes in the original timeline and how he sold Blackfish out to try to protect his and Roslin's child only for it to be rendered AllForNothing.



* Due to her and her sisters killing Craster before he ever touched her, Gilly realizes that her son was never conceived, all the while still vividly remembering being pregnant with him and risking everything to ensure his safety. Jon is heartbroken and horrified when he realizes that the plan [[RetGone erased Little Sam and possibly other children out of existence]]. And what makes it even worse is that the spell they used was Sam's idea, so he inadvertently killed his adopted son, so Jon and Edd are especially worried about how he's going to take that news.

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* Due to her After she and her sisters killing Craster before he ever touched her, killed Craster, Gilly realizes eventually realized that this means her son was will never be conceived, all the while still vividly remembering being pregnant with him and risking everything to ensure his safety. Jon is heartbroken and horrified when he realizes that the plan [[RetGone erased Little Sam and possibly other children out of existence]]. And what What makes it even worse is that the spell they used was Sam's idea, so meaning he inadvertently killed his adopted son, so and thus, Jon and Edd are especially worried about how he's going to take that news.

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* Stannis has to live with knowing what his ambitions drove him to do and it breaks his family beyond recognition.

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* Stannis has to live with knowing [[OffingTheOffspring what his ambitions drove him to do do]] and it breaks destroys his family beyond recognition.repair, with Selyse killing herself in shame and Shireen disowning him.



* Theon almost regresses mentally into "Reek" when he sees Ned and Robb again. Considering all he'd gone through and suffered in the original timeline, it's no wonder seeing the people he'd betrayed and hurt triggers him so badly. It culminates in Ned banishing him after realizing he can't really punish Theon any more than he already has been.



** The Lannisters are shocked, outraged, and grief-stricken upon learning they [[MakeItLookLikeAnAccident made it look like Joanna bled out having Tyrion]].

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** The Lannisters are shocked, outraged, and grief-stricken upon learning they the Maesters [[MakeItLookLikeAnAccident made it look like Joanna bled out having Tyrion]].Tyrion]] all to get her out of the way of them exploiting Tywin's ruthlessness for their own ends.



** The Martells are horrified not only by Joanna's death (as she was Doran and Oberyn's mother's best friend), but how they'd manipulated Doran as well with illness.
** The Starks are similarly shaken by the revelation that Rickard and Brandon died due to the Maesters intercepting letters from Lyanna that would've explained what was really going on with her supposed kidnapping by Rhaegar, meaning their family's suffering all came from how they were being used as pawns in a massive conspiracy to dethrone the Targaryens. In the meantime, Luwin is horrified to learn about the Maester Conspiracy and how his order has betrayed its duty for the sake of a vendetta against magic.

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** The Martells are horrified not only by Joanna's death murder (as she was Doran and Oberyn's mother's best friend), but how they'd they manipulated Doran as well by tampering with illness.
his gout medication.
** The Starks are similarly shaken by the revelation that Rickard and Brandon died due to the Maesters intercepting letters from Lyanna that would've explained what was really going on with her supposed kidnapping by Rhaegar, meaning their family's suffering all came from how they were being used as pawns in a massive conspiracy to dethrone the Targaryens. Targaryens and suppress magic. In the meantime, Luwin is horrified to learn about the Maester Conspiracy and how his order order, people he's respected for years, has betrayed its duty and committed unspeakable atrocities for the sake of a vendetta against magic.



* Jon's reunion with Ygritte is an awkward mess, given both their history and the fact that he's with Dany now.
* Theon almost regresses mentally into "Reek" when he sees Ned and Robb again. Considering all he'd gone through and suffered in the original timeline, it's no wonder seeing the people he'd betrayed and hurt triggers him so badly.

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* Jon's reunion with Ygritte is an awkward mess, given both their history and the fact that he's with Dany now.
* Theon almost regresses mentally into "Reek" when he sees Ned and Robb again. Considering all he'd gone through and suffered in the original timeline, it's no wonder seeing the people he'd betrayed and hurt triggers him so badly.
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* Due to the Butterfly Effect, Gilly realizes that her son was never conceived, all the while still vividly remembering being pregnant with him and risking everything to ensure his safety. Jon is pretty horrified when he realizes that the plan [[RetGone erased Little Sam and possibly other children out of existence]]. The author's note even says, "Don't kill me, please!"

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* Due to the Butterfly Effect, her and her sisters killing Craster before he ever touched her, Gilly realizes that her son was never conceived, all the while still vividly remembering being pregnant with him and risking everything to ensure his safety. Jon is pretty heartbroken and horrified when he realizes that the plan [[RetGone erased Little Sam and possibly other children out of existence]]. The author's note And what makes it even says, "Don't kill me, please!"worse is that the spell they used was Sam's idea, so he inadvertently killed his adopted son, so Jon and Edd are especially worried about how he's going to take that news.



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** The Tyrells are shocked that the Maesters caused the death of Mace's wife and father.
** The Tullys are outraged about their manipulations as well.

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** The Tyrells are shocked that the Maesters caused the death of Mace's wife and father.
father, with Olenna even screaming for the man's head.
** The Tullys are outraged about their manipulations as well.well, recalling old interactions that feel much more sinister in hindsight.



** The Starks are similarly shaken by the revelation that Rickard and Brandon died due to the Maesters intercepting letters from Lyanna that would've explained what was really going on with her supposed kidnapping by Rhaegar, meaning their family's suffering all came from how they were being used as pawns in a massive conspiracy to dethrone the Targaryens. In the meantime, Luwin is horrified to learn about the Maester Conspiracy and how his order has betrayed its duty for the sake of a vendetta against magic.
*** Worse, while she denies it, Sansa can't help but momentarily doubt Luwin, despite having known him literally her entire life.



* Maester Luwin is horrified to learn about the Maester Conspiracy and how his order has betrayed its duty for the sake of a vendetta against magic.
** Worse, while she denies it, Sansa can't help but momentarily doubt Luwin, despite having known him literally her entire life.

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* Maester Luwin is horrified to learn about the Maester Conspiracy and how his order has betrayed its duty for the sake of a vendetta against magic.
** Worse, while she denies it, Sansa can't help but momentarily doubt Luwin, despite having known him literally her entire life.
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* Myrcella's horror and heartbreak at finding out the true depths of her mother Cersei's evilness as well as Tommen's suicide and everything else that happened after she died in the original timeline during Chapter 15. By the end, she's openly weeping while Tommen has been down and depressed the whole time.
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** Worse, while she denies it, Sansa can't help but momentarily doubt Luwin, despite having known him literally her entire life.

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** Worse, while she denies it, Sansa can't help but momentarily doubt Luwin, despite having known him literally her entire life.life.
* Theon almost regresses mentally into "Reek" when he sees Ned and Robb again. Considering all he'd gone through and suffered in the original timeline, it's no wonder seeing the people he'd betrayed and hurt triggers him so badly.

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* Poor Ned, Cat and Robb are essentially bowled over by how the last survivors of the war have changed. Each having their regrets and shames for how their failures and mistakes turned their family into ruthless survivors.
* Stannis has to live with understanding what his ambitions drove him to do, and it breaks his family beyond recognition.

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* Poor Ned, Cat Cat, and Robb are essentially bowled over by how the last survivors youngest members of the war their family have changed. Each having their has regrets and shames shame for how their failures and mistakes turned their family Jon, Sansa, Bran, and Arya into ruthless survivors.
* Stannis has to live with understanding knowing what his ambitions drove him to do, do and it breaks his family beyond recognition.



** The Lannisters are shocked, outraged and grief stricken into learning they [[MakeItLookLikeAnAccident made it look like Johanna bled out having Tyrion]].

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** The Lannisters are shocked, outraged outraged, and grief stricken into grief-stricken upon learning they [[MakeItLookLikeAnAccident made it look like Johanna Joanna bled out having Tyrion]].



** The Martells are horrified not only by Johanna's death (as she was Doran and Oberyn's mother's best friend), but how they'd manipulated Doran as well with illness.
* Catelyn is a woman lost in the world that was seized by her children. Set in her ways still, but buffeted by one revelation after another, where she has to learn about the many trials her children were sent on, eventually coming to believe ItsAllMyFault.
* Due to the Butterfly Effect, Gilly and Sam's son was never conceived. The author's note even says
--> "Don't kill me, please!"

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** The Martells are horrified not only by Johanna's Joanna's death (as she was Doran and Oberyn's mother's best friend), but how they'd manipulated Doran as well with illness.
* Catelyn Catelyn's ItsAllMyFault is a woman lost even worse the second time around. Not only does she have to hear about how her daughters went through horrific trauma while Bran has fully become the Three-Eyed Raven and is not the sweet little boy she'd fussed and doted over anymore, but learning of Jon's true parentage fills her with all kinds of guilt for how she'd mistreated him in the world that was seized by her children. Set in her ways still, but buffeted by one revelation after another, where she has to learn about the many trials her children were sent on, eventually coming to believe ItsAllMyFault.
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* Due to the Butterfly Effect, Gilly and Sam's realizes that her son was never conceived. conceived, all the while still vividly remembering being pregnant with him and risking everything to ensure his safety. Jon is pretty horrified when he realizes that the plan [[RetGone erased Little Sam and possibly other children out of existence]]. The author's note even says
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says, "Don't kill me, please!"
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* Due to TheButterflyEffect, Gilly and Sam's son was never conceived. The author's note even says

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* Due to TheButterflyEffect, the Butterfly Effect, Gilly and Sam's son was never conceived. The author's note even says
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* Meta: This story was started mid-run of ''Series/GameOfThrones''. While the show had a more positive outcome for the Second War for the Dawn, the fact that this story starts with them losing means that in between Dany's arrival and the defense of Winterfell, SOMETHING went horribly wrong.
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* Jon's reunion with Ygritte is an awkward mess, given both their history and the fact that he's with Dany now.

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* Jon's reunion with Ygritte is an awkward mess, given both their history and the fact that he's with Dany now.now.
* Maester Luwin is horrified to learn about the Maester Conspiracy and how his order has betrayed its duty for the sake of a vendetta against magic.
** Worse, while she denies it, Sansa can't help but momentarily doubt Luwin, despite having known him literally her entire life.
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-> "Don't kill me, please!"

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-> --> "Don't kill me, please!"
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-> "Don't kill me, please!"

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-> "Don't kill me, please!"please!"
* Jon's reunion with Ygritte is an awkward mess, given both their history and the fact that he's with Dany now.

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* Due to TheButterflyEffect, Gilly and Sam's son was never conceived.

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* Due to TheButterflyEffect, Gilly and Sam's son was never conceived. The author's note even says
-> "Don't kill me, please!"
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* Meta: This story was started mid run of Series/GameOfThrones. While that show had a more positive outcome for the 2nd war for the dawn, the fact that this story starts with them losing means that in between Dany's arrival and the defense of Winterfell, SOMETHING horrible went wrong in between.
* Poor Ned, Cat and Robb are essentially bowled over by how the last survivors of the Dawn war have changed. Each having their regrets and shames for how their failures and mistakes turned their family into ruthless survivors.

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* Meta: This story was started mid run mid-run of Series/GameOfThrones. ''Series/GameOfThrones''. While that the show had a more positive outcome for the 2nd war Second War for the dawn, Dawn, the fact that this story starts with them losing means that in between Dany's arrival and the defense of Winterfell, SOMETHING horrible went wrong in between.
horribly wrong.
* Poor Ned, Cat and Robb are essentially bowled over by how the last survivors of the Dawn war have changed. Each having their regrets and shames for how their failures and mistakes turned their family into ruthless survivors.



* The reveals of the Maester Conspiracy breaks several of the great houses.

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* The reveals of the Maester Conspiracy breaks break several of the great houses.



** The Tyrells are shocked that the Maesters cause the death of Mace's wife.

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** The Tyrells are shocked that the Maesters cause caused the death of Mace's wife.wife and father.



** The Martells are horrified not only by Johanna's death, but how they'd manipulated Doran as well with illness.

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** The Martells are horrified not only by Johanna's death, death (as she was Doran and Oberyn's mother's best friend), but how they'd manipulated Doran as well with illness.
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* Meta: This story was started mid run of the GameOfThrones show. While that show had a more positive outcome for the 2nd war for the dawn, the fact that this story starts with them losing means that in between Dany's arrival and the defense of Winterfell, SOMETHING horrible went wrong in between.

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* Meta: This story was started mid run of the GameOfThrones show.Series/GameOfThrones. While that show had a more positive outcome for the 2nd war for the dawn, the fact that this story starts with them losing means that in between Dany's arrival and the defense of Winterfell, SOMETHING horrible went wrong in between.
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The fic is born of the failure of the living. Even a second chance won't stop the tears.

!!The Main Fic
* Meta: This story was started mid run of the GameOfThrones show. While that show had a more positive outcome for the 2nd war for the dawn, the fact that this story starts with them losing means that in between Dany's arrival and the defense of Winterfell, SOMETHING horrible went wrong in between.
* Poor Ned, Cat and Robb are essentially bowled over by how the last survivors of the Dawn war have changed. Each having their regrets and shames for how their failures and mistakes turned their family into ruthless survivors.
* Stannis has to live with understanding what his ambitions drove him to do, and it breaks his family beyond recognition.
* Tyrion has to exile Shae because with the war, and with their [[PoorCommunicationKills miscommunications on their last interactions in the old timeline]], they can't be together safely or sanely anymore.
* The reveals of the Maester Conspiracy breaks several of the great houses.
** The Lannisters are shocked, outraged and grief stricken into learning they [[MakeItLookLikeAnAccident made it look like Johanna bled out having Tyrion]].
** The Tyrells are shocked that the Maesters cause the death of Mace's wife.
** The Tullys are outraged about their manipulations as well.
** The Martells are horrified not only by Johanna's death, but how they'd manipulated Doran as well with illness.
* Catelyn is a woman lost in the world that was seized by her children. Set in her ways still, but buffeted by one revelation after another, where she has to learn about the many trials her children were sent on, eventually coming to believe ItsAllMyFault.
* Due to TheButterflyEffect, Gilly and Sam's son was never conceived.

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