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*** Remilia and Satori find Choujuu Gigaku holding a concert in the hallway because someone else was using the music room, and they needed to practice. Satori sarcastically says that they admire their dedication before both of them tell them to keep it down.
*** [=W1=] Sanae and Suika are busy looking for Seal Crystals. Suddenly, they overhear Mike, Nazrin, and Rin digging nearby, who managed to find some. Suika challenges them to a danmaku battle over them, and they win. Unfortunately, the Seal Crystals are purple and cause the both of them to disappear. The protagonist decides to get Reimu, [[GainaxEnding and their story ends there]].
*** After saying goodbye to [=Pink!Koishi=] and [=Pink!Flandre=], Remilia asks Satori what her notebook is for. She reveals that it's a profile book, and she's been secretly asking everyone questions about their hobbies. It reveals that Flandre's hobby is destroying things, and Koishi's hobby is digging up flower beds.
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** After the event's ColdOpening, it begins with its universe variants of Remilia and Satori. They both have flashbacks describing why their sisters didn't come to school that day.
*** For Flandre, she yells at Sakuya telling her she doesn't want to go to school, like a young kid would. Sakuya then tells her that school is a fun place, and goes on a long diatrine about the fun she'd have on a typical day. Afterwards, Flandre says that [[NoSell it doesn't sound like fun at all, and disobediently runs back to her room]].
*** For Koishi, Satori has trouble looking for her, and finds a note she left saying that she headed out, and will be back before teatime. Satori sighs in disappointment, saying that she was too slow again, implying that this has happened many times in the past.
** [=Pink!Koishi=] and [=Pink!Flandre=] end up in the school's science lab causing destruction. Koishi is digging underneath the floor looking for fairies, and Flandre is breaking all the windows thinking that it's okay because it's a sunny day outside.
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* When the Three Fairies of Light obtain their Fantasy Rebirth costumes, they seem innocent enough with their cute dresses and baskets of flowers. [[MoodWhiplash Paying attention to Star Sapphire's basket, however]], and she's carrying an unlit bomb in hers. In her splash art, she's even throwing a lit bomb.
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* When the Three Fairies of Light obtain their Fantasy Rebirth costumes, they seem innocent enough with their cute dresses and baskets of flowers. [[MoodWhiplash [[Mo odWhiplash Paying attention to Star Sapphire's basket, however]], and she's carrying an unlit bomb in hers. In her splash art, she's even throwing a lit bomb.
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** Kogasa's spell card "Umbrella Sign: Lightly Falling Large Raindrops" has her [[OcularGushers cry a fountain of tears]] out of her umbrella, and then blows a raspberry.
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** Kogasa's spell card "Umbrella Sign: Lightly Falling Large Raindrops" has her [[OcularGushers cry a fountain of tears]] out of her umbrella, and then [[BlowingARaspberry blows a raspberry.raspberry]].
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*** Yachie's test is a literal test from Keine to test its knowledge. Satori reveals Yachie got Keine just to make it easier, so Keine prepared a test for her ahead of time. Yachie gets a perfect score, the protagonist gets a 70, and the animal spirit and Cirno tie with a score of [[AscendedMeme 9]]. Cirno challenges everyone to a danmaku battle out of anger. Keine gives everyone homework afterwards, causing the animal spirit to faint upon seeing all of it.
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*** Yachie's test is a literal test from Keine to test its knowledge. Satori reveals Yachie got Keine just to make it easier, so Keine prepared a test for her ahead of time. Yachie gets a perfect score, the protagonist gets a 70, Daiyousei gets a 30, and the animal spirit and Cirno tie with a score of [[AscendedMeme 9]]. Cirno challenges everyone to a danmaku battle out of anger. Keine gives everyone homework afterwards, causing the animal spirit to faint upon seeing all of it.
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** At the end of the first half of the event, Hatate and Marisa were unable to track Team Kokoro. Once part two was released, it turns out her team was racing in reverse.
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** At the end of the first half of the event, Hatate and Marisa were unable to track Team Kokoro. Once part two was released, In the event's second arc, it turns out her team was racing in reverse.
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*** Yachie's test is a literal test from Keine to test its knowledge. Satori reveals Yachie got Keine just to make it easier, so Keine prepares a test ahead of time for her. Yachie gets a perfect score, the protagonist gets a 70, and the animal spirit and Cirno tie with a score of [[AscendedMeme 9]]. Cirno challenges everyone to a danmaku battle out of anger. Keine gives everyone homework afterwards, causing the animal spirit to faint upon seeing all of it.
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*** Yachie's test is a literal test from Keine to test its knowledge. Satori reveals Yachie got Keine just to make it easier, so Keine prepares prepared a test for her ahead of time for her.time. Yachie gets a perfect score, the protagonist gets a 70, and the animal spirit and Cirno tie with a score of [[AscendedMeme 9]]. Cirno challenges everyone to a danmaku battle out of anger. Keine gives everyone homework afterwards, causing the animal spirit to faint upon seeing all of it.
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*** Yachie's test is a literal test from Keine to test its knowledge. Satori reveals Yachie got Keine just to make it easier, so Keine prepares a test ahead of time for her. Yachie gets a perfect score, the protagonist gets a 70, and the Animal Spirit and Cirno tie with a score of [[AscendedMeme 9]]. Cirno challenges everyone to a danmaku battle out of anger. Keine gives everyone homework afterwards, causing the animal spirit to faint upon seeing all of it.
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*** Yachie's test is a literal test from Keine to test its knowledge. Satori reveals Yachie got Keine just to make it easier, so Keine prepares a test ahead of time for her. Yachie gets a perfect score, the protagonist gets a 70, and the Animal Spirit animal spirit and Cirno tie with a score of [[AscendedMeme 9]]. Cirno challenges everyone to a danmaku battle out of anger. Keine gives everyone homework afterwards, causing the animal spirit to faint upon seeing all of it.
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*** Yuuma's test is a dango eating competition. The opponents are a team consisting of Yuyuko and Youmu, and another one with Narumi and Marisa. The latter challenges the protagonist and the animal spirit to a danmaku battle to slow them down. However, this causes Yuyuko and Youmu to win, since everyone else was too distracted battling. The animal spirit almost pukes afterwards.
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*** Yuuma's test is a dango eating competition. The opponents are a team consisting of Yuyuko and Youmu, and another one with Narumi and Marisa. The latter challenges the protagonist and the animal spirit to a danmaku battle to slow them down. However, this causes [[CrackDefeat Yuyuko and Youmu to win, win]], since everyone else was too distracted battling. The animal spirit almost pukes afterwards.
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*** Saki's test is a test of strength. She has it carry old furniture from Nemunoki to the base of Youkai Mountain. It manages to carry most of it on its back, struggles, but is persistent in finishing. The animal spirit manages to get the furniture all the way down, but faints.
*** Yachie's test is a literal test from Keine to test its knowledge. Satori reveals Yachie got Keine just to make it easier, so Keine prepares a test ahead of time for her. Yachie gets a perfect score, the protagonist gets a 70, and the Animal Spirit and Cirno tie with a score of [[AscendedMeme 9]]. Cirno challenges everyone to a danmaku battle out of anger. Keine gives everyone homework afterwards, causing the animal spirit to faint upon seeing all of it.
*** Yuuma's test is a dango eating competition. The opponents are a team consisting of Yuyuko and Youmu, and another one with Narumi and Marisa. The latter challenges the protagonist and the animal spirit to a danmaku battle to slow them down. However, this causes Yuyuko and Youmu to win, since everyone else was too distracted battling. The animal spirit almost pukes afterwards.
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** Saki brings up an incident where Yacchie was doing a puzzle, and her otter spirits accidentally messed it up, causing Yacchie to "give them hell for it".
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** Saki brings up an incident where Yacchie Yachie was doing a puzzle, and her otter spirits accidentally messed it up, causing Yacchie Yachie to "give them hell for it".
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** Saki brings up an incident where Yacchie was doing a puzzle , and her otter spirits accidentally messed it up, causing Yacchie to "give them hell for it".
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** Saki brings up an incident where Yacchie was doing a puzzle , puzzle, and her otter spirits accidentally messed it up, causing Yacchie to "give them hell for it".
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** Saki brings up an incident where Yacchie was doing a puzzle , and her otter spirits accidentally messed it up, causing Yacchie to "give them hell for it".
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** When Sanae starts to reach the trio how to serve food, she gets nervous, so Okina suggests [[ImagineTheAudienceNaked picturing them as]] [[InherentlyFunnyWords potatoes]]. This works, and Sanae calls the three of them little potatoes.
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** When Sanae starts to reach teach the trio how to serve food, she gets nervous, so Okina suggests [[ImagineTheAudienceNaked picturing them as]] [[InherentlyFunnyWords potatoes]]. This works, and Sanae calls the three of them little potatoes.
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** After Remilia gives Shion a pep talk, Flandre asks herself [[BreakingTheFourthWall why Remilia got more lines than her]].
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* Seiga prepares food for the Beast Dream Salon as a reward, but the protagonist [[BigEater eats all of it]]. The blame gets put on Yuuma.
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** Saki enters a top spinning tournament, and cheats by kicking her tops to make them spin faster. [[LoopholeAbuse Everyone's enjoying it, so no one bats an eye]].
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** Saki enters a top spinning tournament, and cheats by kicking her tops to make them spin faster. Marisa is also there, and is also cheating by using magic. [[LoopholeAbuse Everyone's enjoying it, so no one bats an eye]].
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** When Sanae starts to reach the trio how to serve food, she gets nervous, so Okina suggests [[ImagineTheAudienceNaked picture them as]] [[InherentlyFunnyWords potatoes]]. This works, and Sanae calls the three of them little potatoes.
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** When Sanae starts to reach the trio how to serve food, she gets nervous, so Okina suggests [[ImagineTheAudienceNaked picture picturing them as]] [[InherentlyFunnyWords potatoes]]. This works, and Sanae calls the three of them little potatoes.
