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Misuse. See notes above.
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* EasilyForgiven: Mrs. Croaker seemingly does this with Sprig when she shows no hard feelings towards the young frog's cheeky road rage from earlier. It's later subverted when it turns out Mrs. Croaker ''does'' hold it against Sprig, to the point that she deliberately drove slowly to mess with him.
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%%* EasilyForgiven: Mrs. Croaker seemingly does this with Sprig when she shows no hard feelings towards the young frog's cheeky road rage from earlier. It's later subverted when it turns out Mrs. Croaker ''does'' hold it against Sprig, to the point that she deliberately drove slowly to mess with him.
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* FreezeFrameBonus: We can read the first two pages of Bessie's manual, which consist of a rambling description of the color of the fall leaves that goes off on enough random tangents to put [[WesternAnimation/TheSimpsons Grandpa Simpson]] to shame.
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* FreezeFrameBonus: We can read the first two pages of Bessie's manual, which consist of a [[RamblingOldManMonologue rambling description description]] of the color of the fall leaves that goes off on enough random tangents to put [[WesternAnimation/TheSimpsons Grandpa Grampa Simpson]] to shame.
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* FreezeFrameBonus: We can read the first two pages of Bessie's manual, which consist of a rambling description of the color of the fall leaves that goes off on enough random tangents to put [[WesternAnimation/TheSimpsons Grandpa Simpson]] to shame.
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* LaughingMad: Anne does this at the end of the episode segment because of how long she stayed up to read the entire manual and the danger she went through and Hop Pop saying now she only needs experience.
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* LaughingMad: Anne does this at the end of the episode segment because of how long when, after she stayed up all night to read the entire manual and the danger she went through and manual, Hop Pop saying says now she only needs experience.experience, completely unaware of what she went through yesterday.
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* ShoutOut: One of the hedgehogs is [[Franchise/SonictheHedgehog noticeably blue]].
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* ShoutOut: One of the hedgehogs is [[Franchise/SonictheHedgehog [[Franchise/SonicTheHedgehog noticeably blue]].
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* ShoutOut: One of the hedgehogs is [[VideoGame/SonictheHedgehog noticeably blue]].
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* ShoutOut: One of the hedgehogs is [[VideoGame/SonictheHedgehog [[Franchise/SonictheHedgehog noticeably blue]].
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Campaign posters for Mayor Toadstool can be seen on the road; Toadstool's reelection campaign is central to the plot of several later episode.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Campaign posters for Mayor Toadstool can be seen on the road; Toadstool's reelection campaign is central to the plot of several later episode.episodes.
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A teenage girl can't move a heavy creature. No noted setups, surprises, or subversions here.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: One would think, given Anne is bigger than the average inhabitant of Amphibia, she would be relatively stronger. But even with her strength combined with Sprig's, Anne can't move Bessie from her spot, especially when she and her shell are roughly the size and weight of a full-grown cow.
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* DebutQueue: This marks the first appearance of the Plantar's snail Bessie.
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-->'''Hop Pop:''' I don't feel safe!
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-->'''Hop Pop:''' (''mildly concerned'') I don't feel safe!
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* LaughingMad: Anne does this at the end of the episode segment because of how long she stayed up to read the entire manual and the danger she went through and Hop Pop saying now she only needs expierence.
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* LaughingMad: Anne does this at the end of the episode segment because of how long she stayed up to read the entire manual and the danger she went through and Hop Pop saying now she only needs expierence.experience.
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* RealityEnsues: One would think, given Anne is bigger than the average inhabitant of Amphibia, she would be relatively stronger. But even with her strength combined with Sprig's, Anne can't move Bessie from her spot, especially when she and her shell are roughly the size and weight of a full-grown cow.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: One would think, given Anne is bigger than the average inhabitant of Amphibia, she would be relatively stronger. But even with her strength combined with Sprig's, Anne can't move Bessie from her spot, especially when she and her shell are roughly the size and weight of a full-grown cow.
