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** So are most {{Western RPG}}s, to reinforce the connection between the player and their character or party.
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However, Third Person Narrative can also be written in the Present Tense; the story is still fast but the reader gets the sensation of being right there, ''following'' the characters in their adventure. Done badly it evokes frustration and a sense of helplessness, done well the reader cares deeply and fears for the characters' lives.
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However, Third Person Narrative can also be written in the Present Tense; the story is still fast but the reader gets the sensation of being right there, ''following'' the characters in their adventure. Done badly badly, it evokes frustration and a sense of helplessness, done well helplessness. Done well, the reader cares deeply and fears for the characters' lives.
