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* To say Kirika does not like carrots is an understatement. To avoid eating them, she'll use teleporation magic to place them on someone else's plate. Agnum sees this as a challenge and tries to get her to eat them by finely grating them and mixing them in a sauce so they'd be virtually undetectable, and Kirika [[BeyondTheImpossible still manages to separate them from everything else]]!
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* To say Kirika does not like carrots is an understatement. To avoid eating them, she'll use teleporation teleportation magic to place them on someone else's plate. Agnum sees this as a challenge and tries to get her to eat them by finely grating them and mixing them in a sauce so they'd be virtually undetectable, and Kirika [[BeyondTheImpossible still manages to separate them from everything else]]!
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* Most of the minor characters around Marga have [[FlatCharacter almost no characterization]]...except for being [[MundaneMadeAwesome terrifyingly good at their jobs]].
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* Most of the minor characters around Marga have [[FlatCharacter almost no characterization]]... except for being [[MundaneMadeAwesome terrifyingly good at their jobs]].
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* The skit where Marion asks Sonia what she eats to get [[GagBoobs "like that"]]. Sonia fails to realize Marion's staring in awe at her boobs, and assumes she's referring to her strength. Then she [[OpenMouthInsertFoot inadvertently makes matters worse]] by telling Marion it's because she drinks milk!
-->'''Marion''': ''(still staring)'' "I see... Milk. I'll ask Ms. Emma for [[BuxomIsBetter more milk]] too."
-->'''Marion''': ''(still staring)'' "I see... Milk. I'll ask Ms. Emma for [[BuxomIsBetter more milk]] too."
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* The skit where Marion asks Sonia what she eats to get [[GagBoobs [[BuxomBeautyStandard "like that"]]. Sonia fails to realize Marion's staring in awe at her boobs, and assumes she's referring to her strength. Then she [[OpenMouthInsertFoot inadvertently makes matters worse]] by telling Marion it's because she drinks milk!
-->'''Marion''': ''(still staring)'' "I see... Milk. I'll ask Ms. Emma for[[BuxomIsBetter more milk]] milk too."
-->'''Marion''': ''(still staring)'' "I see... Milk. I'll ask Ms. Emma for
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The townspeople of Marga are nothing if not EXTREMELY good at their jobs.
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* Marion uses an illusion to prevent the guys from peeking during the hot springs event. Only she created the illusion to make all of the girls look exactly as they would if the guys weren't seeing an illusion!
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* Marion uses an illusion to prevent the guys from peeking during the hot springs event. Only she created the illusion to make all of the girls look exactly as they would if the guys weren't seeing an illusion!illusion!
* Most of the minor characters around Marga have [[FlatCharacter almost no characterization]]...except for being [[MundaneMadeAwesome terrifyingly good at their jobs]].
** For example, Liselotte is a textbook example of the IntrepidMerchant who shows up at every SavePoint in the land, willing and able to buy and sell anything. Turns out the other characters [[LampshadeHanging have noticed]] her [[FridgeLogic apparent abilities to time travel and teleport]] to get imports from other continents or even [[TimeTravel from the future]] while there's a war on. If something's out of stock, she'll "go out for a walk" and reappear a few minutes later with exotic imports that should have taken months to arrive by ship, while expressing only mild annoyance at her customer's unreasonable requests. When [[AudienceSurrogate Yuma]] asks about ''how'' Liselotte can do this, he's told that everyone's learned to just accept it and take advantage of the convenience.
* Most of the minor characters around Marga have [[FlatCharacter almost no characterization]]...except for being [[MundaneMadeAwesome terrifyingly good at their jobs]].
** For example, Liselotte is a textbook example of the IntrepidMerchant who shows up at every SavePoint in the land, willing and able to buy and sell anything. Turns out the other characters [[LampshadeHanging have noticed]] her [[FridgeLogic apparent abilities to time travel and teleport]] to get imports from other continents or even [[TimeTravel from the future]] while there's a war on. If something's out of stock, she'll "go out for a walk" and reappear a few minutes later with exotic imports that should have taken months to arrive by ship, while expressing only mild annoyance at her customer's unreasonable requests. When [[AudienceSurrogate Yuma]] asks about ''how'' Liselotte can do this, he's told that everyone's learned to just accept it and take advantage of the convenience.
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** After Rinna jokes about needing to strip and share body heat on a cold mountain, Marion is quickly putting her clothes back on after the joke is made obvious.
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** After When the party first reaches Mt. Glacinal, it triggers a skit where Rinna jokes about needing to strip and naked to share body heat on a cold mountain, heat. After Yuma falls for it, Rinna admits she's joking and says it's something she'd only read about. Marion is quickly quietly begins putting her clothes back on after the joke is made obvious.on.
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* The scene that takes place when the party arrives to rescue Sonia from Zest reveals he's [[BadBadActing a comically bad actor.]] Mainly because it's obvious that he's playing at it just to get a rise out of Yuma, who's the only one taking it seriously.
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* The scene that takes place when the party arrives to rescue Sonia from Zest reveals he's [[BadBadActing a comically bad actor.]] Mainly Made moreso because it's obvious that he's [[LaughablyEvil playing at it it]] just to get a rise out of Yuma, who's the only one taking it seriously.
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-->'''Zest''': (grinning) "Oh no... This here's MY girl. If you want her back, you're gonna have to go through me."
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-->'''Zest''': (grinning) "Oh no... This here's [[DesignatedVictim MY girl. girl.]] If you want her back, you're gonna you have to go through me.ME."
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* The scene that takes place when the party arrives to rescue Sonia from Zest reveals he's a comically bad actor. Mainly because he doesn't even try to pretend that he isn't playing at it. The only who takes it seriously, is Yuma.
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* The scene that takes place when the party arrives to rescue Sonia from Zest reveals he's [[BadBadActing a comically bad actor. actor.]] Mainly because he doesn't even try to pretend it's obvious that he isn't he's playing at it. The it just to get a rise out of Yuma, who's the only who takes one taking it seriously, is Yuma.seriously.
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*The scene that takes place when the party arrives to rescue Sonia from Zest reveals he's a comically bad actor. Mainly because he doesn't even try to pretend that he isn't playing at it. The only who takes it seriously, is Yuma.
-->'''Yuma''': ''(dramatically) "Sonia! We're here to rescue you!"
-->'''Zest''': (grinning) "Oh no... This here's MY girl. If you want her back, you're gonna have to go through me."
-->'''Yuma''': ''(dramatically) "Sonia! We're here to rescue you!"
-->'''Zest''': (grinning) "Oh no... This here's MY girl. If you want her back, you're gonna have to go through me."
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* The skit where Marion asks Sonia what she eats to get [[GagBoobs "like that"]]. Sonia fails to realize Marion's staring in awe at her boobs, and assumes she's referring to her strength. Then she [[FreudianSlip inadvertently makes matters worse]] by telling Marion it's because she drinks milk!
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* The skit where Marion asks Sonia what she eats to get [[GagBoobs "like that"]]. Sonia fails to realize Marion's staring in awe at her boobs, and assumes she's referring to her strength. Then she [[FreudianSlip [[OpenMouthInsertFoot inadvertently makes matters worse]] by telling Marion it's because she drinks milk!
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-->'''Sonia''': ''([[ComicallyMissingThePoint proudly]])'' "Yep! That way, [[OpenMouthInsertFoot you'll be big]] and strong in no time!"
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-->'''Sonia''': ''([[ComicallyMissingThePoint proudly]])'' "Yep! That way, [[OpenMouthInsertFoot [[AccidentalInnuendo you'll be big]] and strong in no time!"
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-->'''Sonia''': ''([[ComicallyMissingThePoint proudly]])'' "Yep! That way, [[AccidentalInnuendo you'll be big]] and strong in no time!"
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-->'''Sonia''': ''([[ComicallyMissingThePoint proudly]])'' "Yep! That way, [[AccidentalInnuendo [[OpenMouthInsertFoot you'll be big]] and strong in no time!"
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* The skit where Marion asks Sonia what she eats to get [[GagBoobs "like that"]]. Sonia fails to realize Marion's staring in awe at her boobs, and assumes she's referring to her strength. The she [[FreudianSlip inadvertently makes matters worse]] by telling Marion it's because she drinks milk!
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* The skit where Marion asks Sonia what she eats to get [[GagBoobs "like that"]]. Sonia fails to realize Marion's staring in awe at her boobs, and assumes she's referring to her strength. The Then she [[FreudianSlip inadvertently makes matters worse]] by telling Marion it's because she drinks milk!
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*The skit where Marion asks Sonia what she eats to get [[GagBoobs "like that"]]. Sonia fails to realize Marion's staring in awe at her boobs, and assumes she's referring to her strength. The she [[FreudianSlip inadvertently makes matters worse]] by telling Marion it's because she drinks milk!
-->'''Marion''': ''(still staring)'' "I see... Milk. I'll ask Ms. Emma for [[BuxomIsBetter more milk]] too."
-->'''Sonia''': ''([[ComicallyMissingThePoint proudly]])'' "Yep! That way, [[AccidentalInnuendo you'll be big]] and strong in no time!"
-->'''Marion''': ''(still staring)'' "I see... Milk. I'll ask Ms. Emma for [[BuxomIsBetter more milk]] too."
-->'''Sonia''': ''([[ComicallyMissingThePoint proudly]])'' "Yep! That way, [[AccidentalInnuendo you'll be big]] and strong in no time!"
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** It gets a follow-up when the king decides to recruit the Dragoneers to advertise for several other resorts as well.
--->'''Sonia:''' I just want to go back to fighting monsters!
--->'''Sonia:''' I just want to go back to fighting monsters!
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** Her being the one to get Kirika to admit she uses magic to teleport her carrots away from her plate, causing the latter to shriek a BigNo when she has no other choice but to eat them.
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-->'''Excella:''' ...Go to the beach. Or die.
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-->'''Excella:''' ...Go to the beach. Or die.die.
* Marion uses an illusion to prevent the guys from peeking during the hot springs event. Only she created the illusion to make all of the girls look exactly as they would if the guys weren't seeing an illusion!
* Marion uses an illusion to prevent the guys from peeking during the hot springs event. Only she created the illusion to make all of the girls look exactly as they would if the guys weren't seeing an illusion!
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* To say Kirika does not like carrots is an understatement. To avoid eating them, she'll use teleporation magic to place them on someone else's plate. Agnum sees this as a challenge and tries to get her to eat them by finely grating them and mixing them in a sauce so they'd be virtually undetectable, and Kirika [[BeyondTheImpossible still manages to separate them from everything else]]!
* Marion being LiteralMinded also turns her into TheComicallySerious, giving her several moments as a result:
** Her innocently noting that Sonia's BigEater tendencies will cause her to get fat due to excess calorie intake.
** Her causing Agnum to have a freakout and wanting to re-draw several of his maps due to tiny inconsistencies she noticed.
** After Rinna jokes about needing to strip and share body heat on a cold mountain, Marion is quickly putting her clothes back on after the joke is made obvious.
* Any of Kirika's BewareTheNiceOnes moments when she catches Rinna or Lestin telling embarrassing stories from their childhood.
* One of the post-game Grimoire events has the girls advertise for a failing resort town [[ItMakesSenseInContext in their swimsuits]]. Excella's sales pitch is very direct and effective.
-->'''Excella:''' ...Go to the beach. Or die.
* Marion being LiteralMinded also turns her into TheComicallySerious, giving her several moments as a result:
** Her innocently noting that Sonia's BigEater tendencies will cause her to get fat due to excess calorie intake.
** Her causing Agnum to have a freakout and wanting to re-draw several of his maps due to tiny inconsistencies she noticed.
** After Rinna jokes about needing to strip and share body heat on a cold mountain, Marion is quickly putting her clothes back on after the joke is made obvious.
* Any of Kirika's BewareTheNiceOnes moments when she catches Rinna or Lestin telling embarrassing stories from their childhood.
* One of the post-game Grimoire events has the girls advertise for a failing resort town [[ItMakesSenseInContext in their swimsuits]]. Excella's sales pitch is very direct and effective.
-->'''Excella:''' ...Go to the beach. Or die.
