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* Looking Glass' SarcasmFailure upon getting a little too detailed describing a crime scene.
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* Looking Glass' Glass's SarcasmFailure upon getting a little too detailed describing a crime scene.
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* This gem from Looking Glass' interrogation of a suspect:
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* This gem from Looking Glass' Glass's interrogation of a suspect:
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* [[spoiler:[[EvilAllAlong Senator Keene]] describing his SadisticChoice for Wade as [[IncrediblyLamePun "squid pro quo."]]]]
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* [[spoiler:[[EvilAllAlong Senator Keene]] describing his SadisticChoice for Wade as [[IncrediblyLamePun [[{{Pun}} "squid pro quo."]]]]
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** Which is [[CriticalResearchFailure not at all how you would actually pronounce it in Polish]] (where the surname comes from); actual pronunciation would be closer to "yus-PET-chick". Then again, [[JustifiedTrope Laurie may also fail to be aware of this]]; after all, her mother tried to hide her Polish heritage and probably didn't expose Laurie to the language (if she herself knew it, anyway).
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** Which is [[CriticalResearchFailure not at all how you would actually pronounce it in Polish]] Polish (where the surname comes from); actual pronunciation would be closer to "yus-PET-chick". Then again, [[JustifiedTrope Laurie may also fail to be aware of this]]; after all, her mother tried to hide her Polish heritage and probably didn't expose Laurie to the language (if she herself knew it, anyway).
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* Will Reeves immediately closing the door in Cal's face after he tells him that he is Doctor Manhattan and he needs to talk to him about his granddaughter Angela.
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* Will Reeves immediately closing the door in Cal's [[spoiler:Cal's face after he tells him that he is Doctor Manhattan and he needs to talk to him about his granddaughter Angela.Angela]].
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* [[invoked]] [[BigLippedAlligatorMoment Angela's entire encounter with Lube Man.]] '''Especially''' when he escapes by [[HeartIsAnAwesomePower lubing himself up]] ''and sliding into a sewer grate.''
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* [[invoked]] [[BigLippedAlligatorMoment Angela's entire encounter with Lube Man.]] '''Especially''' when he escapes by [[HeartIsAnAwesomePower lubing himself up]] ''and sliding into a sewer grate.storm drain.''
* Will Reeves immediately closing the door in Cal's face after he tells him that he is Doctor Manhattan and he needs to talk to him about his granddaughter Angela.
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* Even when she is tied up and he is trying to rescue her, Laurie still insists on referring to Looking Glass as "Mirror Guy."
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* Even when she is tied up and he is trying to rescue her, Laurie still ''still'' insists on referring to Looking Glass as "Mirror Guy."" She also later mocks Keene's “panties” right to his face.
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* Veidt is about to launch into a furious, megalomaniacal rant justifying himself and questioning the right of simpletons like [[spoiler:Laurie and Wade]] to actually arrest him... So [[spoiler: Wade]] simply smacks him from behind with a wrench, bringing both the speech and dramatic background music to an abrupt halt.
-->[[spoiler:'''Wade:''']] [[ShutUpHannibal This guy talks too much]].
-->[[spoiler:'''Wade:''']] [[ShutUpHannibal This guy talks too much]].
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* Veidt is about to launch into a furious, megalomaniacal rant justifying himself and questioning the right of simpletons like [[spoiler:Laurie and Wade]] to actually arrest him... So [[spoiler: Wade]] simply smacks him from behind with a wrench, bringing both the speech and [[SuddenSoundtrackStop dramatic background music music]] to an abrupt halt.
-->[[spoiler:'''Wade:''']] [[ShutUpHannibal This guy talks toomuch]].
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'''Laurie:''' ''(smirking)'' He surely fucking does.\\
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-->[[spoiler:'''Wade:''']] [[ShutUpHannibal This guy talks too
'''Laurie:''' ''(smirking)'' He surely fucking does.\\
[''[[spoiler:Wade]] absentmindedly tosses the wrench over his shoulder as both he and Laurie drag away an unconscious Adrian'']
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*** Even better, later in the series we learn [[spoiler:just how much Angela knows he can't be Dr. Manhattan, because she's actually married to him]].
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*** Even better, later in the series we learn [[spoiler:just how much Angela knows he can't be Dr. Doctor Manhattan, because she's actually married to him]].
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* Veidt has a quite out of character tantrum at the latest failure of his vacuum suit, kicking the frozen corpse to pieces while swearing up a storm.
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* Veidt has a quite out of character OOC tantrum at the latest failure of his vacuum suit, kicking the frozen corpse to pieces while swearing up a storm.
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-->'''Laurie:''' [[LampshadeHanging Who keeps a fucking trapdoor in their living room?]]
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-->'''Laurie:''' [[LampshadeHanging Who keeps installs a fucking trapdoor in their living room?]]
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* We learn that the "anniversary" parties are (perhaps) a daily occurrence at Veidt's castle as it appears anyway as the segments with Veidt are a year apart from eachother. In this episode, Veidt grows so impatient with his servants singing "For He's a Jolly Good Fellow" that he makes them rush through the latter half of the song.
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* We learn that During the second "anniversary" parties are (perhaps) a daily occurrence at Veidt's castle as it appears anyway as the segments with Veidt are a year apart from eachother. In this episode, party, Veidt grows so impatient with his servants singing "For He's a Jolly Good Fellow" that he makes them rush through the latter half of the song.
