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* DifferentWorldDifferentMovies: {{Discussed}}. Ax wonders if the new timeline's version of ''Series/TheYoungAndTheRestless'' has different plots.
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** At the end of chapter 33, [[spoiler:the Drode takes Alloran to the splinter universe after he dies in the original timeline, where he's promptly re-infested by Visser Three.]]
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** At the end Chapter 33 ends with another Controller's point of chapter 33, [[spoiler:the Drode takes Alloran to the splinter universe after view: [[spoiler:Alloran. After he dies of old age in the original timeline, the Drode brings him to the splinter universe, where he's promptly re-infested by Visser Three.]]
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* PardonMyKlingon: Andalites use "rot" as an expletive.
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* PardonMyKlingon: Andalites use "rot" as an expletive.expletive, and Tobias considers calling Elfangor "a very nasty Taxxon epithet for shit" at one point.
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** As soon as Tom is freed, he tells Jake and Rachel that he was okay with them doing this to him in the original timeline, relieving some of Jake's immense guilt.
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** As soon as Tom is freed, he tells thanks Jake and Rachel that he was okay with them for doing this to him in the original timeline, relieving some of Jake's immense guilt.
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* NamedByTheAdaptation: Tom's second Yeerk is called Feriss 512 here, and Taylor's surname is Ingraham. On a more minor note, the tiger Jake acquired is revealed to be named Arthur, with all the Gardens' big cats named after figures from Arthurian myth.
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* NamedByTheAdaptation: Tom's second Yeerk is called Feriss 512 here, Cassie's surname is Hanson, and Taylor's surname is Ingraham. On a more minor note, the tiger Jake acquired is revealed to be named Arthur, with all the Gardens' big cats named after figures from Arthurian myth.
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[[spoiler:Since Cassie killed Visser Three while he was in Alloran's morphed body, the Drode is able to bring the original timeline's Alloran to the splinter universe as well. Then the newly-transplanted Visser Three blows up a Nova ship, and Edriss-in-Eva along with it. Oops.]]
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** [[spoiler:Since Cassie killed Visser Three while he was in Alloran's morphed body, the Drode is able to bring the original timeline's Alloran to the splinter universe as well. Then the newly-transplanted Visser Three blows up a Nova ship, and Edriss-in-Eva along with it. Oops.]]
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* KillTheHostBody: [[spoiler:Since Cassie killed Visser Three while he was in Alloran's morphed body, the Drode is able to bring the original timeline's Alloran to the splinter universe as well. Then the newly-transplanted Visser Three blows up a Nova ship, and Edriss-in-Eva along with it. Oops.]]
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* KillTheHostBody: KillTheHostBody:
** As soon as Tom is freed, he tells Jake and Rachel that he was okay with them doing this to him in the original timeline, relieving some of Jake's immense guilt.
[[spoiler:Since Cassie killed Visser Three while he was in Alloran's morphed body, the Drode is able to bring the original timeline's Alloran to the splinter universe as well. Then the newly-transplanted Visser Three blows up a Nova ship, and Edriss-in-Eva along with it. Oops.]]
** As soon as Tom is freed, he tells Jake and Rachel that he was okay with them doing this to him in the original timeline, relieving some of Jake's immense guilt.
[[spoiler:Since Cassie killed Visser Three while he was in Alloran's morphed body, the Drode is able to bring the original timeline's Alloran to the splinter universe as well. Then the newly-transplanted Visser Three blows up a Nova ship, and Edriss-in-Eva along with it. Oops.]]
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* DivergentCharacterEvolution: In canon, Tom and his second Yeerk never appeared apart once the latter was introduced. Here, the real Tom is one of the narrators, while Feriss 512 makes multiple appearances in his previous human host.
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* NamedByTheAdaptation: Tom's second Yeerk is called Feriss 512 here. On a more minor note, the tiger Jake acquired is revealed to be named Arthur, with all the Gardens' big cats named after figures from Arthurian myth.
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* NamedByTheAdaptation: Tom's second Yeerk is called Feriss 512 here.here, and Taylor's surname is Ingraham. On a more minor note, the tiger Jake acquired is revealed to be named Arthur, with all the Gardens' big cats named after figures from Arthurian myth.
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* YoungAndInCharge: [[spoiler:The original timeline's Edriss is placed into Taylor's brain, and she still has the rank of Visser One, so the Yeerk invasion is being co-led by a teenage girl.]]
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* ItsAllMyFault: Menderash blames himself for getting everyone sent back in time, because it was his idea to go searching for Ax.
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* RealityIsOutToLunch: After [[spoiler:Visser Three kills Visser One, who wasn't supposed to die]], reality gets so screwed up that people and things phase through each other and fall apart for a few seconds.
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* TheUnmasquedWorld: [[spoiler:After the incident on the Pool Ship, Elfangor and Menderash intercept a message from the UN welcoming aliens to Earth.]]
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* KillTheHostBody: [[spoiler:Since Cassie killed Visser Three while he was in Alloran's morphed body, the Drode is able to bring the original timeline's Alloran to the splinter universe as well.]]
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* KillTheHostBody: [[spoiler:Since Cassie killed Visser Three while he was in Alloran's morphed body, the Drode is able to bring the original timeline's Alloran to the splinter universe as well. Then the newly-transplanted Visser Three blows up a Nova ship, and Edriss-in-Eva along with it. Oops.]]
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* KillTheHostBody: [[spoiler:Cassie kills Visser Three while he's in a morphed Alloran's body, allowing the Drode to bring the original timeline's Alloran over along with the Visser.]]
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* KillTheHostBody: [[spoiler:Cassie kills [[spoiler:Since Cassie killed Visser Three while he's he was in a morphed Alloran's morphed body, allowing the Drode is able to bring the original timeline's Alloran over along with to the Visser.splinter universe as well.]]
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* ShoutOut: When Marco starts hacking the Blade Ship computers (after Elfangor has created a suitable interface), he jokingly proclaims "Just call me Creator/JohnnyLeeMiller!" (''Film/{{Hackers}}''), but Tobias notes that he should settle for being "Nedry" (''Film/JurassicPark'').
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* ShoutOut: When Marco starts hacking the Blade Ship computers (after Elfangor has created a suitable interface), he jokingly proclaims "Just call me Creator/JohnnyLeeMiller!" Creator/JonnyLeeMiller!" (''Film/{{Hackers}}''), but Tobias notes that he should settle for being "Nedry" (''Film/JurassicPark'').
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* KillTheHostBody: [[spoiler:Cassie kills Visser Three while he's in a morphed Alloran's body, allowing the Drode to bring the original timeline's Alloran over along with the Visser.]]
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* CantKillYouStillNeedYou: Esplin ''so'' wants to kill Feriss along with his current host in revenge for the latter betraying him in the original timeline, but he decides to keep him around and command him to [[spoiler:kill the Animorphs' families]] because he can rely on him to be cruel.
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* TraumaButton: Tom has a full-on panic attack when he sees Visser Three; he freezes and starts shaking uncontrollably.
* TroubledFetalPosition: Tom is curled up in fetal position after Charlton rescues him from the Pool Ship.
* TroubledFetalPosition: Tom is curled up in fetal position after Charlton rescues him from the Pool Ship.
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* TraumaButton: Tom freezes and starts shaking uncontrollably when he sees Visser Three.
* TroubledFetalPosition: Tom has afull-on panic attack when he sees Visser Three; he freezes Three while on the Pool Ship, and starts shaking uncontrollably.
* TroubledFetalPosition: Tom isthen almost loses himself when he morphs an ant. He's curled up in fetal position after Charlton rescues him from the Pool Ship.him.
* TroubledFetalPosition: Tom has a
* TroubledFetalPosition: Tom is
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* HoldYourHippogriffs: Andalites have a lot of idioms related to guide trees, and Menderash describes Marco as a "[[labelnote:rock under my hoof]] thorn in my side[[/labelnote]] at one point.
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* HoldYourHippogriffs: Andalites have a lot of idioms related to guide trees, and Menderash describes Marco as a "[[labelnote:rock under my hoof]] thorn in my side[[/labelnote]] side[[/labelnote]]" at one point.
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* HoldYourHippogriffs: Andalites have a lot of idioms related to guide trees, and Menderash describes Marco as a "[[labelnote:rock under my hoof]] thorn in my side[[/labelnote]] at one point.
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* TotallyRadical: PlayedForLaughs when Elfangor steals a car. He leaves a note filled with [=80s=] slang.
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* TotallyRadical: PlayedForLaughs when Elfangor steals a car. He leaves a note for the owner filled with [=80s=] slang.
* TraumaButton: Tom has a full-on panic attack when he sees Visser Three; he freezes and starts shakinguncontrollably. uncontrollably.
* TroubledFetalPosition: Tom is curled up in fetal position after Charlton rescues him from the Pool Ship.
* TraumaButton: Tom has a full-on panic attack when he sees Visser Three; he freezes and starts shaking
* TroubledFetalPosition: Tom is curled up in fetal position after Charlton rescues him from the Pool Ship.
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* MindRape: Various Yeerks, such as Temrash 114, Feriss 512, and Esplin 9466, enjoy tormenting their hosts by delving deep into their memories, setting off their pain and pleasure receptors, and talking to them in a condescending manner.
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* MindRape: Various Yeerks, such as Temrash 114, Feriss 512, and Esplin 9466, enjoy tormenting their hosts by delving deep into their memories, setting off their pain and pleasure receptors, and talking to condescendingly reminding them in a condescending manner.how hopeless their lives are.
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* WeNeedADistraction: Marco distracts the Controller guarding the Dapsen Lumber Company by being really annoying so Ax can sneak into the cabin as a squirrel.
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** Marco distracts the Controller guarding the Dapsen Lumber Company by being really annoying so Ax can sneak into the cabin as asquirrel.squirrel.
** When [[spoiler:Visser Three threatens to fire on the Pool Ship with the Animorphs on it]], Elfangor steals a Bug Fighter and flies it around the Blade Ship so he'll be fired at instead.
** Marco distracts the Controller guarding the Dapsen Lumber Company by being really annoying so Ax can sneak into the cabin as a
** When [[spoiler:Visser Three threatens to fire on the Pool Ship with the Animorphs on it]], Elfangor steals a Bug Fighter and flies it around the Blade Ship so he'll be fired at instead.
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* BatmanGambit: When [[spoiler:Visser Three and Jake come face-to-face for the first time since their memories of the original timeline have been restored, with Jake in control of a Pool Ship, Visser Three starts offering to kill only the Animorphs amd let their allies go free while Jake rejects any such offer. Marco guesses that the two will continue to debate the 'offer' until only Jake is 'obliged' to sacrifice himself, as both enemies know that is the only term Jake will accept]].
* BerserkButton: [[spoiler:Visser Three appears fully in control and ready for anything when he finds himself in the new reality facing the Animorphs... but the moment he realises that Elfangor is alive on a fighter nearby, he abandons his goal of dealing with the Animorphs to focus on killing Elfangor, even blowing up Visser One's ship to try and destroy Elfangor's fighter]].
* BerserkButton: [[spoiler:Visser Three appears fully in control and ready for anything when he finds himself in the new reality facing the Animorphs... but the moment he realises that Elfangor is alive on a fighter nearby, he abandons his goal of dealing with the Animorphs to focus on killing Elfangor, even blowing up Visser One's ship to try and destroy Elfangor's fighter]].
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* AscendedExtra: Tom is freed early on and becomes a SixthRanger for the Animorphs. Mertil and Gafinilan actively fight the Yeerks and have several run-ins with the protagonists.
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* AscendedExtra: Tom is freed early on and becomes a SixthRanger for the Animorphs. Mertil and Gafinilan actively fight the Yeerks and have several run-ins with the protagonists.become their allies.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/33622159/navigate What Tomorrow Brings]]'' is an ''Literature/{{Animorphs}}'' PeggySue fic by daphnerunning and Loren_Fangor. After Jake rams the Blade Ship, the Animorphs are sent back in time to the morning before they met Elfangor and their lives were changed forever. They see this as an opportunity to make amends with each other and do things better this time, but it soon transpires that they're not alone...
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/33622159/navigate org/works/33622159/chapters/83550559 What Tomorrow Brings]]'' is an ''Literature/{{Animorphs}}'' PeggySue fic by daphnerunning and Loren_Fangor. After Jake rams the Blade Ship, the Animorphs are sent back in time to the morning before they met Elfangor and their lives were changed forever. They see this as an opportunity to make amends with each other and do things better this time, but it soon transpires that they're not alone...
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* NiceJobFixingItVillain: As it turns out, Yeerk technology retains the telepathic interface from when it was originally adapted from the Andalite software Seerow gave them; the Yeerks have never bothered to rewrite the code to remove such interfaces, allowing high-ranking Andalites such as Elfangor to access the interface with the proper command codes. [[spoiler:More specifically, Edris 562- the former Visser One- created a backdoor to give herself complete control of the Blade Ship, but although she was unable to use it before she died, Eva witnessed it during Edris's fugue, allowing her to pass that information on to Marco, who subsequently uses it in the new timeline to give Ax permanent control of the ship]].
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* BrainComputerInterface: Since Yeerk computers are based on Andalite ones, Andalites are able to control them using their minds in a similar manner to thought-speech.
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* NarrativeProfanityFilter: The Dapsen Lumber guard screams obscenities that Elfangor is fairly certain park rangers aren't supposed to know.
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* TooBrokenToBreak: Tom spent so long being tortured by Yeerks that he's learned to endure it, and he's able to keep his cool when Mertil tries to kill Marco because he's met all kinds of aliens who tried to kill him.
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