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Changed line(s) 27 (click to see context) from:
* '''Lampshaded''': "Yes, my notes skipped over that."
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* '''Lampshaded''': "Yes, "Admittedly, I'm not the best person to tell you about this story, considering I don't really have a lot to work with since its events, but I'll try my notes skipped over that.best anyways."
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* '''Discussed''': "When I read Bob's account of events, I bore in mind that he is not known for being very forthcoming."
* '''Conversed''': "So Alice was keeping that secret throughout the story, and I never even suspected. Did you?"
* '''Conversed''': "So Alice was keeping that secret throughout the story, and I never even suspected. Did you?"
to:
* '''Discussed''': '''Discussed''':
** "When I read Bob's account of events, I bore in mind that he is not known for being very forthcoming."
* '''Conversed''': ** "So Alice was keeping that secret throughout the story, and I never even suspected. Did you?"you?"
* '''Conversed''': "I've been reading this work, and there are some key details that ''aren't'' quite consistent... I'm just hoping that the inconsistencies are diegetic, and not because the author ''is'' the one forgetting these details."
** "When I read Bob's account of events, I bore in mind that he is not known for being very forthcoming."
* '''Conversed''': "I've been reading this work, and there are some key details that ''aren't'' quite consistent... I'm just hoping that the inconsistencies are diegetic, and not because the author ''is'' the one forgetting these details."