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[[LemonyNarrator Now,]] [[SelfDeprecation for the five people who haven't pushed the "back button" yet]][[LemonyNarrator , let me explain.]] It's a long story which has as the main focus the friendship between Tech and Rev and how each of them sees this bond. It also contains a new villain who, for once, has other plans other than [[TakeOverTheWorld taking over the world]] for some petty reason, and a love story between two team members.
In short, it has everything the show lacked... CharacterDevelopment, tridimensional characters and more, for something that is much, much BetterThanCanon. Perfect for both the fans (who would have liked better writing) and the haters (who found the plot shallow).
In short, it has everything the show lacked... CharacterDevelopment, tridimensional characters and more, for something that is much, much BetterThanCanon. Perfect for both the fans (who would have liked better writing) and the haters (who found the plot shallow).
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* AntiVillain: Dan, Vincent's brother [[spoiler:He later has a change of heart which result in him getting killed]].
* BadassInDistress: Danger Duck at the climax.
* BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler:Danger Duck]].
* BigBad: Vincent Cavanagh.
* BigBrotherInstinct: Tech to Rev, even if they aren't related.
** Subverted by Vincent: he seems to really love and support his mute brother, [[spoiler:but when he does a HeelFaceTurn, he kills him]].
* CharacterDevelopment: Much, but the biggest examples are Duck and Rev.
* ChekhovsGun: The machine that brings people back to life.
* TheChessMaster: Vincent.
* ConservationOfNinjitsu: Averted. Ace even {{lampshade}}s that, since a single supervillain is able to give them a good fight, they can't hope to beat twenty.
* BadassInDistress: Danger Duck at the climax.
* BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler:Danger Duck]].
* BigBad: Vincent Cavanagh.
* BigBrotherInstinct: Tech to Rev, even if they aren't related.
** Subverted by Vincent: he seems to really love and support his mute brother, [[spoiler:but when he does a HeelFaceTurn, he kills him]].
* CharacterDevelopment: Much, but the biggest examples are Duck and Rev.
* ChekhovsGun: The machine that brings people back to life.
* TheChessMaster: Vincent.
* ConservationOfNinjitsu: Averted. Ace even {{lampshade}}s that, since a single supervillain is able to give them a good fight, they can't hope to beat twenty.
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* ConservationOfNinjitsu: Averted. Ace even {{lampshade}}s that, since a single supervillain is able to give them a good fight, they can't hope to beat twenty.
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* GadgeteerGenius: Tech as always, but also Dan Cavanagh, who is even able to hack in the Loonatics's HQ security (but only for 10 minutes).
* HeelFaceTurn: Dan Cavanagh. [[spoiler:It doesn't end well for him.]]
* HeroicBlueScreenOfDeath: Rev gets a severe case of this.
** Tech too, after [[spoiler:Rev's disappearance]].
* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler:Both Danger Duck and Rev Runner pull this off]]. They are subverted later.
* HeterosexualLifePartners: Tech and Rev: the story analyzes in great details this.
* KarmaHoudini[=/=]WhatHappenedToTheMouse?: Vincent disappears: no more hints are given to what happens to him.
* HeelFaceTurn: Dan Cavanagh. [[spoiler:It doesn't end well for him.]]
* HeroicBlueScreenOfDeath: Rev gets a severe case of this.
** Tech too, after [[spoiler:Rev's disappearance]].
* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler:Both Danger Duck and Rev Runner pull this off]]. They are subverted later.
* HeterosexualLifePartners: Tech and Rev: the story analyzes in great details this.
* KarmaHoudini[=/=]WhatHappenedToTheMouse?: Vincent disappears: no more hints are given to what happens to him.
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** SecretRelationship: They decide to not tell the team for now, to give them time to cope with [[spoiler: Rev's disappearance]].
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* OutOfFocus: Ace and Slam don't have major roles.
* OvershadowedByAwesome: Rev feels this way, since he has the least offensive powers of the team.
* PrecisionFStrike: Tech lets one out after [[spoiler:Rev]] is caught in the wormhole.
--> "He was right in the middle of the event horizon when it formed. Right in the fucking middle."
* RedemptionEqualsDeath: [[spoiler: Dan Cavanagh]].
* RomanticFalseLead: Shannon for Rev.
* TeamDad: Tech literaly become one [[spoiler:when he adopts a baby roadrunner]].
* OvershadowedByAwesome: Rev feels this way, since he has the least offensive powers of the team.
* PrecisionFStrike: Tech lets one out after [[spoiler:Rev]] is caught in the wormhole.
--> "He was right in the middle of the event horizon when it formed. Right in the fucking middle."
* RedemptionEqualsDeath: [[spoiler: Dan Cavanagh]].
* RomanticFalseLead: Shannon for Rev.
* TeamDad: Tech literaly become one [[spoiler:when he adopts a baby roadrunner]].
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* ThereAreNoTherapists: Averted: Ace suggest sending Rev to one.
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* DistantFinale: Okay, not really, but the last two chapters take place seven years after the main story.
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* DistantFinale: Okay, not really, but the The last two chapters take place seven years after the main story.
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* PrecisionFStrike: Tech let's one out after [[spoiler:Rev]] is caught in the wormhole.
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[[LemonyNarrator Now,]] [[SelfDeprecation for the five people who haven't pushed the "back button" yet]][[LemonyNarrator , let me explain.]] It's a long story which has as the main focus the friendship between Tech and Rev and how each of them sees this bond. It also contains a new villain who, for once,h as other plans other than [[TakeOverTheWorld taking over the world]] for some petty reason, and a love story between two team members.
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[[LemonyNarrator Now,]] [[SelfDeprecation for the five people who haven't pushed the "back button" yet]][[LemonyNarrator , let me explain.]] It's a long story which has as the main focus the friendship between Tech and Rev and how each of them sees this bond. It also contains a new villain who, for once,h as once, has other plans other than [[TakeOverTheWorld taking over the world]] for some petty reason, and a love story between two team members.
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* PrecisionFStrike: Tech let's one out after [[spoiler:Rev]] is caught in the wormhole.
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* BadAssInDistress: Danger Duck at the climax.
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* ConservationOfNinjitsu: Averted. Ace even lampshades that, since a single supervillain is able to give them a good fight, they can't hope to beat twenty.
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* TheChessMaster: Vincent.
* ConservationOfNinjitsu: Averted. Ace evenlampshades {{lampshade}}s that, since a single supervillain is able to give them a good fight, they can't hope to beat twenty.
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* HeelFaceTurn: Dan Cavanagh [[spoiler:it doesn't end well for him]].
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* HeelFaceTurn: Dan Cavanagh [[spoiler:it Cavanagh. [[spoiler:It doesn't end well for him]].him.]]
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* KarmaHoudini/ WhatHappenedToTheMouse?: Vincent disappears: no more hints are given to what happens to him.
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* KarmaHoudini/ WhatHappenedToTheMouse?: KarmaHoudini[=/=]WhatHappenedToTheMouse?: Vincent disappears: no more hints are given to what happens to him.
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** SecretRelationship: They decide to not tell the team for now,to give them time to cope with [[spoiler: Rev's disappearance]]
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* RedemptionEqualsDeath: [[spoiler: Vincent's brother]].
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* RedemptionEqualsDeath: [[spoiler: Vincent's brother]].Dan Cavanagh]].
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* TenMinuteRetirement: Tech leave the team [[spoiler:to become a dad, but promises of return when she will be old enough]].
* TheChessMaster: Vincent.
* TheChessMaster: Vincent.
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* TenMinuteRetirement: Tech leave leaves the team [[spoiler:to become a dad, but promises of return when she will be after his adopted daughter is old enough]].
* TheChessMaster: Vincent.enough]].
* TheChessMaster: Vincent.
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[[LemonyNarrator Now,]] [[SelfDeprecation for the five people who haven't pushed the "back button" yet]][[LemonyNarrator , let me explain.]] It's a long story which has as the main focus the friendship between Tech and Rev and how each of them sees this bond. It also contains a new villain who,for once,has other plans other than take over the world or some petty reasons,and a love story between two team members.
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[[LemonyNarrator Now,]] [[SelfDeprecation for the five people who haven't pushed the "back button" yet]][[LemonyNarrator , let me explain.]] It's a long story which has as the main focus the friendship between Tech and Rev and how each of them sees this bond. It also contains a new villain who,for once,has who, for once,h as other plans other than take [[TakeOverTheWorld taking over the world or world]] for some petty reasons,and reason, and a love story between two team members.
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Now, for the five people who haven't pushed the "back button" yet, let me explain. It's a long story which has as the main focus the friendship between Tech and Rev and how each of them sees this bond. It also contains a new villain who,for once,has other plans other than take over the world or some petty reasons,and a love story between two team members.
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* CharacterDevelopment: Much,but the biggest examples are Duck and Rev.
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* CharacterDevelopment: Much,but Much, but the biggest examples are Duck and Rev.
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** Subverted by Vincent: he seems to really love and support his mute brother [[spoiler:but when he does a HeelFaceTurn, he kills him]].
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** Subverted by Vincent: he seems to really love and support his mute brother brother, [[spoiler:but when he does a HeelFaceTurn, he kills him]].
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* DeathIsCheap: Tech builds a machine able to bring people back to life; granted it has limitations (it only works if it has a DNA sample and only if someone has been dead for less than 17 minutes) but still.
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* DeathIsCheap: Tech builds a machine able to bring people back to life; granted it has limitations (it limitations, (It only works if it has a DNA sample and only if someone has been dead for less than 17 minutes) but still.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Even the villains are pissed off by Vincent bombing a restaurant full of people. They keep working for him,however.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Even the villains are pissed off by Vincent bombing a restaurant full of people. They keep working for him,however.him, however.
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* GadgeteerGenius: Tech as always, but also Dan Cavanagh,who is even able to hack in the Loonatics's HQ security (but only for 10 minutes).
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* GadgeteerGenius: Tech as always, but also Dan Cavanagh,who Cavanagh, who is even able to hack in the Loonatics's HQ security (but only for 10 minutes).
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* OvershadowedByAwesome: Rev feels this way,since he has the least offensive powers of the team.
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* OvershadowedByAwesome: Rev feels this way,since way, since he has the least offensive powers of the team.
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** Tech too, after [[spoiler:Rev's disapperance]].
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** Tech too, after [[spoiler:Rev's disapperance]].disappearance]].
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/4063839/1/The-Fragile ''The Fragile'']] is a ''WesternAnimation/LoonaticsUnleashed'' fanfic by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1458899/Winguardian Winguardian]].
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The Fragile is a ''WesternAnimation/LoonaticsUnleashed'' fanfic.
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!!The Fragile contains examples of:
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Even the villains are pissed off by Vincent bombing a restaurant full of people.They keep working for him,however.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Even the villains are pissed off by Vincent bombing a restaurant full of people. They keep working for him,however.
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* GadgeteerGenius: Tech as always, but also Dan Cavanagh,who is even able to hack in the Loonatics's HQ security(but only for 10 minutes).
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* GadgeteerGenius: Tech as always, but also Dan Cavanagh,who is even able to hack in the Loonatics's HQ security(but security (but only for 10 minutes).
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* OutOfFocus: Ace ad Slam don't play a really big role
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* OutOfFocus: Ace ad and Slam don't play a really big role
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* TeamDad: Tech litteraly become one [[spoiler:when he adopts a baby roadrunner]].
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* TeamDad: Tech litteraly literaly become one [[spoiler:when he adopts a baby roadrunner]].
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The Fragile is a LoonaticsUnleashed Fan fiction.
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The Fragile is a LoonaticsUnleashed Fan fiction.
''WesternAnimation/LoonaticsUnleashed'' fanfic.
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In short,it has everything the show lacked... CharacterDevelopment, tridimensional characters and more,for something that is much, much BetterThanCanon. Perfect for both the fans (who would have liked better writing) and the haters (who found the plot shallow).
'''The Fragile contains examples of:'''
'''The Fragile contains examples of:'''
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In short,it short, it has everything the show lacked... CharacterDevelopment, tridimensional characters and more,for more, for something that is much, much BetterThanCanon. Perfect for both the fans (who would have liked better writing) and the haters (who found the plot shallow).
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\'In addition, kindly avoid using \"subverted brutally\" or \"subverted hard\" when describing the manner in which a trope is subverted.\' Also, punctuation mother^(*#er, do you use it?
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Now,for the five people who haven't pushed the "back button" yet,let me explain.It's a long story which has as the main focus the friendship between Tech and Rev and how each of them sees this bond.Italso contains a new villain who,for once,has other plans other than take over the world or some petty reasons,and a love story between two team members.
In short,it has everything the show lacked...CharacterDevelopment,tridimensional characters and more,for something that is much,much BetterThanCanon.Perfect for both the fans(who would have liked better writing) and the haters(who found the plot shallow).
In short,it has everything the show lacked...CharacterDevelopment,tridimensional characters and more,for something that is much,much BetterThanCanon.Perfect for both the fans(who would have liked better writing) and the haters(who found the plot shallow).
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In short,it has everything the show lacked...
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* AntiVillain: Dan,Vincent's brother[[spoiler:He later has a change of heart which result in him getting killed]].
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* AntiVillain: Dan,Vincent's brother[[spoiler:He Dan, Vincent's brother [[spoiler:He later has a change of heart which result in him getting killed]].
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* BigBrotherInstinct: Tech to Rev,even if they aren't related.
** Brutally subverted by Vincent:he seems to really love and support his mute brother[[spoiler:but when he does a HeelFaceTurn,he kills him]].
** Brutally subverted by Vincent:he seems to really love and support his mute brother[[spoiler:but when he does a HeelFaceTurn,he kills him]].
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* BigBrotherInstinct: Tech to Rev,even Rev, even if they aren't related.
**Brutally subverted Subverted by Vincent:he Vincent: he seems to really love and support his mute brother[[spoiler:but brother [[spoiler:but when he does a HeelFaceTurn,he HeelFaceTurn, he kills him]].
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* ConservationOfNinjitsu: Averted.Ace even lampshades that,since a single supervillain is able to give them a good fight,they can't hope to beat twenty.
* DeathIsCheap: Tech builds a machine able to bring people back to life;granted it has limitations(it only works if it has a DNA sample and only if someone has been dead for less than 17 minutes)but still.
* DistantFinale: Okay,not really,nut the last two chapters take place seven years after the main story.
* DeathIsCheap: Tech builds a machine able to bring people back to life;granted it has limitations(it only works if it has a DNA sample and only if someone has been dead for less than 17 minutes)but still.
* DistantFinale: Okay,not really,nut the last two chapters take place seven years after the main story.
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* ConservationOfNinjitsu: Averted. Ace even lampshades that,since that, since a single supervillain is able to give them a good fight,they fight, they can't hope to beat twenty.
* DeathIsCheap: Tech builds a machine able to bring people back tolife;granted life; granted it has limitations(it limitations (it only works if it has a DNA sample and only if someone has been dead for less than 17 minutes)but minutes) but still.
* DistantFinale:Okay,not really,nut Okay, not really, but the last two chapters take place seven years after the main story.
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* GadgeteerGenius: Tech as always,but also Dan Cavanagh,who is even able to hack in the Loonatics's HQ security(but only for 10 minutes).
* HeelFaceTurn: Dan Cavanagh[[spoiler:it doesn't end well for him]].
* HeelFaceTurn: Dan Cavanagh[[spoiler:it doesn't end well for him]].
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* GadgeteerGenius: Tech as always,but always, but also Dan Cavanagh,who is even able to hack in the Loonatics's HQ security(but only for 10 minutes).
* HeelFaceTurn: DanCavanagh[[spoiler:it Cavanagh [[spoiler:it doesn't end well for him]].
* HeelFaceTurn: Dan
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** Tech too,after[[spoiler:Rev's disapperance]].
* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler:Both Danger Duck and Rev Runner pull this off]]].They are subverted later.
* HeterosexualLifePartners: Tech and Rev: the story analizes in great details this.
* KarmaHoudini/ WhatHappenedToTheMouse?: Vincent disappears:no more hints are given to what happens to him.
* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler:Both Danger Duck and Rev Runner pull this off]]].They are subverted later.
* HeterosexualLifePartners: Tech and Rev: the story analizes in great details this.
* KarmaHoudini/ WhatHappenedToTheMouse?: Vincent disappears:no more hints are given to what happens to him.
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** Tech too,after[[spoiler:Rev's too, after [[spoiler:Rev's disapperance]].
* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler:Both Danger Duck and Rev Runner pull thisoff]]].off]]. They are subverted later.
* HeterosexualLifePartners: Tech and Rev: the storyanalizes analyzes in great details this.
* KarmaHoudini/ WhatHappenedToTheMouse?: Vincentdisappears:no disappears: no more hints are given to what happens to him.
* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler:Both Danger Duck and Rev Runner pull this
* HeterosexualLifePartners: Tech and Rev: the story
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** SecretRelationship: They decide to not tell the team for now,to give them time to cope with[[spoiler: Rev's disappearance]]
* LegionOfDoom: Vincent puts together a team of supervilains,both old and new.
* LegionOfDoom: Vincent puts together a team of supervilains,both old and new.
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** SecretRelationship: They decide to not tell the team for now,to give them time to cope with[[spoiler: with [[spoiler: Rev's disappearance]]
* LegionOfDoom: Vincent puts together a team ofsupervilains,both supervillains, both old and new.
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* TeamDad: Tech litteraly become one[[spoiler:when he adopts a baby roadrunner]].
* TenMinuteRetirement: Tech leave the team[[spoiler:to become a dad,but promises of return when she will be old enough]].
* TenMinuteRetirement: Tech leave the team[[spoiler:to become a dad,but promises of return when she will be old enough]].
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* TeamDad: Tech litteraly become one[[spoiler:when one [[spoiler:when he adopts a baby roadrunner]].
* TenMinuteRetirement: Tech leave theteam[[spoiler:to team [[spoiler:to become a dad,but dad, but promises of return when she will be old enough]].
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* OvershadowedByAwersome: Rev feels this way,since he has the least offensive powers of the team.
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* OutOfFocus: Ace and Slam don't play a really big role.
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* OutOfFocus: Ace and ad Slam don't play a really big role.role
* OvershadowedByAwersome: Rev feels this way,since he has the least offensive powers of the team.
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* InterspeciesRomance: [[Danger Duck and Lexi Bunny]] start a relationship.
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* HeroicSacrifice: [[Both Danger Duck and Rev Runner pull this off]]].They are subverted later.
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** Brutally subverted by Vincent:he seems to really love and support his mute brother[[spoiler:but when he does a HellFaceTurn,he kills him]].
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* KarmaHoudini/ WhatHappenedToTheMouse?: Vincent disappears:no more hints are given to what happens to him.
* KarmaHoudini/ WhatHappenedToTheMouse?: Vincent disappears:no more hints are given to what happens to him.
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* TheChessMaster: Vincent.
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* GadgeteerGenius: Tech as always,but also Dan Cavanagh,who is even able to hack in the Loonatics's HQ security(but only for 10 minutes).
* HellFaceTurn: Dan Cavanagh[[spoiler:it doesn't end well for him]].
* HeroicBlueScreenOfDeath: Rev gets a severe case of this.
** Tech too,after[[spoiler:Rev's disapperance]].
* KarmaHoudini/WhatHappenedToTheMouse?: Vincent disappears:no more hints are given to what happens to him.
* InterspeciesRomance: [[Danger Duck and Lexi Bunny]] start a relationship.
* LegionOfDoom: Vincent puts together a team of supervilains,both old and new.
* OutOfFocus: Ace and Slam don't play a really big role.
* RedemptionEqualsDeath: [[spoiler:Vincent's brother]].
* RomanticFalseLead: Shannon for Rev.
* TeamDad: Tech litteraly become one[[spoiler:when he adopts a baby roadrunner]].
* VillaniousBreakdown: Vincent toward the end.
* GadgeteerGenius: Tech as always,but also Dan Cavanagh,who is even able to hack in the Loonatics's HQ security(but only for 10 minutes).
* HellFaceTurn: Dan Cavanagh[[spoiler:it doesn't end well for him]].
* HeroicBlueScreenOfDeath: Rev gets a severe case of this.
** Tech too,after[[spoiler:Rev's disapperance]].
* KarmaHoudini/WhatHappenedToTheMouse?: Vincent disappears:no more hints are given to what happens to him.
* InterspeciesRomance: [[Danger Duck and Lexi Bunny]] start a relationship.
* LegionOfDoom: Vincent puts together a team of supervilains,both old and new.
* OutOfFocus: Ace and Slam don't play a really big role.
* RedemptionEqualsDeath: [[spoiler:Vincent's brother]].
* RomanticFalseLead: Shannon for Rev.
* TeamDad: Tech litteraly become one[[spoiler:when he adopts a baby roadrunner]].
* VillaniousBreakdown: Vincent toward the end.
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AntiVillain: Dan,Vincent's brother[[spoiler:He later has a change of heart which result in him getting killed]].
BadAssInDistress: Danger Duck at the climax.
BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler:Danger Duck]].
BigBad: Vincent Cavanagh.
BigBrotherIstinct: Tech to Rev,even if they aren't related.
* Brutally subverted
BadAssInDistress: Danger Duck at the climax.
BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler:Danger Duck]].
BigBad: Vincent Cavanagh.
BigBrotherIstinct: Tech to Rev,even if they aren't related.
* Brutally subverted
to:
* AntiVillain: Dan,Vincent's brother[[spoiler:He later has a change of heart which result in him getting killed]].
killed]].
* BadAssInDistress: Danger Duck at theclimax.
climax.
* BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler:DangerDuck]].
Duck]].
* BigBad: VincentCavanagh.
BigBrotherIstinct:Cavanagh.
* BigBrotherInstinct: Tech to Rev,even if they aren't related.
* Brutallysubvertedsubverted by Vincent:he seems to really love and support his mute brother[[spoiler:but when he does a HellFaceTurn,he kills him]].
* CharacterDevelopment: Much,but the biggest examples are Duck and Rev.
* ChekhovsGun: The machine that brings people back to life.
* ConservationOfNinjitsu: Averted.Ace even lampshades that,since a single supervillain is able to give them a good fight,they can't hope to beat twenty.
* DeathIsCheap: Tech builds a machine able to bring people back to life;granted it has limitations(it only works if it has a DNA sample and only if someone has been dead for less than 17 minutes)but still.
* DistantFinale: Okay,not really,nut the last two chapters take place seven years after the main story.
* EvenEvilHasStandards: Even the villains are pissed off by Vincent bombing a restaurant full of people.They keep working for him,however.
* BadAssInDistress: Danger Duck at the
* BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler:Danger
* BigBad: Vincent
BigBrotherIstinct:
* BigBrotherInstinct: Tech to Rev,even if they aren't related.
* Brutally
* CharacterDevelopment: Much,but the biggest examples are Duck and Rev.
* ChekhovsGun: The machine that brings people back to life.
* ConservationOfNinjitsu: Averted.Ace even lampshades that,since a single supervillain is able to give them a good fight,they can't hope to beat twenty.
* DeathIsCheap: Tech builds a machine able to bring people back to life;granted it has limitations(it only works if it has a DNA sample and only if someone has been dead for less than 17 minutes)but still.
* DistantFinale: Okay,not really,nut the last two chapters take place seven years after the main story.
* EvenEvilHasStandards: Even the villains are pissed off by Vincent bombing a restaurant full of people.They keep working for him,however.