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* This comes to a peak in ''The Stern Chase,'' when Hal locks Jesper in a cupboard during a party so that he won't be able to perform his usual saga.
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** The repetition of The Saga of Hal and the Heron Brotherband, including such gems as trying to rhyme "Araulen" and "doin'". Erak thinks it's genius. Hal isn't so sure.
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** The repetition of The Saga of Hal and the Heron Brotherband, including such gems as trying to rhyme "Araulen" and "doin'". Erak thinks it's genius. Hal isn't so sure.sure.
* This comes to a peak in ''The Stern Chase,'' when Hal locks Jesper in a cupboard during a party so that he won't be able to perform his usual saga.
* This comes to a peak in ''The Stern Chase,'' when Hal locks Jesper in a cupboard during a party so that he won't be able to perform his usual saga.
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** The Saga of Hal and the Heron Brotherband.
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** The Saga of Hal and the Heron Brotherband. ''All'' of it. Particularly Hal being the OnlySaneMan and complaining about the exaggerations and atrocious rhymes, while Erak, who considers himself a CulturedBadass, loving it. Highlights include:
--->'''Jesper and Stefan:''' They sailed down a waterfall a hundred meters high/And sank a dozen pirate ships as they were passing by!
--->'''Hal:''' Two! TWO! And they were boats, not ships!
--->'''Erak:''' You probably had to be there to appreciate it.
--->'''Hal:''' I ''was'' there!
** And:
--->'''Jesper and Stefan:''' They sailed down a waterfall a hundred meters high/And sank a dozen pirate ships as they were passing by!
--->'''Hal:''' Two! TWO! And they were boats, not ships!
--->'''Erak:''' You probably had to be there to appreciate it.
--->'''Hal:''' I ''was'' there!
** And:
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** Also, the fact that it was [[BoisterousBruiser Svengal]], of all people, who interrupted them (out of consideration for a local lady).
** Hal being the OnlySaneMan and complaining about the exaggerations and atrocious rhymes, while Erak, who considers himself a CulturedBadass, loves it.
** Hal being the OnlySaneMan and complaining about the exaggerations and atrocious rhymes, while Erak, who considers himself a CulturedBadass, loves it.
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** Also, the fact that it was [[BoisterousBruiser Svengal]], ''[[BoisterousBruiser Svengal]],'' of all people, who interrupted them (out of consideration for a local lady).
**Hal being It's noted throughout that Erak's been swinging his ale tankard a bit too boisterously, drenching everyone else in his proximity. At the OnlySaneMan end of the saga, he looks down and complaining about the exaggerations and atrocious rhymes, while Erak, who considers himself a CulturedBadass, loves it.demands to know who's been drinking his ale.
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** Erak discovers his chewed staff right when the ''Heron'' is about to leave harbor, resulting in a rather hurried departure. Ingvar admits to Lydia that this is par for the course.
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** Erak discovers his chewed staff right when the ''Heron'' is about to leave harbor, resulting in a rather hurried departure.departure (by which we mean the ship sailing out as fast as possible while Erak is literally dancing with anger on the harbor). Ingvar admits to Lydia that this is par for the course.
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** Gilan, having joined the crew for the first time, doesn't know not to give the twins an opportunity. HilarityEnsues. Ultimately, Hal suggests that he throw them both overboard and the ranger agrees that sounds good.
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** Gilan, having joined the crew for the first time, doesn't know not to give the twins an opportunity. HilarityEnsues. Ultimately, Hal suggests that he throw them both overboard and the ranger Ranger agrees that sounds good.
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-->'''Umar:''' [[LargeHam Well, of course one hundred and twenty of my warriors!]] But they were a ceremonial guard. No Bedullin ''Aseikh'' would think of traveling without a small retinue! But I stress, apart from those paltry numbers, I performed the feat entirely on my own.
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-->'''Umar:''' [[LargeHam Well, of course one hundred and twenty of my warriors!]] But they were a ceremonial guard. No Bedullin ''Aseikh'' would think of traveling without a small retinue! But I stress, apart from those paltry numbers, I performed the feat entirely on my own.own.
** The repetition of The Saga of Hal and the Heron Brotherband, including such gems as trying to rhyme "Araulen" and "doin'". Erak thinks it's genius. Hal isn't so sure.
** The repetition of The Saga of Hal and the Heron Brotherband, including such gems as trying to rhyme "Araulen" and "doin'". Erak thinks it's genius. Hal isn't so sure.
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** Erak points out a bit on ''Wolfwind'' that the shipwrights didn't fix, and Svengal says it's from where he banged the wharf coming in a couple years back.
-->'''Erak:''' I don't bang wharfs.
-->'''Svengal:''' [[SarcasticDevotee Oh, yes, my mistake. I forgot. The wharf banged you. That's right, I remember now. The wharf banged you. It fairly leapt off its pilings and barged into the ship. Terrible things, wharves. You can never trust them.]]
-->'''Erak:''' Do you ''ever'' shut up?
-->'''Svengal:''' Rarely.
** When Erak meets Lydia, he kisses her hand politely and calls her a keeper, at which she smiles and thanks him politely. Since Thorn's called her this several times, and always gets a response of "shut up, old man," he's reduced to red-faced, incoherent spluttering.
-->'''Erak:''' It's a matter of charm, Thorn. Some got it. Some don't got it.
-->'''Edvin:''' ''(sotto voce)'' Some don't got good grammar, either.
-->'''Erak:''' I don't bang wharfs.
-->'''Svengal:''' [[SarcasticDevotee Oh, yes, my mistake. I forgot. The wharf banged you. That's right, I remember now. The wharf banged you. It fairly leapt off its pilings and barged into the ship. Terrible things, wharves. You can never trust them.]]
-->'''Erak:''' Do you ''ever'' shut up?
-->'''Svengal:''' Rarely.
** When Erak meets Lydia, he kisses her hand politely and calls her a keeper, at which she smiles and thanks him politely. Since Thorn's called her this several times, and always gets a response of "shut up, old man," he's reduced to red-faced, incoherent spluttering.
-->'''Erak:''' It's a matter of charm, Thorn. Some got it. Some don't got it.
-->'''Edvin:''' ''(sotto voce)'' Some don't got good grammar, either.
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* Umar tells Hal and Stig that he rescued Erak single-handedly. Well, Gilan was there, and Will, and Halt, and Horace, and Evanlyn, and Svengal. But apart from them, he was all alone.
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** Ulf and Wulf try to lure someone into a conversational trap as they did with Gilan the first time they passed the Straits of Iqbal, pondering why the Aretans don't have more variety in naming. Lydia epically shuts their mouths for a moment by snarkily pointing out that their names only differ by a letter.
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** Ulf and Wulf try to lure someone into a conversational trap as they did with Gilan the first time they passed the Straits of Iqbal, pondering why the Aretans Arridans don't have more variety in naming. Lydia epically shuts their mouths for a moment by snarkily pointing out that their names only differ by a letter.
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* Stefan uses his [[ManOfAThousandVoices mimicry skills]] to make it sound as if Thorn is making fun of Lydia. Thorn gets him back by kicking his butt. Literally.
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* Gilan noting that Iqbal's family [[LampshadeHanging doesn't have a lot of luck with women who throw things.]]
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** The Arridan cavalry can't stop gawking at [[AlwaysIdenticalTwins Ulf and Wulf]]. Finally Wulf asks one what he's staring at, and the hapless soldier says that he looks just like the crewman over there. Wulf retorts that it's Ulf who looks like him, and if he knows what's good for him, he'll cut it out.
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* The Herons dubbing the widely-feared corsair [[RedBaron Philip Bloodyhand]] "Philip Pussyfoot," "Philip Daintyfinger," and "Philip Tinkytoes."
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** Ingvar, excited over his new spectacles, storms the remaining crew of Pgillip Bloodyhand's ship, taking out a number of them singlehandedly, and then yells "Let's get 'em!" and leads the rest of the Herons in defeating and capturing the others. Thorn complains that the young man stole the fight from under his nose.
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** The Herons dubbing the widely-feared corsair [[RedBaron Philip Bloodyhand]] "Philip Pussyfoot," "Philip Daintyfinger," and "Philip Tinkytoes."
** Ingvar, excited over his new spectacles, storms the remaining crew ofPgillip Phillip Bloodyhand's ship, taking out a number of them singlehandedly, and then yells "Let's get 'em!" and leads the rest of the Herons in defeating and capturing the others. Thorn complains that the young man stole the fight from under his nose.
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** Ingvar, excited over his new spectacles, yells "Let's get 'em!" and charges the enemy, scattering them single-handedly, and Thorn complains that the young man stole the fight from under his nose.
--->'''Hal:''' [[GagNose He had plenty of room to maneuver, then.]]
--->'''Hal:''' [[GagNose He had plenty of room to maneuver, then.]]
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** Ingvar, excited over his new spectacles, storms the remaining crew of Pgillip Bloodyhand's ship, taking out a number of them singlehandedly, and then yells "Let's get 'em!" and charges leads the enemy, scattering them single-handedly, rest of the Herons in defeating and capturing the others. Thorn complains that the young man stole the fight from under his nose.
--->'''Hal:''' [[GagNose He had plenty of room tomaneuver, move, then.]]]]
** Thorn continues sulking and griping about Ingvar stealing "his" fight and "his [[BuffySpeak thing]]" (the traditional battle cry "Let's get 'em!").
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** Thorn continues sulking and griping about Ingvar stealing "his" fight and "his [[BuffySpeak thing]]" (the traditional battle cry "Let's get 'em!").
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* Umar tells Hal and Stig that he rescued Erak single-handedly. Well, Gilan was there, and Will, and Halt, and Horace, and Evalyn, and Svengal. But apart from them, he was all alone.
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* Umar tells Hal and Stig that he rescued Erak single-handedly. Well, Gilan was there, and Will, and Halt, and Horace, and Evalyn, Evanlyn, and Svengal. But apart from them, he was all alone.
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** Ulf and Wulf try to lure someone into a conversational trap as they did with Gilan the first time they passed the Straits of Iqbal, pondering why the Aretans don't have more variety in naming. Lydia epically shuts their mouths for a moment by snarkily pointing out that their names only differ by a letter.
** Ulf and Wulf transition into another argument, with one pretending not to notice his brother. Hal calls Ingvar and asks him if he'd ever wanted to see how throwing one of them overboard looked.
** Ulf and Wulf transition into another argument, with one pretending not to notice his brother. Hal calls Ingvar and asks him if he'd ever wanted to see how throwing one of them overboard looked.
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* In Book 5 Ingvar, excited over his new spectacles, yells "Let's get 'em!" and charges the enemy, scattering them single-handedly, and Thorn complains that the young man stole the fight from under his nose.
-->'''Hal:''' He had plenty of room to maneuver, then.
-->'''Hal:''' He had plenty of room to maneuver, then.
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* In Book 5 Ingvar, excited over his new spectacles, yells "Let's get 'em!" and charges ''Scorpion Mountain'':
** When Geoffrey theenemy, scattering them single-handedly, and Thorn Jeweler complains about Skandians having stolen an ingot from him, Hal's first assumption is that the young man stole the fight Jesper's been up to his usual tricks. (The theft was actually years ago.)
** The assassin sent to kill Princess Cassandra gets a rather unpleasant wake-up, first awakening to see Kloof's slavering jaws inches fromunder his nose.face, then seeing the enraged Ulf and Wulf and finally receiving one of Thorn's unpleasant grins as the old warrior looks over the situation.
-->'''Hal:''' ** Thorn suggests that the assassin probably thinks he's seeing double from being hit on the head when he first catches sight of Ulf and Wulf. It's even suggested he might actually be seeing double, meaning he'd see four of them. Lydia comments how horrible that would be.
** Ingvar, excited over his new spectacles, yells "Let's get 'em!" and charges the enemy, scattering them single-handedly, and Thorn complains that the young man stole the fight from under his nose.
--->'''Hal:''' [[GagNose He had plenty of room to maneuver, then.]]
** When Geoffrey the
** The assassin sent to kill Princess Cassandra gets a rather unpleasant wake-up, first awakening to see Kloof's slavering jaws inches from
** Ingvar, excited over his new spectacles, yells "Let's get 'em!" and charges the enemy, scattering them single-handedly, and Thorn complains that the young man stole the fight from under his nose.
--->'''Hal:''' [[GagNose He had plenty of room to maneuver, then.]]
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** At one point, while Ulf and Wulf are bickering, ''even the narrator'' loses track of who's who.
** Gilan, having joined the crew for the first time, doesn't know not to give the twins an opportunity. HilarityEnsues. Ultimately, Hal suggests that he throw them both overboard and the ranger agrees that sounds good.
** Gilan, having joined the crew for the first time, doesn't know not to give the twins an opportunity. HilarityEnsues. Ultimately, Hal suggests that he throw them both overboard and the ranger agrees that sounds good.
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-->'''Umar:''' [[LargeHam Well, of course one hundred and twenty of my warriors!]] But they were a ceremonial guard. No Bedullin ''Aseikh'' would think of traveling without a small retinue! But I stress, apart from those paltry numbers, I performed the feat entirely on my own.
** At one point, while Ulf and Wulf are bickering, ''even the narrator'' loses track of who's who.
** At one point, while Ulf and Wulf are bickering, ''even the narrator'' loses track of who's who.
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-->'''Umar:''' [[LargeHam Well, of course one hundred and twenty of my warriors!]] But they were a ceremonial guard. No Bedullin ''Aseikh'' would think of traveling without a small retinue! But I stress, apart from those paltry numbers, I performed the feat entirely on my own. \n** At one point, while Ulf and Wulf are bickering, ''even the narrator'' loses track of who's who.
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** Erak discovers his chewed staff right when the ''Heron'' is about to leave harbor, resulting in a rather hurried departure.
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** Anders losing his patience with Bjarni's anxious hovering.
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-->'''Jesper and Stefan:''' We sailed into Raguza and Hal said as bold as brass, we've come to challenge Zavac and we plan to kick his...
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** Hal declaring that as the skirl he can give himself permission to keep the dog he found rather than having to get his mother's. Thorn doesn't find it very convincing.
** Most of the sequence of Hal awkwardly trying to get his irritated mother to accept Kloof.
** Hal declaring that as the skirl he can give himself permission to keep the dog he found rather than having to get his mother's. Thorn doesn't find it very convincing.
** Most of the sequence of Hal awkwardly trying to get his irritated mother to accept Kloof.
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** The Saga of Hal and the Heron Brotherband.
-->'''Jesper and Stefan:''' We sailed into Raguza and Hal said as bold as brass, we've come to challenge Zavac and we plan to kick his...
-->'''Svengal:''' [[CurseCutShort LANGUAGE!]]\\
{{Beat}} while they improvise\\
'''Jesper and Stefan:''' We've come to challenge Zavac and he's going to breathe his last.
** Also, the fact that it was [[BoisterousBruiser Svengal]], of all people, who interrupted them (out of consideration for a local lady).
** Hal being the OnlySaneMan and complaining about the exaggerations and atrocious rhymes, while Erak, who considers himself a CulturedBadass, loves it.
-->'''Jesper and Stefan:''' We sailed into Raguza and Hal said as bold as brass, we've come to challenge Zavac and we plan to kick his...
-->'''Svengal:''' [[CurseCutShort LANGUAGE!]]\\
{{Beat}} while they improvise\\
'''Jesper and Stefan:''' We've come to challenge Zavac and he's going to breathe his last.
** Also, the fact that it was [[BoisterousBruiser Svengal]], of all people, who interrupted them (out of consideration for a local lady).
** Hal being the OnlySaneMan and complaining about the exaggerations and atrocious rhymes, while Erak, who considers himself a CulturedBadass, loves it.
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** At one point, while Ulf and Wulf are bickering, ''even the narrator'' loses track of who's who.
* The Saga of Hal and the Heron Brotherband. Both times it's completely hilarious.
-->'''Jesper and Stefan:''' We sailed into Raguza and Hal said as bold as brass, we've come to challenge Zavac and we're going to kick his...
-->'''Svengal:''' [[CurseCutShort LANGUAGE!]]\\
{{Beat}}\\
'''Jesper and Stefan:''' We've come to challenge Zavac and he's going to breathe his last.
** Also, the fact that it was [[BoisterousBruiser Svengal]], of all people, who interrupted them.
** Hal being the OnlySaneMan and complaining about the atrocious rhymes, while Erak, who considers himself a CulturedBadass, loves it.
* The Saga of Hal and the Heron Brotherband. Both times it's completely hilarious.
-->'''Jesper and Stefan:''' We sailed into Raguza and Hal said as bold as brass, we've come to challenge Zavac and we're going to kick his...
-->'''Svengal:''' [[CurseCutShort LANGUAGE!]]\\
{{Beat}}\\
'''Jesper and Stefan:''' We've come to challenge Zavac and he's going to breathe his last.
** Also, the fact that it was [[BoisterousBruiser Svengal]], of all people, who interrupted them.
** Hal being the OnlySaneMan and complaining about the atrocious rhymes, while Erak, who considers himself a CulturedBadass, loves it.
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** At one point, while Ulf and Wulf are bickering, ''even the narrator'' loses track of who's who. \n* The Saga of Hal and the Heron Brotherband. Both times it's completely hilarious. \n-->'''Jesper and Stefan:''' We sailed into Raguza and Hal said as bold as brass, we've come to challenge Zavac and we're going to kick his...\n-->'''Svengal:''' [[CurseCutShort LANGUAGE!]]\\\n{{Beat}}\\\n'''Jesper and Stefan:''' We've come to challenge Zavac and he's going to breathe his last.\n** Also, the fact that it was [[BoisterousBruiser Svengal]], of all people, who interrupted them. \n** Hal being the OnlySaneMan and complaining about the atrocious rhymes, while Erak, who considers himself a CulturedBadass, loves it.
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-->'''Hal:''' [[DeadpanSnarker Of course I am. I'm making these strange noises because I'm overjoyed with the waves of agony that are running through my body.]]
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-->'''[[DeadpanSnarker Erak:]]''' Actually, I can, even though my daddy's not the Maktig. ''Because I'm the Oberjarl.'' Understand?
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-->'''Thorn:''' I smell all right.
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-->'''Thorn:''' I have a mature smell, I believe.
-->'''Stig:''' [[DeadpanSnarker So does cheese]].
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* In Book 3, after he gets beaten up, Edvin tells Hal to stand up and walk so he doesn't get stiff. Hal snarkily asks him if he'd like Hal to dance a jig. Edvin shrugs that it can't hurt.
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* In Book 3, after he ''The Hunters'':
** After Hal gets beaten up, Edvin tellsHal him to stand up and walk so he doesn't get stiff. Hal snarkily asks him if he'd like Hal to he should dance a jig. Edvin shrugs Stig quips that it can't hurt.that's fine if he feels like it.
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* Upon getting free of their cell, Hal asks Thorn what the plan is. They'll have to be subtle, so as not to awaken the guards. Being Skandian, Thorn's plan is to go up the stairs quietly and bash anyone who gets in their way.
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-->'''Hal:''' [[DeadpanSnarker "Of Of course I am. I'm making these strange noises because I'm overjoyed with the waves of agony that are running through my body."]]
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** Upon getting free of their cell, Hal asks Thorn what the plan is. They'll have to be subtle, so as not to
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-->'''Jesper and Stefan:''' "We We sailed into Raguza and Hal said as bold as brass, we've come to challenge Zavac and we're going to kick his..."
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** Stig proudly declares to Erak that the ''Heron'' will sail rings around any wolfship...[[VerbalBackspace except Wolfwind, of course.]]
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** At one point, while Ulf and Wulf are bickering, ''even the narrator'' loses track of who's who.
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* The jokes in that book about Thorn's lack of hygiene.
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* In Book 2, while ''Th Invaders'':
** While laying out ThePlan, Svengal asks about the role of his crew, and if Hal expects him to sit back and do nothing. Hal jokingly replies that sure, he had a hard voyage, he might want to lean back and rest... Svengal is somewhat perturbed, since ''he's'' usually the SarcasticDevotee.
* ** The jokes in that book about Thorn's lack of hygiene.
** While laying out ThePlan, Svengal asks about the role of his crew, and if Hal expects him to sit back and do nothing. Hal jokingly replies that sure, he had a hard voyage, he might want to lean back and rest... Svengal is somewhat perturbed, since ''he's'' usually the SarcasticDevotee.
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** Hal snitches Thorn's battered sheepskin vest to make sure his new fin for ''Heron'' fits snugly. After a while, Thorn realizes the implications of his missing vest and the fin's sheepskin lining, and he continually brings up that Hal owes him a new, pricey one.
** Thorn is NotAMorningPerson, as Ulf and Edvin find out one morning aboard ship.
** Thorn is NotAMorningPerson, as Ulf and Edvin find out one morning aboard ship.
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* During the first book, Tursgud keeps insisting that [[ScrewTheRulesIHaveConnections he can get away with anything because his father is the Maktig]]. However, this falls flat on two occasions. In the first, he says it to Thorn, who grimly replies that it's a good thing his dad's not there (and given TheReveal about Thorn's [[WorldsBestWarrior backstory...]]) The second attempt fails when he says it to Erak, who responds with this gem:
-->[[DeadpanSnarker '''Erak:''']] Actually, I can, even though my daddy's not the Maktig. ''Because I'm the Oberjarl.'' Understand?
-->[[DeadpanSnarker '''Erak:''']] Actually, I can, even though my daddy's not the Maktig. ''Because I'm the Oberjarl.'' Understand?
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* During the The first book, book:
** Tursgud keeps insisting that [[ScrewTheRulesIHaveConnections he can get away with anything because his father is the Maktig]]. However, this falls flat on two occasions. In the first, he says it to Thorn, who grimly replies that it's a good thing his dad's not there (and given TheReveal about Thorn's [[WorldsBestWarrior backstory...]]) The second attempt fails when he says it to Erak, who responds with this gem:
-->[[DeadpanSnarker '''Erak:''']] -->'''[[DeadpanSnarker Erak:]]''' Actually, I can, even though my daddy's not the Maktig. ''Because I'm the Oberjarl.'' Understand? Understand?
** The Herons' ConfusionFu against the Sharks during the second night attack, especially [[VoiceChangeling Stefan's]] role.
** Tursgud keeps insisting that [[ScrewTheRulesIHaveConnections he can get away with anything because his father is the Maktig]]. However, this falls flat on two occasions. In the first, he says it to Thorn, who grimly replies that it's a good thing his dad's not there (and given TheReveal about Thorn's [[WorldsBestWarrior backstory...]]) The second attempt fails when he says it to Erak, who responds with this gem:
** The Herons' ConfusionFu against the Sharks during the second night attack, especially [[VoiceChangeling Stefan's]] role.
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* During the first book, Tursgud keeps insisting that [[ScrewTheRulesIHaveConnections he can get away with anything because his father is the Maktig]]. However, this falls flat on two occasions. In the first, he says it to Thorn, who grimly replies that it's a good thing his dad's not there (and given TheReveal about Thorn's [[WorldsBestWarrior backstory...]]) The second attempt fails when he says it to Erak, who responds with this gem:
-->[[DeadpanSnarker '''Erak:''']] Actually, I can, even though my daddy's not the Maktig. ''Because I'm the Oberjarl.'' Understand?
-->[[DeadpanSnarker '''Erak:''']] Actually, I can, even though my daddy's not the Maktig. ''Because I'm the Oberjarl.'' Understand?
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* The jokes in that book about Thorn's lack of hygiene.
-->'''Thorn:''' I smell all right.
-->'''Hal:''' You smell, all right.
-->'''Thorn:''' I have a mature smell, I believe.
-->'''Stig:''' [[DeadpanSnarker So does cheese]].
-->'''Thorn:''' I smell all right.
-->'''Hal:''' You smell, all right.
-->'''Thorn:''' I have a mature smell, I believe.
-->'''Stig:''' [[DeadpanSnarker So does cheese]].
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* Upon getting free of their cell, Hal asks Thorn what the plan is. They'll have to be subtle, so as not to awaken the guards. Being Skandian, Thorn's plan is to go up the stairs quietly and bash anyone who gets in their way.
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* Upon getting free of their cell, Hal asks Thorn what the plan is. They'll have to be subtle, so as not to awaken the guards. Being Skandian, Thorn's plan is to go up the stairs quietly and bash anyone who gets in their way.way.
* The Herons dubbing the widely-feared corsair [[RedBaron Philip Bloodyhand]] "Philip Pussyfoot," "Philip Daintyfinger," and "Philip Tinkytoes."
* In Book 5 Ingvar, excited over his new spectacles, yells "Let's get 'em!" and charges the enemy, scattering them single-handedly, and Thorn complains that the young man stole the fight from under his nose.
-->'''Hal:''' He had plenty of room to maneuver, then.
* Gilan noting that Iqbal's family doesn't have a lot of luck with women who throw things.
* Stefan uses his [[ManOfAThousandVoices mimicry skills]] to make it sound as if Thorn is making fun of Lydia. Thorn gets him back by kicking his butt. Literally.
* Umar tells Hal and Stig that he rescued Erak single-handedly. Well, Gilan was there, and Will, and Halt, and Horace, and Evalyn, and Svengal. But apart from them, he was all alone.
-->'''Gilan:''' And apart from a hundred and twenty of your warriors.
-->'''Umar:''' [[LargeHam Well, of course one hundred and twenty of my warriors!]] But they were a ceremonial guard. No Bedullin ''Aseikh'' would think of traveling without a small retinue! But I stress, apart from those paltry numbers, I performed the feat entirely on my own.
* The Saga of Hal and the Heron Brotherband. Both times it's completely hilarious.
-->'''Jesper and Stefan:''' "We sailed into Raguza and Hal said as bold as brass, we've come to challenge Zavac and we're going to kick his..."
-->'''Svengal:''' "[[CurseCutShort LANGUAGE!]]"\\
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'''Jesper and Stefan:''' "We've come to challenge Zavac and he's going to breathe his last."
** Also, the fact that it was [[BoisterousBruiser Svengal]], of all people, who interrupted them.
** Hal being the OnlySaneMan and complaining about the atrocious rhymes, while Erak, who considers himself a CulturedBadass, loves it.
* The Herons dubbing the widely-feared corsair [[RedBaron Philip Bloodyhand]] "Philip Pussyfoot," "Philip Daintyfinger," and "Philip Tinkytoes."
* In Book 5 Ingvar, excited over his new spectacles, yells "Let's get 'em!" and charges the enemy, scattering them single-handedly, and Thorn complains that the young man stole the fight from under his nose.
-->'''Hal:''' He had plenty of room to maneuver, then.
* Gilan noting that Iqbal's family doesn't have a lot of luck with women who throw things.
* Stefan uses his [[ManOfAThousandVoices mimicry skills]] to make it sound as if Thorn is making fun of Lydia. Thorn gets him back by kicking his butt. Literally.
* Umar tells Hal and Stig that he rescued Erak single-handedly. Well, Gilan was there, and Will, and Halt, and Horace, and Evalyn, and Svengal. But apart from them, he was all alone.
-->'''Gilan:''' And apart from a hundred and twenty of your warriors.
-->'''Umar:''' [[LargeHam Well, of course one hundred and twenty of my warriors!]] But they were a ceremonial guard. No Bedullin ''Aseikh'' would think of traveling without a small retinue! But I stress, apart from those paltry numbers, I performed the feat entirely on my own.
* The Saga of Hal and the Heron Brotherband. Both times it's completely hilarious.
-->'''Jesper and Stefan:''' "We sailed into Raguza and Hal said as bold as brass, we've come to challenge Zavac and we're going to kick his..."
-->'''Svengal:''' "[[CurseCutShort LANGUAGE!]]"\\
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'''Jesper and Stefan:''' "We've come to challenge Zavac and he's going to breathe his last."
** Also, the fact that it was [[BoisterousBruiser Svengal]], of all people, who interrupted them.
** Hal being the OnlySaneMan and complaining about the atrocious rhymes, while Erak, who considers himself a CulturedBadass, loves it.
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* In Book 2, while laying out ThePlan, Svengal asks about the role of his crew, and if Hal expects him to sit back and do nothing. Hal jokingly replies that sure, he had a hard voyage, he might want to lean back and rest... Svengal is somewhat perturbed, since ''he's'' usually the SarcasticDevotee.
* In Book 3, after he gets beaten up, Edvin tells Hal to stand up and walk so he doesn't get stiff. Hal snarkily asks him if he'd like Hal to dance a jig. Edvin shrugs that it can't hurt.
** Upon rising, he starts groaning, and Ingvar asks if he's all right.
-->'''Hal:''' [[DeadpanSnarker "Of course I am. I'm making these strange noises because I'm overjoyed with the waves of agony that are running through my body."]]
* Upon getting free of their cell, Hal asks Thorn what the plan is. They'll have to be subtle, so as not to awaken the guards. Being Skandian, Thorn's plan is to go up the stairs quietly and bash anyone who gets in their way.
* In Book 2, while laying out ThePlan, Svengal asks about the role of his crew, and if Hal expects him to sit back and do nothing. Hal jokingly replies that sure, he had a hard voyage, he might want to lean back and rest... Svengal is somewhat perturbed, since ''he's'' usually the SarcasticDevotee.
* In Book 3, after he gets beaten up, Edvin tells Hal to stand up and walk so he doesn't get stiff. Hal snarkily asks him if he'd like Hal to dance a jig. Edvin shrugs that it can't hurt.
** Upon rising, he starts groaning, and Ingvar asks if he's all right.
-->'''Hal:''' [[DeadpanSnarker "Of course I am. I'm making these strange noises because I'm overjoyed with the waves of agony that are running through my body."]]
* Upon getting free of their cell, Hal asks Thorn what the plan is. They'll have to be subtle, so as not to awaken the guards. Being Skandian, Thorn's plan is to go up the stairs quietly and bash anyone who gets in their way.