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-->'''Mad Rat:''' [[LampshadeHanging Is this a joke?]]
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-->'''Mad Rat:''' [[LampshadeHanging Is this This must be a joke?]]joke.]]
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-->'''Rat God:''' I LIVE IN YOUR HEAD!!\\
'''Mad Rat:''' [[DeadpanSnarker Oh yeah? Where's rent?]]\\
'''Rat God:''' I already paid for it! The chance for a re-do!
* Back to before the transplant, Heart insists on escaping the lab with Mad Rat, who does not want to see him die. Heart is not disturbed.
-->'''Heart:''' [[BreakingTheFourthWall I have seen you die hundreds of times!]]
'''Mad Rat:''' [[DeadpanSnarker Oh yeah? Where's rent?]]\\
'''Rat God:''' I already paid for it! The chance for a re-do!
* Back to before the transplant, Heart insists on escaping the lab with Mad Rat, who does not want to see him die. Heart is not disturbed.
-->'''Heart:''' [[BreakingTheFourthWall I have seen you die hundreds of times!]]
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-->'''Rat God:''' Don't you remember? I LIVE IN YOUR HEAD!!\\
live in your head!\\
'''Mad Rat:''' [[DeadpanSnarkerOh yeah? Oh, yeah?! Where's rent?]]\\
rent?!]]\\
'''Rat God:''' I already paidfor it! The chance for a re-do!
* Back to before the transplant, Heart insists on escaping the lab with Mad Rat, who does not want to see him die. Heart is not disturbed.
-->'''Heart:''' [[BreakingTheFourthWall I have seen you die hundreds of times!]]re-do!
'''Mad Rat:''' [[DeadpanSnarker
'''Rat God:''' I already paid
* Back to before the transplant, Heart insists on escaping the lab with Mad Rat, who does not want to see him die. Heart is not disturbed.
-->'''Heart:''' [[BreakingTheFourthWall I have seen you die hundreds of times!]]
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* Really, every time Heart slaps Mad Rat out of his delusions counts. Once Heart slaps Mad Rat before a cat could eat Mad Rat, Mad Rat asks for a gentler way out of his delusions. Heart retorts that the cat would have eaten Mad Rat before Heart found a gentler way.
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* Really, every time Heart slaps Mad Rat out of his delusions counts. Once Heart slaps Mad Rat before a cat could eat Mad Rat, Mad Rat asks for a gentler way out of his delusions. Heart retorts that the cat would have eaten Mad Rat before Heart found a gentler way. Prior to 4-2, Mad Rat finds himself inexplicably back at the laboratory without realizing he had just been in the forest outside of the city, upon which Heart slaps Mad Rat and the background suddenly changes back to the forest.
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* After Mat Rat defeats a zombie rat mob, he faints. The Rat God nonchalantly explains that he is asphyxiating... something that happens to rats a lot.
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* After Mat Mad Rat defeats a zombie rat mob, he faints. The Rat God nonchalantly explains that he is asphyxiating... something that happens to rats a lot.
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* Mad Rat's animation cycle has him swap between various "cool" poses when he dashes to the beat... except for one where he's faceplanting.
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I fixed a sentence.
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* Heart tries to reason with Mad Rat by telling him that he could leave his mark on the living world in other ways. Mad Rat then demonstrates... by [[VisualPun leaving an actual mark]] of his face on a sewer pipe. Heart laughs off how poor the drawing is... which was on purpose, since Mad Rat wanted to demonstrate why not every way of leaving a mark would be effective. This becomes a BrickJoke when he sees the ghosts of the rats he eliminated but, after Heart slaps some sense into him, he finds that he was acting scared his old doodle.
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* Heart tries to reason with Mad Rat by telling him that he could leave his mark on the living world in other ways. Mad Rat then demonstrates... by [[VisualPun leaving an actual mark]] of his face on a sewer pipe. Heart laughs off how poor the drawing is... which was on purpose, since Mad Rat wanted to demonstrate why not every way of leaving a mark would be effective. This becomes a BrickJoke when he sees the ghosts of the rats he eliminated but, after Heart slaps some sense into him, he finds that he was acting scared of his old doodle.
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I fixed a quote and added a point.
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'''Rat God:''' I already paid for it! The chance for a redo!
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'''Rat God:''' I already paid for it! The chance for a redo!re-do!
* Back to before the transplant, Heart insists on escaping the lab with Mad Rat, who does not want to see him die. Heart is not disturbed.
-->'''Heart:''' [[BreakingTheFourthWall I have seen you die hundreds of times!]]
* Back to before the transplant, Heart insists on escaping the lab with Mad Rat, who does not want to see him die. Heart is not disturbed.
-->'''Heart:''' [[BreakingTheFourthWall I have seen you die hundreds of times!]]
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-->'''Rat God:''' [[ I LIVE IN YOUR HEAD!!]]\\
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-->'''Rat God:''' [[ I LIVE IN YOUR HEAD!!]]\\HEAD!!\\
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--> Mad Rat: [[LampshadeHanging Is this a joke?]]
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--> Rat God: I LIVE IN YOUR HEAD!!
--> Mad Rat: Oh yeah? Where's rent?
--> Rat God: I already paid for it! The chance for a redo!
--> Mad Rat: Oh yeah? Where's rent?
--> Rat God: I already paid for it! The chance for a redo!
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--> Mad Rat:
'''Mad Rat:''' [[DeadpanSnarker Oh yeah? Where's
--> Rat God:
'''Rat God:''' I already paid for it! The chance for a redo!
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I have done a punctuation mistake.
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* After Mad Rat reaffirms his desire of getting rid of the Rat God.
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* After Mad Rat reaffirms his desire of getting rid of the Rat God.God:
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I did not wan to forget a quote.
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* Really, every time Heart slaps Mad Rat out of his delusions counts. Once Heart slaps Mad Rat before a cat could eat Mad Rat, Mad Rat asks for a gentler way out of his delusions. Heart retorts that the cat would have eaten Mad Rat before Heart found a gentler way.
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* Really, every time Heart slaps Mad Rat out of his delusions counts. Once Heart slaps Mad Rat before a cat could eat Mad Rat, Mad Rat asks for a gentler way out of his delusions. Heart retorts that the cat would have eaten Mad Rat before Heart found a gentler way.way.
* After Mad Rat reaffirms his desire of getting rid of the Rat God.
--> Rat God: I LIVE IN YOUR HEAD!!
--> Mad Rat: Oh yeah? Where's rent?
--> Rat God: I already paid for it! The chance for a redo!
* After Mad Rat reaffirms his desire of getting rid of the Rat God.
--> Rat God: I LIVE IN YOUR HEAD!!
--> Mad Rat: Oh yeah? Where's rent?
--> Rat God: I already paid for it! The chance for a redo!
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I fixed a point. I wonder if th i supposed to be a Lampshade, though.
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--> Mad Rat: Is this a joke?]]
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--> Mad Rat: [[LampshadeHanging Is this a joke?]]
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the slapping
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* Heart tries to reason with Mad Rat by telling him that he could leave his mark on the living world in other ways. Mad Rat then demonstrates... by [[VisualPun leaving an actual mark]] of his face on a sewer pipe. Heart laughs off how poor the drawing is... which was on purpose, since Mad Rat wanted to demonstrate why not every way of leaving a mark would be effective.
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* Heart tries to reason with Mad Rat by telling him that he could leave his mark on the living world in other ways. Mad Rat then demonstrates... by [[VisualPun leaving an actual mark]] of his face on a sewer pipe. Heart laughs off how poor the drawing is... which was on purpose, since Mad Rat wanted to demonstrate why not every way of leaving a mark would be effective. This becomes a BrickJoke when he sees the ghosts of the rats he eliminated but, after Heart slaps some sense into him, he finds that he was acting scared his old doodle.
--> Mad Rat: Is this a joke?]]
* Really, every time Heart slaps Mad Rat out of his delusions counts. Once Heart slaps Mad Rat before a cat could eat Mad Rat, Mad Rat asks for a gentler way out of his delusions. Heart retorts that the cat would have eaten Mad Rat before Heart found a gentler way.
--> Mad Rat: Is this a joke?]]
* Really, every time Heart slaps Mad Rat out of his delusions counts. Once Heart slaps Mad Rat before a cat could eat Mad Rat, Mad Rat asks for a gentler way out of his delusions. Heart retorts that the cat would have eaten Mad Rat before Heart found a gentler way.
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I added a new point abou the sewer.
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* Heart apparently does not find anything wrong with drinking ''sewer water''.
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* Heart apparently does not find anything wrong with drinking ''sewer water''.water''.
* Heart tries to reason with Mad Rat by telling him that he could leave his mark on the living world in other ways. Mad Rat then demonstrates... by [[VisualPun leaving an actual mark]] of his face on a sewer pipe. Heart laughs off how poor the drawing is... which was on purpose, since Mad Rat wanted to demonstrate why not every way of leaving a mark would be effective.
* Heart tries to reason with Mad Rat by telling him that he could leave his mark on the living world in other ways. Mad Rat then demonstrates... by [[VisualPun leaving an actual mark]] of his face on a sewer pipe. Heart laughs off how poor the drawing is... which was on purpose, since Mad Rat wanted to demonstrate why not every way of leaving a mark would be effective.
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I have forgotten a point.
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* After Mat Rat defeats a zombie rat mob, he faints. The Rat God nonchalantly explains that he is asphyxiating... something that happens to rats a lot.
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* After Mat Rat defeats a zombie rat mob, he faints. The Rat God nonchalantly explains that he is asphyxiating... something that happens to rats a lot.lot.
* Heart apparently does not find anything wrong with drinking ''sewer water''.
* Heart apparently does not find anything wrong with drinking ''sewer water''.
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* When Heart asks how Mad Rat is going to kill the scientist, Mad Rat says that he is going to ''bash in the scientist's head''. Mind you, despite being a half-zombie with rhythm and time powers, he is still a ''rat''. Instead of ''biting'' the scientist then have him die of the many diseases rats have, he actually thinks that his tiny rat body has the strength that can bash in a human head.
* After Mat Rat defeats a zombie rat mob, he faints. The Rat God nonchalantly explains that he is asphyxiating... something that happens to rats a lot.
* After Mat Rat defeats a zombie rat mob, he faints. The Rat God nonchalantly explains that he is asphyxiating... something that happens to rats a lot.
