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->''"The truth was a burning green crack through my brain. [[HeadsUpDisplay Weapon statistics hanging in the air, glimpsed out of the corner of my eye.]] Endless repetition of the act of shooting, [[BulletTime time slowing down to show off my moves.]] The paranoid feel of someone controlling my every step. [[BreakingTheFourthWall I was in a computer game.]] [[TakeThatUs Funny as hell, it was the most horrible thing I could think of.]]"''
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->''"The truth was a burning green crack through my brain. [[HeadsUpDisplay Weapon statistics hanging in the air, glimpsed out of the corner of my eye.]] Endless repetition of the act of shooting, [[BulletTime time slowing down to show off my moves.]] The paranoid feel of someone controlling my every step. [[BreakingTheFourthWall I was in a computer game.]] [[TakeThatUs [[SelfDeprecatingHumor Funny as hell, it was the most horrible thing I could think of.]]"''
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->''So I guess I had become what they wanted me to be: a killer, some rent-a-clown with a gun who puts holes in other bad guys. Well, that's what they had paid for, so in the end, that's what they got. Say what you want about Americans, but we understand capitalism: you buy yourself a product and you get what you pay for. And these chumps had paid for some angry gringo without the sensibilities to know right from wrong. Here I was, about to execute this poor bastard like some dime-store angel of death, and I realized: they were correct. I wouldn't know right from wrong if one of them was feeding the poor and the other was banging my sister.''
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->''So I guess I had become what they wanted me to be: a killer, some rent-a-clown with a gun who puts holes in other bad guys. Well, that's what they had paid for, so in the end, that's what they got. Say what you want about Americans, but we understand capitalism: you buy yourself a product and you get what you pay for. And these chumps had paid for some angry gringo without the sensibilities to know right from wrong. Here I was, about to execute this poor bastard like some dime-store angel of death, and I realized: they were correct. I wouldn't know right from wrong if one of them was feeding helping the poor and the other was banging my sister.''
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-->-- '''Vladimir Lem''', ''Max Payne 2'', announcing Max's arrival via microphone to the mooks invading his soon-to-be restaurant.
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-->-- '''Vladimir Lem''', ''Max Payne 2'', announcing Max's arrival via microphone to the mooks invading his soon-to-be restaurant.
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-->-- '''Nicole Horne'''
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-->-- '''Nicole Horne'''
Horne''', ''Max Payne''
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-->-- '''Max Payne''', commenting on his RoaringRampageOfRevenge.
->''"They were all dead. The final gunshot was an exclamation mark to [[HowWeGotHere everything that had led to this point]]. I released my finger from the trigger, and then it was over."''
->''"They were all dead. The final gunshot was an exclamation mark to [[HowWeGotHere everything that had led to this point]]. I released my finger from the trigger, and then it was over."''
->''"They were all dead. The final gunshot was an exclamation mark to [[HowWeGotHere everything that had led to this point]]. I released my finger from the trigger, and then it was over."''
-->-- '''Max Payne'''
-->-- '''Max Payne'''
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-->-- '''Max Payne''', during a DreamSequence.
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-->-- '''Max Payne''', during a DreamSequence.
Payne'''
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-->-- '''Max Payne''', from '''Max Payne 2'''
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-->-- '''Max Payne''', from '''Max ''Max Payne 2'''
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->''"If there's no light, it ain't a tunnel.'' It's a hole."
-->--'''Max Payne 3'''
->''"Time moves forward, and nothing changes."''
-->--'''Max Payne''', reflecting on how he ends up in the [[OnceAnEpisode same situations game after game]].
->''"There it was, [[LampshadeHanging the soundtrack of my life]]. And, for a few seconds, came harmony."''
-->-- '''Max Payne''', upon finally managing to play his theme on piano in the third game.
->''"I felt like the Avenging Angel. I looked like a fat bald dude with a bad temper."''
-->-- '''Max Payne 3'''
->''"So I guess I had become what they wanted me to be: a killer, some rent-a-clown with a gun who puts holes in other bad guys. Well, that's what they had paid for, so in the end, that's what they got. Say what you want about Americans, but we understand capitalism: you buy yourself a product and you get what you pay for. And these chumps had paid for some angry gringo without the sensibilities to know right from wrong. Here I was, about to execute this poor bastard like some dime-store angel of death, and I realized: they were correct. I wouldn't know right from wrong if one of them was feeding the poor and the other was banging my sister."''
-->-- '''Max Payne''', ruminating on the most recent lesson he's learned
-->--'''Max Payne 3'''
->''"Time moves forward, and nothing changes."''
-->--'''Max Payne''', reflecting on how he ends up in the [[OnceAnEpisode same situations game after game]].
->''"There it was, [[LampshadeHanging the soundtrack of my life]]. And, for a few seconds, came harmony."''
-->-- '''Max Payne''', upon finally managing to play his theme on piano in the third game.
->''"I felt like the Avenging Angel. I looked like a fat bald dude with a bad temper."''
-->-- '''Max Payne 3'''
->''"So I guess I had become what they wanted me to be: a killer, some rent-a-clown with a gun who puts holes in other bad guys. Well, that's what they had paid for, so in the end, that's what they got. Say what you want about Americans, but we understand capitalism: you buy yourself a product and you get what you pay for. And these chumps had paid for some angry gringo without the sensibilities to know right from wrong. Here I was, about to execute this poor bastard like some dime-store angel of death, and I realized: they were correct. I wouldn't know right from wrong if one of them was feeding the poor and the other was banging my sister."''
-->-- '''Max Payne''', ruminating on the most recent lesson he's learned
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-->--'''Max
-->--''Max Payne
->''"Time
->''[[OnceAnEpisode Another dark rainy night, another police station, another futile crusade for amends.]] Time moves forward, and nothing changes.
-->--'''Max Payne''', reflecting on how he ends up in the [[OnceAnEpisode same situations game after game]].
->''"There
-->--''Max Payne 3''
->''There it was, [[LampshadeHanging the soundtrack of my life]]. And, for a few seconds, came harmony.
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->''"I
->''I felt like the Avenging Angel. I looked like a fat bald dude with a bad temper.
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->''"So
->''So I guess I had become what they wanted me to be: a killer, some rent-a-clown with a gun who puts holes in other bad guys. Well, that's what they had paid for, so in the end, that's what they got. Say what you want about Americans, but we understand capitalism: you buy yourself a product and you get what you pay for. And these chumps had paid for some angry gringo without the sensibilities to know right from wrong. Here I was, about to execute this poor bastard like some dime-store angel of death, and I realized: they were correct. I wouldn't know right from wrong if one of them was feeding the poor and the other was banging my sister.
-->--
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->''"The truth was a burning green crack through my brain. [[HeadsUpDisplay Weapon statistics hanging in the air, glimpsed out of the corner of my eye.]] Endless repetition of the act of shooting, [[BulletTime time slowing down to show off my moves.]] The paranoid feel of someone controlling my every step. [[BreakingTheFourthWall I was in a computer game.]] [[TakeThatUs Funny as hell, it was the most horrible thing I could think of.]]"''
-->-- '''Max Payne''', during a DreamSequence.
-->-- '''Max Payne''', during a DreamSequence.
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->''"[[ClicheStorm Mine wasn't the most original approach to the problem]]. [[LampshadeHanging It wasn't as if it hadn't all been done before]]. An eye for an eye, the first principle of {{revenge}}, [[OlderThanDirt old as dirt]], still going strong. The cardinal rule in going after someone with an intention to kill was [[NothingPersonal not to make it personal]], [[ItsPersonal which it almost always ended up being anyway]]."''
-->-- '''Max Payne''', commenting on his RoaringRampageOfRevenge.
-->-- '''Max Payne''', commenting on his RoaringRampageOfRevenge.
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->'''[[spoiler: Victor Branco]]:''' (Laughing) You know I'll walk!
->'''Max:''' You'll walk... ''with a LIMP!'' (breaks knee)
-->-- ''Max Payne 3''
->'''Max:''' You'll walk... ''with a LIMP!'' (breaks knee)
-->-- ''Max Payne 3''
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->'''Max:''' You'll walk... ''with a LIMP!'' (breaks knee)
-->-- ''Max Payne
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->'''[[spoiler: Victor Branco]]''' (Laughing) You know I'll walk!
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->'''[[spoiler: Victor Branco]]''' Branco]]:''' (Laughing) You know I'll walk!
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->''"I felt like the Angel of Death. I looked like a fat bald guy with a temper."''
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->''"I felt like the Angel of Death. Avenging Angel. I looked like a fat bald guy dude with a bad temper."''
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->''"So in the end I guess I had become what they wanted me to be: a killer, some rent-a-clown with a gun who puts holes in other bad guys. Well, that's what they had paid for, so in the end, that's what they got. Say what you want about Americans, but we understand capitalism: you buy yourself a product and you get what you pay for. And these chumps had paid for some angry gringo without the sensibilities to know right from wrong. Here I was, about to execute this poor bastard like some dime-store angel of death, and I realized: they were correct. I wouldn't know right from wrong if one of them was feeding the poor and the other was banging my sister."''
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->''"So in the end I guess I had become what they wanted me to be: a killer, some rent-a-clown with a gun who puts holes in other bad guys. Well, that's what they had paid for, so in the end, that's what they got. Say what you want about Americans, but we understand capitalism: you buy yourself a product and you get what you pay for. And these chumps had paid for some angry gringo without the sensibilities to know right from wrong. Here I was, about to execute this poor bastard like some dime-store angel of death, and I realized: they were correct. I wouldn't know right from wrong if one of them was feeding the poor and the other was banging my sister."''
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->''"Time moves forward, and nothing changes."''
-->--'''Max Payne''', reflecting on how he ends up in the [[OnceAnEpisode same situations game after game]].
-->--'''Max Payne''', reflecting on how he ends up in the [[OnceAnEpisode same situations game after game]].
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->''"One last thing left to do. I was compelled to give [[spoiler:Vlad]] his gun back..."'' *DramaticGunCock* ''"...[[BadassBoast one bullet at a time]]."''
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->''"One last thing left to do. I was compelled to give [[spoiler:Vlad]] his gun back..."'' *DramaticGunCock* "''\\
*DramaticGunCock*\\
''"...[[BadassBoast one bullet at a time]]."''
*DramaticGunCock*\\
''"...[[BadassBoast one bullet at a time]]."''
