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* AdultFear: Vaarsuvius is horrified when the ancient Black Dragon has made the decision to kill his/her children. And when the dragon teleports away to their location, he ''freaks out''.
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* VisualPun: One of the hobgoblins shows up with a lampshade that Redcloak tells him to hang just anywhere.
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* VisualPun: One of the hobgoblins shows up with a lampshade [[LampshadeHanging lampshade]] that Redcloak tells him to hang just anywhere.anywhere.
** In the bonus strips with Lien and Elan's underwater adventure, one fish has a sword for a nose and there is a shark with a hammer grafted to its head. So they're a literal swordfish and hammerhead shark.
** In the bonus strips with Lien and Elan's underwater adventure, one fish has a sword for a nose and there is a shark with a hammer grafted to its head. So they're a literal swordfish and hammerhead shark.
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* AdultFear: Vaarsuvius is horrified when the ancient Black Dragon has made the decision to kill his/her children. And when the dragon teleports away to their location, he ''freaks out''.
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* CurbStompBattle: Xykon hands Vaarsuvius his ass in a magic fight.
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* DramaticIrony: Haley says the tropical birds her ate weren't relevant. The audience knows they really were.
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* DramaticIrony: Haley says the tropical birds her group ate weren't relevant. The audience knows they really were.
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* MagnificentBastard: The three fiends Vaarsuvius makes a deal with. The little imp even calls their charismatic deal a master class of temptation.
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* TheEndingChangesEverything: Well, maybe not ''everything'', but TheReveal that Blackwing saw a ''planet'' inside the Rift where the Snarl should be has certainly opened a whole new can of speculation...
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* DarkestHour: The Order hits it by comic 599. Roy is still dead and his body is now in the possession of Hieronymus Grubwiggler, Haley is trapped in Greysky City and being hunted down by those she had grown up with, Belkar is sick from activating his Greater Mark of Justice and Vaarsuvius has abandoned Elan and Durkon, who are the only two members of the Order who have remained active and united.
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* CrazyPrepared: Not only does the Oracle have a cleric scheduled to revive him after death, but he's also canny enough to have some vengeance prepared as well.
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* CrazyPrepared: Not only does the Oracle have a cleric scheduled to revive him after death, but he's also canny cunny enough to have some vengeance prepared as well.
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* DramaticIrony: Haley says the tropical birds her ate weren't relevant. The audience knows they really were.
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** Leo, Nero, and Cedrik give Vaarsuvius the Soul Splice power as part of a BatmanGambit to get Xykon out of stationary and start the hunt for the remaining gates, but the only reason he remained in Azure City was because [[TheStarscream Redcloak was using torturing O-Chu for information he didn't have as a pretense to set up a hobgoblin society in the city]].
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** Leo, Nero, and Cedrik give Vaarsuvius the Soul Splice power as part of a BatmanGambit to get Xykon out of stationary and start the hunt for the remaining gates, but the only reason he remained in Azure City was because [[TheStarscream Redcloak was using torturing O-Chu O-Chul for information he didn't have as a pretense to set up a hobgoblin society in the city]].
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** Leo, Nero, and Cedrik give Vaarsuvius the Soul Splice power as part of a BatmanGambit to get Xykon out of stationary and start the hunt for remaining gates, but the only reason he remained in Azure City was because [[TheStarscream Redcloak was using torturing O-Chu for information he didn't have as a pretense to set up a hobgoblin society in the city]].
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** Leo, Nero, and Cedrik give Vaarsuvius the Soul Splice power as part of a BatmanGambit to get Xykon out of stationary and start the hunt for the remaining gates, but the only reason he remained in Azure City was because [[TheStarscream Redcloak was using torturing O-Chu for information he didn't have as a pretense to set up a hobgoblin society in the city]].
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* MagnificentBastard: The three fiends Vaarsuvius makes a deal with. The little imp even calls their charismatic deal a master class of temptation.
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* UnskilleButStrong: Despite having the power of three (later two) of the most powerful dark wizards in the Lower Yard, s/he didn't work for the power, whereas Xykon gained all his strength with his own hands. Xykon even lampshades as such with his TheReasonYouSuckSpeech.
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* UnskilleButStrong: UnskilledButStrong: Despite Vaarsuvius having the power of three (later two) of the most powerful dark wizards in the Lower Yard, s/he didn't work for the power, whereas Xykon gained all his strength with his own hands. Xykon even lampshades as such with his TheReasonYouSuckSpeech.
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* DealWithTheDevil: Vaarsuvius ends up making one to gain ultimate power to save his family from the mother dragon. However, the Fiends offering the deal point out alternatives, and state that if s/he makes the deal it will be to avoid admitting s/he needed help.
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* DealWithTheDevil: Vaarsuvius ends up making one to gain ultimate power to save his family from the mother dragon. However, the Fiends offering the deal point out alternatives, and state that if s/he makes the deal [[{{Pride}} it will be to avoid admitting s/he needed help.help]].
* {{Irony}}:
** Last time, the Oracle's memory charm nearly screwed the Order over when it made them forget the realization that Xykon was actually attacking Azure City, with only a stroke of luck that they remained in the city just before the attack. This time, the charm saved Belkar just as Haley was kicking him out of the Order for killing the Oracle, although it did have the side effect of them not knowing his [[RestrainingBolt Mark of Justice]] had gone off.
** Leo, Nero, and Cedrik give Vaarsuvius the Soul Splice power as part of a BatmanGambit to get Xykon out of stationary and start the hunt for remaining gates, but the only reason he remained in Azure City was because [[TheStarscream Redcloak was using torturing O-Chu for information he didn't have as a pretense to set up a hobgoblin society in the city]].
** Last time, the Oracle's memory charm nearly screwed the Order over when it made them forget the realization that Xykon was actually attacking Azure City, with only a stroke of luck that they remained in the city just before the attack. This time, the charm saved Belkar just as Haley was kicking him out of the Order for killing the Oracle, although it did have the side effect of them not knowing his [[RestrainingBolt Mark of Justice]] had gone off.
** Leo, Nero, and Cedrik give Vaarsuvius the Soul Splice power as part of a BatmanGambit to get Xykon out of stationary and start the hunt for remaining gates, but the only reason he remained in Azure City was because [[TheStarscream Redcloak was using torturing O-Chu for information he didn't have as a pretense to set up a hobgoblin society in the city]].
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* VisualPun: One of the hobgoblins shows up with a lampshade that Redcloak tells him to hang just anywhere.
* UnskilleButStrong: Despite having the power of three (later two) of the most powerful dark wizards in the Lower Yard, s/he didn't work for the power, whereas Xykon gained all his strength with his own hands. Xykon even lampshades as such with his TheReasonYouSuckSpeech.
* UnskilleButStrong: Despite having the power of three (later two) of the most powerful dark wizards in the Lower Yard, s/he didn't work for the power, whereas Xykon gained all his strength with his own hands. Xykon even lampshades as such with his TheReasonYouSuckSpeech.
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* LaResistance: Haley forms one while in Azure City. There are also two other groups, but they don't want to cooperate.
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* LaResistance: Haley forms one while in Azure City. There are also two other groups, but [[WeAreStrugglingTogether they don't want to cooperate.cooperate]].
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* DealWithTheDevil:Vaarsuvius ends up making one to gain ultimate power to save his family from the mother dragon. However, the Fiends offering the deal point out alternatives, and state that if s/he makes the deal it will be to avoid admitting s/he needed help.
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* DealWithTheDevil:Vaarsuvius DealWithTheDevil: Vaarsuvius ends up making one to gain ultimate power to save his family from the mother dragon. However, the Fiends offering the deal point out alternatives, and state that if s/he makes the deal it will be to avoid admitting s/he needed help.
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-->'''Haley:''' Huh, what do you know, it worked.
-->'''Elan:''' You sure it didn't need to stay there?
-->'''Haley:''' Nah, that cast page is painfully outdated anyway. We all look deformed, or something.
-->'''Elan:''' You sure it didn't need to stay there?
-->'''Haley:''' Nah, that cast page is painfully outdated anyway. We all look deformed, or something.
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-->'''Haley:''' Huh, what do you know, it worked.
-->'''Elan:'''worked.\\
'''Elan:''' You sure it didn't need to staythere?
-->'''Haley:'''there?\\
'''Haley:''' Nah, that cast page is painfully outdated anyway. We all look deformed, or something.
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'''Elan:''' You sure it didn't need to stay
-->'''Haley:'''
'''Haley:''' Nah, that cast page is painfully outdated anyway. We all look deformed, or something.
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* [[spoiler: DealWithTheDevil:Vaarsuvius ends up making one to gain ultimate power to save his family from the mother dragon. However, the Fiends offering the deal point out alternatives, and state that if s/he makes the deal it will be to avoid admitting s/he needed help.]]
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* [[spoiler: DealWithTheDevil: Vaarsuvius DealWithTheDevil:Vaarsuvius ends up making one to gain ultimate power to save his family from the mother dragon. However, the Fiends offering the deal point out alternatives, and state that if s/he makes the deal it will be to avoid admitting s/he needed help.]]
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* BreakingTheFourthWall: While it's nothing new to the comic, Haley goes a step further and ''steals the diamond she's holding on the cast page.''
-->'''Haley:''' Huh, what do you know, it worked.
-->'''Elan:''' You sure it didn't need to stay there?
-->'''Haley:''' Nah, that cast page is painfully outdated anyway. We all look deformed, or something.
* ChekhovsGunman: Remember that young dragon Vaarsuvius destroyed? ''So does his mother...''
* CrazyPrepared: Not only does the Oracle have a cleric scheduled to revive him after death, but he's also canny enough to have some vengeance prepared as well.
* [[spoiler: DealWithTheDevil: Vaarsuvius ends up making one to gain ultimate power to save his family from the mother dragon. However, the Fiends offering point out alternatives, and state that if s/he makes the deal it will be to avoid admitting s/he needed help.]]
* EyepatchAfterTimeSkip: Elan has one, but he doesn't really need it.
* HelpfulHallucination: Belkar has one about Lord Shojo.
* LaResistance: Haley forms one while in Azure City. There are also two other groups, but they don't want to cooperate.
* TimeSkip: One happens while Roy is in FluffyCloudHeaven, about a few months long. And he didn't even realize it until his Grandfather Horace told him.
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Following the battle for Azure City, the Order finds themselves separated; Roy's dead, and his body is with Haley and Belkar in Azure city, while Elan, Durkon and Vaarsuvius are with the Azure Refugees. As each of them try to cope, Vaarsuvius ends up in serious trouble, and is forced to make a decision that will change ''everything...''
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Following the battle for Azure City, the Order finds find themselves separated; Roy's dead, and his body is with Haley and Belkar in Azure city, while Elan, Durkon and Vaarsuvius are all at sea with the Azure Azurite Refugees. As each of them try to cope, Vaarsuvius ends up in serious trouble, and is forced to make a decision that will change ''everything...''''
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Following the battle for Azure City, the Order finds themselves separated; Roy's dead, and his body is with Haley and Belkar in Azure city, while Elan, Durkon and Vaarsuvius are with the Azure Refugees. As each of them try to cope, Vaarsuvius ends up in serious trouble, and is forced to make a decision that will change ''everything...''
