History Fanfic / Unmade

It's a DarkFic with a Hurt/Comfort theme that makes the reader feel the {{Claustrophobia}} of being imprisoned in isolation. It can also be interpreted as a SlashFic.

%% ** [[spoiler: Peter by the end.]]

%% * BurnBabyBurn: [[spoiler: The Company]]
%% * {{Claustrophobia}}

* EvilerThanThou: [[spoiler: When they get out of here, Peter is going to feed Adam to Sylar than he won't need Claire.]]

%% * FaceHeelTurn / FallenHero:[[spoiler: Peter, implied.]]

%% * FoeTossingCharge: [[spoiler: Peter through Primatech.]]

%% * MindlinkMates: [[spoiler: the first power that comes back is telepathy. Guess why.]]

''[[http://community.livejournal.com/libraryofsol/63595.html#cutid1 Unmade]]'' by Corona is an [[AlternateUniverseFic alternate universe]] ''{{Series/Heroes}}'' FanFic that takes place after Volume 2. Nathan is assassinated by Company agents pre-story leaving Peter a guilt-ridden wreck. Furthermore, [[LockedInAFreezer he is imprisoned by the Company with Sylar in the neighboring cell]] [[StockholmSyndrome where they are stuck together for months with no other human contact.]] They are both subjected to dangerous and irresponsible experiments.

It's a DarkFic with Hurt/Comfort and readers can feel the {{Claustrophobia}} of this piece. [Also, can be interpreted as [[SlashFic pre-slash.]]

%% * AbandonedHospital: [[spoiler: While escaping they observe dead evolved humans left to rot in their cells.]]

%% * AntiHero: [[spoiler: Peter becomes this or the FallenHero depending on whether you think he crossed the MoralEventHorizon by the end of the story.]]

* PsychologicalHorror: The sheer claustrophobia this fic can induce is staggering - it really makes you understand exactly what it would be like to be trapped like that. And even if [[spoiler: you feel Peter crossed the Moral Event Horizon, you can understand with disturbing clarity what brought him to that point.]]
%% * RoaringRampageOfRevenge: [[spoiler: Peter]]

%% * StartOfDarkness: [[spoiler: Hinted at for Peter.]]

%% * StockholmSyndrome

* ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill: [[spoiler: After setting a few radioactive fires, Peter uses telekinesis to bar and seal the doors [[KillItWithFire leaving any surviving Company personnel to burn.]]]] BewareTheNiceOnes indeed.

%% * TookALevelInBadass: [[spoiler: Peter, now a graduate of the [[ComicBook/XMen Weapon X-style]] school of badass.]]

%% * UnstoppableRage: [[spoiler: Peter]]
%% * UnresolvedSexualTension

* WellIntentionedExtremist: [[spoiler: By the end, Peter is going to take the Company down by any means necessary.]]
* WhatTheHellHero: [[spoiler: Peter agrees that when they get out of here Sylar can gain regeneration from [[VigilanteMan Adam (who "deserves it") instead of Claire (his "innocent" niece)]]. Sylar calls him on it: "It's bloodthristy... for someone like you."]]
%% * WhatMeasureIsAMook: Lampshaded to the extent of [[spoiler: showing how callous Peter has become by the end of the story.]]

%% * BeingTorturedMakesYouEvil: Though it thouroughly tracks the progress of [[BreakTheCutie cutie breaking.]]

It's a DarkFic with Hurt/Comfort and readers can feel the {{Claustrophobia}} of this piece. [[FoeYay Also, can be interpreted as]] [[SlashFic pre-slash.]]

%% * NotSoDifferent: In distilled form.

%% * StockholmSyndrome: Implied that it's going to lead to StockholmShnozzing

* TooDumbToLive: [[WhatAnIdiot The Company locking up]] the [[IdiotHero impressionable idiot]] [[PersonOfMassDestruction with God-like powers]] up with a [[ManipulativeBastard manipulative psycho]] not once but twice (i.e. Adam).

''[[http://community.livejournal.com/libraryofsol/63595.html#cutid1 Unmade]]'' by Corona is an [[AlternateUniverseFic alternate universe]] ''{{Series/Heroes}}'' FanFic that takes place after Volume 2. Nathan is assassinated by Company agents pre-story leaving Peter a guilt-ridden wreck. Furthermore, [[LockedInAFreezer he is imprisoned by the Company with Sylar in the neighboring cell]] [[StockholmSyndrome where they are stuck together for months with no other human contact.]] [[TheydCutYouUp They are both subjected to dangerous and irresponsible experiments.]] [[spoiler: Then the resident MadScientist [[HoistByHisOwnPetard acts surprised when the inevitable results occur.]]]] It's very much DarkFic, you can feel the {{Claustrophobia}} of this piece. [[{{HSQ}} It's guaranteed to leave you going woah!]] Even for a HurtComfortFic, DidntSeeThatComing. [[FoeYay Also, can be interpreted as]] [[SlashFic pre-slash.]] Warning: Spoilers ahead!

* AFriendInNeed
* AbandonedHospital: [[spoiler: While escaping they observe dead evolved humans left to rot in their cells.]]
* AlternateUniverseFic: After Volume 2
* AncientConspiracy: the Company
* AntiHero: [[spoiler: Peter becomes this or the FallenHero depending on whether you think he crossed the MoralEventHorizon by the end of the story.]]
* AwLookTheyReallyDoLoveEachOther
* AxeCrazy: [[SerialKiller Sylar]], naturally, and [[spoiler: Peter by the end.]]
* BeingTorturedMakesYouEvil: [[NightmareFuel Though it thouroughly tracks the progress]] of [[BreakTheCutie cutie breaking.]]
* BewareTheNiceOnes: Peter. That is all.
* BewareTheSuperman: The reason for the Company's grisly experiments.
* BloodierAndGorier
* BullyingADragon: The Company again.
* BurnBabyBurn: [[spoiler: The Company]]
* {{Claustrophobia}}
* ColdBloodedTorture: The Company
* CornerOfWoe
* CreepyChild: [[spoiler: UndeadChild]]
* DarkFic
* DatingCatwoman: Peter and Sylar.
* {{Deconstruction}}
* DespairEventHorizon
* TheDogBitesBack

* EvenEvilHasStandards
* EvilTastesGood / IJustWantToBeSpecial: "You already have it! I want that power!" Sylar is totally in character.

* EvilVersusEvil
* FaceHeelTurn / FallenHero:[[spoiler: Peter, implied.]]
* FireForgedFriends
* FoeTossingCharge: [[spoiler: Peter through Primatech.]]
* GreyAndGrayMorality
* HannibalLecture
* HeroicBSOD: Peter
* HurtComfortFic
* InsultBackfire: See page quote.
* ItsAllAboutMe
* ItsPersonal

* LaughingMad
* LivingShadow: The power of the Superpowered Primatech guard.
* LockedInAFreezer
* LoveMakesYouEvil
* MindlinkMates: [[spoiler: the first power that comes back is telepathy. Guess why.]]
* MindRape: Both are utterly broken down mentally and physically.
* MoralMyopia: The Company to [[{{Mutants}} Evolved Humans]]. [[spoiler: Peter and Sylar to everyone else at the end.]]
* MorallyAmbiguousDoctorate: The Company scientists
* NietzscheWannabe: They take turns ranting.
* NoOneGetsLeftBehind
* NotSoDifferent: In distilled form.
* NothingIsScarier
* OutOfTheInferno
* PayEvilUntoEvil
* PowerNullifier: the Company keeps them drugged so they can't use their powers to escape
* PowerOfTrust

'''Sylar:''' [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments Because I've been trying to kill you since you started talking.]]\\

'''Sylar:''' [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments Since you're not dead, or, at the very least,]] ''[[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments choking]]'', [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments I'm going to assume the drugs work.]]

* RoaringRampageOfRevenge: Hooboy, [[spoiler: Peter]]
* RuleOfScary
* SanitySlippage
* SaveTheVillain
* SealedRoomInTheMiddleOfNowhere
* ShellShockedVeteran
* StartOfDarkness: [[spoiler: Hinted at for Peter.]]
* StrappedToAnOperatingTable
* StockholmSyndrome: Implied that it's going to lead to StockholmShnozzing
* TheStoic: "I just stopped caring."
* StuffBlowingUp: And how!

* {{Synchronization}}

* TheydCutYouUp

* TookALevelInBadass: [[spoiler: Peter, now a graduate of the [[ComicBook/XMen Weapon X-style]] school of badass.]]
* TortureCellar
* TraumaCongaLine
* TroubledFetalPosition
* UnflinchingWalk
* UnstoppableRage: [[spoiler: Peter]]
* UnresolvedSexualTension
* VillainousBreakdown: Sylar
* WeCanRuleTogether
* WellIntentionedExtremist: [[spoiler: Peter by the end, is going to take the Company down by any means necessary.]]
* WhatTheHellHero: [[spoiler: As mentioned under EvilerThanThou, Peter agrees that when they get out of here Sylar can gain regeneration from [[VigilanteMan Adam (who "deserves it") instead of Claire (his "innocent" niece)]]. Sylar calls him on it: "It's bloodthristy... for someone like you."]]
* WhatMeasureIsAMook: actually lampshaded to the extent of [[spoiler: showing how callous Peter has become by the end of the story.]]
* WhatMeasureIsANonSuper: The Company, again.
* WindowLove: Done several times throughout the story as Peter and Sylar grow closer together, notably after Peter thinks Sylar might be dead.
* YouLookLikeYouveSeenAGhost: "...did you see?"
* YoureInsane: "You've gone mad."

--> ''"[[YoureInsane You've gone mad]]," Sylar says quietly. Peter's sudden completely irrational anger is so quick and furious it scares him. But he's powerless to stop it.\\

-->'''Sylar:''' This time they seem to have perfected the medication.
-->'''Peter:''' How do you know?
-->'''Sylar:''' [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments Because I've been trying to kill you since you started talking.]]
-->'''Peter:''' Nice... That's really nice.
-->'''Sylar:''' [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments Since you're not dead, or, at the very least,]] ''[[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments choking]]'', [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments I'm going to assume the drugs work.]]

-->'''Sylar:''' [[CrowningMomentOfFunny Because I've been trying to kill you since you started talking.]]

-->'''Sylar:''' [[CrowningMomentOfFunny Since you're not dead, or, at the very least,]] ''[[CrowningMomentOfFunny choking]]'', [[CrowningMomentOfFunny I'm going to assume the drugs work.]]

* TookALevelInBadass: [[spoiler: Peter, now a graduate of the [[ComicBook/{{X-Men}} Weapon X-style]] school of badass.]]

* TookALevelInBadass: [[spoiler: Peter, now a graduate of the [[ComicBook/{{X-Men}} Weapon X-style]] school of {{Badass}}.]]

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* {{UST}}

* DeadLittleSister: Nathan was killed pre-story and he didn't recover in this universe.

* EvilTastesGood / IJustWantToBeSpecial: "You already have it! I want that power!" Sylar is totally in character.

* TookALevelInBadass: [[spoiler: Peter, now a graduate of the [[XMen Weapon X-style]] school of {{Badass}}.]]

* AbandonedHospital - [[spoiler: While escaping they observe dead evolved humans left to rot in their cells.]]
* AlternateUniverseFic - After Volume 2
* AncientConspiracy - the Company
* AntiHero - [[spoiler: Peter becomes this or the FallenHero depending on whether you think he crossed the MoralEventHorizon by the end of the story.]]

* AxeCrazy - [[SerialKiller Sylar]], naturally, and [[spoiler: Peter by the end.]]
* BeingTorturedMakesYouEvil - [[NightmareFuel Though it thouroughly tracks the progress]] of [[BreakTheCutie cutie breaking.]]
* BewareTheNiceOnes - Peter. That is all.
* BewareTheSuperman - The reason for the Company's grisly experiments.

* BullyingADragon - The Company again.
* BurnBabyBurn - [[spoiler: The Company]]

* ColdBloodedTorture - The Company

* CreepyChild - [[spoiler: UndeadChild]]

* DeadLittleSister - Nathan was killed pre-story and he didn't recover in this universe.

* ElementalPowers - [[TheDragon The superpowered guard]] that has [[LivingShadow powers over darkness.]]

* EvilTastesGood / IJustWantToBeSpecial "You already have it! I want that power!" Sylar is totally in character.
* EvilerThanThou - [[spoiler: When they get out of here, Peter is going to feed Adam to Sylar than he won't need Claire.]]

* FaceHeelTurn / FallenHero - [[spoiler: Peter, implied.]]

* FoeTossingCharge - [[spoiler: Peter through Primatech.]]
* FoeYay

* HeroicBSOD - Peter
* {{HSQ}}

* InsultBackfire - See page quote.

* KnightTemplar - The Company MadScientist, they're only torturing the "[[SelfFulfillingProphecy really dangerous ones]]" [[NiceJobBreakingItHero you understand.]]
* LampshadeHanging - Peter compares NotQuiteDead Sylar to a horror movie villain.

* LivingShadow - The power of the Superpowered Primatech guard.

* MindlinkMates - [[spoiler: the first power that comes back is telepathy. Guess why.]]
* MindRape - Both are utterly broken down mentally and physically.
* MoralMyopia - The Company to [[{{Mutants}} Evolved Humans]]. [[spoiler: Peter and Sylar to everyone else at the end.]]
* MorallyAmbiguousDoctorate - The Company scientists
* NietzscheWannabe - They take turns ranting.

* NotSoDifferent - In distilled form.

* PowerNullifier - the Company keeps them drugged so they can't use their powers to escape

* PsychologicalHorror - The sheer claustrophobia this fic can induce is staggering - it really makes you understand exactly what it would be like to be trapped like that. And even if [[spoiler: you feel Peter crossed the Moral Event Horizon, you can understand with disturbing clarity what brought him to that point.]]
* RoaringRampageOfRevenge - Hooboy, [[spoiler: Peter]]

* StartOfDarkness - [[spoiler: Hinted at for Peter.]]

* StockholmSyndrome - Implied that it's going to lead to StockholmShnozzing
* TheStoic - "I just stopped caring."
* StuffBlowingUp - And how!
* SurvivorGuilt - Peter is already breaking down at the beginning of the story because the Company had his brother assassinated because he insisted on trying to expose them.

* ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill - [[spoiler: After setting a few radioactive fires, Peter uses telekinesis to bar and seal the doors [[KillItWithFire leaving any surviving Company personnel to burn.]]]] BewareTheNiceOnes indeed.

* TooDumbToLive - [[WhatAnIdiot The Company locking up]] the [[IdiotHero impressionable idiot]] [[PersonOfMassDestruction with God-like powers]] up with a [[ManipulativeBastard manipulative psycho]] not once but twice (i.e. Adam).
* TookALevelInBadass - [[spoiler: Peter, now a graduate of the [[XMen Weapon X-style]] school of {{Badass}}.]]

* UnstoppableRage - [[spoiler: Peter]]

* VillainousBreakdown - Sylar

* WellIntentionedExtremist - [[spoiler: Peter by the end, is going to take the Company down by any means necessary.]]
* WhatTheHellHero - [[spoiler: As mentioned under EvilerThanThou, Peter agrees that when they get out of here Sylar can gain regeneration from [[VigilanteMan Adam (who "deserves it") instead of Claire (his "innocent" niece)]]. Sylar calls him on it: "It's bloodthristy... for someone like you."]]
* WhatMeasureIsAMook - actually lampshaded to the extent of [[spoiler: showing how callous Peter has become by the end of the story.]]
* WhatMeasureIsANonSuper - The Company, again.
* WindowLove - Done several times throughout the story as Peter and Sylar grow closer together, notably after Peter thinks Sylar might be dead.
* YouLookLikeYouveSeenAGhost - "...did you see?"
* YoureInsane - "You've gone mad."

* DeadLittleSister - Nathan was killed pre-story and [[IGotBetter he didn't get better]] in this universe.

* YourBlankIsBroken:
-->'''Sylar:''' This time they seem to have perfected the medication.
-->'''Peter:''' How do you know?
-->'''Sylar:''' [[CrowningMomentOfFunny Because I've been trying to kill you since you started talking.]]
-->'''Peter:''' Nice... That's really nice.
-->'''Sylar:''' [[CrowningMomentOfFunny Since you're not dead, or, at the very least,]] ''[[CrowningMomentOfFunny choking]]'', [[CrowningMomentOfFunny I'm going to assume the drugs work.]]

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* [[{{Ptitlex3v9rsbi}} You Look Like You've Seen A Ghost]] - "...did you see?"

* [[{{ptitle2axxn65s}} Your ____ Is Broken]]:

* BeingTorturedMakesYouEvil - [[NightmareFuel though it thouroughly tracks the progress]] of [[BreakTheCutie Cutie breaking.]]

* EvilTastesGood / IJustWantToBeSpecial “You already have it! I want that power!” Sylar is totally in character.
* EvilerThanThou - [[spoiler: When they get out of here, Peter is going to feed Adam to Sylar than he won’t need Claire.]]

* PowerNullifier - the Company keeps them drugged so they can’t use their powers to escape

* StockholmSyndrome - Implied that it’s going to lead to StockholmShnozzing

* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation - Peter tends to trust in his [[HotBlooded gut and emotions]] rather than on logical thought, this makes him particularly dangerous when pushed through one too many rounds of BreakTheCutie…

* BetterThanCanon - A bit subjective but read this with its excellent, gritty characterizations and character development and then remember the CharacterDerailment that occurred in Volume 3: ''Sylar: You're my mom, really? OK, I'll be good now. Peter: Drr, my alignment is now StupidEvil!'' Like flipping a switch... sad isn't it?
* BewareTheNiceOnes – Peter. That is all.
* BewareTheSuperman - The reason for the Company’s grisly experiments.

* DracoInLeatherPants - Sylar

* HighOctaneNightmareFuel - Imagine you're trapped in a tiny cell, fed only enough to keep you alive, regularly drugged, tortured and experimented on by people who will not even acknowledge your humanity, you have no hope of rescue because your friends and family think you're dead, and your only company is your worst enemy, the SerialKiller in the next room.

* MindGameShip

* MoralEventHorizon - [[spoiler: [[WhatMeasureIsAMook Does Peter cross it when he rakes up the body count of Company personnel?]] You decide.]]

* VillainousBreakdown - Sylar

* [[{{Ptitlex3v9rsbi}} You Look Like You’ve Seen A Ghost]] - “..did you see…?”
* YoureInsane - “You’ve gone mad.”