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->What I find interesting now is how many "throwaways" these stories have -- visual ideas, gags, "bits," -- that are inessential to the plot. They're simply things I wanted to do. I tend to be more disciplined, now, in this regard. But I wonder if that's entirely a virtue. Those throwaways are really pretty fun, rather like searching for the hidden animals in a children's magazine puzzle picture. Every page promises a new "bird" or "squirrel"...or a moon that echoes Concrete's bullet-cratered head, or a sculpture of a backstabber in the mansion of a betraying rock star.
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->What I find interesting now is how many "throwaways" these stories have -- visual ideas, gags, "bits," -- that are inessential to the plot. They're simply things I wanted to do. I tend to be more disciplined, now, in this regard. But I wonder if that's entirely a virtue. Those throwaways are really pretty fun, rather like searching for the hidden animals in a children's magazine puzzle picture. Every page promises a new "bird" or "squirrel"...or a moon that echoes Concrete's bullet-cratered head, or a sculpture {{sculpture|s}} of a backstabber in the mansion of a betraying rock star.
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-->-- '''Kevin''' of ''LetsPlay/HoboBros'', reacting to the [[WebAnimation/Supermarioglitchy4sSuperMario64Bloopers SMG4]] episode "[[Recap/Supermarioglitchy4sSuperMario64BloopersMarioAndTheTPoseVirus Mario and the T-Pose Virus]]".
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-->-- '''Kevin''' of ''LetsPlay/HoboBros'', reacting to the [[WebAnimation/Supermarioglitchy4sSuperMario64Bloopers SMG4]] episode "[[Recap/Supermarioglitchy4sSuperMario64BloopersMarioAndTheTPoseVirus "[[Recap/SMG4MarioAndTheTPoseVirus Mario and the T-Pose Virus]]".
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->''"Ha! Bob was recording."''
-->-- '''Kevin''' of ''LetsPlay/HoboBros'', reacting to the [[WebAnimation/Supermarioglitchy4sSuperMario64Bloopers SMG4]] episode "[[Recap/Supermarioglitchy4sSuperMario64BloopersMarioAndTheTPoseVirus Mario and the T-Pose Virus]]".
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->''I love that Mallory and the ninja were attacking each other by doing patty cake in the background.''
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-->-- '''Paul Chadwick''', Introduction to ''Comicbook/{{Concrete}}: Depths''
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-->-- '''Kynan Barker''' in his and '''Danny Horn''''s [=ToughPigs=] [[http://www.toughpigs.com/my-week-with-more-christmas-3/ review]] of ''Film/AMuppetFamilyChristmas''
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-->-- WebVideo/UncleAl's ''[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2mUOymWLCqE Donkey Kong Country Abridged - Episode 1 - Big Dumb Day]]'', in a rare audio example of the trope
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->''I love that Mallory and the ninja were attacking each other by doing patty cake in the background.''
-->--A ''Website/YouTube'' comment on ''Series/StudioC'''s Black Friday sketch.
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->''[screen gradually zooms in on a spaced-out Donkey Kong with several noises and music, implying that's what's going on in his head as Diddy talks to him]]''
-> '''Diddy:''' ''[in background]'' Oh, all right, but you better be careful! You ''know'' I just got that vasectomy, and t-the doctor says I ''really'' need to take it easy because if I'm not cautious enough I could reopen the wound, and I really can't afford that because A. I no longer have healthcare after the divorce, and B. my blood is about as thin as an anorexic-
-> '''Donkey Kong:''' ''[punches button to take Diddy up, but causes him to fall down and get trapped in the wreckage of the barrel he was in]''
-> '''Donkey Kong:''' [[OhCrap Uh...Shit.]]
-> '''Diddy:''' ''[muffled]'' [[AmusingInjuries I'm in so much pain!]]
-->-- ''[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2mUOymWLCqE Donkey Kong Country Abridged - Episode 1 - Big Dumb Day]]'', in a rare audio example of the trope
-> '''Diddy:''' ''[in background]'' Oh, all right, but you better be careful! You ''know'' I just got that vasectomy, and t-the doctor says I ''really'' need to take it easy because if I'm not cautious enough I could reopen the wound, and I really can't afford that because A. I no longer have healthcare after the divorce, and B. my blood is about as thin as an anorexic-
-> '''Donkey Kong:''' ''[punches button to take Diddy up, but causes him to fall down and get trapped in the wreckage of the barrel he was in]''
-> '''Donkey Kong:''' [[OhCrap Uh...Shit.]]
-> '''Diddy:''' ''[muffled]'' [[AmusingInjuries I'm in so much pain!]]
-->-- ''[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2mUOymWLCqE Donkey Kong Country Abridged - Episode 1 - Big Dumb Day]]'', in a rare audio example of the trope
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->''[screen gradually zooms in on a spaced-out Donkey Kong with several noises and music, implying that's what's going on in his head as Diddy talks to him]]''
-> '''Diddy:'''him]''
->'''Diddy:''' ''[in background]'' Oh, all right, but you better be careful! You ''know'' I just got that vasectomy, and t-the doctor says I ''really'' need to take it easy because if I'm not cautious enough I could reopen the wound, and I really can't afford that because A. I no longer have healthcare after the divorce, and B. my blood is about as thin as an anorexic-
-> '''Donkey ->'''Donkey Kong:''' ''[punches button to take Diddy up, but causes him to fall down and get trapped in the wreckage of the barrel he was in]''
-> '''Donkey ->'''Donkey Kong:''' [[OhCrap Uh...Shit.]]
-> '''Diddy:''' ->'''Diddy:''' ''[muffled]'' [[AmusingInjuries I'm in so much pain!]]
-->-- WebVideo/UncleAl's ''[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2mUOymWLCqE Donkey Kong Country Abridged - Episode 1 - Big Dumb Day]]'', in a rare audio example of the trope
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->'''Diddy:''' ''[in background]'' Oh, all right, but you better be careful! You ''know'' I just got that vasectomy, and t-the doctor says I ''really'' need to take it easy because if I'm not cautious enough I could reopen the wound, and I really can't afford that because A. I no longer have healthcare after the divorce, and B. my blood is about as thin as an anorexic-
-->-- WebVideo/UncleAl's ''[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2mUOymWLCqE Donkey Kong Country Abridged - Episode 1 - Big Dumb Day]]'', in a rare audio example of the trope
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->We cut to Avengers Mansion, where all the superheroes that were not abducted are gathering, got a list, are already figuring out who is missing. There's a weird little drawing the bottom left corner by Ron Lim where ComicBook/{{Iceman}} trips Speedball who apparently plants his face between ComicBook/SheHulk's boobs. Is that something that Jim Starlin wrote into this cosmic script? Or was Ron Lim getting bored and was just like "I gotta draw this for '''me'''."
-->-- '''WebVideo/ComicTropes''', "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l-gaxgNC8k0 Jim Starlin's Great and Not-So-Great Cosmic Creations at Marvel]]"
-->-- '''WebVideo/ComicTropes''', "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l-gaxgNC8k0 Jim Starlin's Great and Not-So-Great Cosmic Creations at Marvel]]"
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-> '''Diddy''': [in background] Oh, all right, but you better be careful! You ''know'' I just got that vasectomy, and t-the doctor says I ''really'' need to take it easy because if I'm not cautious enough I could reopen the wound, and I really can't afford that because A. I no longer have healthcare after the divorce, and B. my blood is about as thin as an anorexic-
-> '''Donkey Kong''': [punches button to take Diddy up, but causes him to fall down and get trapped in the wreckage of the barrel he was in]
-> '''Donkey Kong''': [[OhCrap Uh...Shit.]]
-> '''Diddy''': [muffled] [[AmusingInjuries I'm in so much pain!]]
-> '''Diddy''': [in background] Oh, all right, but you better be careful! You ''know'' I just got that vasectomy, and t-the doctor says I ''really'' need to take it easy because if I'm not cautious enough I could reopen the wound, and I really can't afford that because A. I no longer have healthcare after the divorce, and B. my blood is about as thin as an anorexic-
-> '''Donkey Kong''': [punches button to take Diddy up, but causes him to fall down and get trapped in the wreckage of the barrel he was in]
-> '''Donkey Kong''': [[OhCrap Uh...Shit.]]
-> '''Diddy''': [muffled] [[AmusingInjuries I'm in so much pain!]]
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-> '''Diddy''': [in background] Oh, all right, but you better be careful! You ''know'' I just got that vasectomy, and t-the doctor says I ''really'' need to take it easy because if I'm not cautious enough I could reopen the wound, and I really can't afford that because A. I no longer have healthcare after the divorce, and B. my blood is about as thin as an anorexic-
-> '''Donkey Kong''': [punches button to take Diddy up, but causes him to fall down and get trapped in the wreckage of the barrel he was in]
-> '''Donkey Kong''': [[OhCrap Uh...Shit.]]
-> '''Diddy''': [muffled] [[AmusingInjuries I'm in so much pain!]]
-->-- ''[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2mUOymWLCqE Donkey Kong Country Abridged - Episode 1 - Big Dumb Day]]'', in a rare audio example of the trope
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-->-- '''Kynan Barker''' in his and '''Danny Horn''''s [=ToughPigs=] [[http://www.toughpigs.com/my-week-with-more-christmas-3/ review]] of ''Film/AMuppetFamilyChristmas''
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-->-- '''Kynan Barker''' in his and '''Danny Horn''''s [=ToughPigs=] [[http://www.toughpigs.com/my-week-with-more-christmas-3/ review]] of ''Film/AMuppetFamilyChristmas''''Film/AMuppetFamilyChristmas''
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-->-- '''WebVideo/ComicTropes''', "[[Jim Starlin's Great and Not-So-Great Cosmic Creations at Marvel https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l-gaxgNC8k0]]
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->We cut to Avengers Mansion, where all the superheroes that were not abducted are gathering, got a list, are already figuring out who is missing. There's a weird little drawing the bottom left corner by Ron Lim where ComicBook/{{Iceman}} trips Speedball who apparently plants his face between ComicBook/SheHulk's boobs. Is that something that Jim Starlin wrote into this cosmic script? Or was Ron Lim getting bored and was just like "I gotta draw this for '''me'''."
-->-- '''WebVideo/ComicTropes''', "[[Jim Starlin's Great and Not-So-Great Cosmic Creations at Marvel https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l-gaxgNC8k0]]
-->-- '''WebVideo/ComicTropes''', "[[Jim Starlin's Great and Not-So-Great Cosmic Creations at Marvel https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l-gaxgNC8k0]]
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-->--Paul Chadwick, Introduction to ''Comicbook/{{Concrete}}: Depths''Depths''
->''"I never noticed this before: When the Chef is complaining about the rats in the kitchen, one of the rats is stealing a live chicken. For what purpose, [[WildMassGuessing I can only speculate]]."''
-->-- '''Kynan Barker''' in his and '''Danny Horn''''s [=ToughPigs=] [[http://www.toughpigs.com/my-week-with-more-christmas-3/ review]] of ''Film/AMuppetFamilyChristmas''
->''"I never noticed this before: When the Chef is complaining about the rats in the kitchen, one of the rats is stealing a live chicken. For what purpose, [[WildMassGuessing I can only speculate]]."''
-->-- '''Kynan Barker''' in his and '''Danny Horn''''s [=ToughPigs=] [[http://www.toughpigs.com/my-week-with-more-christmas-3/ review]] of ''Film/AMuppetFamilyChristmas''
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->What I find interesting now is how many "throwaways" these stories have -- visual ideas, gags, "bits," -- that are inessential to the plot. They're simply things I wanted to do. I tend to be more disciplined, now, in this regard. But I wonder if that's entirely a virtue. Those throwaways are really pretty fun, rather like searching for the hidden animals in a children's magazine puzzle picture. Every page promises a new "bird" or "squirrel"...or a moon that echoes Concrete's bullet-cratered head, or a sculpture of a backstabber in the mansion of a betraying rock star.
->In the early days I made lists, independent of plots, of shots I wanted to do, potential gags, and "moments." I fit them in when I could.
-->--Paul Chadwick, Introduction to ''Comicbook/{{Concrete}}: Depths''
->In the early days I made lists, independent of plots, of shots I wanted to do, potential gags, and "moments." I fit them in when I could.
-->--Paul Chadwick, Introduction to ''Comicbook/{{Concrete}}: Depths''