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* BreakTheHaughty: [[spoiler:Raven, leader of a tribe of pillagers and murderers, gets utterly sacked by Vergil, which not only severely wounds her pride, but also caused her to fear returning back to her tribe since Qrow brings up the fact that the Legend of Sparda has been lost to time on Remnant, and without undeniable proof that Raven really did fought his son, there is a good chance that they could kill her on the spot for supposedly abandoning them. She even suffered a nightmare where Vergil endlessly mocked her for her loss, ending with her daughter Yang being instated as the new tribe leader, killing Raven on the spot for ParentalAbandonment. Even Qrow was surprised on how badly this messed her up.]]
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* BreakTheHaughty: [[spoiler:Raven, leader of a tribe of pillagers and murderers, gets utterly sacked thrashed by Vergil, which Vergil. Not not only does severely wounds wound her pride, but it also caused makes her to fear returning back to her tribe since Qrow brings up the fact that the Legend of Sparda has been lost to time on Remnant, and without undeniable proof that Raven really did fought fight one of his son, sons, there is a good chance that they could kill her on the spot for supposedly abandoning them. She even suffered suffers a nightmare where Vergil endlessly mocked mocks her for her loss, ending with her daughter Yang being instated as the new tribe leader, killing Raven on the spot for ParentalAbandonment. Even Qrow was is surprised on how badly this messed her up.]]
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This fan fiction can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12207976/1/The-Devil-Went-Down-To-Remnant here.]]
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This fan fiction can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12207976/1/The-Devil-Went-Down-To-Remnant here.]]
on FanFiction.Net]] or [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/40971738/chapters/102679140 Archive Of Our Own]].
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** As Vergil reads up on the various Grimm species, he informs himself on [[Recap/RWBYV4E1TheNextStep the Geists]], [[Recap/RWBYV3E10BattleOfBeacon the Griffins]]. and [[spoiler:[[Recap/RWBYV4E12NoSafeHaven the Nuckleavee]]]].
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** As Vergil reads up on the various Grimm species, he informs himself on [[Recap/RWBYV4E1TheNextStep the Geists]], [[Recap/RWBYV3E10BattleOfBeacon the Griffins]]. Griffins]], and [[spoiler:[[Recap/RWBYV4E12NoSafeHaven the Nuckleavee]]]].
