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* IronicEcho: [[spoiler:The [[IronicName name]] "Peacemonger" strongly resembles [[Film/IronMan Obadiah Stane's]] villain name (Iron Monger), something Tony notices immediately.]]
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* IronicEcho: [[spoiler:The [[IronicName name]] "Peacemonger" strongly resembles [[Film/IronMan [[Film/IronMan1 Obadiah Stane's]] villain name (Iron Monger), something Tony notices immediately.]]
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* WinsByDoingAbsolutelyNothing: After assessing the situation in Paris, Nick Fury ultimately decides that being as uninvolved as possible is the best course of action. With the glamour-based magic used to cover their tracks, learning Hawk Moth's location and identity is a fruitless endeavor and a waste of time. Even worse, no one has any idea how much of his victims' knowledge Hawk Moth has access to; if he ends up akumatizing another S.H.I.E.L.D. agent, he may be able to steal secrets. Ladybug and Chat Noir are the only ones who can fight a force as powerful as the akumatized villains, with Ladybug the only one capable of containing the akuma and fixing all of the damage that they cause on a daily basis. Tony is against this at first, but he changes his mind after [[spoiler:nearly destroying everyone when he himself gets akumatized, which -- as Fury notes -- is probably the ''only'' thing that could have changed his mind.]] And while it's not mentioned in-story, the concept of Hawk Moth using his gifts to akumatize the one Avenger who would be most vulnerable to his methods -- the Incredible Hulk -- would be ''exceedingly bad''. Just take a look at what he did to [[Film/AvengersAgeofUltron Johannesburg]].
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* WinsByDoingAbsolutelyNothing: After assessing the situation in Paris, Nick Fury ultimately decides that being as uninvolved as possible is the best course of action. With the glamour-based magic used to cover their tracks, learning Hawk Moth's location and identity is a fruitless endeavor and a waste of time. Even worse, no one has any idea how much of his victims' knowledge Hawk Moth has access to; if he ends up akumatizing another S.H.I.E.L.D. agent, he may be able to steal secrets. Ladybug and Chat Noir are the only ones who can fight a force as powerful as the akumatized villains, with Ladybug the only one capable of containing the akuma and fixing all of the damage that they cause on a daily basis. Tony is against this at first, but he changes his mind after [[spoiler:nearly destroying everyone when he himself gets akumatized, which -- as Fury notes -- is probably the ''only'' thing that could have changed his mind.]] And while it's not mentioned in-story, the concept of Hawk Moth using his gifts to akumatize the one Avenger who would be most vulnerable to his methods -- the Incredible Hulk -- would be ''exceedingly bad''. Just take a look at what he did to [[Film/AvengersAgeofUltron [[Film/AvengersAgeOfUltron Johannesburg]].
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* AllMenArePerverts: Defied. Adrien, ever the gentleman, closes his eyes when he ends up under Seamstress while running away from her, so that he won't look up her skirt. Tony actually takes note of this as he can't believe a HormonalTeenager would resist a chance like that.
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* AllMenArePerverts: Defied. Adrien, ever the gentleman, closes his eyes when he ends up under Seamstress while running away from her, so that he won't look up her skirt. Tony actually takes note of this as he can't believe a HormonalTeenager HormoneAddledTeenager would resist a chance like that.
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* AllMenArePerverts: Averted. Adrien, ever the gentleman, closes his eyes when he ends up under Seamstress while running away from her so that he wouldn't look up her skirt. Tony actually takes note of this as he can't believe a teenage boy would resist a chance like that.
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* AllMenArePerverts: Averted. Defied. Adrien, ever the gentleman, closes his eyes when he ends up under Seamstress while running away from her her, so that he wouldn't won't look up her skirt. Tony actually takes note of this as he can't believe a teenage boy HormonalTeenager would resist a chance like that.
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* GildedCage: Discussed in regards to Adrien's room. At first glance, it looks like any teenage boy's dream bedroom, with two and a half floors of space and all the fun amenities a teenager could ever want. However, on closer inspection, Tony realizes that it carries the same sort of suffocating perfection as the rest of the Agreste mansion; there's no personal touch, no mess, nothing to indicate that a teenage boy actually ''lives'' in it. Most jarringly is the row of arcade machines -- there's a DDR-like dance machine among them, custom-made so there's only one pad instead of two, carrying the implication that Adrien's father [[ControlFreak doesn't want him bringing friends into the house]].
-->''"All of a sudden, that glorious wall of windows seemed less about the windows and more about the bars."''
-->''"All of a sudden, that glorious wall of windows seemed less about the windows and more about the bars."''
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: When talking to Fury about pulling out of Paris, Natasha mentions spotting a pattern in terms of akumatizations -- when a bystander actively helps Ladybug and Chat Noir, that bystander is usually the next one to get akumatized (e.g. Jagged Stone helped them fight off Pixelator, and was subsequently transformed into Guitar Villain). [[spoiler:Hawk Moth's next target ends up being Tony, who'd helped Ladybug and Chat Noir fight off the Seamstress previously.]]
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* EveryoneCanSeeIt: It takes all of a minute of seeing them interact for the Avengers to spot Marinette's massive crush on Adrien, much to their amusement.
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* BrickJoke: In the first chapter, Adrien recognizes Natasha from the Battle of New York and advises her to steer clear of Chloé, because if the heiress recognizes her she'll probably force her to take selfies with her. In the last (pre-epilogue) chapter, as the Avengers are leaving, Nino tells them they picked a good time to do so -- because Chloé finally figured out that Natasha was in Paris and ended up throwing a tantrum over her departure.
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** Chloe's been responsible for so many Akuma that Ladybug isn't even surprised anymore.
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** Chloe's Chloé's been responsible for so many Akuma that Ladybug isn't even surprised anymore.
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* KickTheDog: Once again, Chloe's AlphaBitch brattiness is the cause of an Akuma attack, by accidentally dumping ''red wine'' on a woman's white dress (that she'd made herself) and both [[NeverMyFault refusing to say she's sorry]] and then mocking the woman when she runs off crying. When Adrien hears about it, [[OhNoNotAgain he immediately fears the worst]] and tries to send somebody to help the woman... [[SpeakOfTheDevil just a couple of seconds before she barges back into the room, akumatized into "The Seamstress" and looking for Chloe's blood.]]
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* KickTheDog: Once again, Chloe's Chloé's AlphaBitch brattiness is the cause of an Akuma attack, by accidentally dumping ''red wine'' on a woman's white dress (that she'd made herself) and both [[NeverMyFault refusing to say she's sorry]] and then mocking the woman when she runs off crying. When Adrien hears about it, [[OhNoNotAgain he immediately fears the worst]] and tries to send somebody to help the woman... [[SpeakOfTheDevil just a couple of seconds before she barges back into the room, akumatized into "The Seamstress" and looking for Chloe's Chloé's blood.]]
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* WrongGenreSavvy: After Chloe ruins a woman's dress and mocks her, sending her running off in tears, Tony tells Adrien that he should give her a few minutes of privacy. While this would be good advice in any realistic setting, he's in ''Miraculous Ladybug'', people with emotional breakdowns get driven murderously berserk by dark magic, and you really can't afford to take your eyes off people in this state (as said woman proves).
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* WrongGenreSavvy: After Chloe Chloé ruins a woman's dress and mocks her, sending her running off in tears, Tony tells Adrien that he should give her a few minutes of privacy. While this would be good advice in any realistic setting, he's in ''Miraculous Ladybug'', people with emotional breakdowns get driven murderously berserk by dark magic, and you really can't afford to take your eyes off people in this state (as said woman proves).
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Someone call the cosmic police, it had to be against the laws of the universe for a teenage boy to be that polite.
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Someone call the cosmic police, it had ''had'' to be against the laws of the universe for a teenage boy to be that polite.
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* AllMenArePerverts: Averted. Adrien, ever the gentleman, closes his eyes when he ends up under Seamstress while running away from her so that he wouldn't look up her skirt. Tony actually takes note of this as he can't believe a teenage boy would resist a chance like that.
--> Somewhere in the back of his mind, Tony had to blink.\\
''…did he seriously just close his eyes so he wouldn't look up her skirt?''\\
Someone call the cosmic police, it had to be against the laws of the universe for a teenage boy to be that polite.
--> Somewhere in the back of his mind, Tony had to blink.\\
''…did he seriously just close his eyes so he wouldn't look up her skirt?''\\
Someone call the cosmic police, it had to be against the laws of the universe for a teenage boy to be that polite.
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:After the Peacemonger incident, Tony ultimately agrees that having the Avengers or S.H.I.E.L.D. operate in Paris would be too much of a risk, forcing them to pull out and leaving Ladybug and Chat Noir without their direct aid. However, their conversations with the other heroes help the Parisian heroes make great advances in directly coordinating with each other, and they end up with a closer bond than they did previously.]]
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:After the Peacemonger incident, Tony ultimately agrees that having the Avengers or S.H.I.E.L.D. operate in Paris would be too much of a risk, forcing them to pull out and leaving Ladybug and Chat Noir without their direct aid. However, their conversations with the other heroes help the Parisian heroes make great advances in directly coordinating with each other, and they all sides end up with a closer bond than they did previously.]]
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* WakeUpGoToSchoolSaveTheWorld: Discussed and deconstructed by the Avengers when they figure out that Ladybug and Chat Noir are teens, not because they are "JustAKid", but because living this kind of life is destructive in the long term due to sheer exhaustion. On the other hand, having a family to provide food and roof is pointed out to be a safety net that they would not have if they had to work for it.
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* JerkassHasAPoint: Nick Fury, in his own inimitable way, calls "hell, no" to the idea of helping in the Hawk Moth situation and explains how Hawk Moth is a humongous OutsideContextProblem in which the Avengers are just a bigger potential harm than good. [[spoiler:Tony is forced to admit Fury is right after becoming Peacemonger, ironically [[NiceJobBreakingItHero because arguing with Fury made him mad]].]]
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* TheBadGuyWins: Downplayed; [[spoiler:both of Hawk Moth's akumas end up defeated, but he does achieve a victory in the form of indirectly making sure that Ladybug and Cat Noir won't be able to get direct help from S.H.I.E.L.D. or the Avengers.]]
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* TheBadGuyWins: Downplayed; [[spoiler:both of Hawk Moth's akumas end up defeated, but he does achieve a victory in the form of indirectly making sure that Ladybug and Cat Chat Noir won't be able to get direct help from S.H.I.E.L.D. or the Avengers.]]
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:After the Peacemonger incident, Tony ultimately agrees that having the Avengers or S.H.I.E.L.D. operate in Paris would be too much of a risk, forcing them to pull out and leaving Ladybug and Cat Chat Noir without their direct aid. However, their conversations with the other heroes help the Parisian heroes make great advances in directly coordinating with each other, and they end up with a closer bond than they did previously.]]
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* TheBadGuyWins: Downplayed but [[spoiler:after the rampage as "Peacemonger" makes Tony, the only nay-sayer to the idea of leaving the Paris situation alone, agree with everybody, it means that overall very little has changed and [[SupermanStaysOutOfGotham Hawk Moth is allowed to continue his evil with only Ladybug and Chat Noir to stop him]].]]
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* TheBadGuyWins: Downplayed Downplayed; [[spoiler:both of Hawk Moth's akumas end up defeated, but [[spoiler:after he does achieve a victory in the rampage as "Peacemonger" makes Tony, the only nay-sayer to the idea form of leaving the Paris situation alone, agree with everybody, it means indirectly making sure that overall very little has changed and [[SupermanStaysOutOfGotham Hawk Moth is allowed to continue his evil with only Ladybug and Chat Cat Noir won't be able to stop him]].get direct help from S.H.I.E.L.D. or the Avengers.]]
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* BittersweetEnding: On the sweet side: [[spoiler:thanks to conversations with the Avengers, Chat Noir and Ladybug make advances in coordinating with each other, such as setting a dead drop for messages. They also walk away with great respect for each other.]] On the bitter side: [[spoiler:SHIELD and the Avengers [[SupermanStaysOutOfGotham refuse to help with the Hawk Moth situation themselves]] because the events of the Fic demonstrate to even a stubborn ass like Tony Stark how much of a risk they would be in this war.]]
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* BittersweetEnding: On [[spoiler:After the sweet side: [[spoiler:thanks Peacemonger incident, Tony ultimately agrees that having the Avengers or S.H.I.E.L.D. operate in Paris would be too much of a risk, forcing them to pull out and leaving Ladybug and Cat Noir without their direct aid. However, their conversations with the Avengers, Chat Noir and Ladybug other heroes help the Parisian heroes make great advances in directly coordinating with each other, such as setting a dead drop for messages. They also walk away and they end up with great respect for each other.]] On the bitter side: [[spoiler:SHIELD and the Avengers [[SupermanStaysOutOfGotham refuse to help with the Hawk Moth situation themselves]] because the events of the Fic demonstrate to even a stubborn ass like Tony Stark how much of a risk closer bond than they would be in this war.did previously.]]
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* KnowWhenToFoldEm: After analyzing the situation, Natasha and Fury conclude that any aid they could render towards Ladybug and Chat Noir would be outweighed by the horrific risk of an Avenger or SHIELD agent getting akumatized, and decide to pull out of Paris entirely. [[spoiler:Tony is enraged at first, but comes around once he is purified of his own akumatization.]]
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* KnowWhenToFoldEm: After analyzing the situation, Natasha and Fury conclude that any aid they could render towards Ladybug and Chat Noir would be outweighed by the horrific risk of an Avenger or SHIELD S.H.I.E.L.D. agent getting akumatized, and decide to pull out of Paris entirely. [[spoiler:Tony is enraged at first, but comes around once he is purified of his own akumatization.]]
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