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'''Ludo:''' "[Stares up tot he slug man in horror.]" [[ThisIsGonnaSuck Uhhhhh.....]] "[The Slug mans proceeds to squeeze into the elevator and press Ludo and his minions against the glass.]"
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'''Ludo:''' "[Stares ''[Stares up tot he to the slug man in horror.]" ]''' [[ThisIsGonnaSuck Uhhhhh.....]] "[The Slug mans man proceeds to squeeze into the elevator and press Ludo and his minions against the glass.]"]''
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* BellyFlopCrushing: A non-stomach example, as this happens to Ludo and minions when they go on an elevator.
-->'''Slug:''' Hold the door there, folks!\\
'''Ludo:''' "[whimpers, knowing what will happen]. [[OhCrap Close, Close, CLOSE!]]\\
'''Slug:''' [The door almost closes, but the slug man was able to push the door back open.] Thanks, guys.\\
'''Ludo:''' "[Stares up tot he slug man in horror.]" [[ThisIsGonnaSuck Uhhhhh.....]] "[The Slug mans proceeds to squeeze into the elevator and press Ludo and his minions against the glass.]"
-->'''Slug:''' Hold the door there, folks!\\
'''Ludo:''' "[whimpers, knowing what will happen]. [[OhCrap Close, Close, CLOSE!]]\\
'''Slug:''' [The door almost closes, but the slug man was able to push the door back open.] Thanks, guys.\\
'''Ludo:''' "[Stares up tot he slug man in horror.]" [[ThisIsGonnaSuck Uhhhhh.....]] "[The Slug mans proceeds to squeeze into the elevator and press Ludo and his minions against the glass.]"
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[[caption-width-right:300:We're guessing the Main/WorkingTitle was "Maulmart".]]
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More accurate.
* RaceAgainstTheClock: Our heroes' primary goal is to find Star a new charger before her wand runs out of power.
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* TimedMission: Our heroes' primary goal is to find Star a new charger before her wand runs out of power.
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dewicking finaldeath per trs
* DeaderThanDead: Mentioned, but ultimately doesn't happen -- if Star's wand ever runs completely out of power, the unicorn powering it dies for good.
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* FinalDeath: Mentioned, but ultimately doesn't happen -- if Star's wand ever runs completely out of power, the unicorn powering it dies for good.