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-->'''Lola''': ''(on a "truth" question being how Lori and Bobby met)'' "Really? ''That's'' the best you can come up with? Ask her if she's ever cheated! Tell him to read the mushiest message she ever sent him! Just because it's 'truth' doesn't mean you have to go soft!"
-->'''Lola''': "Of course [Lori] was [telling the truth]. She had no reason not to! That question ''sucked''!"
-->'''Lola''': ''(when story-Lynn is asked what her first sport was)'' "Really? ''Really''? What is this, Baby's First Truth or Dare?"
-->'''Lola''': "''Who. Cares?!'' The point of a truth isn't to ''stump'' the other person! You're supposed to ''embarrass'' them!"
-->'''Lola''': ''(when story-Lisa says she's not going to take another "truth")'' "Why not? They're basically freebies anyway."
-->'''Lola''': "Of course [Lori] was [telling the truth]. She had no reason not to! That question ''sucked''!"
-->'''Lola''': ''(when story-Lynn is asked what her first sport was)'' "Really? ''Really''? What is this, Baby's First Truth or Dare?"
-->'''Lola''': "''Who. Cares?!'' The point of a truth isn't to ''stump'' the other person! You're supposed to ''embarrass'' them!"
-->'''Lola''': ''(when story-Lisa says she's not going to take another "truth")'' "Why not? They're basically freebies anyway."
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* When Lynn describes Clyde as "Lincoln's geeky friend", Margo notes that, since almost every friend of Lincoln's is an ExtravertedNerd, that doesn't really narrow it down.
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* When Lynn describes Clyde as "Lincoln's geeky friend", Margo notes that, since almost every friend of Lincoln's is an ExtravertedNerd, a nerd, that doesn't really narrow it down.
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!!Episode 39 -- Sir Hugs-a-Lot
* When Lana wonders if the Lincoln in the story was preparing for a date, the real Lisa notes that if he was, it'd be troubling that he needed to check that he was wearing shoes and a shirt. Lily defends him by saying that sometimes, you forget your shoes.
* Lisa says that Lily is very smart for her age and once even [[RubiksCubeInternationalGeniusSymbol showed interest in Lisa's Rubik's cube]]... but then [[ExtremeOmnivore tried to eat it]].
-->'''Lily''': "I was hungwy!"
* Lincoln notes that it's odd how in the story, he went through so much mental preparation [[SeriousBusiness just to hug his sisters]]. Lana points out that you don't even need to wear shoes, or even a shirt, to do that.
* When story Lincoln wants to hug Lola without her permission, the real Lana references ''Franchise/SonicTheHedgehog'':
-->'''Lana''': "It's just like Speedy the Porcupine says: if someone tries to touch you in a place or in a way that makes you feel uncomfortable, ''that's no good.''"
* When Lori is [[GreenEyedMonster jealous]] that Lana finds "big brother hugs" more special than "big sister hugs", Lana explains that it's only because she has six big sisters but only one big brother. Lisa adds that it's "simple economics".
* When the Lori in the story squeaks, the real Lori says, "What am I, a mouse?". Lincoln jokes that [[ContinuityNod he thought]] ''[[ContinuityNod he]]'' [[ContinuityNod was one]].
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-->'''Lori''': Looked it up on my phone while you two were talking.
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-->'''Lori''': [[CuttingTheKnot Looked it up on my phone while you two were talking.]]
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* Leni mishearing "soup or salad" as "super salad", and then commenting that the salad isn't that super.
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* Leni mishearing [[MondegreenGag mishearing]] "soup or salad" as "super salad", and then commenting that the salad isn't that super.
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!!Episode 38 -- Linka and Chocolate
* When Luke mentions that Lane in the fanfic must be booby-trapping the fridge, [[HehHehYouSaidX Lynn has a snicker]].
* When Linka accuses Lexx of being a bigger "chocolate monster" than her, Lexx says that he's a chocolate ''connoisseur'' and, unlike his siblings, he eats his chocolate slowly so that he can savour the taste -- [[InstantlyProvenWrong only to scarf down a leftover Butterfinger that Lane found]].
* The RunningGag of Lane suggesting that the story characters handcuff Linka.
* Lane is confused over why Loni knows fifteen ways of tying a tie, but [[LethalChef can't make scrambled eggs]] without [[IgnorantAboutFire starting a grease fire]].
* The reveal that Lynn once won a tug-of-war against all his gym classmates ''and his teacher''.
* After Loki in the story mentions a bucket...
-->'''Lexx''': "Lief's got one. It has a hole in it, though."
-->'''Lynn''': "Then fix it."
-->'''Lexx''': "With what?"
-->'''Lynn''': "Some straw."
-->'''Lexx''': "But the straw is too long."
-->'''Lynn''': "Then cut i--"
-->'''Linka''': ''(covers their mouths)'' "Nope. Nuh-uh. We're not doing this."
* When Linka in the story dreams she eats a chocolate tree, the real Luke tells her to at least replant it. Lynn says, "Oh, who are you, the Chocolate [[Literature/TheLorax Lorax]]?".
* Also during Linka's dream, there's a chocolate statue of her. The real Lexx wants a chocolate statue of ''him'', and when Linka points out that someone may eat it, he says he's too handsome to eat.
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* Lynn Sr. says that everybody cuts or burns themselves while cooking. Leni says that she learnt ''that'' lesson "the hard way" when making her first dish-- cold cereal.
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* Lynn Sr. says that everybody cuts or burns themselves while cooking. Leni says that she learnt ''that'' lesson "the hard way" when making her first dish-- dish -- [[EpicFail cold cereal.cereal]].
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'''Luan:''' "Two drinks? You're giving him ''way'' too much credit. [[UpToEleven I once saw him get wasted off a slice of rum cake]]."
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'''Luan:''' "Two drinks? You're giving him ''way'' too much credit. [[UpToEleven I once saw him get wasted off a slice of rum cake]].cake."
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* Throughout the story, Lincoln's sisters imagine him saying, "Oh, that's fine", and then killing him. After the story, he says the same phrase after Luna reveals she ate the last grape popsicle, scaring the sisters.
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* Throughout the story, Lincoln's sisters imagine him saying, "Oh, that's fine", and then killing him.them. After the story, he says the same phrase after Luna reveals she ate the last grape popsicle, scaring the sisters.
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!!Episode 37 -- Scaring is Caring
* When fanfic Lisa believes Lincoln [[OffWithHisHead decapitated Rita and Lynn Sr.]], she says, "[[DissonantSerenity Afraid so]]". The real Lincoln calls her out:
-->'''Lincoln''': "'Afraid so'? ''"Afraid so"?!'' That's something you say when the Flippee machine is broken, not after you just found out that your parents were killed!"
* This exchange:
-->'''Fanfic Lori''': "Alright. Time to put Operation: Convince-Lincoln-to-not-kill-us-tomorrow-or-we'll-end-up-like-Mom-and-Dad-and-think-of-a-shorter-name-for-this-operation into action!"
-->'''Real Lincoln''': "Hey! Overly long operation names are ''my'' thing!"
* Lisa thinks it's strange how in the story, the sisters are imagining Lincoln mounting their heads on the wall, since real-life murderers tend to hide the bodies. Lincoln responds with "''That's'' your concern?!".
* Everyone's stunned response when the Lola in the story tries to be nice to Lincoln by ''stripping him'' so he can read in his undies.
* Lola revealing that Lana has grown to like baths... but only so she can shake herself dry like a dog.
* In the story, Lana imagines accidentally knocking Lincoln out... with mud.
-->'''Real Lincoln''': "Knocked out? Sheesh, was there a stone hidden in that mud ball?"
* In the story, Lisa [[ProfessorGuineaPig does an experiment on herself]] that makes her feet bigger. She describes it as "discovering Bigfoot", which causes the real Lisa to wonder if she meant discovering herself. Luna replies with:
-->'''Luna''': "Mick Swagger says he discovered himself when he spent five months in India learning to play the sitar. I don't think this is the same thing, though."
* Lisa saying that [[ImADoctorNotAPlaceholder she's a scientist, not a witch]] when her serum in the story is described as a "potion".
* Throughout the story, Lincoln's sisters imagine him saying, "Oh, that's fine", and then killing him. After the story, he says the same phrase after Luna reveals she ate the last grape popsicle, scaring the sisters.
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* When the story is revealed to be a school project that Lincoln is doing (but before the reveal), Luan takes a guess Mrs. Johnson's at next line
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* When the story is revealed to be a school project that Lincoln is doing (but before the reveal), Luan takes a guess at Mrs. Johnson's at next line
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* When Lynn Sr. says that the kids in the story aren't giving him time to "hang up [his] hat", Leni says, "[[LiteralMinded You don't wear a hat, Dad".
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* When Lynn Sr. says that the kids in the story aren't giving him time to "hang up [his] hat", Leni says, "[[LiteralMinded You don't wear a hat, Dad".Dad]]".
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!!Episode 4 -- The Edgy House
* Apparently, Lynn Sr CantHoldHisLiquor...at all.
--> '''Luna:''' ''(Response to the story calling Lynn Sr a mean drunk)'' "If by "mean" you mean "sleepy", then sure. Two drinks and he's ''out''."\\
'''Luan:''' "Two drinks? You're giving him ''way'' too much credit. [[UpToEleven I once saw him get wasted off a slice of rum cake]]."
* When the story is revealed to be a school project that Lincoln is doing (but before the reveal), Luan takes a guess Mrs. Johnson's at next line
--> '''Luan:''' "You all are now officially expelled from every school in the country" ''[{{Beat}}]'' "Make that every school on the planet." ''[{{Beat}}]'' "Every ''public place'' on the planet." ''[{{Beat}}]'' "Actually, let's just make it the planet. Off to Mars with you, buddy."
* Apparently, Lynn Sr CantHoldHisLiquor...at all.
--> '''Luna:''' ''(Response to the story calling Lynn Sr a mean drunk)'' "If by "mean" you mean "sleepy", then sure. Two drinks and he's ''out''."\\
'''Luan:''' "Two drinks? You're giving him ''way'' too much credit. [[UpToEleven I once saw him get wasted off a slice of rum cake]]."
* When the story is revealed to be a school project that Lincoln is doing (but before the reveal), Luan takes a guess Mrs. Johnson's at next line
--> '''Luan:''' "You all are now officially expelled from every school in the country" ''[{{Beat}}]'' "Make that every school on the planet." ''[{{Beat}}]'' "Every ''public place'' on the planet." ''[{{Beat}}]'' "Actually, let's just make it the planet. Off to Mars with you, buddy."
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* When Lincoln calls the imaginary court in the third story a "kangaroo court" for the jury answering the question "How do you plead", Lana imagines a court full of Australian animals.
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* When Lincoln calls the imaginary court in the third story a "kangaroo court" for the jury answering the question "How do you plead", plead?", Lana imagines a court full of Australian animals.
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!!Episode 36 (What's Cooking?)
* When Lynn Sr. says that the kids in the story aren't giving him time to "hang up [his] hat", Leni says, "[[LiteralMinded You don't wear a hat, Dad".
* Lynn Sr. says that everybody cuts or burns themselves while cooking. Leni says that she learnt ''that'' lesson "the hard way" when making her first dish-- cold cereal.
* When Lucy says that she wants her death to be like Virginia Woolf's (drowning with her pockets weighted down), Lincoln asks if he and the others should be concerned or impressed, to which Lynn Sr. replies, "Little of Column A, little of Column B."
* When Lori in the story moans while eating her burger, Lana wonders if it's "so good it hurts", and Lynn Sr. feels awkward.
* Lynn Sr. in the story says that the hamburger meat "isn't strong enough". The real Louds wonder what that even means, eventually imagining bringing a dead cow back to life and making her exercise. Lynn Sr. makes a joke about "beefing up", which everyone groans at, but [[OnlyOneFindsItFun Luan joins in offscreen]].
* Lucy's view of eating meat.
-->'''Lucy''': "So she becomes more powerful by consuming the flesh of others?"
* Lynn Sr. says that his family wastes food. As if on cue, [[UnconventionalFoodUsage Luan throws bread at Lucy]] from offscreen.
* Lana trying to explain that she's close to Lincoln by saying, "Me and Lincoln are just like that" and holding two fingers together. However, she can't offer an answer when Leni asks which finger represents her.
* Lucy suggesting, as pizza ingredients, [[ExtremeOmnivore salamander tongues, crow talons, poison oak, spider larvae, and scales]] much to Lynn Sr.'s disgust.
* Leni mishearing "soup or salad" as "super salad", and then commenting that the salad isn't that super.
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!!Episode 35 (The Godsisters, Game Crashed, and Fracture)
* When Gregory in the first story calls Lincoln a loser, Ronnie Anne (the real one) suggests insulting him back. The girls then suggest some insults, including "Poo-poo head" from Lily and "Brobdingnagian troglodyte" from Lisa.
* Lucy asks Ronnie Anne if she still "picks on" Lincoln. Ronnie Anne asks if [[UnconventionalFoodUsage putting hot sauce in someone's coke]] counts... then reveals that ''Lincoln'' did that to ''her''.
* Lucy saying that ''she'' would obey a "Keep Out" sign... but only because she wants to be a vampire, who can only come in if invited.
* This line from Leni:
-->'''Leni''': "I may not be the sharpest light in the Chanukah bush, but I wasn't born tomorrow."
* Sergio once changed Ronnie Anne's lockscreen to a gif of two cockatoos mating.
* When Lincoln brings up that in the second story, he's essentially homeless, Luan berates him for being serious when they're meant to be being funny. She holds up a list saying that old white people rapping, gigantic mallets, anything in fast motion, the word "pumpernickel", and fake moustaches are funny, but postpartum depression, climate change, necrotising fasciitis, morning radio [=DJs=], and homeless twelve-year-olds can ''never'' be.
* When Ronnie Anne wonders if the reason the cat gang is so aggressive is because CatsAreMean, Cliff gives an offended meow.
* After the story's Ronnie Anne kicks Lincoln in the crotch, the real Ronnie Anne wants Lincoln to hit her to make them even. Lincoln refuses, so ''Lola'' hits her, then Lana hits Lola, prompting everyone on the couch to hit one another until they're all beat up. Lincoln heals them by [[MediumAwareness changing the scene]].
* Lisa commenting that despite having broken her arm, Lola still isn't exclaiming.
* When Lincoln calls the imaginary court in the third story a "kangaroo court" for the jury answering the question "How do you plead", Lana imagines a court full of Australian animals.
* Lincoln and Ronnie Anne putting notes on each other's backs that read "Uber geek" and "Dweebasaurus Rex" during a hug.
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!!Episode 34 - Business Over Brother
* When the Luan in the story uses Lincoln as an armrest, the real Lincoln says it's rude to do that without asking. So Luan asks her younger siblings if she can use them as armrests, but Lincoln declines, Lily [[BlowingARaspberry blows a raspberry]], and Lucy hisses like a cat. Leni volunteers, without realising she's too tall.
* When the Lincoln in the story complains about having to answer 200 questions on a test, the real Luan suggests imagining he's playing 20 Questions ten times over.
* Lily offers to do fanfic Lincoln's homework, but the real Lincoln says that Mr. Bolhofner would probably notice if Lincoln had let his two-year-old sister do his homework.
* When Lincoln points out that he's Luan's only brother, so her calling him her "favourite brother" in the story [[DamnedByFaintPraise isn't very effective]], Leni thinks Mr. Coconuts is another brother.
* Lily having a SweetTooth is a RunningGag in this episode:
** We learn that when the other sisters on the couch tried to be Luan's assistants, Lucy [[NoodleIncident somehow left the birthday girl in a fetal position sucking her thumb]], Leni had all the kids asking to marry her, and Lily ate all the desserts.
** Her response to the story's Luan having Lincoln's homework destroyed is "Too [[ElmuhFuddSyndwome faw, Wuan]]. E'en fo' cake."
** When Lincoln offers cake, she runs around so fast that everyone else gets dizzy.
* When it's revealed that the people in the story are serving five cakes, Lincoln jokes that they're inviting VideoGame/{{Kirby}}, and Leni makes a NonSequitur:
-->'''Leni''': "I'm just saying, serving five cakes at once is like squeezing water from a boot and having it come out the other end. It can't be done."
* Lucy suggests that the story's conflict could be solved by turning Lincoln into a vampire. That way, he could be Luan's assistant and do his homework at night, since [[TheSleepless vampires don't need to sleep]].
* Lincoln finding a [[AccidentalAesop moral]] to the story: "Have some faith in yourself. You're better than you think you are. And keep your grimy hands off my homework."
* When Luan in the story is thinking of a way to apologise to Lincoln, Leni (the real one) suggests flowers, since they mean "I'm sorry" while [[ChocolateOfRomance chocolate means, "I love you"]]. Luan asks what [[BreadEggsBreadedEggs chocolate flowers]] mean, and Leni says that they either mean "Let's have fun tonight" or "I'm not mad at you anymore".
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-->'''Lincoln''': 'Oh, no. Not this Lincoln again. ''(to Lucy)'' The Lincoln who does nothing but cry and mope because he thinks he's the biggest victim who ever lived. Where are authors even getting this from?! I don't do that! That's not what I'm like!'
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-->'''Lincoln''': 'Oh, no. Not this Lincoln again. ''(to Lucy)'' The Lincoln who does nothing but cry and mope because he thinks he's the biggest victim who ever lived. Where are authors even getting this from?! [[WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender I don't do that! That's not what I'm like!'like!]]'
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!!Episode 33 -- Will Lynn Tell?
* Lincoln thinking it's weird how the audience talked back to Lynn in the story as they never talk back to ''him''.
* Lynn [[MadeOfIron catches javelins and sleeps off concussions]].
* Lana wondering why she's being blamed in the story for the apple having a worm, but then adding that if she had her way, all apples would have worms.
* When the story's Lynn mentions having a "cesta" only to be told there's no such thing, the real Lincoln jokingly calls his sisters "cestas". [[LamePunReaction Lynn boos him]], but Lincoln says, "Oh, boo yourself!".
* Lincoln wonders why the [[GoodAngelBadAngel angels and devils on shoulders]] never fall off. Lynn points out that in this story at least, they're versions of her and thus have good balance. Luna then suggests they could hold onto Lynn's hair and makes BabyTalk about it, which [[HatesBeingCalledCute annoys Lynn]].
* The RunningGag of the sisters burying one another in the couch whenever they annoy one each other-- first Lynn to Luna for calling her cute, then Lana to Lynn for [[HeightAngst calling her a pipsqueak]], then all the sisters for arguing over who makes better roommates.
* The real siblings note that the angel and the devil on fanfic Lynn's shoulders don't seem to be doing a good job:
-->'''Lynn''': "Seems like evil me has a lot more faith in me than good me. Dunno what that says about me."
-->'''Lynn''': ''(after the devil gets offended at being called a dunce)'' "Okay, time out. I am ''not'' that thin-skinned." ''[...]'' "Well, devil me isn't thin-skinned either!"
-->'''Lisa''': ''(because the angel keeps fighting the devil)'' "For an 'angel', this apparition is quite prone to violence."
-->'''Luna''': ''(when the angel says that pushing her story counterpart downstairs would get Lynn in more trouble)'' "Wha-''that's'' your concern? What kind of an angel are you?!"
-->'''Luna''': "If she were a true angel, she'd say that doing the right thing IS getting in trouble."
-->'''Lisa''': "I think Lynn should thinking about getting the physical manifestations of her conscience replaced. They're clearly defective."
-->'''Luna''': ''(when the devil gets defensive)'' "Seriously, brah? Why are you letting her shame you? You're a ''devil''. Own it."
-->'''Luna''': "You're far from perfect yourself, Angel Lynn."
* Lana keeps getting SidetrackedByTheAnalogy-- she's not sure if she's a rat or not (i.e. a snitch) since rats are cool, points out how the tree has fallen on her head instead of in the forest, and says, "Like a clumsy spider" when told Lynn is weaving a tangled web in the story.
* Luna pointing out that Lynn in the story doesn't even ''need'' to tell the truth-- if she heard that a branch knocked out Lana, she wouldn't assume it was because of an arrow.
* In the story, Lucy asks who is sleeping in Lynn's bed, and on the couch, Lana jokes, "Is it Literature/{{Goldilocks}}?". She realises she does have golden locks, but wouldn't eat porridge as she [[AgeStereotypicalFood thinks it's for old people]].
* Lana wonders if the reason Lynn in the story doesn't trust Lucy with her secret is because she thinks one of the demons will blab.
* When Lisa calls frogs unintelligent, Lana pretends she SpeaksFluentAnimal and that Hops swore at Lisa.
* Lincoln suggests [[TwinSwitch having Lola dig with Lisa instead of Lana]], but then Lynn points out that she might blow her cover by whining about the dirt.
* Luna pointing out that the Lynn in the story yelps whenever someone greets her.
* The Lynn in the story being ridiculously determined to not tell the truth.
* Lynn found out "[[NoodleIncident the hard way]]" that sumo wrestling was for guys only.
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* Stella and Lincoln [[LampshadeHanging lampshading]] the massive size of Lincoln's family. Lincoln flat out admits that wouldn't be shocked if they had a twelfth on the way.
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* Stella and Lincoln [[LampshadeHanging lampshading]] the massive size of Lincoln's family. Lincoln flat out admits that wouldn't neither him or any of his sisters would be shocked if they had a twelfth on the way.
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* Lisa finally reaching her breaking point when she sees the following line in the poem that Lincoln writes in the story: "Me is Lincoln L. Loud."
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* Lisa finally reaching her breaking point when she sees the following line in the poem that Lincoln writes in the story: "Me is "[[YouNoTakeCandle Me is]] Lincoln L. Loud."
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* After the fanfic is over, the Loud siblings are sad because it involved a fire and serious emotional bonding (and [[UncertainDoom possibly]] Izzy and El Diablo died), they decide to go out for burgers. Lynn wants fire sauce, then adds, "Poor choice of words."
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* After the fanfic is over, the Loud siblings are sad because it involved a fire and serious emotional bonding (and [[UncertainDoom possibly]] Izzy and El Diablo died), and they decide to go out for burgers. Lynn wants fire sauce, then adds, "Poor choice of words."
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* The guys take out a "[[RonTheDeathEater Fanfic Character Portrayed as a Jackass]] Meter" and it goes from "Ronnie Anne in ''A Night to Forget''" (because she wasn't bad), to "Lynn in ''Anger Management''", to "Everyone except Leni and Luna in ''Whipped''" to "Chandler in everything else ever" to finally "Lincoln in ''Lincoln is Done''."
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* The guys take out a "[[RonTheDeathEater Fanfic Character Portrayed as a Jackass]] Meter" and it goes from "Ronnie Anne in ''A Night to Forget''" (because she wasn't bad), to "Lynn in ''Anger Management''", to "Everyone except Leni and Luna in ''Whipped''" to "Chandler in everything else ever" to finally "Lincoln in ''Lincoln is Done''.''Fanfic/LincolnIsDone''."
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* When Lucy disappears, disappears in the story, so does the real Lucy.
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* Luan calls the [[AttackOfTheFiftyFootSister the giant Lynn in the story]] a "brick skyscraper".
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** Lola in the story is completely unfazed by A a ''knife'' getting stuck in her hair.
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** Finally, the last major attempt on Lincoln's life shown is foiled Clouseau-Style: He ducks just as a tank fires it's shot, which ends up blowing up another assailant. Lincoln is barely perturbed by this.
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** Finally, the last major attempt on Lincoln's life shown is foiled Clouseau-Style: He ducks just as a tank fires it's its shot, which ends up blowing up another assailant. Lincoln is barely perturbed by this.
* Lily [[PuppyLove flirting with Rusty]], but then kicking him in the shin when he calls her a baby.
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* Mr. Grouse saying that when he was a teenager, if he swore his father would wash his mouth out with soap... and then he would [[GroinAttack punch his father in the balls.]]
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* Mr. Grouse saying that when he was a teenager, if he swore his father would [[SoapPunishment wash his mouth out with soap...soap]]... and then he would [[GroinAttack punch his father in the balls.]]
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!!Episode 2 -- Tryst of Fate
* Upon hearing that the story Lori was "in the lion's den" and had to "face the music", the real Luna points out that she's never heard of a lion's den that had music playing.
* Upon hearing that the story Lori was "in the lion's den" and had to "face the music", the real Luna points out that she's never heard of a lion's den that had music playing.
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!!Episode 32 -- How Many?
* As it turns out, Lincoln's friends have some trouble keeping track of which sister is which.
-->'''Stella:''' Clown wig? I thought she [Luan] usually wore all black.\\
'''Zach:''' You're thinking of Lana. Luan's the funny one, Lana's the gloomy one.\\
'''Rusty:''' No, you're both wrong. Lana is the dirty one. Lucy is the gloomy one.\\
'''Liam:''' Lynn's the sporty one and Lisa's the brainy one. I know that much.\\
'''Lincoln:''' Are you guys talking about my sisters or the seven dwarfs?
* Stella and Lincoln [[LampshadeHanging lampshading]] the massive size of Lincoln's family. Lincoln flat out admits that wouldn't be shocked if they had a twelfth on the way.
* As it turns out, Lincoln's friends have some trouble keeping track of which sister is which.
-->'''Stella:''' Clown wig? I thought she [Luan] usually wore all black.\\
'''Zach:''' You're thinking of Lana. Luan's the funny one, Lana's the gloomy one.\\
'''Rusty:''' No, you're both wrong. Lana is the dirty one. Lucy is the gloomy one.\\
'''Liam:''' Lynn's the sporty one and Lisa's the brainy one. I know that much.\\
'''Lincoln:''' Are you guys talking about my sisters or the seven dwarfs?
* Stella and Lincoln [[LampshadeHanging lampshading]] the massive size of Lincoln's family. Lincoln flat out admits that wouldn't be shocked if they had a twelfth on the way.
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* Lincoln's not sure what he thinks of story-Lincoln, who is [[AdaptationPersonalityChange whiny]] and [[AdaptationalDumbass thinks his sisters draped in towels are real ghosts]], but on the other hand, [[AdaptationalSkill can play the drums and flute and do karate in his sleep]].
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* Lincoln's not sure what he thinks of story-Lincoln, who is [[AdaptationPersonalityChange [[AdaptationalWimp whiny]] and [[AdaptationalDumbass thinks his sisters draped in towels are real ghosts]], but on the other hand, [[AdaptationalSkill can play the drums and flute and do karate in his sleep]].
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!!Episode 6 -- New Jersey
* When Lynn describes Clyde as "Lincoln's geeky friend", Margo notes that, since almost every friend of Lincoln's is an ExtravertedNerd, that doesn't really narrow it down.
* Lynn once pretended she had a flat tire as an excuse for being late to practice, even though she's too young to drive.
-->'''Lynn''': "No, no, it was a flat tire on my ''bike.''"
-->'''Margo''': "You also said that you had a dead battery."
-->'''Lynn''': "Um... it was a motorcycle?"
* When the Lynn in the story teases Clyde for having his glasses crooked, pretending it's a fashion statement, the real Lynn says that Dexter once tried to pretend his broken glasses were a fashion statement, and it actually worked for a little bit. Leni tries to give it a go, but Luna stops her.
* When it's revealed that Lynn and Clyde are dating in the story, Luan points out that [[CrackPairing the author ships weird characters together]], and Margo reveals that Lynn once shoved Clyde into a locker for being in the hall sans pass. Margo says that Lynn is a stickler for rules and once pulled a gun on someone for stepping over the line. Everyone gapes, until Margo reveals it to have been a BB gun.
* Luan starts cracking jokes about [[GagNose Margo's nose]]. When she makes one at the end, Margo puts her into a headlock.
* When the Clyde in the story can't think of a retort for not letting Lynn in, Luan suggests telling her he was waiting for her to let her farts out. The real Lynn says that [[InsultBackfire unlike Lori, she owns her farts.]]
* Luan calling story-Lynn a bigot for assuming all nerds know one another.
* When Lynn brags about her butt and has Margo slap it, Leni cites that as the reason she doesn't play sports.
* Margo reveals that Lynn used to be nicknamed "Floofy Head" and they'd rub her hair for good luck.
* When fanfic-Clyde tears off his shirt so he can shag Lynn, Leni says, "NO! I don't care how horny you are. You don't ruin a perfectly good shirt!"
* When the story's Clyde is revealed to be [[BiggerIsBetterInBed hung]], Luan says, "You know what they say about guys like Clyde!". Luna [[BlackIsBiggerInBed takes this the wrong way]] and berates Luan, but then Luan reveals that [[MistakenForRacist she just meant]] timid guys are bigger downstairs because they don't act like they have something to prove.
* In the story, when Lynn is pleasuring Clyde by grabbing his member, Margo says that if she were him, she'd [[GroinAttack be wary]], since when Lynn played the "Test Your Grip" game, the score was "OW OW MERCY PLEASE STOP YOU'RE HURTING ME".
* Luna pointing out that the mention of Clyde's "weeping dick" makes his dick sound pathetic. She then adds that ''she'd'' say it was "[[VulgarHumour erupting]]".
