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-->-- '''All For One''' to '''Eda''', '''Eda''' [[spoiler:before he tears out her heart]], Chapter 29.
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-> '''Gus''': Welcome to The Underdark. A town that The Emperor doesn’t know about. A safe haven for those who had rejected society and cast aside the law. It’s been a passion project of my father's ever since the end of the Ten-Year War following The Principals of The Interloper. Strength Above Status, Ideals Above Rules, and Emotions Above Morals.
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-> '''Gus''': Welcome to The Underdark. A town that The Emperor TheEmperor doesn’t know about. A safe haven for those who had rejected society and cast aside the law. It’s been a passion project of my father's ever since the end of the Ten-Year War following The Principals of The Interloper. Strength Above Status, Ideals Above Rules, and Emotions Above Morals.
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--> '''[[spoiler:King]]''': Die...!
--> '''Toshiko''': [[DeadpanSnarker Try harder, and maybe I’ll consider it.]]
-->-- '''Toshiko''' to '''[[spoiler:King]]''', Chapter 27.
--> '''Toshiko''': [[DeadpanSnarker Try harder, and maybe I’ll consider it.]]
-->-- '''Toshiko''' to '''[[spoiler:King]]''', Chapter 27.
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-> '''Toshiko''': [[PreAsskickingOneLiner Times up, wolfy. My turn.]]
-->-- '''Toshiko''' on '''[[spoiler:King]]''', Chapter 27.
-->-- '''Toshiko''' on '''[[spoiler:King]]''', Chapter 27.
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-> '''[[NonOnsenseNemesis Shigaraki]]''': '''''"If there’s one thing I know from my [[Really700YearsOld long-lived life]], it’s that you can’t be too careful. All of my enemies have always had [[HeroicSecondWind some kind of second wind]], but you, Eda Clawthorne. I won’t allow that to happen."'''''
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-> '''[[NonOnsenseNemesis Shigaraki]]''': '''''"If '''''If there’s one thing I know from my [[Really700YearsOld long-lived life]], it’s that you can’t be too careful. All of my enemies have always had [[HeroicSecondWind some kind of second wind]], but you, Eda Clawthorne. I won’t allow that to happen."''''''''''
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-> '''[[NonOnsenseNemesis Shigaraki]]''': '''''"If there’s one thing I know from my [[Really700YearsOld long-lived life]], it’s that you can’t be too careful. All of my enemies have always had [[HeroicSecondWind some kind of second wind]], but you, Eda Clawthorne. I won’t allow that to happen."'''''
-->-- '''All For One''' to '''Eda''', Chapter 29.
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-> '''[[spoiler:Raine]]''': I’m your faithful host of this year's tournament, [[spoiler:Raine Whispers]]. I’m glad you'd all see me here again, it is as much of an honor as it was the last two years I’ve taken up this place to be my home.
-->-- '''[[spoiler:Raine]]''', Chapter 28.
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-> '''Toshiko''': ''[[NotSoDifferentRemark So, it’s just like me]]. [[UnskilledButStrong Too strong to practice its powers]], [[WorthyOpponent but now found someone of its equal to do so]]. [[BloodKnight Interesting]]…''
-->-- '''Toshiko''' on '''[[spoiler:King]]''', Chapter 27.
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-> '''Rikitatsu''': Quite the turn of events, don’t you think? I find it peculiar how this happened, but then again, I suppose it was bound to eventually. After all, you were the only person who truly vowed allegiance to dear Luz. [[ThatManIsDead Or, should I say, Toshiko now]]? [[spoiler:Isn’t that right…[[WhamLine Julia Wittebane]].]]
-->-- '''All For One''', Chapter 27.
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->'''[[TheCorrupter Shigaraki]]''': '''''Yes, Luz! Show them the real you. The one that you had buried for so long! You allowed them to control you for years, allowed them to tell you that you cannot be, or who you want to be! Let that anger boil to the top and flow over! Let it be one with you, let it become you. Unleash it! Unleash your true self upon those that took, and took, and took from you! You are above them all, and will forever be! They toyed with you, made you their plaything, and when they were done playing with you they discarded you and threw you into this camp and left you to rot! I’ve told you this before, so it bears not repeating, but you should not allow them to get away with this! This is all their fault! Let the anger you’ve let sit for years rise. Here, in this domain, you are free to do whatever you please! Do unto them what they did to you! Show them how they messed up! Show them what happens when you toy with God! Luz Noceda, do what you know you have to, and KILL THEM ALL!'''''
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->'''[[TheCorrupter Shigaraki]]''': '''''Yes, Luz! Show them the real you. The one that you had buried for so long! You allowed them to control you for years, allowed them to tell you that you cannot be, or who you want to be! Let that anger boil to the top and flow over! Let it be one with you, let it become you. Unleash it! Unleash your true self upon those that took, and took, and took from you! You are above them all, and will forever be! They toyed with you, made you their plaything, and when they were done playing with you they discarded you and threw you into this camp and left you to rot! I’ve told you this before, so it bears not repeating, but you should not allow them to get away with this! This is all their fault! Let the anger you’ve let sit for years rise. [[DeadlyGame Here, in this domain, you are free to do whatever you please! please!]] [[PayEvilUntoEvil Do unto them what they did to you! you!]] [[MuggingTheMonster Show them how they messed up! up!]] Show them what happens when you toy with God! Luz Noceda, do what you know you have to, and KILL THEM ALL!'''''
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-> '''Gus''': TheEmperor cannot find out about [[UndergroundCity this place]]. When I take you Welcome to my father, you will answer him honestly. Otherwise… well, I can’t vouch The Underdark. A town that The Emperor doesn’t know about. A safe haven for your safety. Okay?those who had rejected society and cast aside the law. It’s been a passion project of my father's ever since the end of the Ten-Year War following The Principals of The Interloper. Strength Above Status, Ideals Above Rules, and Emotions Above Morals.
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-> '''Gus''': TheEmperor cannot find out about [[UndergroundCity this place]]. When I take you to my father, you will answer him honestly. Otherwise… well, I can’t vouch for your safety. Okay?
-->-- '''Gus''' to '''Amity''', Chapter 26.
-->-- '''Gus''' to '''Amity''', Chapter 26.
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-> '''Odalia''': Just because you don’t have magic, doesn’t mean you can’t be a powerful protector of the Isles.
-->-- '''Odalia''' to '''Amity''', Chapter 24.
-->-- '''Odalia''' to '''Amity''', Chapter 24.
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-> '''Eda''': Some massive explosion happened and [[DoomedHometown the place just… vanished]]. [[NarrowAnnihilationEscape Owlbert only just barely got away in time…time]]…
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-> '''[[EvilMentor Rikitatsu]]''': ''[[PassingTheTorch It isn’t my power anymore]]. You’ve done the one thing I was never able to do. [[NextTierPowerUp You Awakened the Quirk]]. From this point forward, [[ObsoleteMentor I know nothing except the basics]]. This is your Quirk now, not mine. ''(Places his hand on her shoulder.)'' “[[SoProudOfYou I’m proud of you]]. You did the one thing that I could never do in life. And for that, I am thankful.''
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-> '''[[EvilMentor Rikitatsu]]''': ''[[PassingTheTorch It isn’t my power anymore]]. You’ve done the one thing I was never able to do. [[NextTierPowerUp You Awakened the Quirk]]. From this point forward, [[ObsoleteMentor I know nothing except the basics]]. This is your Quirk now, not mine. ''(Places his hand on her shoulder.)'' “[[SoProudOfYou [[SoProudOfYou I’m proud of you]]. You did the one thing that I could never do in life. And for that, I am thankful.''
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->'''[[TheCorrupter Shigaraki]]''': '''''Yes! Noceda, feed your anger! Feed your rage! Allow it to overcome you! Allow your emotions to take center stage! Find those who killed your friends, and do unto them that which they did to you!'''''
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->'''[[TheCorrupter Shigaraki]]''': '''''Yes! Noceda, feed '''''Yes, Luz! Show them the real you. The one that you had buried for so long! You allowed them to control you for years, allowed them to tell you that you cannot be, or who you want to be! Let that anger boil to the top and flow over! Let it be one with you, let it become you. Unleash it! Unleash your anger! Feed your rage! Allow it to overcome you! Allow your emotions to take center stage! Find true self upon those who killed your friends, that took, and took, and took from you! You are above them all, and will forever be! They toyed with you, made you their plaything, and when they were done playing with you they discarded you and threw you into this camp and left you to rot! I’ve told you this before, so it bears not repeating, but you should not allow them to get away with this! This is all their fault! Let the anger you’ve let sit for years rise. Here, in this domain, you are free to do whatever you please! Do unto them that which what they did to you!'''''you! Show them how they messed up! Show them what happens when you toy with God! Luz Noceda, do what you know you have to, and KILL THEM ALL!'''''
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-> '''Gus''': TheEmperor cannot find out about [[UndergroundCity this place]]. When I take you to my father, you will answer him honestly. Otherwise… well, I can’t vouch for your safety. Okay?
-->-- '''Gus''' to '''Amity''', Chapter 26.
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-> '''Perry''': ''(Laughing)'' Mad? Why would I be mad at one of The Interloper's closest allies finding us? This has been the chance we’ve been waiting for. And if the rumour of someone going by Shigaraki on the surface is true, it seems our bid to overthrow Emperor Belos will come to pass yet!
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-> '''Perry''': ''(Laughing)'' Mad? Why would I be mad at one of The Interloper's closest allies finding us? This has been the chance we’ve been waiting for. [[LegacyCharacter And if the rumour of someone going by Shigaraki on the surface is true, true]], it seems our bid to overthrow Emperor Belos will come to pass yet!
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-> '''Perry''': If it isn’t a Blight. The very family who aided The Interloper during the war! To what do I owe the pleasure?” Perry asked as Gus blinked, confusion taking up his visage.
-> '''Gus''': ''(Confused)'' You’re not mad?”
-> '''Perry''': ''(Laughing)'' Mad? Why would I be mad at one of The Interloper's closest allies finding us? This has been the chance we’ve been waiting for. And if the rumour of someone going by Shigaraki on the surface is true, it seems our bid to overthrow Emperor Belos will come to pass yet!
-->-- '''Perry''' to '''Gus''', Chapter 26.
-> '''Gus''': ''(Confused)'' You’re not mad?”
-> '''Perry''': ''(Laughing)'' Mad? Why would I be mad at one of The Interloper's closest allies finding us? This has been the chance we’ve been waiting for. And if the rumour of someone going by Shigaraki on the surface is true, it seems our bid to overthrow Emperor Belos will come to pass yet!
-->-- '''Perry''' to '''Gus''', Chapter 26.
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-->-- '''Eda''', to '''Toshiko''', Chapter 24.
-> '''[[EvilMentor Rikitatsu]]''': ''[[PassingTheTorch It isn’t my power anymore]]. You’ve done the one thing I was never able to do. [[TookALevelInBadass You Awakened the Quirk]]. From this point forward, [[ObsoleteMentor I know nothing except the basics]]. This is your Quirk now, not mine. ''(Places his hand on her shoulder.)'' “[[SoProudOfYou I’m proud of you]]. You did the one thing that I could never do in life. And for that, I am thankful.''
-> '''[[EvilMentor Rikitatsu]]''': ''[[PassingTheTorch It isn’t my power anymore]]. You’ve done the one thing I was never able to do. [[TookALevelInBadass You Awakened the Quirk]]. From this point forward, [[ObsoleteMentor I know nothing except the basics]]. This is your Quirk now, not mine. ''(Places his hand on her shoulder.)'' “[[SoProudOfYou I’m proud of you]]. You did the one thing that I could never do in life. And for that, I am thankful.''
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-->-- '''Eda''', '''Eda''' to '''Toshiko''', Chapter 24.
-> '''[[EvilMentor Rikitatsu]]''': ''[[PassingTheTorch It isn’t my power anymore]]. You’ve done the one thing I was never able to do.[[TookALevelInBadass [[NextTierPowerUp You Awakened the Quirk]]. From this point forward, [[ObsoleteMentor I know nothing except the basics]]. This is your Quirk now, not mine. ''(Places his hand on her shoulder.)'' “[[SoProudOfYou I’m proud of you]]. You did the one thing that I could never do in life. And for that, I am thankful.''
-> '''[[EvilMentor Rikitatsu]]''': ''[[PassingTheTorch It isn’t my power anymore]]. You’ve done the one thing I was never able to do.
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-> '''Perry''': The time has come. The revolution will soon begin. For the sake of our glorious leader, we will prevail.
-->-- '''Perry's''' message to '''Odalia''', Chapter 25.
-> '''Perry''': The time has come. The revolution will soon begin. For the sake of our glorious leader, we will prevail.
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-->-- '''Eda''', to '''Toshiko''', Chapter 24.
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-> '''Camp Counsellor Johnson''': ''I'm sorry, but I have no choice. Please, God, forgive me, because I'm sending these children to their doom…''
-->-- '''Counsellor Johnson''' being ForcedIntoEvil by '''Governor Maxwell''', Chapter 3.
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-> '''Camp Counsellor Counselor Johnson''': ''I'm ''...I'm sorry, but I have no choice. Please, God, forgive me, because I'm sending these children to their doom…''
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