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*** The brick was going to hit Peter if Matt didn't catch it, and Peter didn't dodge. He's a really good lawyer for defending his client!
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*** The brick was going to hit Peter if Matt didn't catch it, and Peter didn't dodge.it. He's a really good lawyer for defending his client!
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*** He was defending his client!
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*** He The brick was going to hit Peter if Matt didn't catch it, and Peter didn't dodge. He's a really good lawyer for defending his client!
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--->'''Strange:''' [[LetMeGetThisStraight I'm sorry...]] Are you telling me that you didn't even ''think'' to plead your case with them first before you asked me to ''[[LaserGuidedAmnesia brainwash]] [[MassHypnosis the entire]]'' '''''[[MassHypnosis world]]'''''?\\
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--->'''Strange:''' [[LetMeGetThisStraight I'm sorry...]] Are you telling me that you didn't even ''think'' to plead your case with them first before you asked me to ''[[LaserGuidedAmnesia brainwash]] [[MassHypnosis the entire]]'' '''''[[MassHypnosis entire world]]'''''?\\
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* What is Strange's response to Peter attempting to escape with a magical device while locking him up in Sandman's cell, using his own magical webshooters?
-->'''Strange:''' This is why I never had kids.
** He then casually [[{{Intangibility}} phases through the "walls"]]. Sandman tries to follow him but walks into the wall instead.
* The fact that Peter's spider reflexes work ''even when his soul is outside of his body''. Peter's unconscious body successfully playing keep away with Strange and the cube is wonderful.
-->'''Strange:''' How are you doing that?!\\
-->'''Strange:''' This is why I never had kids.
** He then casually [[{{Intangibility}} phases through the "walls"]]. Sandman tries to follow him but walks into the wall instead.
* The fact that Peter's spider reflexes work ''even when his soul is outside of his body''. Peter's unconscious body successfully playing keep away with Strange and the cube is wonderful.
-->'''Strange:''' How are you doing that?!\\
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* What is Strange's response to Peter attempting to escape with a magical device while locking him up in Sandman's cell, using his own magical webshooters?
-->'''Strange:''' Thiswebshooters? "This is why I never had kids.
**kids." He then casually [[{{Intangibility}} phases through the "walls"]]. Sandman tries to follow him but walks into the wall instead.
* When Strange pushes Peter's astral form out of his body:
** Peter's initial response:
--->'''Peter:''' '''''[[ComicalOverreacting ...OH MY GOD, I'M DEAD!]]'''''
** The fact that Peter's spider reflexes work ''even when his soul is outside of his body''.Peter's His unconscious body successfully playing keep away with Strange is wonderful, as is Strange, genuinely dumbfounded and exasperated, trying to get the cube is wonderful.
-->'''Strange:'''box back.
--->'''Strange:''' How are you doing that?!\\
-->'''Strange:''' This
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* When Strange pushes Peter's astral form out of his body:
** Peter's initial response:
--->'''Peter:''' '''''[[ComicalOverreacting ...OH MY GOD, I'M DEAD!]]'''''
** The fact that Peter's spider reflexes work ''even when his soul is outside of his body''.
-->'''Strange:'''
--->'''Strange:''' How are you doing that?!\\
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* And then there's Peter's response to his astral form being pushed out of his body:
-->'''Peter:''' '''''[[ComicalOverreacting ...OH MY GOD, I'M DEAD!]]'''''
-->'''Peter:''' '''''[[ComicalOverreacting ...OH MY GOD, I'M DEAD!]]'''''
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-->'''Matt:''' Happy? [[PunctuatedForEmphasis Stop. Sweating.]]
-->'''Happy:''' [beat] ...How do you do that?
-->'''Happy:''' [beat] ...How do you do that?
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-->'''Happy:'''
'''Happy:''' [beat] ...How do you do that?
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'''Max:''' Ah, don't apologize, [[MythologyGag there's gotta be a]] [[Characters/MarvelComicsMilesMorales black Spider-Man somewhere out there]].
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'''Max:''' Ah, don't apologize, [[MythologyGag there's gotta be a]] [[Characters/MarvelComicsMilesMorales black Spider-Man somewhere out there]]. (Peter 3 chuckles) [[GoddamnBats Goddamn eels]].
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-->'''Alfred:''' ''[in a [[IAmVeryBritish Received Pronunciation accent]]]'' Are you suggesting I'm a mustache-twirling power grab? ''[Willem and Jamie both laugh]'' Now look here, I'm [[ClassicallyTrainedExtra classically trained.]]
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'''Peter:''' [[ActuallyPrettyFunny *Chuckles lightly*]]
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'''Peter:''' [[ActuallyPrettyFunny ''[[ActuallyPrettyFunny *Chuckles lightly*]]lightly*]]''
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'''Peter 3:''' ''[[ActuallyPrettyFunny [laughs]]]'' That’s a good question.\\
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'''Peter 3:''' ''[[ActuallyPrettyFunny [laughs]]]'' *laughs*]]'' That’s a good question.\\
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*** Given that spiders store their web fluids in their oviposters, [[DontExplainTheJoke that]] [[ItMakesSenseInContext would actually make way more sense than to come out of his wrists.]]
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*** Given [[GeniusBonus Given]] that spiders store their web fluids in their oviposters, [[DontExplainTheJoke that]] [[ItMakesSenseInContext would actually make way more sense than to come out of his wrists.]]
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*** Given that spiders store their web fluids in their oviposters, [[Don'tExplainTheJoke That]] [[ItMakesSenseInContext would actually make way more sense than to come out of his wrists.]]
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*** Given that spiders store their web fluids in their oviposters, [[Don'tExplainTheJoke That]] [[DontExplainTheJoke that]] [[ItMakesSenseInContext would actually make way more sense than to come out of his wrists.]]
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*** Given that spiders store their web fluids in their oviposters, [[ItMakesSenseInContext that would actually make way more sense than to come out of his wrists.]]
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*** Given that spiders store their web fluids in their oviposters, [[Don'tExplainTheJoke That]] [[ItMakesSenseInContext that would actually make way more sense than to come out of his wrists.]]