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* When Essen spits in Jerome's face, he initially reacts with disgust, then remarks that it was "strangely pleasant" and ''tells her to do it again''...
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* When Essen spits in Jerome's face, he initially reacts with disgust, then remarks that it was "strangely pleasant" and ''tells her to do it again''...again''.
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* After Jerome attacks Jim in the hallway, Jim begins to strangle Jerome...who gasps out, "I'm sensing anger".
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* After Jerome attacks Jim in the hallway, Jim begins to strangle Jerome...Jerome, who gasps out, "I'm sensing anger".
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* After Jerome attacks Jim in the hallway, Jim begins to strangle Jerome...who gasps out, "I'm sensing anger".
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* [[OneSceneWonder Jeri]], the contact Bruce goes to see to learn the whereabouts of Malone. She strikes the right balance of creepy ''and'' funny, culminating in using a ''mosh-pit'' to subdue Jim Gordon. Plus, with her clown make-up, general attitude and JoiseyAccent, she reminds more than a few fans of [[Characters/BatmanHarleyQuinn Harley Quinn]], if she aged a few decades.
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* [[OneSceneWonder Jeri]], the contact Bruce goes to see to learn the whereabouts of Malone. She strikes the right balance of creepy ''and'' funny, culminating in using a ''mosh-pit'' to subdue Jim Gordon. Plus, with her clown make-up, general attitude and JoiseyAccent, she reminds more than a few fans of [[Characters/BatmanHarleyQuinn [[Characters/HarleyQuinnTheCharacter Harley Quinn]], if she aged a few decades.
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-->'''Gordon:''' [[WhatTheHellHero Now he's dead]]. [[SarcasmMode Nice work, Bullock]].\\
'''Bullock:''' Oh, I'm sure it was my kicks that did it, not the fact that he was ''fried like a taquito!''
'''Bullock:''' Oh, I'm sure it was my kicks that did it, not the fact that he was ''fried like a taquito!''
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-->'''Gordon:''' And now he's dead. [[SarcasmMode Nice]] [[WhatTheHellHero Now he's dead]]. [[SarcasmMode Nice work, Bullock]].work]], Bullock.\\
'''Bullock:'''Oh, I'm sure it was Oh yeah, my kicks that did it, not the fact that he was it? Maybe it's because he's ''fried like a taquito!''
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* Bullock's line afterwards just seals the deal when Gordon [[WhatTheHellHero calls him out about it]].
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--> '''Bullock:''' Oh, I'm sure it was my kicks that did it, not the fact that he was ''fried like a taquito!''
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'''Bullock:''' Oh, I'm sure it was my kicks that did it, not the fact that he was ''fried like a taquito!''
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** Zsasz and Penguin's entire schtick as they're intimidating Loeb. ThoseTwoBadGuys have their psychotic routine practically down to a science!
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** He [[RefugeInAudacity calls for the cheerleaders]] to [[BlackComedy give him an O NO!]] [[CrossesTheLineTwice The poor terrified girls sob it out]].
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-->'''Ed:''' ''(practicing)'' Ms. Kringle, I'm sure you've noticed my affections from afar. ''(beat)'' "Afar?" Seriously?
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'''Gordon''': ''[bored as he writes him up]'' That spelled how it sounds?\\
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'''Gordon''': ''[bored as he writes him up]'' Zaardon. That spelled how it sounds?\\
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** He pronounces Gordon's name as "Gor-don."
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-->'''Peabody''': Generations? That sword was made yesterday.\\
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-->'''Peabody''': Generations? [[DayOldLegend That sword was made yesterday.\\]]\\
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* [[OneSceneWonder Jeri]], the contact Bruce goes to see to learn the whereabouts of Malone. She strikes the right balance of creepy ''and'' funny, culminating in using a ''mosh-pit'' to subdue Jim Gordon. Plus, with her clown make-up, general attitude and JoiseyAccent, she reminds more than a few fans of [[Characters/BatmanRoguesGalleryPart1 Harley Quinn]], if she aged a few decades.
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* [[OneSceneWonder Jeri]], the contact Bruce goes to see to learn the whereabouts of Malone. She strikes the right balance of creepy ''and'' funny, culminating in using a ''mosh-pit'' to subdue Jim Gordon. Plus, with her clown make-up, general attitude and JoiseyAccent, she reminds more than a few fans of [[Characters/BatmanRoguesGalleryPart1 [[Characters/BatmanHarleyQuinn Harley Quinn]], if she aged a few decades.
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* When Theo tells Jerome (as part of his heroic facade) that he still believes there’s a bit of humanity left in him, Jerome points at himself as if to say, “Who, me? I don’t think you mean me.”
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** Seeing the usually strait-laced dead serious Jim Gordon played as a jolly flippant pervert. [=McKenzie=] must have had a blast in this episode.
** Clayface!Jim noisily sipping on a milkshake and eating chips.
** Clayface!Jim noisily sipping on a milkshake and eating chips.
