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* CreepyRedHerring: One suspect is a belligerent Neo-Nazi racist. He turns out to be innocent, of the crime anyway.
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* RedHerring: A Neo-Nazi suspect who seems to have motive turns out to have been framed for the bombing.
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* RedHerring: A Neo-Nazi suspect who seems to have motive turns out to have been framed for the bombing.
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--> '''Don:''' You two are gonna talk Chinese now, right?
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--> '''Don:''' '''Flack:''' You two are gonna talk Chinese now, right?
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* WeAreEverywhere: When he's arrested, the terrorist leader tells Mac that there are plenty of other members out there who will continue to get their message out as long as people continue destroying the planet. Mac turns it on him, saying he has plenty of people too, good people who will hunt them down for as long as it takes to put them all away.
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* WeAreEverywhere: When he's arrested, the terrorist leader brags to Mac that there are plenty of other members out there who will continue to get their message out as long as people keep selfishly destroying the planet. Mac turns it on him, saying he has plenty of people too, good people who will hunt them down for as long as it takes to put them all away.
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* WeAreEverywhere: When he's arrested, the terrorist leader tells Mac that there are plenty of other members out there who will continue to get their message out as long as people continue destroying the planet. Mac turns it on him, saying he has plenty of people too, good people who will hunt them down for as long as it takes to put them all away.
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* [[GaiasVengeance Gaia's Avengers]]: The bombers are an eco-terrorist group.
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* [[GaiasVengeance Gaia's Avengers]]: The bombers are an eco-terrorist group.group who use bombs to get across their message that humans are destroying the planet.
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* MyLifeFlashedBeforeMyEyes: Downplayed. Stella asks injured Adam if this had happened to him. He says all he could think about was the little girl with whom he'd shared his first kiss in middle school.
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* MyLifeFlashedBeforeMyEyes: Downplayed. Stella asks injured Adam if this had happened to him. He says all he could think about was another kid who'd beaned him in the little girl with whom he'd shared his first kiss head during a dodge ball game in middle school.the third grade.
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* LampshadeHanging: Lindsay asks Sid about the autopsy results. He says, "I realize this is usually the part where I tell you that I found some strange, unusual, bizarre, aberrant, peculiar, idiosyncratic...uh, that's it, I don't have any more synonyms for strange. Wait, weird...weird piece of evidence. But alas, there's no Gila monster in her stomach. She simply succumbed to the bomb."
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--> '''Mac:''' Radius of 72 inches. Consistent with a 30 gallon drum.
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--> '''Mac:''' Radius of Approximately 72 inches. Consistent with a 30 gallon drum.
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---> '''Stella:''' [''looking around''] Well, we've got fragments of at least two drums. One blue, one red. Five 50 pound bags of ammonium nitrate per drum.
---> '''Mac:''' We're looking at a 500-pound bomb.
---> '''Mac:''' We're looking at a 500-pound bomb.
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---> '''Mac:''' This fragment is big enough to estimate a radius of 12 inches.
---> '''Don:''' You two are gonna talk Chinese now, right?
---> '''Mac:''' Circumference equals two pi R.
---> '''Stella:''' Two times 3.14 times 12.
---> '''Mac:''' Radius of 72 inches. Consistent with a 30 gallon drum.
---> '''Don:''' You two are gonna talk Chinese now, right?
---> '''Mac:''' Circumference equals two pi R.
---> '''Stella:''' Two times 3.14 times 12.
---> '''Mac:''' Radius of 72 inches. Consistent with a 30 gallon drum.
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* NonFatalExplosions: Despite being the closest one to the van with the bomb, Adam is only injured and is back at work before the episode ends.
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* NonFatalExplosions: Despite being the closest one to the van with the bomb, Adam is only injured and is back at work before the episode ends. (It helps that the side of the van he was on had been shored up to direct the force in the opposite direction.)
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* MyLifeFlashedBeforeMyEyes: Downplayed. Stella asks injured Adam if this had happened to him. He says all he could think about was the little girl with whom he'd shared his first kiss in middle school.
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!Trivia for the episode:
* Creator/AnnaBelknap's last episode before the birth of her second child, a son named George. She will return in episode 5.23, "Greater Good," for the birth of Danny and Lindsay's baby.
* Creator/AnnaBelknap's last episode before the birth of her second child, a son named George. She will return in episode 5.23, "Greater Good," for the birth of Danny and Lindsay's baby.
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* Creator/AnnaBelknap's last episode before the birth of her second child, a son named George. She will return in episode 5.23, "Greater Good," for the birth of Danny and Lindsay's baby.
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* Creator/AnnaBelknap's last episode before the birth of her second child, a son named George. She will return in episode 5.23, "Greater Good," for the birth of Lucy Messer.
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* Creator/AnnaBelknap's last episode before the birth of her second child, a son named George. She will return in episode 5.23, "Greater Good," for the birth of Lucy Messer.Danny and Lindsay's baby.
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* TechnoBabble: A mild example. While searching for the bomb's trigger, the team find pieces of a metal drum they surmise held ammonium nitrate and the following exchange occurs:
---> '''Mac:''' This fragment is big enough to estimate a radius of 12 inches.
---> '''Don:''' You two are gonna talk Chinese now, right?
---> '''Mac:''' Circumference equals two pi R.
---> '''Stella:''' Two times 3.14 times 12.
---> '''Mac:''' Radius of 72 inches. Consistent with a 30 gallon drum.
---> '''Stella:''' [''looking around''] Well, we've got fragments of at least two drums. One blue, one red. Five 50 pound bags of ammonium nitrate per drum.
---> '''Mac:''' We're looking at a 500-pound bomb.
---> '''Mac:''' This fragment is big enough to estimate a radius of 12 inches.
---> '''Don:''' You two are gonna talk Chinese now, right?
---> '''Mac:''' Circumference equals two pi R.
---> '''Stella:''' Two times 3.14 times 12.
---> '''Mac:''' Radius of 72 inches. Consistent with a 30 gallon drum.
---> '''Stella:''' [''looking around''] Well, we've got fragments of at least two drums. One blue, one red. Five 50 pound bags of ammonium nitrate per drum.
---> '''Mac:''' We're looking at a 500-pound bomb.
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* NonFatalExplosions: Despite being the closes one to the van with the bomb, Adam is only injured and is back at work before the episode ends.
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* NonFatalExplosions: Despite being the closes closest one to the van with the bomb, Adam is only injured and is back at work before the episode ends.
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"'''Green Piece'''" is the 17th episode of Season 5 and the 109th overall. It originally aired March 11, 2009.
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"'''Green Piece'''" is the 17th episode of Season 5 and the 109th overall. It originally aired March 11, 2009.
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* WeddingEpisode: Downplayed by Danny & Lindsay tying the knot at the courthouse before she heads to Montana on maternity leave.
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* WeddingEpisode: Downplayed by Danny & Lindsay tying the knot at the courthouse before she heads to Montana on maternity leave.leave.
!Trivia for the episode:
* Creator/AnnaBelknap's last episode before the birth of her second child, a son named George. She will return in episode 5.23, "Greater Good," for the birth of Lucy Messer.
!Trivia for the episode:
* Creator/AnnaBelknap's last episode before the birth of her second child, a son named George. She will return in episode 5.23, "Greater Good," for the birth of Lucy Messer.
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* RedHerring: A Neo-Nazi suspect who seems to have motive turns out to have been framed for the bombing.
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* RedHerring: A Neo-Nazi suspect who seems to have motive turns out to have been framed for the bombing.bombing.
* WeddingEpisode: Downplayed by Danny & Lindsay tying the knot at the courthouse before she heads to Montana on maternity leave.
* WeddingEpisode: Downplayed by Danny & Lindsay tying the knot at the courthouse before she heads to Montana on maternity leave.
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Directed by Creator/JeffreyGHunt
Written by Creator/AnthonyEZuiker, Creator/AnnDonahue, Creator/CarolMendelsohn & Creator/ZacharyReiter
A car bomb destroys a house while Adam and his friends are playing street hockey. The daughter of an electronics recycling manager is found dead in the rubble. Danny proposes to Lindsay again.
!Tropes for the episode:
* [[GaiasVengeance Gaia's Avengers]]: The bombers are an eco-terrorist group.
* NonFatalExplosions: Despite being the closes one to the van with the bomb, Adam is only injured and is back at work before the episode ends.
* RedHerring: A Neo-Nazi suspect who seems to have motive turns out to have been framed for the bombing.
Written by Creator/AnthonyEZuiker, Creator/AnnDonahue, Creator/CarolMendelsohn & Creator/ZacharyReiter
A car bomb destroys a house while Adam and his friends are playing street hockey. The daughter of an electronics recycling manager is found dead in the rubble. Danny proposes to Lindsay again.
!Tropes for the episode:
* [[GaiasVengeance Gaia's Avengers]]: The bombers are an eco-terrorist group.
* NonFatalExplosions: Despite being the closes one to the van with the bomb, Adam is only injured and is back at work before the episode ends.
* RedHerring: A Neo-Nazi suspect who seems to have motive turns out to have been framed for the bombing.
