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* While putting baby Trunks to bed, Nappa is shown reading from a book called "How Freeza Stole Christmas", which he says is the story of [[RunningGag how Christmas was converted into Freeza Day]].
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* The only people in the crowd for Yamcha's game are Master Roshi (who is asleep), Puar, Android 18, and Krillin (the only person to appear entertained, and likely more out of pity than anything else). [[SarcasmMode "The crowd goes wild" indeed.]]
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* The only people in the crowd for Yamcha's game are Master Roshi (who is asleep), Puar, Android 18, 18 (who looks ''very'' bored), and Krillin (the only person to appear entertained, and likely more out of pity than anything else). [[SarcasmMode "The crowd goes wild" indeed.]]
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** Becomes even funnier [[BrickJoke at the end of the episode]], when Lazuli/18 says that the only reason she said no to the pancakes is because she's pregnant.
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* What ”pales in comparison to the shit he pulled last month” started with both Lazuli/18 and Krillin about to get intimate, only to discover Roshi is secretly filming them. He burns it to a DVD titled [[CrossesTheLineTwice "Under 18 and Perfectly Legal"]]. And given what 18 establishes later in the episode, it means that ''Roshi got Marron's conception on video''.
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* What ”pales in comparison to the shit he pulled last month” started with both Lazuli/18 and Krillin about to get intimate, only to discover Roshi is secretly filming them. He burns it to a DVD titled [[ExactWords "Under 18]] [[CrossesTheLineTwice "Under 18 and Perfectly Legal"]]. And given what 18 establishes later in the episode, it means that ''Roshi got Marron's conception on video''.
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** For once we don't get to hear the [[HearingVoices internal dialogue]] between Piccolo, Nail, and Kami as one of them gives him the idea. And also for once, we see the perspective of those who believe he's talking to nobody. The subtitles reveal the exchange, however.
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** For once we don't get to hear the [[HearingVoices internal dialogue]] between [[SharingABody Piccolo, Nail, and Kami Kami]] as one of them gives him the idea. And also for once, [[InnerThoughtsOutsiderPuzzlement we see the perspective of those who believe he's talking to nobody.nobody]]. The subtitles reveal the exchange, however.
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* Lazuli/18 and Lapis/17 aren't on good terms because he wanted a male tiger for his island and she sent him [[FurryConfusion a tiger]] ''[[FurryConfusion man]]'' named Tony. He had to DoubleTake when he realized his name was similar to a certain tiger mascot with the same name.
-->'''Lazuli/18:''' Tony ''is'' a pretty common name.\\
-->'''Lazuli/18:''' Tony ''is'' a pretty common name.\\
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* Lazuli/18 and Lapis/17 aren't on good terms because he wanted a male tiger for his island and she sent him [[FurryConfusion a tiger]] ''[[FurryConfusion man]]'' named Tony. He
** Lapis/17 had to DoubleTake when he realized his name was similar to a certain tiger mascot with the same name.
-->'''Lazuli/18:''' --->'''Lazuli/18:''' Tony ''is'' a pretty common name.\\
** Lapis/17 had to DoubleTake when he realized his name was similar to a certain tiger mascot with the same name.
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** Lazuli/18 ''actually wears that specific pair of lingerie'' in the next flashback! And, uh, speaking of which...
--->'''Lazuli/18:''' And that all pales in ''comparison'' to the shit he pulled last month.
* Lazuli/18 actually opts to wear the lingerie while she and Krillin are making love, only to discover Roshi is secretly filming them. He burns it to a DVD titled [[CrossesTheLineTwice "Under 18 and Perfectly Legal"]]. And given what 18 establishes later in the episode, it means that ''Roshi got Marron's conception on video''.
--->'''Lazuli/18:''' And that all pales in ''comparison'' to the shit he pulled last month.
* Lazuli/18 actually opts to wear the lingerie while she and Krillin are making love, only to discover Roshi is secretly filming them. He burns it to a DVD titled [[CrossesTheLineTwice "Under 18 and Perfectly Legal"]]. And given what 18 establishes later in the episode, it means that ''Roshi got Marron's conception on video''.
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** Lazuli/18 ''actually wears that specific pair of lingerie'' in the next flashback! And, uh, speaking of which...
--->'''Lazuli/18:''' And that all palesflashback!
* What ”pales in''comparison'' comparison to the shit he pulled last month.
*month” started with both Lazuli/18 actually opts to wear the lingerie while she and Krillin are making love, about to get intimate, only to discover Roshi is secretly filming them. He burns it to a DVD titled [[CrossesTheLineTwice "Under 18 and Perfectly Legal"]]. And given what 18 establishes later in the episode, it means that ''Roshi got Marron's conception on video''.
--->'''Lazuli/18:''' And that all pales
* What ”pales in
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* Lazuli/18 and Lapis/17 aren't on good terms because he wanted a male tiger for his island and she sent him [[FurryConfusion a tiger]] ''[[FurryConfusion man]]'' named Tony.
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* Lazuli/18 and Lapis/17 aren't on good terms because he wanted a male tiger for his island and she sent him [[FurryConfusion a tiger]] ''[[FurryConfusion man]]'' named Tony. He had to DoubleTake when he realized his name was similar to a certain tiger mascot with the same name.
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** Lapis/17 had to perform a DoubleTake when he realized his name was similar to another tiger mascot.
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* Lazuli/18 and Lapus/17 aren't on good terms because he wanted a male tiger for his island and she sent him [[FurryConfusion a tiger]] ''[[FurryConfusion man]]'' named Tony.
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* Lazuli/18 and Lapus/17 Lapis/17 aren't on good terms because he wanted a male tiger for his island and she sent him [[FurryConfusion a tiger]] ''[[FurryConfusion man]]'' named Tony.
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'''Lapis/17:''' ''STOP DROPPING FURRIES ON MY ISLAND!''
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'''Lapis/17:''' ''STOP ''[[ARareSentence STOP DROPPING FURRIES ON MY ISLAND!''ISLAND!]]''
** Lapis/17 had to perform a DoubleTake when he realized his name was similar to another tiger mascot.
** Lapis/17 had to perform a DoubleTake when he realized his name was similar to another tiger mascot.
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-->'''Roshi:''' "Eh. I've had a good run. (''eats a pancake'')"
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-->'''Roshi:''' "Eh.Eh. I've had a good run. (''eats ''(eats a pancake'')"pancake)''