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->''He didn't finish the sentence. The last remains of sleep vanished instantly as he saw it.''\\
''Her hair. Her long, flowing hair.''\\
''And it wasn't just that. Her face, what he could see of it in the dark, seemed more round and soft, her cheeks not as defined; her body as well was shorter and slimmer, the muscles on her bare arms that had been toned from strenuous work with the garden and the machines seemingly faded...''\\
''She was young.''\\
''She didn't look much older than on the day they had met so long ago.''\\
''His mind was racing, trying to comprehend such an impossibility, but none of the thousands of thoughts could give him an answer he liked. He literally jumped out of the bed, almost throwing Asuka aside, as he unbelievingly took in the surroundings. A small and tidy room. He could make out the shape of a cello case in one corner, the familiar silhouette of a S-DAT player on the desk near the bed.''\\
''This wasn't their bedroom at home, this was his old room in Misato's apartment – but without any dirt and debris, without any sign of destruction at all.''\\
''But it wasn't just everything around him. His body, too, felt different as though changes that were supposed to come slow enough to adapt to had been made instantly. He may never have had as distinctive and hard features as his father, but reaching up to his face, he also could only feel smooth skin, not even a hint of stubble.''
''Her hair. Her long, flowing hair.''\\
''And it wasn't just that. Her face, what he could see of it in the dark, seemed more round and soft, her cheeks not as defined; her body as well was shorter and slimmer, the muscles on her bare arms that had been toned from strenuous work with the garden and the machines seemingly faded...''\\
''She was young.''\\
''She didn't look much older than on the day they had met so long ago.''\\
''His mind was racing, trying to comprehend such an impossibility, but none of the thousands of thoughts could give him an answer he liked. He literally jumped out of the bed, almost throwing Asuka aside, as he unbelievingly took in the surroundings. A small and tidy room. He could make out the shape of a cello case in one corner, the familiar silhouette of a S-DAT player on the desk near the bed.''\\
''This wasn't their bedroom at home, this was his old room in Misato's apartment – but without any dirt and debris, without any sign of destruction at all.''\\
''But it wasn't just everything around him. His body, too, felt different as though changes that were supposed to come slow enough to adapt to had been made instantly. He may never have had as distinctive and hard features as his father, but reaching up to his face, he also could only feel smooth skin, not even a hint of stubble.''
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And it wasn't just that. Her face, what he could see of it in the dark, seemed more round and soft, her cheeks not as defined; her body as well was shorter and slimmer, the muscles on her bare arms that had been toned from strenuous work with the garden and the machines seemingly faded...
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''His
His mind was racing, trying to comprehend such an impossibility, but none of the thousands of thoughts could give him an answer he liked. He literally jumped out of the bed, almost throwing Asuka aside, as he unbelievingly took in the surroundings. A small and tidy room. He could make out the shape of a cello case in one corner, the familiar silhouette of a S-DAT player on the desk near the bed.
''This
This wasn't their bedroom at home, this was his old room in Misato's apartment – but without any dirt and debris, without any sign of destruction at all.
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But it wasn't just everything around him. His body, too, felt different as though changes that were supposed to come slow enough to adapt to had been made instantly. He may never have had as distinctive and hard features as his father, but reaching up to his face, he also could only feel smooth skin, not even a hint of stubble.
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->Not even the [[AncientTradition Bene Gesserit]] [[CharlesAtlasSuperpower Sisters]] could take such safaris, striking inward along the axis of memories — back, back to the very limits of cellular awareness, or stopping by a wayside to revel in a sophisticated sensory delight. Once, after [[ExpendableClone the death of a particularly superb Duncan]], he had toured great musical performances preserved in his memories. Mozart had tired him quickly. ''Pretentious! But Bach... ahhh, Bach.''
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->'''Middle Nerd''': "So what time did you come from?"
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->'''Middle Nerd''': "That's nice. Could you have picked a more confusing time to show up?"
->'''Left Nerd''': "[[SarcasmMode Not confusing at all]]. Time traveling back into a dream, that happens all the time! Makes '''perfect fucking sense'''!!"
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->'''Middle Nerd''': "''Relax''".
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->Not even the [[AncientTradition Bene Gesserit]] [[CharlesAtlasSuperpower Sisters]] could take such safaris, striking inward along the axis of memories — back, back to the very limits of cellular awareness, or stopping by a wayside to revel in a sophisticated sensory delight. Once, after [[ExpendableClone the death of a particularly superb Duncan]], he had toured great musical performances preserved in his memories. Mozart had tired him quickly. ''Pretentious! But Bach... ahhh, Bach.
->Leto remembered the joy of it.
->''I sat at the organ and let the music drench me.''
->Only three times in all memory had there been an equal to Bach.
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->Not even the [[AncientTradition Bene Gesserit]] [[CharlesAtlasSuperpower Sisters]] could take such safaris, striking inward along the axis of memories — back, back to the very limits of cellular awareness, or stopping by a wayside to revel in a sophisticated sensory delight. Once, after [[ExpendableClone the death of a particularly superb Duncan]], he had toured great musical performances preserved in his memories. Mozart had tired him quickly. ''Pretentious! But Bach... ahhh, Bach.
->Leto remembered the joy of it.
->''I sat at the organ and let the music drench me.''
->Only three times in all memory had there been an equal to Bach.
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->''He didn't see any point in wondering whether or not this was real; considering he'd been at least partly responsible for shattering the very fabric of reality and/or turning the entire human race -less himself, a two hundred-foot naked copy of his sister(?) and Asuka- into LCL to experience some rather nebulous transhumanist paradise, skepticism about mere mental time travel seemed rather silly.''
-->--'''Shinji''', ''Fanfic/DoingItRightThisTime''
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->''He didn't finish the sentence. The last remains of sleep vanished instantly as he saw it.''\\
''Her hair. Her long, flowing hair.''\\
''And it wasn't just that. Her face, what he could see of it in the dark, seemed more round and soft, her cheeks not as defined; her body as well was shorter and slimmer, the muscles on her bare arms that had been toned from strenuous work with the garden and the machines seemingly faded...''\\
''She was young.''\\
''She didn't look much older than on the day they had met so long ago.''\\
''His mind was racing, trying to comprehend such an impossibility, but none of the thousands of thoughts could give him an answer he liked. He literally jumped out of the bed, almost throwing Asuka aside, as he unbelievingly took in the surroundings. A small and tidy room. He could make out the shape of a cello case in one corner, the familiar silhouette of a S-DAT player on the desk near the bed.''\\
''This wasn't their bedroom at home, this was his old room in Misato's apartment – but without any dirt and debris, without any sign of destruction at all.''\\
''But it wasn't just everything around him. His body, too, felt different as though changes that were supposed to come slow enough to adapt to had been made instantly. He may never have had as distinctive and hard features as his father, but reaching up to his face, he also could only feel smooth skin, not even a hint of stubble.''
-->-- '''Shinji''' and '''Asuka''' finding they have travelled back in time and are fourteen again, ''Fanfic/TheSecondTry'', ''chapter 10''
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->''He didn't finish the sentence. The last remains of sleep vanished instantly as he saw it.''\\
''Her hair. Her long, flowing hair.''\\
''And it wasn't just that. Her face, what he could see of it in the dark, seemed more round and soft, her cheeks not as defined; her body as well was shorter and slimmer, the muscles on her bare arms that had been toned from strenuous work with the garden and the machines seemingly faded...''\\
''She was young.''\\
''She didn't look much older than on the day they had met so long ago.''\\
''His mind was racing, trying to comprehend such an impossibility, but none of the thousands of thoughts could give him an answer he liked. He literally jumped out of the bed, almost throwing Asuka aside, as he unbelievingly took in the surroundings. A small and tidy room. He could make out the shape of a cello case in one corner, the familiar silhouette of a S-DAT player on the desk near the bed.''\\
''This wasn't their bedroom at home, this was his old room in Misato's apartment – but without any dirt and debris, without any sign of destruction at all.''\\
''But it wasn't just everything around him. His body, too, felt different as though changes that were supposed to come slow enough to adapt to had been made instantly. He may never have had as distinctive and hard features as his father, but reaching up to his face, he also could only feel smooth skin, not even a hint of stubble.''
-->-- '''Shinji''' and '''Asuka''' finding they have travelled back in time and are fourteen again, ''Fanfic/TheSecondTry'', ''chapter 10''
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