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** His second effort is equally poorly thought-out: he decides to bring Lindy a box of Jujyfruits, but is afraid his appearance will frighten her -- so he [[WhatAnIdiot puts on black gloves and a ski mask and quietly sneaks up the stairs]]. And then spies on her through the railing.
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** His second effort is equally poorly thought-out: he decides to bring Lindy a box of Jujyfruits, but is afraid his appearance will frighten her -- so he [[WhatAnIdiot puts on black gloves and a ski mask and quietly sneaks up the stairs]].stairs. And then spies on her through the railing.
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** His second effort is equally poorly thought-out: he decides to bring Lindy a box of Jujyfruits, but is afraid his appearance will frighten her -- so he [[WhatAnIdiot puts on black gloves and a ski mask and quietly sneaks up the stairs]]. [[UpToEleven And then spies on her through the railing.]]
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** His second effort is equally poorly thought-out: he decides to bring Lindy a box of Jujyfruits, but is afraid his appearance will frighten her -- so he [[WhatAnIdiot puts on black gloves and a ski mask and quietly sneaks up the stairs]]. [[UpToEleven And then spies on her through the railing.]]
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* Kyle invites Linda to join him for his sessions with Will, explaining that they're reading Shakespeare's sonnets. When Linda shows interest, he tries to impress her by recalling one of the many passages he's memorized in his confinement; all he can think of is, "Shakespeare's great." (And then thinks to himself, [[WhatAnIdiot "Duh. Shakespeare's cool, man."]])
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* Kyle invites Linda to join him for his sessions with Will, explaining that they're reading Shakespeare's sonnets. When Linda shows interest, he tries to impress her by recalling one of the many passages he's memorized in his confinement; all he can think of is, "Shakespeare's great." (And then thinks to himself, [[WhatAnIdiot "Duh. Shakespeare's cool, man."]])")
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* Kyle's efforts to find a girlfriend over the internet. He uses the magic mirror to see the people he's chatting with; he's dismayed to find that the alleged "teenage girls" include several [[DirtyOldMan older men]], a police officer (whom Kyle hopes is just trying to catch online predators), a forty-something housewife (who [[CovertPervert asks for nudes]]), and a very young girl (who yells "You're not my mother!" when Kyle warns her to stop pretending to be an older girl to pick up guys).
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* Kyle's efforts to find a girlfriend over the internet. He uses the magic mirror to see the people he's chatting with; he's dismayed to find that his dismay, the alleged "teenage girls" he's speaking to include several [[DirtyOldMan older men]], a police officer (whom Kyle hopes is just trying to catch online predators), a forty-something housewife (who [[CovertPervert asks for nudes]]), and a very young girl (who yells "You're not my mother!" when Kyle warns her to stop pretending to be an older girl to pick up guys).
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* Kyle's efforts to find a girlfriend over the internet. He uses the magic mirror to see who the people he's chatting with really are; he's dismayed to find that the alleged "teenage girls" include several [[DirtyOldMan older men]], a police officer (whom Kyle hopes is just trying to catch online predators), a forty-something housewife (who [[CovertPervert asks for nudes]]), and a very young girl (who yells "You're not my mother!" when Kyle warns her to stop pretending to be an older girl to pick up guys).
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* Kyle's efforts to find a girlfriend over the internet. He uses the magic mirror to see who see the people he's chatting with really are; with; he's dismayed to find that the alleged "teenage girls" include several [[DirtyOldMan older men]], a police officer (whom Kyle hopes is just trying to catch online predators), a forty-something housewife (who [[CovertPervert asks for nudes]]), and a very young girl (who yells "You're not my mother!" when Kyle warns her to stop pretending to be an older girl to pick up guys).
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* Every time Kyle uses PurpleProse, he [[LampShade lamp shades]] [[RealityEnsues how corny it must sound]] coming from him.
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* Every time Kyle uses PurpleProse, he [[LampShade lamp shades]] [[RealityEnsues shades how corny it must sound]] coming from him.
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** Kyle's offended JawDrop, as though wondering "''Who is this guy''?" There's an element of humor that Kyle has been cursed for so long that months later, he's all but forgotten he used to look like that.
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* Kyle's early efforts to try to woo Lindy. Believing she'll be DistractedByTheLuxury, he tries gifting her with a designer handbag and [[EverythingsSparklyWithJewelry a diamond-studded keychain from a Bulgari]]. When she rejects both, he gives Zola his credit card and tells her to "Go to Barney's, [[AllWomenLoveShoes get Manolos]] or whatever sick expensive kind Sloan and her bimbots loved."
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* Kyle's early efforts to try to woo Lindy. Believing she'll be DistractedByTheLuxury, he tries gifting her with a designer handbag and [[EverythingsSparklyWithJewelry a diamond-studded keychain from a Bulgari]]. When she rejects both, he gives Zola his credit card and tells her to "Go to Barney's, [[AllWomenLoveShoes get Manolos]] or whatever sick expensive kind Sloan and her bimbots loved."
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* In the book, Kyle's efforts to find a girlfriend over the internet. He uses the magic mirror to see who the people really are, and is dismayed to see who a lot of the alleged teenage girls are, including [[DirtyOldMan older men]], a police officer (who Kyle hopes is just trying to catch online predators), a forty-something housewife (who [[CovertPervert asks for nudes]]), and a very young girl (who yells "You're not my mother!" when Kyle warns her to stop pretending to be an older girl to pick up guys).
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* In the book, Kyle's efforts to find a girlfriend over the internet. He uses the magic mirror to see who the people he's chatting with really are, and is are; he's dismayed to see who a lot of find that the alleged teenage girls are, including "teenage girls" include several [[DirtyOldMan older men]], a police officer (who (whom Kyle hopes is just trying to catch online predators), a forty-something housewife (who [[CovertPervert asks for nudes]]), and a very young girl (who yells "You're not my mother!" when Kyle warns her to stop pretending to be an older girl to pick up guys).
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* In the book, Kyle's efforts to find a girlfriend over the internet. He uses the magic mirror to see who the people really are, and is dismayed to see who a lot of the alleged teenage girls are, including older men, a police officer (who Kyle hopes is just trying to catch online predators), and a very young girl (who gets very snippy when Kyle tries to tell her to stop pretending to be an older girl to pick up guys).
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* In the book, Kyle's efforts to find a girlfriend over the internet. He uses the magic mirror to see who the people really are, and is dismayed to see who a lot of the alleged teenage girls are, including [[DirtyOldMan older men, men]], a police officer (who Kyle hopes is just trying to catch online predators), a forty-something housewife (who [[CovertPervert asks for nudes]]), and a very young girl (who gets very snippy yells "You're not my mother!" when Kyle tries to tell warns her to stop pretending to be an older girl to pick up guys).guys).
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* One time, Kyle tries to use the mirror to talk to Kendra, and it takes a moment for her image to appear:
-->"Why does the mirror take so long to show you to me, but others I see instantly?"
-->"Because sometimes I'm doing something you shouldn't see."
-->"Like what? In the bathroom?"
-->She scowled. "Witch things."
-->"Right. Got it." But under my breath, I sang, "Kendra's on the potty."
-->"I was not!"
* Kyle invites Linda to join him for his sessions with Will, explaining that they're reading Shakespeare's sonnets. When Linda shows interest, he tries to impress her by recalling one of the many passages he's memorized in his confinement; all he can think of is, "Shakespeare's great." (And then thinks to himself, [[WhatAnIdiot "Duh. Shakespeare's cool, man."]])
* The night before his first lesson with Lindy, Kyle wakes Will up at 6 in the morning to help him learn everything ahead of time, so he can impress her. Will tries desperately to brush him off.
-->"You just want to go back to bed."
-->"I do want to go back to bed. But I don't ''just'' want to go back to bed." He started to close the door.
-->"Why does the mirror take so long to show you to me, but others I see instantly?"
-->"Because sometimes I'm doing something you shouldn't see."
-->"Like what? In the bathroom?"
-->She scowled. "Witch things."
-->"Right. Got it." But under my breath, I sang, "Kendra's on the potty."
-->"I was not!"
* Kyle invites Linda to join him for his sessions with Will, explaining that they're reading Shakespeare's sonnets. When Linda shows interest, he tries to impress her by recalling one of the many passages he's memorized in his confinement; all he can think of is, "Shakespeare's great." (And then thinks to himself, [[WhatAnIdiot "Duh. Shakespeare's cool, man."]])
* The night before his first lesson with Lindy, Kyle wakes Will up at 6 in the morning to help him learn everything ahead of time, so he can impress her. Will tries desperately to brush him off.
-->"You just want to go back to bed."
-->"I do want to go back to bed. But I don't ''just'' want to go back to bed." He started to close the door.
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* In the film, pretty much everything Will says.
** In a deleted scene in the movie, after Linda says "I've seen worse", we see Kyle go up onto the New York Bridge to literally cheer for the whole world to hear "SHE'S! SEEN! WORSE!"
** In a deleted scene in the movie, after Linda says "I've seen worse", we see Kyle go up onto the New York Bridge to literally cheer for the whole world to hear "SHE'S! SEEN! WORSE!"
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** In a deleted scene in the movie, after Linda says "I've seen worse", we see Kyle go up onto the New York Bridge to literally cheer for the whole world to hear "SHE'S! SEEN! WORSE!"
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* In the book, every time Kyle uses PurpleProse, he [[LampShade lamp shades]] [[RealityEnsues how corny it must sound]] coming from him.
* A scene in the film shows Kyle walking in on Lindy, catching a glimpse at her social media posts whining about the situation. In order to hide it, she closes the webpage down - [[DiggingYourselfDeeper and revealing that her background is the picture of her and Kyle pre-transformation]]. Much bumbling around from both of them ensues.
* During the film when Kyle is following Lindy, there's a moment where she has headphones in and is singing out loud. Then she realises she's doing this in public, hugely embarrassed.
* A scene in the film shows Kyle walking in on Lindy, catching a glimpse at her social media posts whining about the situation. In order to hide it, she closes the webpage down - [[DiggingYourselfDeeper and revealing that her background is the picture of her and Kyle pre-transformation]]. Much bumbling around from both of them ensues.
* During the film when Kyle is following Lindy, there's a moment where she has headphones in and is singing out loud. Then she realises she's doing this in public, hugely embarrassed.
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* In the book, every Every time Kyle uses PurpleProse, he [[LampShade lamp shades]] [[RealityEnsues how corny it must sound]] coming from him.
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*A scene in In the film shows film, pretty much everything Will says.
** Even some of his non-speaking scenes are pretty funny: he can barely contain his laughter at the [[PurpleProse syrupy, romantic language]] Kyle uses when he presents the greenhouse to Lindy.
* Kyle walking in on Lindy, catching a glimpse at her social media posts whining about the situation. In order to hide it, she closes the webpage down - [[DiggingYourselfDeeperand revealing that her background is the picture of her and Kyle pre-transformation]]. Much bumbling around from both of them ensues.
*During Kyle's early efforts to try to woo Lindy. Believing she'll be DistractedByTheLuxury, he tries gifting her with a designer handbag and [[EverythingsSparklyWithJewelry a diamond-studded keychain from a Bulgari]]. When she rejects both, he gives Zola his credit card and tells her to "Go to Barney's, [[AllWomenLoveShoes get Manolos]] or whatever sick expensive kind Sloan and her bimbots loved."
** His second effort is equally poorly thought-out: he decides to bring Lindy a box of Jujyfruits, but is afraid his appearance will frighten her -- so he [[WhatAnIdiot puts on black gloves and a ski mask and quietly sneaks up thefilm stairs]]. [[UpToEleven And then spies on her through the railing.]]
** Not only does Lindy ''not'' scream when she notices Kyle, but ''he's'' more startled than she is. And then she [[LampshadeHanging lampshades]] what a stupid move he made.
* There's something [[BlackHumor darkly funny]] about the flowering tree tattoo on Kyle's arm -- the symbol of his hated, disfiguring curse -- lighting up with Christmas lights and a star during the holiday season. Kendra is quite the snarky witch.
* When Kyle is following Lindy, there's a moment where she has headphones in and is singing out loud. Then she realises she's doing this in public, hugelyembarrassed.embarrassed.
* In a deleted scene, after Linda says "I've seen worse", we see Kyle go up onto the New York Bridge to literally cheer for the whole world to hear: "SHE'S! SEEN! WORSE!"
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** Even some of his non-speaking scenes are pretty funny: he can barely contain his laughter at the [[PurpleProse syrupy, romantic language]] Kyle uses when he presents the greenhouse to Lindy.
* Kyle walking in on Lindy, catching a glimpse at her social media posts whining about the situation. In order to hide it, she closes the webpage down - [[DiggingYourselfDeeper
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** His second effort is equally poorly thought-out: he decides to bring Lindy a box of Jujyfruits, but is afraid his appearance will frighten her -- so he [[WhatAnIdiot puts on black gloves and a ski mask and quietly sneaks up the
** Not only does Lindy ''not'' scream when she notices Kyle, but ''he's'' more startled than she is. And then she [[LampshadeHanging lampshades]] what a stupid move he made.
* There's something [[BlackHumor darkly funny]] about the flowering tree tattoo on Kyle's arm -- the symbol of his hated, disfiguring curse -- lighting up with Christmas lights and a star during the holiday season. Kendra is quite the snarky witch.
* When Kyle is following Lindy, there's a moment where she has headphones in and is singing out loud. Then she realises she's doing this in public, hugely
* In a deleted scene, after Linda says "I've seen worse", we see Kyle go up onto the New York Bridge to literally cheer for the whole world to hear: "SHE'S! SEEN! WORSE!"
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* In the book, every time Kyle uses PurpleProse, he [[LampShade lamp shades]] [[RealityEnsues how corny it must sound]] coming from him.
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* In the book, every time Kyle uses PurpleProse, he [[LampShade lamp shades]] [[RealityEnsues how corny it must sound]] coming from him.him.
* A scene in the film shows Kyle walking in on Lindy, catching a glimpse at her social media posts whining about the situation. In order to hide it, she closes the webpage down - [[DiggingYourselfDeeper and revealing that her background is the picture of her and Kyle pre-transformation]]. Much bumbling around from both of them ensues.
* During the film when Kyle is following Lindy, there's a moment where she has headphones in and is singing out loud. Then she realises she's doing this in public, hugely embarrassed.
* A scene in the film shows Kyle walking in on Lindy, catching a glimpse at her social media posts whining about the situation. In order to hide it, she closes the webpage down - [[DiggingYourselfDeeper and revealing that her background is the picture of her and Kyle pre-transformation]]. Much bumbling around from both of them ensues.
* During the film when Kyle is following Lindy, there's a moment where she has headphones in and is singing out loud. Then she realises she's doing this in public, hugely embarrassed.
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* In the book, Kyle's efforts to find a girlfriend over the internet. He uses the magic mirror to see who the people really are, and is dismayed to see who a lot of the alleged teenage girls are, including older men, a police officer (who Kyle hopes is just trying to catch online predators), and a very young girl (who gets very snippy when Kyle tries to tell her to stop pretending to be an older girl to pick up guys).
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** In a deleted scene in the movie, after Linda says "I've seen worse", we see Kyle go up onto the New York Bridge to literally cheer for the whole world to hear "SHE'S! SEEN! WORSE!"
* In the book, Kyle's efforts to find a girlfriend over the internet. He uses the magic mirror to see who the people really are, and is dismayed to see who a lot of the alleged teenage girls are, including older men, a police officer (who Kyle hopes is just trying to catch online predators), and a very young girl (who gets very snippy when Kyle tries to tell her to stop pretending to be an older girl to pick upguys).guys).
* In the book, every time Kyle uses PurpleProse, he [[LampShade lamp shades]] [[RealityEnsues how corny it must sound]] coming from him.
* In the book, Kyle's efforts to find a girlfriend over the internet. He uses the magic mirror to see who the people really are, and is dismayed to see who a lot of the alleged teenage girls are, including older men, a police officer (who Kyle hopes is just trying to catch online predators), and a very young girl (who gets very snippy when Kyle tries to tell her to stop pretending to be an older girl to pick up
* In the book, every time Kyle uses PurpleProse, he [[LampShade lamp shades]] [[RealityEnsues how corny it must sound]] coming from him.
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* In the film, pretty much everything Will says.
* In the book, Kyle's efforts to find a girlfriend over the internet. He uses the magic mirror to see who the people really are, and is dismayed to see who a lot of the alleged teenage girls are, including older men, a police officer (who Kyle hopes is just trying to catch online predators), and a very young girl (who gets very snippy when Kyle tries to tell her to stop pretending to be an older girl to pick up guys).
* In the book, Kyle's efforts to find a girlfriend over the internet. He uses the magic mirror to see who the people really are, and is dismayed to see who a lot of the alleged teenage girls are, including older men, a police officer (who Kyle hopes is just trying to catch online predators), and a very young girl (who gets very snippy when Kyle tries to tell her to stop pretending to be an older girl to pick up guys).
